Reviews For Like a China Doll
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/07/12 - 06:01 pm · For: Who Made You This Way? [Intro]
Hm..... So far this has caught my interest. Your character seems interesting, and there's an innocence to her that reminds me of a child (at least it feels like it to me). It makes me sad when she seems to happy speaking of Sasori and how he made her. It's like a little child saying someone did something bad to them and not realizing it was bad. I like her, though.
I look forward to seeing more of this story. It is a good start, and I want to see where it goes. So, good luck with your story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review and I'm glad that you like my OC.(:
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/07/12 - 11:54 am · For: Who Made You This Way? [Intro]
This just sounds so scary, actually... That Sasori made her this way. It makes her sound like a mutant, though I guess I'll jus assume she's some form of puppet. That's almost just as bad though XP
This short intro was pretty good, a very nice start. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And yes, I was going for a bit of an eerie tone. xD