Hiya! First, let me tell you how much I loved your inclusion of a song in this story. I love doing that with my own, so that really hit home for me. I thought this was extremely sweet (: People may read this and say Sasuke is OOC but I don't think so. It was very well described and written nicely, including the romance between him and Naruto. The only iffy parts were a few spelling and grammatical errors, but hey, no story is perfect (: Anyway, good job!

Author's Response: Arigato! <3 I pour my heart out into my writing, I do the best I can! I'm glad you liked it!