Reviews For To outsmart a Hyuuga
Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 10/08/12 - 06:48 pm · For: Chapter 8 8 Nika’s great but not to brilliant idea to get out of the situation she got herself in to
great writing! I feel sorta bad for not seeing this before. anyhoo, I like what your doing here, and look forward to the next chapter.
Oni
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/12 - 08:03 pm · For: Chapter 8 8 Nika’s great but not to brilliant idea to get out of the situation she got herself in to
Hahahaha, Nika is so done for! This is getting quite entertaining, can't wait to see how this whole fiasco works out.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/12 - 03:24 pm · For: Chapter 7 Nika is a good influence..really...just some times she says the wrong thing at the wrong time.
Haha, Neji... Hot buns XD
Wow, I wonder what Nika's plan is to get Kiba to kiss Naru... That really is perverted, she's 13! Wow...
Wonderfully amusing chapter! Keep up the good work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/02/12 - 07:52 pm · For: Chapter 6 Neji cracks
Hahaha, I'm sorry, this chapter just made me laugh a lot. Nika is so witty, and she's so much fun when she's torturing Neji XD Awesome job on this comic yet romantic chapter! Keep up the amazing work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 22/02/12 - 03:38 am · For: Chapter 5 first date part 2
Ew, Sakura wants Sai to watch?! That creeper?! That girl really does need to think these things through.
Ah, Nika was so close to getting Neji! He's such a buzz kill, c'mon man!
Great comedy here, I love your hilarious stories! Keep up the awesome work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/02/12 - 08:00 am · For: Chapter 4 first date.
XD I absolutely love your hilarious schemes for the characters and creative writing. It's absolutely freaking amazing. I can't wait to see what happens with Nika and Neji, and of course, I feel kind of bad for Sasuke... though I can't wait to see the punishment Sakura's going to dish out on him. Update soon please, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: thank you!!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/02/12 - 08:50 am · For: Chapter 3 You haven't see nothing yet!
Haha, a threesome with Sai, that had me laughing so much XD
I always love reading your works, they never fail to throw me into a fit of laughter. And now I can't wait to see how this date goes, I'm very excited to read that. Nice job on this chapter, keep up the great work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/02/12 - 08:47 pm · For: Chapter 2 woman Vs. man
I absolutely freaking love this. It's so hilarious! I love Nika and Neji together, and it's only been two chapters! This is freaking brilliantly comedic, it's so addictive already XD I can't wait to see more of this!
A couple mistakes would be that the first chapter was not spaced very well, it was all clumped together and very hard to read. Another thing is that if you want to call a girl 'sister', you say 'nee-chan'. 'Nii-chan' is for a younger brother.
Oh, and for your Kiba fic, I personally like KibaHina, and I even go for KibaSaku sometimes. Just... please, no KibaIno, I personally can't deal with that pairing.