Reviews For Underneath the Cypress Tree
Name: JubileeOfPuppies (Signed) · Date: 30/01/12 - 04:25 pm · For: Back Too Soon, Gone Too Long
I just realized that this has been updated for a while now. I'm so sorry! I loved this chapter and I hope a third one is up soon! Mira is a fascinating character, so unlike most Naruto OCs. I loved the description you used about how her nerves had to adjust to the human world. And the way you slowly add details about her appearance is also entrancing. I love this story! Update soon!
Author's Response: Haha, it's okay, I always do things like that XD (especially with your sister's stories *guilty look*) And yay! I work hard to make my Oc's unique, I'm glad someone out there appreciates that :D Hope I do ya' proud!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/12 - 07:48 pm · For: Back Too Soon, Gone Too Long
Nice! I'm beginning to really like this. It has such a different and entertaining perspective on things, which makes me all the more eager to read.
I don't know if I should like Mira. I feel so conflicted... She's an interesting OC to read about, but just the fact alone that she works with Death cannot be good in any means.
Nice chapter! I saw only punctuation mistakes (comma usage), but that's just minor. I really enjoyed this, I can't wait for more! Keep up he awesome work!
Author's Response: Yeaaah I get comma happy *sweatdrop* and yay! Your reviews always leave me feeling good about my work :D
Name: JubileeOfPuppies (Signed) · Date: 19/12/11 - 04:55 pm · For: Death's Plan
Whoa, this was definitely a twist on Gaara's death. I loved it quite a bit. Mira and Death, how interesting? Grim Reaper type characters seem to be avoided in Naruto fan-fiction, I guess I can understand why. But I like how you did it, and I hope to see more of this story soon!
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for the review :P Yeah, I try to put a spin on things haha
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/12/11 - 03:29 am · For: Death's Plan
Hmm, I really like this idea. It's definitely original, and so far, you've done a great job of explaining what's going on while also keeping everything a mystery. The way you explained your OCs was really interesting as well, and I really want to know more about them, Mira especially.
Your only main issue was the usage of there, their, they're. You tend to mix them up sometimes.
But other than that, this was a very good first chapter, and I look forward to seeing how this goes. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you! And damn, I always miss the little things ToT I gotta' get a Beta haha