Reviews For To be free as a cloud
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 05/09/11 - 05:16 pm · For: Chapter 1
I actually really liked it. As Silverwolf said, you've improved greatly when it comes to writing. It was fun to read and I started laughing when I found out their 'mission'. I'm glad you posted this. I think it's fun to see where the bases of things/ocs come from, and now you've really got me wanting to go read how Yuki is now.
Author's Response:I really don't like it :( I had a chapter two but it got deleted as I was changing files into my new computer so no more chapter two but thats o.k...I guess. You found the mission cute? Thanks...If you want to find out how Yuki is now read Art is a...girl?!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/08/11 - 08:16 pm · For: Chapter 1
Oh gosh, heehee, I guess it really does show that it was your first fanfic. It wasn't bad, I think everyone can admit to doing something like this when first beginning to write.
How old were you when you wrote this? Just wondering, as your writing has definitely improved in that time. There were more spelling mistakes in this one, but I enjoyed the humor in this one. Your sense of humor is rather unique, in all of your writings, and I really enjoy it. Heehee, well, it's a nice comparison to see how much you've improved :D
Author's Response:um...I was pretty decent age.
But I'm glad you like this version too though it sucks and so cliched but it's fun to see improvement in writing ^^.
(Sorry I was on a vacation)