Reviews For Collection of Poems
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/11/11 - 03:23 am · For: Burning Sand and For You
Both of these were absolutely lovely. I really liked both of them. They were both really creative and well thought out and well written. Great job.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/11/11 - 12:46 pm · For: Chapter 3
Dang... I thought I knew who everyone was, and then when I kept on reading, my mind kept on changing! Hmm, let's see...
Phoenix = Naruto
Hawk = Sasuke
Sparrow = Sakura (I actually originally thought Hinata...)
Crow = Kakashi (I originally thought Itachi, but I think I'll stick with the Team 7 theme...)
Other than the actual guessing part, I really liked the poem. It had a beautiful theme to it. Well done.
Author's Response: You shouldve stuck with your origeinal guess on the crow, it's itachi. Naruto and sasuke were both right!! Haku was the sparrow, but that one was really hard. I was trying to make it as cryptic as possible so that it'd be hard to get all the answers right but not impossible. Thanks for the review!!!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/09/11 - 12:58 pm · For: You showed me
This was so beautiful and well done. I actually imagined this as a song as I was reading it; throw in a nice chorus and this could definitely work ;) Anyways, I love how you showed all the people who helped to change Naruto's life. It was so accurate and well portrayed that it was beautiful. Great job!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/08/11 - 06:22 am · For: Dawn or Dusk and
Wow... these were beautiful, and actually accurate. I loved how well you were able to describe the characters in the poems. I've always thought it takes an amazingly insightful and deep person to write a wonderful poem, and when it comes to poems about characters (Naruto or not), it takes someone who knows the characters very well. I think your poems were very well-written, as there was a lot of depth shown into the people's personalities and inner demons. Well done, this was awesome.
Author's Response: Thank you! I like poems because of how they tend to describe people. Naruto characters have a lot of depth which is why I love writing about them. More coming soon, I hope!
Name: inuyashas_only_1 (Signed) · Date: 05/08/11 - 12:43 am · For: Dawn or Dusk and
These were done well; I did enjoy reading them. The verses pack a punch without being overly showy, and there's not a pressure to be a Shakespeare sonnet, instead opting for the "speech of simplicity", as I like to call it, or getting the meaning across with the fewest words for the greatest impact. I think you've done well, and I look forward to reading more soon. (I was never a very good poet; it was always my weak point in writing.)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I agree with the simplicity thing totally! I tend to start my poems from an feeling or a symbolism and form the poem around one line or in the case of I am Hated, I just tried to write a line for each and have them flow together.