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Reviews For Dark Laughter

Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 25/06/12 - 05:49 am · For: Character Info
Aww when the next chapter coming out? Btw i luv this story so much :)


Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 11/10/11 - 12:36 am · For: Chapter 48: THE Talk
-gulp-
*nervous laughter* X_X
what was all that about... =_=
uh... yh u did put a warning bout sexual matters... :P
but that was funny... mean... eh...
that was a little toooo free talk... wasn't it... O_O'

Author's Response: it was the sex talk chapter. sorry. rnjust a note...could have been worse...i know ALOT. lol. but not alot that is right 4 the talk. lol. :p


Name: Eclair (Anonymous) · Date: 05/10/11 - 03:25 pm · For: Chapter 46: Dad's Plan
lol...next chapter is gonna be funny

Author's Response: and akward....lol.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 27/09/11 - 05:34 pm · For: Chapter 44: First Date Part One
Darn, sorry for not reviewing lately!

Anyways, I was so scared Kakashi was going to flip out even more than he already was. I can't believe Salacia has so much power over him XD Anyways, I hope Naruto's alright... Keep up the good work with this story!

Author's Response: yeah, she has something over him...and i don't know what -figuratively speaking of course- lol.


Name: Eclair (Anonymous) · Date: 22/09/11 - 05:25 pm · For: Chapter 43: Fidgety Day
lol...uh oh...

Author's Response: i know right? lol.


Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 20/09/11 - 09:17 pm · For: Chapter 42: Morning Convo
hmm... nice chapter... :)
lolz... yer lik the fastest updater here...? xD
lolol...

Author's Response: well...i'm just always on my comp and typing. lol. so i update alot. lol. :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/09/11 - 01:43 pm · For: Chapter 41: Vivid Memory
She can speak the language! She can speak it! She dreamed of her mother! Ah! XD

Author's Response: glad you liked it. lol. i thought it was a clever idea.


Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 19/09/11 - 11:15 am · For: Chapter 41: Vivid Memory
So its an inbuilt language xP
nice... :D

Author's Response: yeah, thought that was a neat idea. lol.


Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 19/09/11 - 11:10 am · For: Chapter 40: Supporter
see...
i said it was kiba....!! xD
bt since u said its most unexpected...
i'll say its shino... bth quiet n shy...
stalker again...??
keep up da great work :DD

Author's Response: that's actually something that is probably going to be a last minute descision. bc i am a HUGE fan of both pairings (KibaxHinata and ShinoxHinata)...probably have to flip a coin or something. LOL.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/09/11 - 03:19 am · For: Chapter 40: Supporter
Sal and Hinata are always really cute as friends. I love that. And I don't know why she's so paranoid, but her hunches always seem to be accurate so...

Oh, by the way, I don't see how Neji would tell Hinata about the mission, seeing as how he's supposed to hate her in this point in time. Unless you're changing that?

Anyways, nice job, keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: i'm making it that she overheard him talking to someone about it. lol. that's just how i had hoped it would seem. lol. but, cest la vie.rnand yeah, her paranoia is a little unfounded...or is it...you'll see later on.


Name: tigerseye (Signed) · Date: 18/09/11 - 08:35 pm · For: Chapter 40: Supporter
yay character development! Hinata's really interesting the way you write her. Keep it up!

Author's Response: i just adore Hinata...so i try to make her the character i really see her as as a friend to my character. lol. :)


Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 17/09/11 - 09:46 am · For: Chapter 39: Salacia's Response and Letter Two
hmm... interesting...
divine language huh?
cnt wait 4 da update...
n lol bout kakashi... xD

Author's Response: yeah. it was an easy way to explain what the language is. lol.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 17/09/11 - 03:24 am · For: Chapter 39: Salacia's Response and Letter Two
Hmm... The divine language... That sounds really fascinating. It's a shame Sal is the only one left who technically knows it, and she doesn't even remember.

Ah, Kakashi... "Diplomatic"... Pfft, yeah right...

Anyway, awesome job! I look forward to hearing Onara's response and about Kakashi and Naruto getting along. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Sal is determined to do this...keep things civil. and i have some plans for this. letter and others in the future. lol.


Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/11 - 01:42 am · For: Chapter 38: Girl Time
hehe...girl time -_-
boring as always...
no offense... bt m a guy... n gt bored of tht ladies talk xD

Author's Response: well...i'm a girl...and that's a good filler for me. lmao. it's k if u think that. lol. but it was to present Tenten liking Neji and the next letter. lol. :) there will be more interesting for guys too...i hope. lol. :P


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/09/11 - 01:58 pm · For: Chapter 38: Girl Time
Jeez, I'm sure the Daddy Dearest thing works wonders for Sal, however I'm the oldest with a younger sister, so she gets more privileges than I do XP

Anyways, Onara is writing another letter already? Sooner than she's supposed to? Huh, I wonder what it is... Suspense!

Haha, keep up the amazing work!

Author's Response: yeah...i'm the only girl...so...yeah...though i'm the eldest...so my baby bro was the spoiled one. lol.rnand yeah, i gots big plans for that. lol. but i'm also working on a seiries...so...i'm having to split my writing time accordingly. lol. :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/09/11 - 03:16 am · For: Chapter 37: You Can Tell Me Everything
Oh please, when does the father ever go easy on the boyfriend? Pfft...

Oh gosh, things might not go well for Sal if she keeps lying to Kakashi... I hope everything works out...

I want to read this next letter! Ah! Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: i know....i know...i'm figuring out how i'm gonna work with it. LOL. what i plan to reveal.rnand really, when ever? lol.


Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 15/09/11 - 01:28 am · For: Chapter 37: You Can Tell Me Everything
woah... lol xDD
yh.. i cnt imagine da frustration n tension one feels if his parents learns bout his love life... xP
especially da kiss part...
naruto is gonna hv a hard time alright :P

Author's Response: itz a highly logical conclusion. lol. wonder what's gonna happen...lol.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/09/11 - 02:28 pm · For: Chapter 36: Letter One
Wow, she has a dream, and then right after, she basically has it explained to her in Onara's letter. How sweet :) Now I want to know what letter two says ;) Haha, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: we never know when it will arrive...plus there are some twists that i am planning that i don't believe anyone will see coming. LOL. :)


Name: shadow (Anonymous) · Date: 13/09/11 - 09:14 am · For: Chapter 36: Letter One
lol....
Wateva ws in da letter....
Sal already gt a glimpse of most of it b4 hand...... xD
nice...... :)

Author's Response: yeah. lol. thanx. :)


Name: tigerseye (Signed) · Date: 13/09/11 - 06:40 am · For: Chapter 36: Letter One
Interesting, so we know slme things about her mom now. I'm looking forward to see how this plays out.

Author's Response: yeah, random things, but they do give insight. lol.


Name: tigerseye (Signed) · Date: 12/09/11 - 05:39 pm · For: Chapter 35: Agreement
AWWWW, that is so sweet! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: glad u liked it. i was in an "AWWW" sort of mood. lol. :p


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/11 - 05:35 pm · For: Chapter 35: Agreement
It's about time, man! Finally! I've been waiting for this, and it's just as cute as I anticipated! AWWW! So adorable! XD Nice job, now I want to know more about their budding relationship and her memories, of course. The plot's really moving now, I'm so excited! Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: i will, i was in a mushy mood. lol. and there is plenty more to come. lol. :)


Name: Eclair (Anonymous) · Date: 12/09/11 - 04:21 pm · For: Chapter 35: Agreement
UGH! Finally! Thought it would never happen lol...yay! Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: lol. welcome. sorry it took me so long...had two papers to write for school already. UGGH!


Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 09/09/11 - 12:26 am · For: Chapter 34: The Fights
lolz...
eh... sal is too smart fr a genin...??
n they actually killed them...?? i mean seriously...??
wow.... that girl needs strong nerves to do such a thing so easily...
anyways... nice fight...

Author's Response: it was a situation of kill or be killed. and she does have nerves of steal. lol.


Name: Eclair (Anonymous) · Date: 08/09/11 - 05:49 pm · For: Chapter 34: The Fights
Eternal rivals lol....

Author's Response: lol.


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