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Reviews For Universe Disorder!

Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/08/11 - 05:06 pm · For: Frieza+Cell=Nothing Compared To Ganon!
*face palm*. I thought I was logged in, but yes, it was me.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/08/11 - 05:04 pm · For: Goodbye's!
I agree with Silverwolf about it being sad it's already over. It was an amazingly epic 28 chapters, though. I can't wait to get to year two! And I'm glad that they didn't split. I might have had to send Sasaui after you for putting him through so much pain. And in this version he is Sasuke's brother, making him Sasaui's brother, and she's very protective. =D. This story Is awesome and I can't wait to read the next part of Naruto GX. Which I'm off to do right now.

Author's Response: Alright! I hope you like the next one1


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/08/11 - 04:57 pm · For: Two Day's Later.
Sweet. It seems as if everyone is going to duel academy, huh? Well, except Fabia T-T. Man, I hate that. I'll really miss those cute Ezra and Fabia moments. And I loved that Ezra gave Akako money. That's one of my favorite parts. He's just so nice and lovable.

Author's Response: Hehe, I'm glad you like it!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/08/11 - 04:51 pm · For: The Final Battle!
I was a little worried about Ezra when I saw that he'd been unaffected by by his (or would it be their?) attack. But they're safe for now, which is all that matters. The battle was awesome, keeping me wondering what was going to happen next until the very end.


Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 22/08/11 - 04:47 pm · For: Frieza+Cell=Nothing Compared To Ganon!
How could you? I mean, seriously, you had them kill a family? A baby and kid at that. I'm actually glad that Ganon kicked their butts. I'm starting to worry about Ezra and the others, though.

Author's Response: Is this Sasaui? Blah, whatever. Haha, it's what Frieza would do, right? Haha, you will be.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/08/11 - 11:13 am · For: The End of the Castle Raid!
I knew that she wouldn't be able to go because I may have peeked, but it still sucks to read it. I really hate how every time he falls for someone, they're separated. At least this time it isn't separated as in apart and just separated as in not by each other. I can't wait to read more. And I hope she does come for Christmas. I'd hate to see him sad from not being able to be with her.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/08/11 - 11:05 am · For: Castle Raid: Battle!
Once again you succeed to write an epic battle. It was awesome. The Frieza and Cell thing was a nice twist. I can't wait to see how they will effect the story. And I see why they're there, now. Bait. I can't wait to read on, because I think I'm in love with this story!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/08/11 - 11:01 am · For: Castle Raid: Finding Friends!!
Phew. That was close. Roxas almost hurt Hikari. And then he started fighting Ezra..... Well, that's a battle I'd like to see, but I'm glad it didn't happen. And what's Jaden doing there? I thought he went back or something. Or did I misread. Either way, it's as awesome as expected. Great job!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/08/11 - 11:00 am · For: Castle Raid: Attack Squad Story!
That was pure epicness. I loved this. And the fact that nobody could carry the Ox-King is both funny and true. I loved this chapter. Keep up your epic- and awesomeness!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/08/11 - 09:00 pm · For: Castle Raid: Ezra's Story!
I need to stop all this chanting, but: His mother is back, his mother is back! I'm so glad that he finally got Hikari back. I'm so glad. I also love the way that the spell was broken. It might have been hard for Ezra to do, but it was still amazing. Heck, everything you do is amazing =D


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/08/11 - 08:54 pm · For: Reunion!
Sweet, the ocs are back. Once again you did an awesome job with them! Your stories are just plain amazing. It keeps me wanting to know more. I'm going to be sad when I catch up because that will mean I actually have to wait for an update T_T.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/08/11 - 08:51 pm · For: A Duel Of Evil And Good!
Go Ezra, go Ezra! Finally, he gets knocked away! I'm so happy. Probably more than someone should be when a character gets hurt -_-" Oh well, he deserved it. This was an awesome duel. Ezra's cards that left are serious jerks who need to get some sense knocked into them. This was a great chapter, as well as a great duel!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/08/11 - 08:49 pm · For: To Much to Bear!
Please please please let me hit him! Hiashi is driving me crazy. I can't believe he's being so cruel to Ezra. How can anyone not be nice to him? He's so fragile... Man, please help him out here. I can't stand how much pain he has to go through.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/08/11 - 12:19 pm · For: Two Epic Battles, One Awesome Ending!
Wow! That battle was absolutely epic! I can't wait to read more of it. It's just pure awesomeness. I love your characters and how you do the ocs. It's as if they're your own ocs. I can't wait until I get the chance to read more. Your story is just plain amazing.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/08/11 - 11:34 am · For: The Start Of Two Battles! Roxas, Gohan, and Fabia VS Sora, Donald, and Goofy, and a Secret Battle!
Wow. You're doing an amazing job with Kokoro! And you also used her name as Ezra's last in the other story =D. I just noticed that. This was an amazing chapter. I absolutely loved it! You're doing so well at adding the ocs to your story. I love it!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/08/11 - 04:03 am · For: Bandit's Attack! Ezra Save's Who?
Could you have at least let Hiashi get hit once? Yeah, that's not nice of me, but since I'm not able to do it, someone has to. Anyway, great chapter. I loved it, and this just continues to show Ezra's kindness. I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Haha, I'll try to get to that in the next book after Year 2. I like it that you love this chapter!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/08/11 - 03:56 am · For: The First Heartless Ezra Faces!
Sweet! I absolutely loved this chapter. He took down the heartless. Go Ezra!!! He rules. I'm so glad he got a gift. I'm always happy when he gets gifts just because he never did. And that part about the brother- and sister-in-law thing was funny yet cute.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/08/11 - 03:51 am · For: The Two Keyblades!
Is this the really small armor heartless or the really big one? Oh well, guess I'll find out next chapter. This was awesome, like usual. I completely love it and wish that Tornado would do as he threatened to those cards. They're actually jerks who stay gone at least and don't show up all the time to torture him. Great job, Theez!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/08/11 - 05:20 pm · For: The Party!
Hahaha. What Fabia said made me think of Rascal Flatt's song, Bless the Broken Road. Anyway, this was another great chapter. I'm so glad he finally told Fabia. I hate seeing him in pain. I can't wait to read more of this. It's just so fantastic. Well, once again I'm not caught up, so I kinda can read more. Sheesh, I really need to catch up sometime. -_-" (my sweatdrop face)


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/08/11 - 08:58 pm · For: The Biggest Battle Ever!
ROXAS ROCKS!!! Okay, just had to get that out of my system. Oh, and you accidentally put Terra introducing himself as Ven. Just thought I'd let you know. Anyway, that battle was epic. You did a great job with both Kokoro and Shadow (although only shadow can tell you that for sure). This was an amazing way to introduce the new ocs' powers. I can't wait to read more and see Ezra's keyblades!

Author's Response: Okay, thank you! Link and Sora are the bad guys because they wanted to protect people (A.K.A Kairi and Zelda.)rnAs for Roxas, you are right! He is the best KH character there is! Oh yeah, and sorry about Terra and Ven, I'll get to that when I can. Thank you!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/08/11 - 08:39 pm · For: The Search! A New Battle Starts Now!
I probably should have asked this before since I've been wondering so long, but why is Link and Sora on the bad guy's side? I just have to know, because it's really bugging me. Anyway, this was a good chapter. I can't wait to see the actual fight begin. I know it will next chapter because, well, I might have peeked earlier =). This was amazing and I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: You have to read another story in the series first. It's called, The Legend Of Kingdom Hearts Z: Gundalian Invaders [Yeah, I know it's a dorky name.]


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/08/11 - 08:24 pm · For: The Split Up! And A New Mission!
Poor Ganondorf. He's going to get his butt handed to him if he fights Ezra (I still call him Erza in my mind. Did you have his name being that at one point or did I just confuse his name and keep it that way?). I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. I love that you have Jaden learning to fight, too. And I hope that they get Fabia and Suki back soon. Speaking of which, why in all stories is it the girl who needs rescued *glares at all guys*. Hahaha. Just kidding. It's just the usual stuff. Nothing wrong with it. When it's been around for centuries, it's going to stick, right?


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/07/11 - 02:49 pm · For: Goodbye's!
Wow, what an ending. I almost thought Ezra and Fabia wouldn't get back together. Almost ;)

Oh wow, it's already over! That's slightly depressing. But yay for Year 2! That'll be super fun...and epic, I'm sure. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Yeah, I can do that..........Haha!rnrnrn

Yeah, it's already over! And Year 2 is way more awesome than year 1, I can tell you now! Thanks!



Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 17/07/11 - 03:31 pm · For: Two Day's Later.
Omg, this is almost over! Thats crazy! Ah!

This was a very touching chapter. It's so sweet that Ezra helped Akako with her money issues. And he's worried about Fabia... It will be sad not seeing her around.

Oh man, I can't wait to see how you finish this. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Yeah, one chapter away...................rnrnrn

Akako needed the money, Fabia's not able to go to the Academy, how couldn't it be a touching chapter? Blah/rnrnrn

Thanks!



Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 17/07/11 - 02:33 pm · For: The Final Battle!
Must I really say it? Eh, I will anyway.

I love your battles! They're always amazing, and this was no exception. Great job. I wonder what you have next. Can't wait! Good work, theez!

Author's Response: I was wondering what you would say. Haha, I love the fact that you love my battles! Thanks!


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