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Reviews For Hold On

Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 25/11/11 - 09:58 am · For: Plans
Oh my gosh, her father is a freaking psychopath! This is so horrible. This dream was so vivid, it made me shiver a bit just thinking about what the wives had to go through. Kiba and Bailey are still really cute though XD Anyway, great chapter. Keep up the good work!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/11/11 - 01:19 pm · For: Wounds
Aww, such wonderful fluff, I love it XD Haha, nice job on this. Her resolve to help Kiba, despite everything, is really sweet. And he, in return, continues to show his undying and loyal affection. It's all so romantic. Great job on this, keep up the awesome work!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/09/11 - 06:03 am · For: Protection
Epic battle! Yes! Awesome job portraying her hawk demon, you used a lot detail there. The entire scene was very vivid in my head, so great job on elaborating! You did a great job on this. Keep up the amazing work!

Author's Response: thank you so much! I always enjy getting on here and reading your reviews! :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/09/11 - 02:57 am · For: I Love You
Wow... Wow... You did an excellent job of portraying this chapter through Kiba's POV. It really went well. There was a lot of description and elaboration on his emotions. I really liked this one.

And gosh darn it! Cliffhangers! Ugh, I hope you update soon! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: haha sorry about the cliffhangers! i just can't help it ;)


Name: tigerseye (Signed) · Date: 21/09/11 - 08:01 pm · For: Nothing Hidden
intresting, she seems to fit pretty well with hebi, but you might want to put more detail into interactions between characters. Looking forward to seeing more!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 21/09/11 - 07:39 pm · For: Nothing Hidden
Oh my gosh! You're in a hospital bed with a needle in your arm?! Oh my goodness, I hope you're alright!

Haha, I fell out of my seat in this chapter. Sasuke kissed her. I don't know what his intentions are or what he's planning, but I definitely love the drama so far ;)

Keep up the amazing work! I hope you get better!

Author's Response: thanks! i kinda of base my stories off of what is happeing in my life at the moment, it helps to deal with drama


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/08/11 - 11:57 am · For: Attack
O_O Wow, Briley has such an interesting past. Her dark secrets are now beginning to make sense.

It was Kiba! And she knocked him unconscious! D: Oh my gosh, I need to know what happens next now! Great informative chapter, it was pretty good. I can't wait for more, keep up the awesome work!

Oh, and I hope you get over your sickness!

Author's Response: Sorry it took so long to respon to this :/ but thanks! im getting better i hope

Author's Response: Sorry it took so long to respon to this :/ but thanks! im getting better i hope


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/08/11 - 07:03 am · For: Followed
Gah! More cliffhangers, you continue to be so evil to me!

Gosh, the part where she talks about abandoning everyone she cared about is so heartbreaking... It makes me wonder about Aaiya and Kiba and her friends...

Oh, since she has a hawk demon inside of her, will you be explaining how that happened? That would be very helpful, actually, because it threw me off a bit before...

But now I'm in suspense AGAIN as I wait to see who this stranger is! This was a good chapter, a little spelling problems, but it's getting better ^_^ Keep up the great work with this story! I really do enjoy this!

Author's Response: yeah im gonna explain the whole hawk demon thing soon! It was kinda sad for me to write...


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 30/07/11 - 10:36 am · For: Hawk
What the heck?! She left the Leaf Village?! Sasuke wants her in the group?! She agreed?! She's willing to destroy the Leaf Village?!

Again, what the heck?! Why are you leaving me hanging like this?! Update as soon as you can, please! -puppy dog eyes-

Author's Response: haha sorry! but it fits in with the rest of the story! ill update soon but for now im off to party ;)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/07/11 - 10:25 am · For: Footprints
Wow... Wow... Wow...

First off, good to see you back! :D And with an awesome chapter, may I add! Great suspense, and great twists. This person following her is really creepy, but I can't wait for more.

Just proofread some more, as some of the sentences had a few mistakes, but other than that, I love it! Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: its good to be back! im getting a lot of writers block lately, so it took a lot longer to write this than i wanted. But im glad you liked it! :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/07/11 - 10:11 am · For: Dogs
Aw, Kiba and Briley fluff! It's so adorable! :D

*gasp* I was right about Aaiya?! Well, even if it is not confirmed, I'm just assuming :)

Nice battle, by the way! Very intense, and it was pretty interesting seeing things through Kiba's point of view.

There were a few spelling mistakes. Just a little proofreading will clean that up, don't worry ;)

Keep up the awesome work! This is getting quite interesting!

Author's Response: I love fluff! :) im glad you liked it :D ill do more prooftrading next time.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/06/11 - 07:09 pm · For: Wind
Whoa! That was a very intense battle! Great work, it was so real! It was amazing! And who was the dog? I feel as though he/she has something to do with Aaiya, but I'm not too sure, I'm probably just being silly. But anyways, what a great battle, good job writing it. Now I can't wait for more! It was so great, and now I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the amazing work!

Author's Response: Thanks!Maybe your not being so silly, or maybe you are. You'll find out soon :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 27/06/11 - 04:32 pm · For: Setting Out
Awwwwwww!!!!!!!!! It was so adorable!!!!!!!! He liked her too!!!! And now they are finally together, it was so cute. I like how they finally got together, it wasn't too fast or too slow, so awesome job! This was amazing. I liked it very much. And now it kind of sounds like there is going to be a tion coming soon, and now I'm. Ery excited to read more. Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: Haha thanks! that kinda how I got together we my bf so I used it :) I'm glad you liked it!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/06/11 - 11:20 pm · For: Party and a Cut?
!!!!!! They kissed!!!!! Ah!!!! Oh man, wow! It is now 2:15 in the morning where I am, and I was just about to go to sleep when I saw this update. I'm so glad I stayed up, it was so worth it! The party was fun, and then those men had me leaning closer and closer to the screen. And then they kissed!!!! I love Kiba, he's a hero!!!! Great work, that's all I can say! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks! Kiba is awesome! I'll update soon, tomorrow probably cause for now its is time for me to go to bed :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/06/11 - 03:17 pm · For: First Mission
:3 Kiba's so creepy going into her house like that. But whatever, I still love him anyway :D Even when it's not a big moment, the two are still so cute together, and I think your writing really shows that very well. With only a few words, you are able to show how cute the two are as friends and how good they would be as a couple. I really like it. And now it's almost party time, and I'm so excited! Keep up the great work with this story!

Author's Response: Haha thanks. I agree it was kinda creepy of him, but still... I'm excoted to write the party chapter!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 22/06/11 - 07:29 am · For: Father of Mine
You're..... You're absolutely evil. Seriously?! It was a dream?! Right when I was literally about to scream, it was a dream. In a way, it's a good thing, but I was so excited to read more of this fight. Again, you're very evil.

I didn't review the last chapter because I was so excited to go ahead and finish these two chapters first (you have no idea how excited I was to see TWO updates when I woke up this morning!).

The last chapter was VERY adorable. I loved it. Her fighting skills are really good, but not too good since she never actually fought before, so I like how you were able to portray her in a battle. Tough but not invincible, I liked it, nice work.

Which of course, led up to the adorable moment with Kiba holding her in his arms :D Loved it, nothing else to say about that ;)

And then this chapter, well, I already told you that you are evil. Nearly killing my husband and then the epic fight that was just about to ensue... and it was a dream. Ah!

Well, anyways, these chapters were really good. I enjoyed every moment of them. Keep up the amazing work with this, I'm seeing a lot of improvement, and it's really paying off! Nice job!

Author's Response: Haha I couldn't help it :P The idea just came to me for the last chpater so I had to finish writing it before I went to bed! I'll update sometime later today


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 21/06/11 - 10:03 am · For: Getting Akamaru
Ooh, a spar, huh? Can't wait to see how she does against my husband... erm... Kiba, yeah....

Haha, Sakura and Kiba were very in character, good job with that. And I like how you brought in memories of her past while Kiba and Sakura were just playing around. That was really good, I liked it.

Keep up the great work with this story, it's really going well so far!

Author's Response: Pssh Kiba is my husband :P sorry! haha i claimed him. Thanks :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/06/11 - 03:57 pm · For: A party?
*nods head* Much, much better. You followed my advice with the description. Well done, I'm impressed. I knew you had it in you, congratulations on a great chapter. I'm very pleased with how you wrote this, and now I'm even more excited to see where this story will go. This chapter was the best so far, and I look forward to more awesome chapters. Keep up the excellent work.

Author's Response: Thanks! i really enjoyed writing this chapter.rn


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/11 - 06:01 pm · For: Something nice
This was better. There was definitely a shot at more description here. Their relationship is budding, and you're describing it very well. Just remember to consistently add more detail, it always helps the readers.

But I did like this chapter. Kiba is so sweet, I just love him so much :D Great work with his character. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: I took a lot more time on this chapter. I love kiba! he is an awesome character. Briley is really shy so that will play a role in their relationship later. Im glad you like it :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/11 - 04:57 pm · For: Meeting new people
Not bad. I do think the scene with Tsunade was a little rushed. Because that scene went by so quickly, it made that part seem a little unrealistic. A little more elaboration on meeting Hinata would have been good too. Just seeing her for a second isn't enough for introducing a character, even if it moves by really fast in the story. If you could work on your description a bit when it comes to dialogue and meeting new characters, that would really be beneficial to your writing. The scenes with Kiba were better, but I'm going to assume that's because you're like Kiba so much :D If you just applied the same amount of attention you gave to Kiba to the other characters, your writing would improve a lot.

I hope you aren't offended by my review, I only wish to help. This story has potential, and I really hope to see it progress and become an even better story.

You are doing very well so far, keep up the great work!

Author's Response: I actually appreciate your review! I would have gone more in depth but i had to leave and i had already started the chapter. I'll add more on the new characters. I'm planning on using Hinata a lot more later in the story


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/06/11 - 09:14 pm · For: Running
*squeals loudly* Oops, sorry, I get that way when I read about Kiba :D

Anyways, this was pretty good. You described her life without actually describing it... if that makes sense. We kind of understand where the character is coming from, but there is still a sense of mystery in her story. It's very interesting so far, and I look forward to reading more. Keep up the great writing!

Author's Response: Kiba is my all time favorite character in naruto! Her past won't be reveiled until later in the story i think. I want he life to be a bit of a mystery for now. I'm glad you liked it :) I'll update soon


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