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Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/07/11 - 07:19 am · For: Chapter 44: Chosen
Awwwwww! So cute, I loved that little bit about their wedding. An epilogue isn't that necessary, now that we have seen the wedding. But what th heck, you have another story? Oh man, you're on a roll. Haha, keep up the great work with your writing!

Author's Response: i love writing, it keeps me sane. lol. and i have the plan for it, just need to get it started. :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 17/07/11 - 06:23 pm · For: Chapter 43: Choices
I knew it! I knew you would do something like this! Though I probably should have figured it out when she kissed him back at the lake. How clueless I was. But I figured it out, and it's so adorable how she asked him! FWB always get together ;) I'm so happy with how this turned out! Wow, I wonder what you have in store for the end :D Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: yeah, it must have shocked the rest of the room though. lol. :) and i have a great ending planned. :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/07/11 - 06:43 pm · For: Chapter 42: Truth
Oh crap, I think I figured it out! I don't want to say the name, but... Yeah, I'll just wait....

But what the heck, why is Deidara such a jerk?! Yeesh, it makes me wonder about boys sometimes....

Great chapter, as always! Wow, its almost the end... How sad... Keep up the great work for the ending! I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: i will, and u know my writing so well u must know. lol. but do you really. lol. you will see.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/07/11 - 07:33 pm · For: Chapter 41: Complications 1
Why with the evil cliffhangers?! You know how I feel about them! Ugh, despicable! I'm stuck to the screen now, waiting for the next update... Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: i know, but i felt like being evil. lol. plus, i want it to b a total surprise. lmao.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/07/11 - 01:18 pm · For: Chapter 40: Heartbreaking
O_O

Kurai should rot to death for what he did. Send Kisame to cut his head off and then Zetsu to eat his heart out! Ugh, I'm so disgusted now.

Nice job with the chapter though. It was a well done transition from the comfort to the even deeper heartbreak. Terrible, but still well-done. Good job! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: yeah. well, there is plenty to come still and her choice is still pending. ;)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/07/11 - 06:59 pm · For: Chapter 39: Truth 2
Aw, it continues to be so heartwrenching :( Poor Sal, all the Akatsuki hate her, and Deidara isn't awake to even be fully conscious during her confession. It's all so sad!

Good to see you back, oh, and I hope Harry Potter goes well, tell me how it was!

Excellent job! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: i definately will. i am already planning what my bff (the girl i base raven off of) and i r going 2 do. lol.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/07/11 - 08:16 pm · For: Chapter 38: Truth Revealed
Wow, she told Orochimaru everything. He's rather nice to her, I expected him to yell or something. It's nice to see him all sweet :) But now she has to choose soon! Ah! Keep up the awesome work, I'm going to go look at your other story now :D

Author's Response: kewl. i hope you enjoy it. I'm glad you like this story. there is plenty more to come. :) promise there is some drama left in me. :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/07/11 - 06:25 pm · For: Chapter 37: Out of the Running 1
Wow... wow.... wow...

Kurai.... what the heck, man?! His possessiveness always turned me off, but now I find out he was planning this the whole time! How evil! I wonder who will be her chosen then, Deidara or Orochimaru... you'll probably make it someone else just to throw us all off though ;)

Keep up the awesome work! The climax is coming, ah!

Author's Response: r u trying to give me ideas. LOL. you'll see though, and Like i said, look out for my next fanfic, i am just about to post it. :) It's going to be a doozy. :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/07/11 - 07:12 am · For: Chapter 36: Emotional Battle 2
Holy jeez, she admitted the truth to Kurai! Sal is so in trouble...

Holy jeez, where did Sherry go?! Ah?!

What?! The drama is nearing te climax? But it's only been like ten chapters! Oh... wait... 37.... I was close..... You're story is that good, it doesn't even feel like it's been that long. Keep up the awesome work then!

Author's Response: wow, you really do like it. lol. yeah, i type fast lol. i have plenty to come in the next chapters, and i am close to ready with my next fanfiction. :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/07/11 - 07:23 pm · For: Chapter 35: Emotional Battle 1
Yay! Yay! Yay! They totally destroyed their father! It was so worth it to wait, great job with it!

It was literally one second of relaxation before you pulled that twist out. You're so evil.... please update soon! I can't wait to see who cheers for, who wins, and all that juicy dramatic stuff!

Author's Response: yeah, total drama. there is plenty of that to come. :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/07/11 - 06:05 am · For: Chapter 34: Tearful Memories
That's so awful! *tears streaming* I really started crying. It's so heartbreaking and sad. I really do wonder how Sal and Sher will fight him. It's going to be intense.

Well, certainly can't wait for that fight :D Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: somehow i think they will manage, but i wont know until i know and type it. :) there is plenty to come. :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/07/11 - 07:17 am · For: Chapter 33: Rescuer
Heck yeah! Sal is so professional, it went so smoothly! And yes, even though Kurai is usually quite scary in personality, it was still really sweet to see how much he loves his adoptive mother :D Awesome chapter! It all went so easily, good job! Keep it up!

Author's Response: glad you liked it, Sal prides herself on her professionalism. :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/07/11 - 07:02 pm · For: Chapter 32: Planning and Tricks
What the heck?! Did he not read the file?! Isn't it on her father?! Oh gosh, yes, my heart is pounding... so much in fact. Not only is their father in the competition, but Sal is going to save Kurai's mother and now she's almost going to get in trouble! I'm so nervous! Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: i try to keep your heart pounding. lmao. glad that i'm succeeding. i am glad u r liking this story. there is plenty to come. :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/07/11 - 06:49 am · For: Chapter 31: Musical Prowress
Yikes! That's an awesome ability. They're heads exploded, didn't see that one coming.

Oh, and so much for dropping out of the competition. Looks like they're going to stay to get revenge on their father. But I want to see Sal and Sherry's reactions to the news, so update soon please! You're so mean to use cliffhangers so much!

Author's Response: the suspense i find makes the next chapters all the more amazing. lmao.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/11 - 06:32 pm · For: Chapter 30: More Questions
Darn... that helped not in the slightest...

Ooh, more drama, you say? Yay! Can't wait for that to come! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: yeah. drama. drama. drama. it follows her and trouble seems to find her. lol.rn


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/11 - 09:45 am · For: Chapter 29: Planning
Wow! Sherry is so deadly. It makes me wonder how she died in the first place, but her death is so tragic to begin with anyway. Hmm, I want to see the music powers that the Tianna sisters have :D And what is up with Kisame? I want to know!

Great work! I love how Sherry was able to break that girl's shoulder so easily. I can't wait for more drama and action! Keep up the incredible work!

Author's Response: there is plenty of drama left. and all will b revealed soon, just keep your shirt on. lol.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/07/11 - 11:08 am · For: Chapter 27: SpLiCe
Yup, definitely worth the wait. The splicing was so dramatic, I was so scared, but it was so good! And the fight between Frost and Sal was very intense, I enjoyed it. Everything in this chapter was filled with suspense, great job! Now I look forward to seeing what happens to Sherry after she heals Sal... O_O

Author's Response: there is plenty to come. and i thought that the splicing being the way it was fit perfectly. there is plenty to come.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/11 - 05:55 pm · For: Chapter 26: Date List
Holy jeez! What the heck?! Koran Mori is going to blow her up?! Yeesh... I liked the list of pros and cons, at least we know what Sal likes about each guy. Only problem is.... that really doesn't help her at all.... Well, can't wait for more, haha! Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: yeah...itz fucked up...i swear that is how it goes in the actuall manga and anime...fucked up right. rnyeah the list puts things in perspective, too bad they r all pretty much equal...lol


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/11 - 10:01 am · For: Chapter 25: Confessions
Yeah, for a cannibalistic murderer, Zetsu sure is nice :) I like how Sal admitted a secret accidentally in front of him too. Zetsu has the right idea that I do: Sal keeps messing up. Ugh, all these mistakes she keeps making... Can't wait to see how she deals with them :D Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: yeah, she is young though and doesn't know how to fix them yet, but she will...maybe. LOL. there is more to come. :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/07/11 - 07:09 pm · For: Chapter 24: Midnight Swim
O_O She kissed Kisame?! What was she thinking?! I feel like she's making things so much more complicated than things need to be! Sometimes, you're really evil.... -_- But anyways, I liked the bit about the rivalry. Way to open a new plot development ;) Makes me all excited for some more action :D Haha, keep up the great work!

Author's Response: i know i am evil. lol. but she wasn't thinking...it happens. LOL. there will be plenty of developments to come. :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/07/11 - 12:03 pm · For: Chapter 23: Lonly Memory
Aw, I love how you inserted the song in there. It was so precious in a sad yet nice way. And now we finally know about a bit of Sal's past; I gotta say, it is so heartbreaking that I wish I didn't know. But it really adds a lot more depth to her character. Good work with this; this was a great chapter. Keep up the amazing work!

Author's Response: yeah, it hurt to write it. The song thing i based off of my personal experiance, whenever i'm upset i sing three little birds...it does help because the world will right itself in the end. like i am closer to my brother and dad than ever now after my mom has died (tradgedy brought our family back together and i think that in her soul she knew that and it was her final gift to us). sorry rambeling. lol. the next chapter is going to be very interesting to say the least. ;) promise.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/06/11 - 04:58 pm · For: Chapter 21: Bile and Fight
EWWWWWW!!! And yeah, sounds horribly painful. But that means the epic resurrection is coming up, which I am kind of excited about. Can't wait to see! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: yeah, it's supposed to be nasty to show how painful it was going to be. and i have big plans for her resurection. :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/06/11 - 03:50 pm · For: Chapter 20: Difficult Memory
Wow! What insight into Sal's past! Zetsu's presence in her past seems to have helped her so much, and I love how you portray him. And now we know a little about her father, it's a very informative tidbit of knowledge yet of course, I still want to know more. Keep up the great work, it's getting so good!

Author's Response: yeah, they r very happy 2gether, best friends and surrogent family. there is more to come.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 27/06/11 - 08:21 pm · For: Chapter 19: Lies Lies Lies
What is the relevance of the title with the chapter? Pfft, ha, just kidding! Wow, those were some lies there. I found it funny that Orochimaru made up a lie for her :P Cant wait for more, keep up the awesome job!

Author's Response: it was his idea...i worry 4 her. lol. :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 27/06/11 - 01:49 pm · For: Chapter 18: End of Fight and Next Mistake
Epic win. That's all there is to say. She's so brutal, making for a very bloody yet very much deserved victory ;)

Author's Response: yep. she is a bloody fighter. and there is plenty more to come.


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