Reviews For A lost cause... at least for naruto
Name: Kt (Anonymous) · Date: 24/11/11 - 11:48 am · For: Chapter 2
Please finish!!! Its really good.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/05/11 - 05:54 pm · For: Chapter 1
Yeah, a lemon warning would have been nice. It completely caught me off guard. And the spacing could be fixed, if it isn't too much trouble. But I did like the plot, you had something interesting going there. The end was a huge cliffhanger that I did not see coming. Very interesting. Keep up the good work with your writing.
Author's Response: okay i'll try that in chapter two thanks for the review though. :)
Name: fleamichael (Signed) · Date: 25/05/11 - 07:00 pm · For: Chapter 1
Okay. Definitely a start.
First off, I would recommend using a bit more paragraphs. It's a bit easier to read if dialogue is in their own seperate paragraphs.
Second, I would probably put a lemon warning. Its what that Sakura flashback was.
I think if you do that, you'll have a much better story.
Author's Response: thanks for the info, i think it will help a lot. :)