Reviews For Are we lost?
Name: quinty (Anonymous) · Date: 18/12/11 - 12:10 pm · For: Chapter 1
I think we doesnt make a new part of this story, sorry :)
But it's a nice story and we both play the person 's like in real life haha
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 20/03/11 - 06:00 pm · For: are we lost? ~Chapter 2~ The teams.
Wow this really turned out nicely. Too bad the bold doesn't work.. Oh well. Nice job on details and thoughts. Love Nadelia in this. =)
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 20/02/11 - 11:01 am · For: Chapter 1
I like the idea, in most stories the kids who get sent to the Naruto world, A) Had watched the anime and manga in their world, and B) suck big time and are complete Mary Sues. I like Nadia. It is wise to have a fake name, hate Sasuke,and I hope big time that she is awesome with ninja speed and ninja skills and stuff. The only thing I didn't like were some basic mistakes. Spelling and grammar mostly. If you need a beta-reader let me know at my e-mail maddybroedel@gmail.com Other then than good job and pretty please update soon.
Author's Response: right i'll email you! Thank you very much!