Reviews For Sakura's Master Plan!~Oh My Love~
Name: nightninja (Signed) · Date: 22/05/16 - 01:30 pm · For: Chapter 1: Birthday Girl
I liked it
can I be in the story
Name: nightninja (Signed) · Date: 23/07/15 - 07:59 am · For: Chapter 1: Birthday Girl
can i be in the story?
Name: nightninja (Signed) · Date: 20/06/15 - 08:10 am · For: Chapter 1: Birthday Girl
Can I be in the story
Name: nightninja (Signed) · Date: 17/06/15 - 11:28 pm · For: Chapter 1: Birthday Girl
Hey can I be in the story
I like yuri too
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 22/07/10 - 07:04 pm · For: Chapter 1: Birthday Girl
....hmm....I like the idea for this story in a biased way. I have no problem with homosexuality; my mom is gay so more power to ya.
But, I do have a problem with the chapter. It seems rushed and sloppy. That's how it feels to me because it wasn't flowing. You know the events just didn't seem to have enough details to lead to the conflict. The way you could fix this is add more to what was happening; the environment, the characters, etc.
Still thumbs up to the idea lass/lad! Keep trying to improve and I'm sure you will; it has potiental.