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Reviews For Destiny is Calling

Name: - (Anonymous) · Date: 07/06/14 - 05:42 am · For: The Reincarnation of a Legend
Please, continue.
I love the story! :)


Name: Xxlali (Signed) · Date: 30/03/14 - 09:40 am · For: The Reincarnation of a Legend
I honestly want to read this, but I'll pass since you haven't updated in two years.


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 27/02/12 - 01:28 pm · For: The Reincarnation of a Legend
Yay progression, haha. Im excited to see what will happen in the land of silver and how the squad will fight back. I can tell some true powers are going to be shown. Good chapter! Cant wait for more

Author's Response: I know! The plot developments make me so excited! I'm so happy to finally get to throw in some original stuff. The adventure in the Land of Silver will be an epic arc, let me tell you. Some awesome powers will definitely be shown, and some cool fights are planned out as well. I'm so happy you enjoyed this chapter! I hope you like the upcoming updates!


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/02/12 - 08:34 pm · For: The Reincarnation of a Legend
Haha that song was so fit for this chapter. It was a fun chapter to read, I enjoyed how each of them used their abilities. But agh!!! my eyes are like bleeding now haha I went and got coffee and sat down for a while before reading the second half of it haha. Good chapter though!

Author's Response: I know, right? I love that song, it's so amazing :D I'm glad you thought this chapter was fun; I personally liked it because we get to see the personalities and abilities of Suki's new teammates. Oh no, I'm so sorry your eyes are in so much pain! I knew my long chapters would hurt someone eventually! I hope the coffee helped, coffee is the miracle drink after all ;D I'm so happy you liked this chapter though! Thank you so much for the incredible review, I appreciate it!


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/02/12 - 07:52 pm · For: The Reincarnation of a Legend
Ahh I want Suki and Naruto to make up! I didnt think Naruto would hold a grudge that long. But I guess I understand due to the circumstances. Good chapter I'm very excited to see how the survival training pans out and to see how the other two in Suki's squad develop. Good job!

Author's Response: I know, so do I! I don't know why I'm dragging out the grudge for this long! Oh wait... Yeah, I actually do have something planned for the whole argument thing, don't worry ;) Naruto just needs some time to get over it; he's emotionally unstable on the topic right now. I'm glad you liked this chapter, thanks a bunch for reading and reviewing! You're awesome!


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/02/12 - 06:31 pm · For: The Reincarnation of a Legend
I was not expecting that kind of ending, but it was different and i liked it. Haha i had to take a break reading this my eyes are throbbing. Good chapter though it was both heartwarming and heartcrushing (which isnt a bad thing) it provided a contrast and provided a different atmosphere. Good job you really are a good writer

Author's Response: I don't think anyone was expecting that ending because it was so different. I liked it, though I was worried others wouldn't. But people gave positive feedback on the originality, so I'm quite happy with that :D Aww, I'm sorry your eyes were throbbing, I knew this chapter was too long! *sigh* I'm glad you liked this chapter through the heart-warming and heart-crushing moments. I was so worried the depressing atmosphere would get a lot of negative comments, but I'm happy that you liked the contrast. Thanks so much for the lovely compliment! Your reviews are really making my day, thanks a bunch!


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/02/12 - 05:51 pm · For: The Reincarnation of a Legend
This chapter was filled with the right amount of emotion. It's good you include all the other character's problems along with Suki's own problems. It provides backbone to the story and you do a good job of it. Keep up the good work i'm definitely hooked on this story.

Author's Response: This was one my more favorite chapters so far, just because of the emotion I tried to illustrate here. I'm glad that emotion came out nicely :D I wanted to show the other characters' problems as well because it all really does tie into Suki's own story. I'm glad you think I do a good job with it. I'm so happy to read your reviews, they're so nice and encouraging! I'm really excited that you like this story, I really hope you continue to enjoy it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, you're awesome!


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/02/12 - 05:30 pm · For: The Reincarnation of a Legend
I think the flow of characters so far is good. One minor thing though is Hinata's studdering. It doesnt bother me because I know she does that but I think you should tone it down a bit. Otherwise great story! I really enjoy this

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm always worried that I'm totally going to ruin the characters when I write them. Hmm, I didn't realize I made Hinata stutter so much; I'll remember that, thank you so much for pointing that out. Anyway, thanks a lot for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate the feedback!


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/02/12 - 12:41 pm · For: The Reincarnation of a Legend
Hell yeah! This was awesome, the suspense killed me during the bird part...the whole time i was thinking, "where is Kakashi, where is Kakashi" haha this was an excellent chapter, I can tell you put in a lot of work for it. Keep it up!

Author's Response: :D This review made me really happy, just because you seemed so excited with what I wrote. I appreciate that kind of enthusiasm, thank you. The suspense in this chapter was something that I thought would really bring back the whole theme of the story: the hatred towards Suki. I'm glad you liked this chapter so much, that makes me feel so ecstatic now! Thank you so much for the kind words in this review, I'm so happy that you're enjoying this story so far! I hope you continue to like it!


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/02/12 - 12:21 pm · For: The Reincarnation of a Legend
this chapter was so heart-warming, especially to see Naruto become that close to someone so quick. I really liked it!

Author's Response: Yeah, I liked this chapter just because it was a lot sweeter than the earlier installments. Naruto and Suki both needed people to be close to them, so they found each other. It seemed appropriate :) I'm glad you liked it, thanks for reading this!


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/02/12 - 12:07 pm · For: The Reincarnation of a Legend
This chapter wasnt unrealistic at all! I thought it was seriously a great chapter. And such a great happy ending too :) you did good!

Author's Response: Really? I thought it was completely unrealistic, but I'm glad you don't think so! I figured Suki deserved the happy ending in the finale of this arc. I'm really happy that you liked this chapter! It makes me feel so excited :D Thanks a bunch!


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/02/12 - 11:59 am · For: The Reincarnation of a Legend
This made me feel bad for Suki, especially when the father said she is not our daughter anymore. It was good you added it though, it provided a lot of background to help develop the story.

Author's Response: Cool, that's what I was going for: having the reader feel sad for the protagonist. I personally feel bad for putting Suki through so much bad stuff, even straight from childbirth, but it had to be done to make an interesting story. This background info does help the reader to understand Suki's situation a lot better, and it'll eventually play a larger role in the story. Thanks for review, I appreciate it!


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/02/12 - 06:26 am · For: The Reincarnation of a Legend
This chapter was amazing, so far i really enjoy this story. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: I'm glad you continue to like this story! It makes me feel all giggly inside, haha! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you continue to enjoy this!


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/02/12 - 06:02 am · For: The Reincarnation of a Legend
Oh wow this kept me on the edge of my seat. I really like where this is going so far, I can tell it will be an interesting read. Haha kakashi is funny as usual I like the way you portrayed him i think you did a great job of doing that. Anyways i can't wait to see what's in store of suki. Definitely going to read more!

Author's Response: Heck yeah! I kept you in suspense, mission accomplished! I'm glad this story has caught your interest so far. I'm happy to hear you liked the way Kakashi came out, I was worried people wouldn't like him. I'm so excited that you like this story so far! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, you're awesome!


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 25/02/12 - 11:57 am · For: The Reincarnation of a Legend
Wow this is incredible i really liked this opening. It really is an excellent idea especially if it was off the top of your head. I cant wait to read this!

Author's Response: :D Aww, I'm so honored you decided to read this! I'm all flattered and whatnot now. I'm glad you like the idea, it was kinda was off the top of my head, but I put a lot of thought into it when I actually started developing the concept. I hope you enjoy reading this! Thanks so much for deciding to read this, and thanks even more for leaving a review! You're so incredible!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 25/01/12 - 02:12 pm · For: The Reincarnation of a Legend
First of all, I must agree with you. I can't believe you have 125 (now, and soon to be 126) reviews. I mean, seriously, you should have 1000 at least! And only 5873 (word count as of now) reads? Sheesh. So many people are missing out on the most awesomest thing out there.

Well, that sucks. You actually had me liking Tetsu. And then you just had to go off and do that. I can't believe you, Silverwolf. I am now hurt deep down in my heart *pouts and turns away before remembering I have to finish the review*. Anyway, it's definitely an unexpected development, and I can't wait to see what it will grow into. As for Chishio taking over, I can't say I'm overly excited about that, but that my just because the only time we really saw him was when he was cruel to Suki. Meanie head *sticks out tongue*

It's probably mean, but I was laughing at team 9's suffering. It was just so funny! I loved seeing the different reactions from all of the genin. And then Deno was just off to the side, waiting for it to end *sigh* Deno, bad! You should have helped! Then again, I did create your personality...... Anyway, I loved their little mission and can't wait to see more of team nine interacting!

Wait wait wait wait! She's returning. Crap, that has to suck. Mentally that is going to really be a heck of a load for her to know she'll be returning to a land where she was abused regularly.... At least she'll have her team. I feel so bad for Kakashi. I can understand why he'd be afraid, seeing as the people he always let closest died. Well, Deno, you had better not die and hurt Kakashi or I'll bring ya back to life and kill you *glares threateningly*. Okay, now that I'm through making threats to my own oc, I also want to say I'm actually glad that you aren't just sending her and Kakashi. This gets us a chance to see just what Team 9 has in them.

Though out of all of this, I must say the part between Deno and Kakashi was my favorite. I have no clue why. Maybe because it seemed like a really touchy moment to see Deno helping guide Kakashi from seeing Suki as the young girl he found to who she is and who she can become. I'm so glad I made them friends, because you write their friendship so freaking well and I love it! You may say you fear messing up Deno sometimes, but if anything, you do him better than I ever could (this Deno, at least. I'm not sure how well - though I'm sure you'd do just as great- with the real Deno). You're making me fall in love with my own oc, Silverwolf. I didn't even know that was possible. I mean, I knew I could fall for your ocs (Like Suki and the rest of team nine), but my own oc. It's kinda strange =P

Oooh! That last part was so unexpected. I really believed Tetsu had died of natural causes. That tricky, tricky Kaminari. Oh, and I like how you had all of their names have something to do with storms and lightning. That was a kinda funny thing to me. And the way they are (two brothers that are kinda under their older sister) makes me think of the siblings in FW. Sheesh, this mind link is starting to freak me out =P. But they do have me curious to what is going to happen next. This was an amazing job, and if I could, I'd tell you where the mistakes were, but I can't remember for the life of me.

Overall it was an amazing chapter. I liked the song, and it really did fit the part where they found out Suki was going to her home village again. If I could, I'd put Loved instead of Liked, but since I can't, I'll just stick with my usual: This so deserves (possibly even passes) YOUR STORY.

Author's Response: 1000?! I don't think so! Nowhere even close will I ever have that many reviews :P And actually, 5873 reads is a lot more than I ever thought I'd get. I love that you think so highly of this story though, it really lifts my spirits right now, especially since I'm kinda down XP

I know! I was considering keeping him alive for a while longer, but it just didn't work out that way, sadly... So I had to kill Tetsu off. I'm sorry I hurt your heart so deeply though; now you're making me feel bad :( As for what this whole thing will grow into... well, you'll see ;) And Chishio being the new lord will be very... interesting... Yeah, that sounds like an accurate word, or at least I hope...

Would it be mean if I said I was laughing at Team 9 while I was writing about them? XD I was honestly trying to show what they look like after two months with each other. They've gotten a bit better with each other after training and completing the small missions. So I hope they're all acting in accordance to their personalities and their story's development.

Yes, she's returning O_O It really does suck, big time. There will be a lot of mental trauma, I'll tell you that now. She'll wish her dad was there for her, but I really wanted to get some action with Team 9 into the story, so that's why her teammates will be accompanying her. Haha, don't worry, I don't think I'm killing Deno in the upcoming arc, so you can calm relax ^_^

I personally liked that scene as well. Deno and Kakashi together is just such a nice combination. And even though Deno has that carefree personality about him, he also seems like a very good friend, which is why having them be friends makes for a very touching part of the story. Haha, well, if I'm making you fall in love with your own OC, I should take that as a compliment. I didn't know it was possible either, but hey, whatever makes you enjoy reading about him :D

Oh yeah, I just had to throw in a scene with the upcoming bad guys. Not everything is as it seems, and Tetsu obviously did not die of natural causes; oh, if only the Kagayaku people knew that :P Yeah, I figured since they're siblings, they should have similar names just to make things interesting. Oh man, the mind link is still at work, huh? Spooky yet highly entertaing :)

Ah, it's okay about not remembering where the mistakes were, I'll probably find them later on anyway. Oh, I'm glad you liked the song choice, and you interpreted it just the way I did. I listened to it, thinking of Kakashi who worries for Suki. Thank you so much for the lovely comments, Sasaui! I appreciate each and every one of them! Thanks for reading and reviewing, you're awesomely amazing!


Name: JubileeOfPuppies (Signed) · Date: 22/01/12 - 10:44 am · For: The Reincarnation of a Legend
I love how you've created your own plot right outside the normal Naruto story! I think that keeping Suki out of Naruto's life would make it very hard to proceed with the story, but you've managed increasingly well! TRIPLETS! Gin-cha, why!? Why do people hate Suki so much!? Great chapter! UPDATE! I command you! Sorry ab out that... Great chapter, thanks for the chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! The one big thing I wanted with this story was originality, so I'm trying to avoid following the entire manga plot line when I can. For now, Naruto hates Suki, so that's about big development that I'll keep going for a while... Maybe forever ;D I know, everyone hates Suki. It makes me sick!... And I'm the one who's writing the story! Haha, I'll try to update soon, but I think I need to give some love to my other stories as well :P I'm so glad you liked this chapter so much! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, Koinu-chan! You're freaking awesome!


Name: Demon Fox (Signed) · Date: 21/01/12 - 04:11 pm · For: The Reincarnation of a Legend
Wait, wait, wait! You're leaving it there?! No! I want to see what happens next now!

Wow, so much interesting stuff here! I want to know how it all works out! Update soon, Sis! I need to know how everything goes!

Nice chappie! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Haha, yes I'm leaving it there as an evil cliffhanger and setup for the upcoming arc ;D I'm glad you liked this chapter so much, the plot is definitely becoming deeper with each passing adventure that Suki embarks on. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, Foxy! You're awesome!


Name: Red Mist (Signed) · Date: 21/01/12 - 11:50 am · For: The Reincarnation of a Legend
Oh my gosh, amazing plot developments! Cool! This new mission (or field trip, I don't know what to call it :P ) is so awesome, I can't wait to see what happens to Suki when she gets to Kagayaku! It's going to be so epic!

Aww, Kakashi makes such a nice daddy. He really cares so much for his daughter, it's so sweet! And Deno's friendship to Kakashi is really cool. Though now I wonder how he's going to keep his promise to protect Suki when he's going to a village with killers waiting for her O_o

Great chapter, Silverwolf-san! This was fantastic to read! Keep up the fabulous work!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you like the plot developments! Haha, yes, it is considered a mission. The Hokage said he would list it as a mission issued by Konohagakure. And don't worry, it will be very epic and dramatic :D Yeah, I love Daddy Kakashi; seeing how much he cares for Suki is one of my favorite parts of writing this story. And Deno is also fun to write about; thanks again to Sasaui Uchiha :) It was meant to be ironic that he promised Kakashi he would protect Suki while they walk off unknowingly to a village with a few murderers waiting for them. Hehe... Thanks so much for the lovely review, Red Mist! I appreciate it!


Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 20/01/12 - 12:42 am · For: The Reincarnation of a Legend
haha... no.... fail :PPP
i'd guessed we'd b seein more of Chishio n Tetsu from the Bingo book xDD
AND YES!!!Anothr update :DD
bt i didnt think Tetsu would die so soon... :L i ws lookin forward to read more bout him aftr seein tht kool pic of his :O n Chishio is the new Lord eh?
well...
haw haw haw.... this was a rather shorter bt interesting chappie... :O :D :)
n LOL at the Babies scene... XDDD mehehehe... i lol'd at "It was obviously taking all of Michiko’s willpower to not smack the annoying toddler away while using the crying child as the club." xDD
hmm... Deno is really a great character :DD n he really does look kinda kool with Kakashi... i'd like to see a fight in which these two fight side-by-side :D Sharingan n Byakugan in action :DD
wel... i cn undrstand Suki's frustration on having to goto her ex-village....
n YAY!the plot now finally starts takin pace :] n hmm... takin her away from Konoha helps u make ur own plot :D nice thinkin ^^
But wait.... wat ws Tetsu bout to tell Suki...? D: OMG! he died b4 tellin Chishio!!!! >_< NOT GOOD NOT GOOD!!!
there wer a few mistakes.... "black long-sleeved black" while describin the three brothers ^^ thought i'd help a lil...
Anyways.... for a minute i thought they were Ino Sasori n Deidara xDD
bt i guess not... :P well... haha
mystery characters... O___o
they killed Tetsu :OO n i think Team 9 are gonna get their hands full this time :L they seem pretty damn strong >:L
This is gonna b intersting!!!! HAHA...!!!
Update soon plz >_< :D this story is gettin Awesomwe by the minute!! :]
HAHA....
Yer friggin Awesome Uruphoo..... ~~ xDD

Author's Response: See? I told you they were important ;) Yeah, I didn't think he'd die that soon either, but that's how the story is proceeding in my head, so that is what must happen. And Chishio is now taking his place; we'll see how that turns out...

Heehee, Michiko and her temper never cease to amuse me. And Deno being a great character is all thanks to Sasaui, I just write him and try to do him justice. There probably will be a fight with Kakashi and Deno together later on, but that probably won't be for a while anyway. We'll see.

Yeah, I'm excited to continue with my own plot instead of following the actual manga. I'm really eager to keep up the originality with this. Don't worry, you'll see what Tetsu was going to tell Chishio about Suki later!

Oh, thanks for pointing that out, I just fixed it :) *facepalm* I didn't even realize those characters looked like Ino, Sasori, and Deidara... Oops... Oh well, they're not exactly the same, so... Yes, they killed Tetsu, and they're going after Suki now. *gasp*

I'm so happy you liked this chapter! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate the feedback!


Name: Rainbow Fire (Signed) · Date: 19/01/12 - 03:29 am · For: The Reincarnation of a Legend
Ooh, plot developments, I like it. This interesting twist of bringing Suki back to Kagayaku Village is fascinating. I was wondering what you would do with her at Tetsu's funeral, and then I read that last scene, and I was instantly going into overload, wondering about what would happen.

I really like the way you explained things in this chapter. You did a great job with writing about the Kagayaku characters and what's been going on with their lives. And I was especially interested during the debate over whether Suki should go or not. Kakashi's care for her continues to make me smile :)

Nice job on this, Wolf-chan! Keep up the good work with all your stories.

Author's Response: I know, I like plot developments too :3 I'm glad you like this new arc that I have come up with. Bringing Suki back to Kagayaku is something I've been wanting to do for a while, but I obviously had to wait until she was a genin for it to make sense. The last scene was actually a whim; I mean, I obviously knew those characters would be there, but I wasn't going to originally introduce them until later. I'm glad it turned out well :) Really, that came out well? I was worried that my explanations of the Kagayaku characters would come out... not so well. I'm glad you think otherwise. Hehe, yeah, Kakashi's fatherly love still makes me grin like an idiot :D Thanks for the review, Rainbow-chan! I really appreciate it, you rock my socks, girl!


Name: naruto fan reader (Anonymous) · Date: 10/01/12 - 03:49 pm · For: The Reincarnation of a Legend
awesome story dude, can't w8 for the next chapter XD

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like this so far. Yeah, I can't wait for the next chapter either, I wish I had time to write it :( I hope you stick around for any upcoming updates. Thanks for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!


Name: DestinyGirl (Signed) · Date: 09/01/12 - 08:09 am · For: The Reincarnation of a Legend

This... is... SO AWESOME!!! The first part was so fun, playing twenty questions is very funny and a good way to get to know somebody. It was even funnier with Suki and Naruto! I cannot believe those people! Attacking poor Suki, and then Naruto...

I love your writing, by the way (have I ever told you that?). It's so beautifully descriptive and as I read, it played in my head like a real live episode. I was practically hyperventilating right along with Suki.There was so much suspense as the two children were trying to get away from the thugs,I was really oping Kakashi would show up and save the day - and he did! Yay!:D Looks like Naruto may have a role model now... lol:P Mad skills, Kakashi-sensei!

Kakashi's so funny.... I really love humor, since I'm no good at it. I laughed when he told Suki not to let Naruto in her bedroom, so hilarious! I can just imagine it when they're older...

This was a great way to start out my day before heading into work (I hate fast food), you're amazing Wolf-chan!:D



Author's Response: :D Your review made my day. I'm so excited to hear that you thought it was awesome. Wow, this chapter was written a year ago... yikes, how time has flown... I love playing Twenty Questions with friends, old or new. It's just really fun, and if you even knew my friends, you'd understand just how ridiculous we can be with the game XD I had fun writing Suki and Naruto connecting through the game. Oh, yeah, those people were really horrible... Terrible, even; I feel a bit bad for putting Suki and Naruto through that.

I don't think you've ever said you love my writing, and I don't blame you. I think it's awful. But I appreciate the compliment all the same :) Thank you very much for boosting my spirits about the description, it's always a toughie for me to get the elaboration just right. Kakashi's awesome entrance in saving the kids made me smile, just because it made him more of a hero in their eyes. That's always nice for children.

Of course Kakashi would say something outrageous like that. He reads Icha Icha Paradise, and even if he does enjoy it (blech), he's still very protective of his daughter. But he may have to get over it when they're older, since they are the main pairing in this story ;)

I'm glad this chapter gave you a nice start to your day. Ew, fast food... Gross... I hope your work day went well :) Thanks for reading and leaving a wonderfully positive review, DestinyGirl! You rock!


Name: DestinyGirl (Signed) · Date: 21/12/11 - 09:59 am · For: The Reincarnation of a Legend

I had a huge cheesy grin on my face while reading this chappie, honestly, I think I freaked some people out with it.... The whole scene with Kakashi and Suki that morning before school was absolutely adorable! And Kakashi has a house now?? Sweet. I think I could picture Kakashi in slacks, wearing an apron, and cooking something while reading Make-out Paradise. Haha, Kakashi as a housewife....

*Clears throat* Anyway, back to the story.... I was always so nervous every year on the first day back to school. I guess because I always slightly dreaded it too. Cool! Suki met Naruto! They make quite a pair, both with dark histories that they couldn't control marking them and branding them as monsters to the world. I'm glad Kakashi isn't like the others, he seems very open-minded to things and not judgy. This is so amazing! I just wish I had time to read more! I'll get to it though, Wolf-chan, I promise!:D



Author's Response: Hehe, don't worry, I make the strangest facial expressions sometimes as well; my sister is often the one who points it out to me :P Adorable? I didn't even think that first scene was that sweet, but I'm glad you think so :D Yeah, I made Kakashi buy a house because I figured having a child would be enough incentive to not live in a small apartment. It's funny because I also pictured him as a housewife when I wrote that scene XD Yup, Suki and Naruto have met; I think it makes for a nice irony, considering their backgrounds. I've never seen Kakashi as someone who judges people by their histories; he usually judges by personality, which is why he calls Naruto the #1 Most Unpredictable Knuckleheaded Ninja ;D Aww, I'm glad you decided to read my story at all; don't worry, you don't have to rush to read this. The fact that you read it at all is incredible to me in the first place. Thank so much for choosing to read my story, and thanks for leaving such nice reviews! I hope you continue to enjoy this story.


Name: DestinyGirl (Signed) · Date: 21/12/11 - 09:50 am · For: The Reincarnation of a Legend

For a little kid to learn all this in one sitting must be hard. At least some of her questions were answered... though they may be hard, the truth is the only way to get past all of the bad stuff in your life. I think Suki is going to grow up to be a very strong woman, if she can survive all this then she's going to end up as awesome as her creator.... Wolf-chan! Haha, sorry I couldn't resist:P Yay! Kakashi's a dad!!! It's so weird... and I really like it. ^_^ The Third Hokage has to be the nicest old man in the history of old people. Seriously, he should get an award for it. I have a feeling that Suki and Kakashi is going to have the strongest bond ever between father and daughter.

Super awesome work, as always!:)



Author's Response: It really is hard for a little girl to learn so much about herself after spending her entire life filled with questions. The truth hurts, but in the end, it usually helps... Usually >_< Heh, if she survives all the torture I put her through, Suki is so going to kill me XP Ah, I'm glad you like the idea of Kakashi as a daddy, I had planned that since the beginning of the story, and I also really liked the concept. You'll see their bond grow throughout the series, don't worry ;) The Third Hokage is probably the nicest old man I've ever read about; old men tend to be stereotyped as mean. Thanks so much for reading and leaving such an awesome review! You're incredible, DestinyGirl!


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