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Penname: Sasaui Uchiha [Contact]
Real name:
Membership status: Member
Member since: 13/12/09
Website: fanfictionwriters.webs.com
Beta-reader: No
Fanfictions

Cursed Saint is one of my main stories. It is my most popular story as well, and I hope you like it. It's about a new addition to Konoha, Ryu Sarutobi, the "adopted "grandson of Hiruzen Sarutobi.

Final Wish is my newest Naruto fanfiction. It is a response to my own Naruto challenge, The Nemuri Promise. A trailer has not been written for it, but will be eventually.

Retribution is a co-written story with me and Itoko-san (Shizake Uchiha). It is alternatively updated by the two of us. It will not have a preview/trailer written for it.

Will of the Dragon is my only non-Naruto story on here. It is a One Piece fanfiction, and it is also a SYOC/Joint story, depending on if it is here or if it is at fanfiction.net. Characters are still being accepted and probably will be throughout much of the story.

Bio Part

Why you are looking here is beyond me. Though since you're here, I may as well let you know who I am (writer wise. I don't feel like getting any stalkers, thank you very much). How about we just start with the basics and slowly build, huh?

Basics

User Name: Sasaui Uchiha. It's probably obvious, but you can just call me Sasaui (pronounced Saw-say-you. Yes, it's weird. That's because I made it up). The only other nickname I've gotten is Kawa-cha from the fabulous Yuumai (JubileeOfPuppies).

Likes: I enjoy walking and thinking. It's a strange hobby, I know, but I love it. I also enjoy reading all the amazing stories on this site. So yeah, a lot of them. I enjoy making new friends and talking to Silverwolf and DestinyGirl on Fanfictionwriters.webs.com, my site. They're the ones who are always on there, so I have fun talking to them. As is probably obvious, I love to write.

Dislikes: Cuss words. I can deal with them in writing since I can change them in my mind, but I hate hearing them out loud because I can't do it the same way. I also don't like either Orochimaru or the Joker. I can't figure out which is creepier. Orochimaru just creeps me out because of a nightmare I had about him and the Joker..... Well, if you need an explanation for him, you obviously have not seen him. I also don't like people who are cruel to others just because of their own selfish desires.

Hobbies: Well, like I said before, I have a strange hobby of walking while thinking. Another couple are reading and typing. One of my hobbies you don't know of but is slowly becoming my favorite is Karate. Since October 23, 2011, I have been a yellow belt. I can't remember when I started except that it was last year while I was in the eighth grade around the end of winter. I only remember it was then because we didn't have to run. Another hobby I have is drawing even if I'm not all that good at it. You'll see some of my drawings on the bios I have for my characters in Tainted Guardian.

Personality: Most importantly, I am a Pentecostal Christian. Most important thing about me. I'm a mostly nice person. The only time I say anything mean is when I'm joking. I'll give anything a chance if it catches my interest or if someone asks me to read it unless it's rated 18 for sexual reasons or if it's yaoi/yuri. Christian, remember? I'm also very protective, something that will be shown in my characters. Another thing that may reflect in my characters is how I hate violence and unnecessary pain. It's strange that I hate it yet I'm in Karate, huh? But that's only because I've more or less been raised fighting my older brother. I also believe it's wrong to hurt someone for hurting you. If you already know what it feels like, why be so cruel as to make them go through the same pain?


Favorites

Now we'll get into some random favorites of mine. Why? Well, because. If you don't want to know this information, nobody said you had to read. The number of favorites will vary and I doubt many of the things will be in order.

Favorite Sport: Karate
Favorite Color(s): White and Black
Favorite Food: Chicken
Favorite type of Food: Asian
Favorite Animal: Wolf
Favorite Quote: For God so loved the world, that He gave His only begotten Son, so whosoever believeth in Him should not perish, but have everlasting life.

Favorite Authors/Books:
1)Richelle Mead: Vampire Academy and Bloodlines series
2)Rick Riordan: Percy Jackson and the Olympians and The Heroes of Olympus series
3)Suzanne Collins: Hunger Games series
4) Kelly Armstrong: Darkest Powers series
5) J.K Rowling: Harry Potter series

Favorite Characters from Favorite Books
1) Rose from VA and Adrian from Bloodlines
2) Pery or Luke in PJatO and either Percy, Jason, or possibly Leo for THoO series
3) Peeta. Sorry, Katniss, but I like him better.
4) Derek, definitely Derek.
5) Sirius Black

Favorite Manga:
1) Naruto
2) Kenichi: The Strongest Disciple
3) Psyren
4) Breaker: New Waves
5) Breaker (the first of the manwha series. Manwha is Korean manga)
6) Dragon Quest Dai no Daiboken
7) Fairy Tail
8) Bleach
9) Rave Master
10) O-Parts Hunter
11) 1/2 Prince
12) Hunter x Hunter
13) Inuyasha

Favorite Characters from Favorite Manga:
1) Naruto, Hinata, Itachi, or Nagato. Yes, I'm stuck on all 4.
2)Kenichi
3)Ageha Yoshina
4) Shioon
5) Still Shioon
6) Dai
7) Natsu
8) Keisuke Urahara
9) Haru
10) Jio
11) Gui
12) Gon
13) Inuyasha

Favorite Anime (including movies):
1) Spirited Away
2) Princess Mononoke
3) Naruto
4) Kenichi: The Mightiest Disciple
5) Claymore
6) Does The Last Airbender count as Anime?
7) Yu-Gi-Oh
8) Dragon Ball (Z, GT)


Favorite Character from Favorite Anime:
1) Haku
2) Ashitaka
3) Again it's between Naruto, Hinata, Itachi, and Nagato
4) Kenichi
5) Rocky
6) Zuko
7) Between Yugi and Yusei
8) Either Goku, Trunks, or Vegeta

Favorite Video Games:
1) Kingdom Hearts
2) Pokemon: Black
3) .Hack
4) Final Fantasy 7
5) Chrono Cross
6) Final Fantasy: Crisis Core

Favorite Character from Favorite Game:
1) It's between Sora, Roxas, Axel, and Riku
2) I think I'd say N for this
3) Haseo
4) Cloud
5) Serge or Glenn
6) Zack

Favorite Bands:
1) Thousand Foot Krutch
2) Red
3) Pillar
4) Skillet
5) Story of the Year
6) Crossfade
7) Breaking Benjamin
8) Three Days Grace
9)Sr-71
10) Simple Plan

Well, I think that's all for bands.......

Favorite Song(s) by Favorite Bands:
1) Between The Part that Hurts the Most (Is You), Faith, Love, and Happiness, and Slow Bleed
2) Between Death of Me and Shadows I think......
3) Not Without A Fight
4) Hero
5) Just Close Your Eyes
6) Colors
7) I Will Not Bow
8) Never Too Late or Break
9) Tomorrow
10) Save You

Now I believe I am done with favorites. Sheesh, that was a long list.......

Writer

As a writer, and by that I do not mean fanfiction writer but an actual writer, I have written one complete story that keeps jumping around in page length for some recent. The first time I checked it was 400+ pages and then it was suddenly 600+ pages next time I checked. I have a million other ideas swirling around in my head, but I haven't written most of them mostly because I've been focusing on this one story. I've been trying to get a literacy agent and before long I may just have one. Fingers crossed and prays being sent.

Fanfiction

I didn't even know what fanfiction was until I was in the fifth grade. That's when I learned about it and it was by complete accident. Some kid I knew was showing around pictures of Naruto. I got a few of the pictures, and there was a link at the bottom - Narutoworld.com. Curious, I went to it.

Sadly, Narutoworld no longer has a part for fanfiction. When I first visited it, though, it did. I checked it out because I wanted to see what it was and that is where I first read fanfiction. I still remember the two that I actually read, too. Well, one title and another one just what it was about. The first one was Colors of Life and Death. It's funny that it's actually here on Tonfa now. The other was about a girl who had known Sasuke as a child returning to Konoha. It showed them bonding again and everything, until the end where Itachi returned and killed her. It was during this time I even found out about fanfiction.

Since the fanfiction part of Narutoworld was taken off, I began to search for a new fanfiction site. Somehow during this search, I found Tonfa. After reading a few of the fanfictions, mostly one done by an author maybe a few of you know known as WolfTeam000. She was a great author and is probably the main reason I stuck with fanfiction rather than got bored. I've recently refound her on Fanfiction.net writing Fairy Tail fanfiction because I got bored and looked at her fanfiction.net account and saw she had updated. Then my friends began to vary and more people began writing wonderful stories such as RowanRose's Kokoro Uchiha fanfic. It started way back when. Sheesh, I feel old yet I'm only 15.

My first ever fanfiction was similar to Never Too Late: a girl came to Konoha to help team 7 with the chuunin exams. The only thing was it was with Naruto and Sakura and Sasuke had actually run off to Orochimaru. The girl's name was still Kina, she had the same kekkei genkai, but she was working for Sasuke and had a demon in her. That's not how it is now. It was called Unknown Secret, which is also the name of Never Too Late's first arc.

After this fanfiction, I began to write a few more, most of which shall never see the light of day again. One that has stuck with me, though, since around when I first began as Bre2k8 is Tainted Guardian. Some may remember it as Sasaui Uchiha. It was inspired after reading a few SasuOc fanfics where the female of the group was another survivor. Primarily this was Crimson Lily's fanfic, Another Survivor: Uchiha Love Blossoms.

Now I am mostly where I am today, still working on stories I came up later on and even reviving a few of my ideas from back when I was Bre2k8. I've made some great friends and am very glad I joined Tonfa.

Fanfictionwriters.webs.com

This is my website. If anyone is just looking for a very weird place to hang out and be strange, this is a place you should go. Though I must warn you, it may be too strange and make you go insane.



YOUR STORY Reward

YOUR STORY is the best compliment I will give a person. If you get out of this world or something similar or weird (such as eight thumbs up), then you're really close to YOUR STORY. Or I just forget to tell you =P. Anyway, it's basically like saying that your story is just so great, it becomes an adjective itself that explains its awesomeness because no adjective can. Does that make sense?

Anyway, here's a list of the stories (that I remember) are on the YOUR STORY list:





Reincarnation of a Legend by Silverwofl213
Rekindle the Lost Flame by Silverwolf1213
Pirates of the Mist by Silverwolf1213
The White Rose by Silverwolf1213
Broken Wings by Destiny Girl
Beneath the Darkness by DestinyGirl
How to Adapt and Overcome by xXxTiNkXxX
Rotes Blut by BattyBigSister
She Was Beautiful by BattyBigSister
Child of Hex by JubileeOfPuppies
Endeavor by JubileeOfPuppies
Space Children by Firestar83
Fire Escape by DropDeadThenDance
The Naruto Games by Konan
Three Days by Silverwolf1213
Stereotype by DropDeadThenDance
Cygnus Olor by RowanRose
Reality Check by UzamakiMasumi
A Tale Best Told Dead by Silverwolf1213
The Path Each Takes series by Shizake Uchiha
Reverse This Curse by xXxTiNkXxX
The Princess and The Freeman by BrontesWorld and DropDeadThenDance

If I have told you that your story is YOUR STORY but forgot to mention it, please let me know.


So, now that my bio is finally ended, those who deemed it worthy enough to read, you can rest your eyes.

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Stories by Sasaui Uchiha [14]
Series by Sasaui Uchiha [2]
Challenges by Sasaui Uchiha [5]
Favorite Series [1]
Sasaui Uchiha's Favorites [96]
Reviews by Sasaui Uchiha

by Shizake Uchiha Liked [Reviews - 203]
Summary: This is the legacy of Shizake Uchiha. Beginning with his adventure to define who he really is and his place in the world. Ending with his grandson's journey to uncover the past of his relatives.
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Character-Centric, General Fiction > Naruto, MadFic > Script Fic, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Dark, Drama, Romance
Warnings: AU, Dark, Death
Challenges: None
Stories: 3
Challenge: None
Open: Closed
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Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 16/12/12 Title: The Path Each Takes

I planned to do more, but, well, homework and being at a place without internet prevented me from doing so. So, I present you with your birthday present. I remember saying you really wanted one of these, and although I wish I could do more, here is the best I can do. Happy birthday Shizake. To the entire series of The Path Each Takes for being absolutely amazing, bonding the readers to amazing characters to the point I, and I believe Silverwolf, cried with the death of Shizake and where Sasaui Uchiha still lives:



Title: The Fox and The Haruno by QuasiAngel
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 4]
Summary:


During Naruto's fight with Neji, Sakura ponders a story her father once told her. One Shot. First published 5-2-04. Spoilers for Chapter 100.
Category:
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1568 | Read count: 1202 [Report This]
Published: 09/04/07 | Updated: 09/04/07


Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 22/08/15 Title: Chapter 1: When I was little, my father told me a story...

Wow. This was just absolutely fantastic. I enjoyed every minute of it and was super excited just to see what would happen next. And I may not ship NaruSaku, but that end was adorable XD So was child Sakura.

Now for how I found this. I help with a magazine over on Wattpad and wanted to let you know this was going to be used as a one-shot for the issue. If you have a problem with this, just let me know and it'll be taken down.



Title: Naruto: Sound Sisters by SBgirl04
Rated: 12/12A Liked [Reviews - 15]
Summary: About a year after the 4th ninja war, an unknown family settled down in the outskirts of the beautiful village of Konoha. Although they try to live a normal life, they soon encounter a secret that will devastate the wonderful friends they make along the way.

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Category: OC-centric, Het Romance > Fluff, Het Romance > Angst, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: All, Naruto Uzumaki, OC, Pair OCGaa, Pair OCKiba
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 31836 | Read count: 32267 [Report This]
Published: 17/09/08 | Updated: 01/02/17


Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 14/06/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - A new home

Wow. Didn't see the humming thing. I makes me think of daredevil on how making noise helps her see. I really liked the pictures and chapter. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Lol, yeah, Imao had to learn how to compensate for her vision loss. So, humming\'s her thing! :) And thank you, they\'re kinda old pics now, and my style has changed a bit. :P But I love drawing either way.



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 14/06/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - You're not Imao!

-_-'.... She doesn't seem all that nice. Her and Imao are like the sun and the moon. I really liked this chapter, and I agree with Naruto. She's a jerk. How could she insult her own sister like that?

Author's Response: Yeah, it\'s like Ying and Yang, Good vs. Evil, etc and etc, lol. They have a love hate relationship; Imao loves while Imai hates. lol!



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 14/06/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Completely Different

Awkward...... Poor Naruto. He can't get anything right, can he? I really liked your picture and chapter. I love the demon vs angel thing (or was that reversed?).

Author's Response: I know! He just sometimes gets ahead of himself a little too much, lol! I love Naruto though.



Title: Another Survivor: Uchiha Love Blossoms by Crimson Lily
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 283]
Summary: Eight year old Katsumi Uchiha ran through the blood stained streets of the Uchiha compound, looking for him. He was important, he was her best friend. If she didn’t find him, life wouldn’t be worth living anymore. She had to find him before the Uchiha Clan killer did. Where are you? She thought frantically, trying to hold back the tears she knew were coming. Where are you, Sasuke?
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto, Het Romance > Fluff
Characters: All, Pair OCSasu
Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance
Warnings: AU
Challenges: SASUKExOC,
Challenge: SASUKExOC,
Series: None
Chapters: 51 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 134305 | Read count: 113617 [Report This]
Published: 05/10/08 | Updated: 14/09/11


Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 29/03/10 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48: Battle of Comrades

0_0....*girl just stares at the computer like a total moron*......Holy fricken snot monkeys (I have a weird vocabulary)! I forgot how fricken awesome your stories were! Please please please write more soon, Crimson Lily, or I may die from boredom!



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 29/03/10 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48: Battle of Comrades

P.S I used to be Bre2k8.



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 15/09/11 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51: Epilogue

Man, I can't believe it stopped at that. I absolutely loved it and can't wait to see what you'll do next. It's just amazing, Crimson Lily. Your writing is above the point where words can describe it. I loved the note at the end. For some reason, I found it absolutely awesome. Anyway, I can't wait to read the sequel. You're story so deserves one.



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 15/12/10 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49: Hopeful Sacrifice

Great chapter, Crimsonlily. I was wondering if I'd ever get to read the amazing next chapter of your amazing story. Please write more soon. It's an awesome story. Keep up the amazing work!



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 26/01/11 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50: Lock it Away

Wow. That was an absolutely amazing chapter, even if it was short. I can't wait to read more, so please write more soon, Crimson Lily!



Title: A Vampire Rose by Crimson Lily
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 69]
Summary: I, Tenten, was finally done with high school. I had an entire summer stretched out in front of me in which to absolutely nothing school related. I had been accepted to UCLA, and also had a full volleyball scholarship. My life was perfect. Well, at least until the day after my graduation, when I was diagnosed with terminal cancer. And I had, at the most, six months to live before the cancer killed me.
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Category: General Fiction > Character-Centric, Het Romance > Fluff, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Real World
Characters: Kiba Inuzuka, Neji Hyuuga, OC, Pair OCNaru, Pair SasuHina, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha, Shikamaru Nara, Tenten
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Dark, Humor, Supernatural
Warnings: Dark, OOC, Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 | Completed: No | Word count: 51051 | Read count: 18357 [Report This]
Published: 23/06/09 | Updated: 23/12/09


Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 25/12/09 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Council of Nerezza Pura

Wow. Sabine is a real jerk. How dare she take Tenten's clothes. Anyway, I love the story and can't wait for the next chapter.



Title: No Mary-Sue, Make my OC blue ='[ by nkbz
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 39]
Summary: Takuyamo-chan arrives through one of the various methods of arriving into the Naruto universe only to discover he is not in Konoha, possibly not even close to it. Confused and frustrated he has no powers like the other OC fan fictions he adores, he begins a quest to attain Mary-Sue powers and experience the Naruto world as he had seen in his favorite fan fictions! Parodies of popular fics included.

Of course it will have lemons(Ok I lied)! Some distasteful language and situations await. And everything else that will get you to view it Photobucket
Category: OC-centric, MadFic > Parody
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Humor, Parody, Romance
Warnings: AU, Death, Drabble, OOC, Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 | Completed: No | Word count: 4634 | Read count: 11572 [Report This]
Published: 26/06/09 | Updated: 25/04/12


Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 27/07/12 Title: Chapter 1: The Ninja Lost Among the Forest

Don't ask me what suddenly made me decide to read this - I'm not sure. Maybe because I was bored as wanted something that I wouldn't write a long review for than usual? I dunno.

This was entertaining, though. There was one part I think I understand but do not want to ask if I'm right about, but the rest I got and found funny. And this did make me realize that I'm not completely messing up Final Wish. Though you are right about the girl thing. I'm sure Ryu feels very special now.



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 27/07/12 Title: Chapter 2: If I owned Naruto-I'd have Akamaru lick my-

Hm..... Could do with at the male part addition, but hey, that's just be because I'm young and still don't even like thinking the word.

I find it amusing to see all the overused stuff. Well, stuff you apparently see a lot, because me, not so much. Maybe it's because I just don't read as much as you do/did (don't know how active you are now). But, again, it is entertaining. I wonder what his wish will be. Hm......



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 27/07/12 Title: Chapter 3: Another Uchiha Fic: Operation Uchiha Reproduction

Hey, don't diss these fics. They're fun to write. I should know XD.

Though I do see the point with most of them being overly cliche and Mary-Sue like. My first version fit that so well (not Tainted Guardian, but the actual first version). I laughed at the ending, simply because anime do scenes like that so often. They are really cliche, but they look cool XD. Anyway, another funny chapter. Still bored, so off to the next one!



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 27/07/12 Title: Chapter 4: Mary-sue make Taku red

I never knew making fun of cliches could be so funny........ Poor Itachi. Though I guess he should be used to it XD. I don't know why, but I laugh every time you make it obvious you're not detached from the story such as adding that you forgot due to a two year time period. Another hilarious chapter, Nkbz.



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 27/07/12 Title: Chapter 5: Purpose?

A) Should I be honored to have my name in this story, because I couldn't tell. Either way, I laughed when I saw it.

B) Why does so many seem to misspell my name?

Anyway, funny chapter, Nkbz. And Orochimaru...... *glares at said snake *

Another interesting chapter! I'm now at home, but since I have one more chapter, I might as well read it.



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 27/07/12 Title: Chapter 6: Mr. Snake

Blah. That experience does not sound fun. Do it again, Taku! And I laughed reading the info dump. Do people seriously do that. I sure hope I haven't........ I also remember you giving it as an example on FFW for an info dump. So, do we get this picture? Is it free? Because I'm not paying (sorry about the end. I just suddenly veered into a weird review mood.......).

Author's Response: The first chapter of Tainted Guardian:

He had dark hair, the bangs hanging over his face, onyx eyes that were glaring at me, and pale skin. He wore a black long sleeve shirt, white shorts, and black ninja shoes.

I looked a lot like him, but that was probably because we were twins. I had dark hair like my brother, one onyx eye and one jade eye (it was weird, but when I was six, some snake spat poison into my eye; even after my father got the venom out, it stayed green), and pale skin that was a bit darker than my twins. I wore a pink short sleeve shirt, black shorts, and black ninja shoes.

I got up, reaching toward the object, which just happened to be a boy. He had dark hair, the bangs hanging over his face, onyx eyes that were glaring at me, and pale skin. He wore a black long sleeve shirt, white shorts, and black ninja shoes.

“What have I said about running in the house, Sasuke?” she asked. She had long black hair, onyx eyes, and pale skin. She wore a black dress under a beige apron. After a moment, Mother smiled.

you were my inspiration.



Title: Kokoro Uchiha by Rowanrose
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 125]
Summary: Kokoro-DO NOT READ

Any of you have not read Kokoro Uchiha before, a new version called Cygnus Olor is up, so don't spoiler yourselves. =_=. For those of you who have and have been waiting for an update, please go ahead and read the latest chapter; it's an announcement. (no i'm not dropping Kokoro Uchiha) Thank you~
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto, General Fiction > Timeless
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: Kokoro Uchiha
Chapters: 43 | Completed: No | Word count: 86283 | Read count: 62749 [Report This]
Published: 21/07/09 | Updated: 23/06/12


Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 07/11/10 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Revenge of the Assassin!

=( Poor Kokoro. I feel bad for her having to go through the such fear from when Kane tortured her. I'm interested, though, about the way she's making a bit of her tigerness come out. Hawk is really going to get it. She's got to be scarily powerful now. If not, big whoop. I'm wrong. Anyway, please write more soon. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yeah. I just reread that chapter and i got the chills.. Well, you\'ll find out! I will. ^^ hopefully... I started a new story. Can you check it out? By the way i read Cursed Saint. Two words- LOVED IT!!!



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 23/06/12 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43: I'm back and I have an announcement, so just a second before the lynching please!

Well, if the old readers want to be buttholes about it and get mad, then just ignore them. They'll fund it was a rewrite worth waiting for.

You know I'm eagerly waiting for the rewrite. Now I'm super excited for Monday. Kokoro, I miss you and can't wait to see you again! Deno says high! Sasaui wants to know who in the world you are! Haha. Anyway, I will wait patiently like a good reader and fan for what I know will be worth it.

Author's Response: Thank you Brekky chan. XD You're always so nice! Me too! I can't wait until tomorrow, but, T_T I've got soo much stuff to do today, I'm definitely DEAD. Kokoro: Hi Deno! Ehhh? But I thought you knew Sasaui-chan; i'm you're little sister! Thank you Brekky-chan, you have no idea how much that means to me.



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 18/07/11 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41: Return and Reunion

Yeah! You have your computer back. It had to suck to live without it, knowing of your promise. But it's fine. It's not like purposefully dropped your computer. Don't beat yourself up about it.

Okay, to the review of your story: Why is it I have a bad feeling about what's coming up next? Then again, it might just be because I'm expecting something bad to Kokoro (since something bad always happens to her). This chapter was amazing. I loved the scene with Kokoro. It made my heart ache with sadness that she had to feel that. I never realized until now how much I'd bonded with your oc, Rose-chan. I'm glad she at least found that other part of her at the end. Then with the reunion. I had to force myself not to cry. It was so heart warming. I'm glad that Shura is still sticking by Kokoro after what happened. I was afraid he'd be afraid of her. And since I forgot to tell you this is my last review, I loved how Shura tried to help her by reminding her of her family (Ryu). Both the chapters I've read today has brightened my day. This is wonderful and I can't wait to read more. Your stories are just so great. They'll grab a person and refuse to let go until.... Never mind. They just never let you go.

Author's Response: Hah, thanks. It\'s just, WHY DOES THIS KEEP HAPPENING TO ME!?!? *sighs* well, at least I keep learning my lesson.... Well, all I can say is, you\'ll see what\'s going to happen to Kokoro. ^^: (sweatdrop) A-ha, yes, poor Kokoro got the poor end of the deal being brought into the world as my first OC - when I was all darkwriter like, LOL. That\'s amazing and so important for a writer! The reader has to bond with the character, to ache when the character aches and anger when the character angers; and, as you told me, I ACHIEVED THAT!!!! WAAH!!! It\'s another step forward, COOL!!! Thanks so much, I\'m sorta odd when I\'m excited and writing at the same time. Well, about Shura, you\'ll see. And Shura\'s the type of guy who doesn\'t forget people all that easily - especially (dare I say it) people he\'s jealous of! Thanks immensely; I pride myself on my cool chapter endings but your review endings are amazing! ^^ seriously, thanks.... I\'ll try to update soon!



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 15/11/10 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Why do I (Hawk/Kokoro/Itachi) Feel This Way?

Really good chapter, Rose-chan! And just so you know, Metal Birds May Fly is awesome times ten. I loved it, and this chapter, just like I knew I would. You're one of those people who can always write well. I really liked the end with Itachi. It's nice to see what he thinks. Itachi always has been one of my favorite characters (T-T Why'd he have to die!!!!?). Please write more soon, Rose-chan!

Author's Response: WHAT!? He DIES!? Oh boy... Thanks! I\'m so glad you liked MBMF so much! And I\'m glad you loved this chapter! ^^ Yeah, Itachi\'s a big softie. An idiotic softie who killed the whole Uchiha Clan and- ...never mind... I will! ..Try!



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 14/12/10 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: You were saying...?

I don't know what to say but that that was a great chapter. I'm wordless. Please update soon, Rose-chan. Heck, it doesn't have to be this story, just one of your stories.

Author's Response: Thanks, Sasui, seriously, for your continued support in all of my stories. ^^ *laughs* I\'ll try to update soon! I\'ve hit a pothole on Light The Darkness and I need to research some stuff on Metal Birds May Fly, so most likely, the next story to be updated will be this one!



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 06/11/10 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 35: Update-Summary of Story till now!

Well, it was nice to review some of the story since it's been gone for so long I forgot some. I can't wait to read Revenge of the Assassin. Oh, and if you haven't, could you read my newest story, Cursed Saint

Author's Response: Seriously, i can\'t believe you found something to review on on this chapter. It was so painfully short i myself winced! Thanks for the review, and i\'d love to try your story out. It sounds nice! Love the title.



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 14/12/09 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Bandits- you gotta hate 'em.

okay, just pointing this out, Kokoro sounds way more mature than a nine or ten year old. Second, this is a really great story, Rose-chan! I can't wait for the next chapter. BTW, have you ever heard of Wortyofpublishing.com?Well, I wrote a story on there called Revived by Bre2k8, and I was wondering if you could read it?

Author's Response: Oh yeah, Koko isn\'t nine or ten, she\'s in her early elevens. Thank you! I haven\'t heard of that website, I can\'t wait to check it out!



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 28/12/09 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: The story

What frightened them so much? Anyway, great chapter. I wonder what Dai will do with the blood. Anyway, can you read my two knew storied, even though Until the End mainly tells you info on the story.

Author's Response: Well, you\'ll find out what got them so scared! And, I\'ll try to read your stories! I just don\'t have time to review... I have to STUUDY for school, and it\'s a total headache..