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Rated: 15
[Reviews - 34]After a tragic accident, a teenage girl finds herself in a yellow room with two strange people in black cloaks. This is The Nexus, a place where the people whose lives have ended too abruptly come. These are the ones who are given a choice after death. Move on to the afterlife, or travel somewhere else to complete an assignment that will grant you a new life.
However, there's a catch. If you choose to take the assignment and you fail, you will not live again, nor will you enter Heaven or Hell. No, instead you will forever be stuck in-between the two.
But hey, a new life is only a signature away. The choice is yours.
Life, or death?
Please read and review! :)
Category: OC-centric
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Dark
Challenges: , The Ultimate OC Challenge
Challenge: , The Ultimate OC Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 22 | Completed: No | Word count: 67799 | Read count: 53638 [Report This]
Published: 06/12/09 | Updated: 14/10/11
Date: 28/03/10 Title: Chapter 1: The End Of Me
This is really very good so far. Sixteen more chapters to go.
Date: 28/03/10 Title: Chapter 2: Ignorance Is Key
Good chapter. Sasuke is such a hard person to write but you've got him character. Good job.
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 37]Reality is such a wonderful wake up call.
The places you never expected to exist. The people you’d only dreamt of meeting. The events of their tomorrow having already passed in your present. Was my reality their illusion? Was their illusion my reality? I haven’t been sure for the past 20 years.
As an outsider, I was hated as a missing nin. As a traitor. As the enemy. Like the one I followed, I was wanted in almost every country. I had no regrets however. Well, no regrets when it came to him. Never when it came to him. He was the one I turned to. My leader. My light. My solace.
We were despised. Looked down upon. Hated for our crimes and I have to admit, everyone had every right to hate us. However, despite all this loathing, I feel the need to write what it felt like to live the life that we did, for not many know what really goes on in the obscure world of a rogue ninja.
I can only hope that by reading this, people can better understand us and the paths we have chosen. And I hope they know that our actions were and are not based on evil or ill-intent, but loneliness, fear and most of all: pain.
Category: General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: All, Pair OCSasu
Genres: Action/Adventure, Dark, Romance
Warnings: Dark, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 | Completed: No | Word count: 47369 | Read count: 32184 [Report This]
Published: 09/12/09 | Updated: 27/12/11
Date: 30/01/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh and her eyes are a really light gold.
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 7]Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto
Characters: Pair OCSasu
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, General, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 | Completed: No | Word count: 56835 | Read count: 40742 [Report This]
Published: 09/02/10 | Updated: 21/09/11
Date: 22/02/10 Title: Chapter 2: The Not So Peaceful Town
This is a pretty good story. The only thing I dont like is that it is more of a sceenplay or script then a story. But its good.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, I know it seems like a script but I\'ve always found it easier to read. I hope you keep reading it though. :)
Rated: 18
[Reviews - 103]Category: General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden, OC-centric
Characters: All, OC, Pair OCNeji, Pair OCSasu, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure, Horror, Humor, Romance
Warnings: OOC, Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 | Completed: No | Word count: 108601 | Read count: 11257 [Report This]
Published: 06/08/10 | Updated: 16/05/12
Date: 15/08/11 Title: Chapter 6: Return: Chapter 6
I have followed this girl since the very beginning, and I have to say, the character development is soo great. You have such an amazing understanding of all these characters and their emotions. You've created a very compelling story and I love it :]
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 3]Category: Het Romance > Fluff, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: Pair OCSasu
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: No | Word count: 8773 | Read count: 4757 [Report This]
Published: 28/03/11 | Updated: 28/03/11
Date: 29/08/11 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Good, although things are moving pretty fast, maybe you could slow down slightly, add more depth? And is Sasuke meant to be out of character? I'm a fan of his usual pensive, cynical self. It's hard to imagine him like this hah.
Rated: R18
[Reviews - 7]Category: General Fiction > Character-Centric, Het Romance > Fluff, Het Romance > Angst, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden, General Fiction > Post-Naruto
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki, Pair SasuSaku, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, General, Graphic lemon
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 8118 | Read count: 656 [Report This]
Published: 03/07/12 | Updated: 21/09/12
Date: 05/07/12 Title: Seeling the Hawk *Chapters have been reworked*
I absolutely love this. There's so many mediocre stories on this site that reading this was like a breath if fan fiction fresh air. I am most definitely hooked and your writing style is nearly impeccable. The way you describe the shinobi vs civilian lifestyles is wonderful. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I know exactly what you mean about reading fanfiction. I cannot tell you how many times I would read a story where either the premise was great or at least interesting, or the start was strong but soon enough it looks sloppy, rushed, or are dealing with fanfiction sacropenia and the characters lose the fleshiness that make us love them. As for nearly impeccable, I definitely dedicate my updated chapter and note number 6 to you. Thank you so much for mentioning this because I reread the chapter and the typos, word usage, and lack of details made me realize that I really need to not post chapters on so little sleep and not before a good hard look and revision.
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 4]Category: Het Romance > Warned
Characters: Kiba Inuzuka
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 | Completed: No | Word count: 11031 | Read count: 9930 [Report This]
Published: 28/08/13 | Updated: 15/09/13
Date: 30/08/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Yet another mission.
It was short, and there were a few grammatical errors (but we all make those) and aside from that, I could see how this could have potential. I will be reading on!
Author's Response: Yes, I didn't have a lot of time for this chapter, I shall edit it right away! Thank you again!
Date: 30/08/13 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Encounter
My advice would be to break up the paragraphs, especially the dialogue, the way it is makes it little hard to follow, and it would make the chapters appear longer. Also, try and draw things out a bit more, it feels a tad rushed, but other than that, I like this so far :)
Author's Response: Thank you, found this extremely helpful :) I know I have a problem with rushing things.. I am pleased that you like it!
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 7]Category: Het Romance > Angst, Het Romance > Warned
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Dark, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Dark, Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: Fuu's Love- Naruto's Journey
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 4221 | Read count: 12226 [Report This]
Published: 30/08/13 | Updated: 03/09/13
Date: 30/08/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Zetzu Infestation
I'm very excited to see where this story goes, and the introduction of a character we have yet to really know.
Author's Response: Well check back like tomorrow and i will have the first chapter done with a twist. :)