Penname: eldertensa [Contact]
Real name: Joey Watson
Membership status: Member
Member since: 11/04/09
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Real name: Joey Watson
Membership status: Member
Member since: 11/04/09
Website:
Beta-reader: No
I love fan fics, so I started writing them.
Read them all and Please leave painfully honest reveiws so I can get better, thank you.
sorry, i've been extremely uninspired to keep writing lately, i can only hope it will get better.
Favorite Series
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Reviews by eldertensa
Title: Faith in Humanity by karrafear
Rated:
[Reviews - 15]
Rated:
[Reviews - 15]
Summary: AU. What if Naruto survived a murder attempt on his life at the age of 6 and had to leave Konoha for his protection. Now 12, Naruto and Jiraiya returns to face the genin test.
Category: Orphan
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: Faith Chronicles
Chapters: 21 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 163127 | Read count: 40042 [Report This]
Published: 18/12/05 | Updated: 13/08/06
Category: Orphan
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: Faith Chronicles
Chapters: 21 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 163127 | Read count: 40042 [Report This]
Published: 18/12/05 | Updated: 13/08/06
Reviewer: eldertensa Signed
Date: 09/08/09 Title: Chapter 4: Wave Mission II
Date: 09/08/09 Title: Chapter 4: Wave Mission II
This story is turning out great!
Reviewer: eldertensa Signed
Date: 09/08/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chuunin Exam Part I
Date: 09/08/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chuunin Exam Part I
There are so many awesome jutsu in this story, great work!
Reviewer: eldertensa Signed
Date: 09/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Date: 09/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
This is a great story, and you are a great writer!
Title: Threshold by Delauney
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 3]
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 3]
Summary: Summary: Sent to a mental ward as a child, Naruto has spent thirteen years in a closed environment of insanity and secrets, until Tsunade finds him. Will her greatest mistake be letting him out into the world?
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 | Completed: No | Word count: 29489 | Read count: 15378 [Report This]
Published: 07/07/06 | Updated: 04/08/06
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 | Completed: No | Word count: 29489 | Read count: 15378 [Report This]
Published: 07/07/06 | Updated: 04/08/06
Reviewer: eldertensa Signed
Date: 06/06/09 Title: Chapter 10: Escaping...and Other Things
Date: 06/06/09 Title: Chapter 10: Escaping...and Other Things
This is amazing!!!
Title: Restoration of Faith by karrafear
Rated: U
[Reviews - 19]
Rated: U
[Reviews - 19]
Summary: SEQUAL to Faith in Humanity Naruto OOC. After Sandaime's death, Naruto made a promise to himself to defy his own destiny and pursue a future that will lead to freedom and happiness.
Category: General Fiction
Characters: Shino Aburame, Chouji Akimichi, Gaara, Sakura Haruno, Hinata Hyuuga, Neji Hyuuga, Kiba Inuzuka, Shikamaru Nara, Orochimaru, Rock Lee, Temari, Tenten, Tsunade, Itachi Uchiha, Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki, Ino Yamanaka
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, General, Supernatural
Warnings: AU, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: Faith Chronicles
Chapters: 35 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 387901 | Read count: 69526 [Report This]
Published: 18/07/06 | Updated: 24/12/07
Category: General Fiction
Characters: Shino Aburame, Chouji Akimichi, Gaara, Sakura Haruno, Hinata Hyuuga, Neji Hyuuga, Kiba Inuzuka, Shikamaru Nara, Orochimaru, Rock Lee, Temari, Tenten, Tsunade, Itachi Uchiha, Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki, Ino Yamanaka
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, General, Supernatural
Warnings: AU, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: Faith Chronicles
Chapters: 35 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 387901 | Read count: 69526 [Report This]
Published: 18/07/06 | Updated: 24/12/07
Reviewer: eldertensa Signed
Date: 16/08/09 Title: Chapter 32: Chuunin Exam 2nd Stage Day 3 Team Challenge
Date: 16/08/09 Title: Chapter 32: Chuunin Exam 2nd Stage Day 3 Team Challenge
That orgy no jutsu was extremely unexpected, but increadibly awesome!
Reviewer: eldertensa Signed
Date: 11/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Dark Remembrance
Date: 11/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Dark Remembrance
First, Amaterasu is used by one of Itachi's eyes using mangekyou, the other does his genjutsu, and both combiined do something else.
And shadow clones are created as exact as can be, they all already know what to do, information is passed when they are destroyed or dispelled.
Great story!!!
Title: Naruto and Sasuke Vs. Kabuto by Naruto23
Rated: [Reviews - 5]
Rated:
[Reviews - 5]
Summary: Naruto and Sasuke get attack by Kabuto and Naruto and Sasuke have to work together to beat Kabuto
Category: General Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 104 | Read count: 1563 [Report This]
Published: 29/09/06 | Updated: 29/09/06
Category: General Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 104 | Read count: 1563 [Report This]
Published: 29/09/06 | Updated: 29/09/06
Title: Konoha Civil War by N1nj45tyl3
Rated: U [Reviews - 40]
Rated: U
[Reviews - 40]
Summary: A small stone, in a giant pond can cause major ripple. Hyuuga Hinata is scheduled for execution for running away from Konoha, despite having good reasons. Naruto and friends rush to save her and suddenly find themselves in the middle of a civil war. When friends suddenly become enemies, Naruto and crew must figure out a way to end the war, while keeping themselves alive
Sequel to Skipping the Rift.
WARNING: LOTS OF CHARACTER DEATH!!!!!
Category: General Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: Fox Fire
Chapters: 38 | Completed: No | Word count: 52898 | Read count: 63917 [Report This]
Published: 20/11/06 | Updated: 07/09/09
Sequel to Skipping the Rift.
WARNING: LOTS OF CHARACTER DEATH!!!!!
Category: General Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: Fox Fire
Chapters: 38 | Completed: No | Word count: 52898 | Read count: 63917 [Report This]
Published: 20/11/06 | Updated: 07/09/09
Title: I'll Never Let Go by PhoenixClaw
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 14]
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 14]
Summary: 
When a midnight stroll becomes a confession of love, Hyuuga Hinata believes her life could not get any better. However, when Naruto has a less than desirable reaction to her words, how far will the young kunoichi go to prove her feelings?
Category: TONFA Award Category, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata
Characters: Hinata Hyuuga, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: Het and yaoi couples,
Challenge: Het and yaoi couples,
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 11898 | Read count: 8347 [Report This]
Published: 10/06/07 | Updated: 10/06/07
When a midnight stroll becomes a confession of love, Hyuuga Hinata believes her life could not get any better. However, when Naruto has a less than desirable reaction to her words, how far will the young kunoichi go to prove her feelings?
Category: TONFA Award Category, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata
Characters: Hinata Hyuuga, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: Het and yaoi couples,
Challenge: Het and yaoi couples,
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 11898 | Read count: 8347 [Report This]
Published: 10/06/07 | Updated: 10/06/07
Reviewer: eldertensa Signed
Date: 25/04/09 Title: Chapter 2: I'll Never Let Go (Finale)
Date: 25/04/09 Title: Chapter 2: I'll Never Let Go (Finale)
That was amazing!
Title: Crimson Tears by Red Ninja Vixen
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 113]
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 113]
Summary:
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Fantasy, Humor, Mystery, Parody, Poetry, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Dark, Death
Challenges: Kick ass, Biatch!!,
Challenge: Kick ass, Biatch!!,
Series: None
Chapters: 26 | Completed: No | Word count: 26100 | Read count: 52865 [Report This]
Published: 21/06/07 | Updated: 20/01/09
Mixed between pursuing Sasuke and defending himself from Akatsuki with the regenerated team Kakashi, Naruto is lured into the clutches of The Akatsuki leader who promises he can help make Naruto into an elite whose power can only matched by all three sannin put together. Tempted by the offer yet chained to his Konoha leaf village honor, Naruto vows to return to the village to become Hokage after destroying Akatsuki. But once you have a taste of the power the darkness offers you...can you honestly go back to the life you left dormant? A battle between what is right and what is wrong but feels so right...
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Fantasy, Humor, Mystery, Parody, Poetry, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Dark, Death
Challenges: Kick ass, Biatch!!,
Challenge: Kick ass, Biatch!!,
Series: None
Chapters: 26 | Completed: No | Word count: 26100 | Read count: 52865 [Report This]
Published: 21/06/07 | Updated: 20/01/09
Reviewer: eldertensa Signed
Date: 07/08/09 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Kyuubi Reigns Control
Date: 07/08/09 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Kyuubi Reigns Control
this story is great, keep going!
Reviewer: eldertensa Signed
Date: 07/08/09 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Itachi, Kisame and...Naruto???
Date: 07/08/09 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Itachi, Kisame and...Naruto???
Did Naruto really just say Kisame-Sensei!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Reviewer: eldertensa Signed
Date: 07/08/09 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Speak To Me
Date: 07/08/09 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Speak To Me
"I wonder what the hell Konan and Pein wear to sleep?"!!!!!!! Is that seriously all Naruto can think of!?!? That was hilariious!!!
Title: Hinata's Change by Red Ninja Vixen
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 50]
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 50]
Summary: Hinata learns what its like to stand up for herself and prove it to anyone who doubts she can do it.
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Neji and Tenten, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Sasuke and Sakura, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Shikamaru and Temari
Characters: Shino Aburame, Chouji Akimichi, Gaara, Sakura Haruno, Kakashi Hatake, Hinata Hyuuga, Neji Hyuuga, Kiba Inuzuka, Maito Gai, Shikamaru Nara, Asuma Sarutobi, Temari, Tenten, Tsunade, Sasuke Uchiha, Iruka Umino, Naruto Uzumaki, Ino Yamanaka, Kurenai Yuuhi
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: AU
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 | Completed: No | Word count: 14835 | Read count: 33461 [Report This]
Published: 05/07/07 | Updated: 13/07/07
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Neji and Tenten, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Sasuke and Sakura, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Shikamaru and Temari
Characters: Shino Aburame, Chouji Akimichi, Gaara, Sakura Haruno, Kakashi Hatake, Hinata Hyuuga, Neji Hyuuga, Kiba Inuzuka, Maito Gai, Shikamaru Nara, Asuma Sarutobi, Temari, Tenten, Tsunade, Sasuke Uchiha, Iruka Umino, Naruto Uzumaki, Ino Yamanaka, Kurenai Yuuhi
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: AU
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 | Completed: No | Word count: 14835 | Read count: 33461 [Report This]
Published: 05/07/07 | Updated: 13/07/07
Reviewer: eldertensa Signed
Date: 07/08/09 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Sweet Converstaion
Date: 07/08/09 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Sweet Converstaion
Go NaruHina, they are my favorite pairing!
Reviewer: eldertensa Signed
Date: 08/08/09 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Public secret
Date: 08/08/09 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Public secret
That was great!
Title: The Seed that was Planted by Gaaraluver
Rated: 12/12A [Reviews - 15]
Rated: 12/12A
[Reviews - 15]
Summary: One lonely night Gaara finds a young girl barely alive. Will he be able to apply what he learned from Naruto and find her a home? Just who is she, and what secrets does she have?
Category: OC-centric
Characters: Gaara
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 | Completed: No | Word count: 31350 | Read count: 19018 [Report This]
Published: 09/07/07 | Updated: 13/01/09
Category: OC-centric
Characters: Gaara
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 | Completed: No | Word count: 31350 | Read count: 19018 [Report This]
Published: 09/07/07 | Updated: 13/01/09
Reviewer: eldertensa Signed
Date: 28/07/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Getting Situated
Date: 28/07/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Getting Situated
You are definately the best author I have seen on this site so far!
If you have any tips that could help me, they would be greatly apriciated!
Title: Naruto and the Goblet of Fire by Gaaraluver
Rated: 12/12A [Reviews - 100]
Rated: 12/12A
[Reviews - 100]
Summary: [Naruto/HP crossover] Unwillingly brought into a strange world, trying to hide your secrets, being there during a tournament that hasn't been held in over a century, & oh, having the most powerful wizard seeking you for his power. Simple? I think not.
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Crossovers
Characters: Gaara, Kakashi Hatake, Naruto Uzumaki, Sakura Haruno, Tsunade
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Humor, Mystery
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 121080 | Read count: 49922 [Report This]
Published: 31/07/07 | Updated: 15/06/09
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Crossovers
Characters: Gaara, Kakashi Hatake, Naruto Uzumaki, Sakura Haruno, Tsunade
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Humor, Mystery
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 121080 | Read count: 49922 [Report This]
Published: 31/07/07 | Updated: 15/06/09
Reviewer: eldertensa Signed
Date: 18/07/09 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Let Loose the Dogs of War
Date: 18/07/09 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Let Loose the Dogs of War
The title of chapter 17 is the most awsome title I have ever seen! Also, this is a great story!!!
Title: Mission to the Land of Coal by flipomatic
Rated: U [Reviews - 13]
Rated: U
[Reviews - 13]
Summary: Naruto, Sakura, Shikimaru, and Temari are all sent on a mission to the land of coal. After time skip. NaruSaku and ShikaTema.
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Sakura, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Shikamaru and Temari
Characters: Sakura Haruno, Shikamaru Nara, Temari, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 | Completed: No | Word count: 7599 | Read count: 11934 [Report This]
Published: 13/11/07 | Updated: 11/08/09
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Sakura, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Shikamaru and Temari
Characters: Sakura Haruno, Shikamaru Nara, Temari, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 | Completed: No | Word count: 7599 | Read count: 11934 [Report This]
Published: 13/11/07 | Updated: 11/08/09
Reviewer: eldertensa Signed
Date: 08/08/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Date: 08/08/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
OMFG this is definately the most awesome story I have ever read, Keep going with this story!!!
I couldn't contain myself half the time reading this!!!!
Reviewer: eldertensa Signed
Date: 08/08/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Date: 08/08/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Kenpachi is definately Naruto's mini-me.
Reviewer: eldertensa Signed
Date: 08/08/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Date: 08/08/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I'm not sure if you can tell from my name but I like bleach to. Hurray!
Title: Just a single day... by Keiko Hyuuga
Rated: U [Reviews - 13]
Rated: U
[Reviews - 13]
Summary: She was the only one who remembered. The only one who remembered that this day was more than just a day of sorrow. Hinata...she was the only one who remembered his birthday.
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata
Characters: Gaara, Sakura Haruno, Kakashi Hatake, Hinata Hyuuga, Neji Hyuuga, Kiba Inuzuka, Jiraiya, Konohamaru Sarutobi, Maito Gai, Anko Mitarashi, Shikamaru Nara, Orochimaru, Temari, Tenten, Tsunade, Itachi Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure, Dark, Drama, General, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: AU, Dark, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 2016 | Read count: 6195 [Report This]
Published: 29/02/08 | Updated: 14/08/08
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata
Characters: Gaara, Sakura Haruno, Kakashi Hatake, Hinata Hyuuga, Neji Hyuuga, Kiba Inuzuka, Jiraiya, Konohamaru Sarutobi, Maito Gai, Anko Mitarashi, Shikamaru Nara, Orochimaru, Temari, Tenten, Tsunade, Itachi Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure, Dark, Drama, General, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: AU, Dark, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 2016 | Read count: 6195 [Report This]
Published: 29/02/08 | Updated: 14/08/08