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Member since: 25/03/09
I'm mostly here for Orochimaru x Anko. Have any? The kinkier, the better. In a pinch, I'll settle for Orochimaru x Tsunade. Or even Oro x OC, but it's got to be good and/ or extra kinky! That means H, lemon, or whatever you want to call it. I'm currently working on several Oro-centric fics:
"The Pillow Book of Mitarashi Anko" - angsty OroAnko lemon (WIP, Chapter 4 now up, Chapter 5 coming whenever I manage to finish it)
"Orochimaru's Worst Memories" - angst fic, some Oro x Tsu, Anko, Kimi lemon (WIP, Chapter 3 is complete)
"Constricting Coils" - hardcore lemon, OroAnko (still in the planning stages)
I firmly believe that Orochimaru is just misunderstood. He's really a sensitive soul under all his sexy evil. Mmm, evil...
Likes: BDSM (Orochimaru must be the Dom!), kinbaku (what you gaijin call 'shibari'), naughty tentacles (or snakes, as the case may be).
Dislikes: Sasuke and his annoying ways, anything bad happening to my dear Orochimaru-sama, people who don't love Orochimaru-sama. Oh, and Anko paired with anyone other than Orochimaru-sama!
Rated: R18 [Reviews - 11]
Category: Het Romance > Warned
Characters: Anko Mitarashi, Orochimaru
Genres: Graphic lemon
Warnings: Sexual Themes
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1499 | Read count: 2844 [Report This]
Published: 28/04/07 | Updated: 28/04/07
Date: 26/02/11 Title: Chapter 1: Master and pupil
That was fantastic! The only thing wrong with it is that it ended. I wanted it to go on forever! Mmm, it was really hot. And Orochimaru is totally sexy! The sexiest character in the series by far. More OroAnko!
Rated: PG [Reviews - 6]
I plan to do a Naruto spoof on the "Rocky Horror Picture Show" SQUEE!!! XD problem is...Aside from Sasuke and Naruto, i'm not sure who else to have as the character's in the story! if anyone has any sugestions, that would be great.
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers, General Fiction
Characters: Shino Aburame, Chouji Akimichi, Deidara, Gaara, Haku, Sakura Haruno, Kakashi Hatake, Hidan, Kisame Hoshigaki, Hinata Hyuuga, Neji Hyuuga, Kiba Inuzuka, Jiraiya, Konohamaru Sarutobi, Maito Gai, Anko Mitarashi, Zabuza, Shikamaru Nara, Orochimaru, Rin, Rock Lee, Sai, Sarutobi Hiruzen (Sandaime Hokage), Asuma Sarutobi, Temari, Tenten, Tobi, Tsunade, Itachi Uchiha, Obito Uchiha, Sasuke Uchiha, Iruka Umino, Naruto Uzumaki, Kabuto Yakushi, Ino Yamanaka, Minato Namikaze (Yondaime Hokage), Kurenai Yuuhi
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, Humor, Romance, Sci-Fi
Warnings: Death, OOC, Yaoi
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 163 | Read count: 1287 [Report This]
Published: 29/10/07 | Updated: 29/10/07
Date: 11/06/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Here's my idea so far.....^-^
Since I'm a long time RHPS fanatic, I thought I'd share my two cents. I did a fan art of Lee as Rocky for my girlfried. She thought it was perfect. She and one of our friends both thought I should draw ones of all of them. Maybe I will one of these days! Anyway...
Frank: Orochimaru ('nuff said.)
Janet: Ino (I'm not sure. Sakura might work, too, but I can't stand her.)
Brad: Kiba (Or not. Brad's tricky.)
Riff-Raff: Kabuto (Agree with you there.)
Magenta: Kurenai (Sexy!)
Columbia: Gaara (I love and cosplay both of them! Short red hair, no eyebrows, heavy on the eye-liner; it just fits!)
Dr. Scott: Hiruzen (Seems the type, but I could be talked out of it.)
Rocky: Rock Lee! (He's got the hair and everything!)
Eddie: Choji (He'd be so cute!)
Criminologist: Jiraiya (It never occured to me, but he is a great choice!)
Perhaps I based this more on looks, but oh well.
Rated: 12/12A [Reviews - 81]
A mysterious girl. An unknown past. A dark secret. Who is this bloodthirsty girl and why is Naruto afraid of her? A dark tale full of action and suspense. A must-read. Book Two Coming Shortly
Category: General Fiction > Naruto
Characters: Team Kakashi
Series: One Little Girl Trilogy
Chapters: 29 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 38495 | Read count: 22260 [Report This]
Published: 24/11/10 | Updated: 29/07/12
Date: 17/08/11 Title: Chapter 3: Parents and Orochimaru...=0
You lost me at KakaAnko. Sorry, I despise that pairing with the burning hatred of a thousand suns. I think I mentioned that before, though. Don't worry. I'm not holding it against you.
As for your talent itself, it seems to me that you are steadily improvng over time. The writing in the other fic is much smoother and the grammar, much better.
The main problem here is character development. No one enjoys hearing this, but your protagonist has a lot of Sue-ish qualities. Things like having the author's name, an unsual appearence, rare abilities, etc. These are some of the most common Sue traits. Add getting so much attention from everyone and feeling cursed by one's unique traits and it just makes things worse.
Please don't take it personally. You're still starting out and you're less than half my age. Some extra work and you can improve by leaps and bounds. The best advice I can give you is visit the Mary Sue Litmus Test.
It can help you recognise the pitfalls authors need to look out for.
No hard feelings, my dear. Keep writing and good luck to you.
Rated: 12/12A [Reviews - 7]
A story so filled with action and romance, it will leave you on the edge of your seat, wanting to unravel the mystery of Orochimaru's daughter. Chapter 1 now up!
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Character-Centric, General Fiction > Naruto
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 781 | Read count: 1400 [Report This]
Published: 24/06/11 | Updated: 24/06/11
Date: 16/08/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
I think your writing style is quite impressive, given your age and level of experience. As far as Sasuke goes, he's not really my cup of tea. Still, I will try to keep up with it for the Orochimaru scenes.