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Penname: i_heart_notebooks123 [Contact]
Real name: Hannah
Membership status: Member
Member since: 25/06/08
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Beta-reader: Yes
Hello all.

I hate to admit it, but I'm slow to update and slow to write. Nevertheless, I love writing these fanfics and I hope you enjoy them. :)

I also love to get feedback, so feel free to leave a review.

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Stories by i_heart_notebooks123 [7]
Series by i_heart_notebooks123 [0]
Challenges by i_heart_notebooks123 [1]
Favorite Series [0]
i_heart_notebooks123's Favorites [9]
Reviews by i_heart_notebooks123


Title: Sweet Sasuke by TheSharpieBitch
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Like a good little boy, Sasuke does what his aniki asks him to do. Character Death. Oneshot. ItachiSasuke.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Itachi and Sasuke
Characters: Itachi Uchiha, Pair ItaSasu, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1207 | Read count: 2241 [Report This]
Published: 13/04/06 | Updated: 13/04/06


Reviewer: i_heart_notebooks123 Signed Liked
Date: 14/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Sweet Sasuke.

I could have cried in that last paragraph- job well done- I loved it.



Title: Habits by Lyra Kamiya
Rated: R18 Liked [Reviews - 3]
Summary: After that death, Team 10 needs all the comfort they can get. Spoilers for chapter 328 and beyond.
Category: Het Romance > Fluff, Het Romance > Angst, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Shikamaru and Temari
Characters: Asuma Sarutobi, Chouji Akimichi, Ino Yamanaka, Pair ChojIno, Pair ShikaTema, Shikamaru Nara, Team Asuma, Temari
Genres: Angst, Graphic lemon, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 | Completed: No | Word count: 15012 | Read count: 6563 [Report This]
Published: 18/03/07 | Updated: 02/05/09


Reviewer: i_heart_notebooks123 Signed Liked
Date: 18/11/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love your lemons. There's the sexy loving happening, but at the same time, it's slow and just reading it, you can really tell that this is love making. I think I'm not explaining it right and that sucks because you really did a great job writing it and I want you to know just how much I love it.

I guess that's going to have to do. Brilliant work.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the wonderful review - I\'m always happy to have made someone\'s day, especially with this fic, because I feel like I really poured my heart into it. I do think I manage to portray lovemaking instead of just raw sex (except in one not-yet-posted fic which... is just the latter), and I really don\'t know how x.x but I\'m glad to know that others agree...\r\n\r\nI hope some time in the future I\'ll have more things that\'ll appeal to you, too. Thanks so much!



Title: Sharing by A Vampires Butterfly
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 9]
Summary: The girls and Naruto are drinking at a bar, sharing stories about their lovers.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Kiba and Hinata, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Neji and Tenten, General Fiction
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 895 | Read count: 1825 [Report This]
Published: 23/03/07 | Updated: 23/03/07


Reviewer: i_heart_notebooks123 Signed Liked
Date: 15/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Sharing

Ha-ha I loved the monolouge! OMG, that was great!



Title: Advice by A Vampires Butterfly
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 13]
Summary: When Naruto asks Shikamaru for his advice on his teammates, will Shika get more then he was prepared for? Or will they both get exactly what they needed to know?
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1037 | Read count: 1858 [Report This]
Published: 08/05/07 | Updated: 08/05/07


Reviewer: i_heart_notebooks123 Signed Liked
Date: 15/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Advice

AWWW! I loved it! It was too cute! I wish people made more ShikaNaru pairings, it really is one of the best. Of course, being the SasuNaru fangirl I am, I felt completely traitorous when Naruto said all that about Sasuke, but still!

Again, I loved it!

Great job.



Title: Such a Pretty Smile by marionette
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 25]
Summary: A promise made 14 years ago.

A forced 21st birthday celebration that leads to something more.

A secret.

And a love that lasted.



*Idea by A Vampire's Butterfly.

sank youu~!
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: None
Warnings: Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 2244 | Read count: 3328 [Report This]
Published: 22/06/07 | Updated: 24/07/07


Reviewer: i_heart_notebooks123 Signed Liked
Date: 15/08/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

That was beautifully written. Good job.

I loved it.

Absolutely heartwarming.

And Naruto was too cute.



Title: Save Me From Myself by animeangelspet
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 5]
Summary: When depression catches up to Naruto who will save him before it's too late?
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1577 | Read count: 1707 [Report This]
Published: 27/07/07 | Updated: 27/07/07


Reviewer: i_heart_notebooks123 Signed Liked
Date: 15/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: In my eyes

Nice job- very well written. I'm glad you didn't kill Naruto, I always cry when authors kill Naruto or Sasuke, especially when they're in love.



Title: Side Effects by littlefoxhat
Rated: R18 Liked [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Iruka gets tired...who will help him out?


A one-shot smut-fic for someone over at Y!Gallery, she asked for one of the oddest pairings I've ever come across..PakkunXIruka...I know...WHAT??? I guarantee you after a bit it's pretty good...not bestiality in the least really...I mean...what else are ninja powers used for?
If you don't like it, please don't bitch...keep it to yourself.

Category: Orphan
Characters: Iruka Umino
Genres: None
Warnings: Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1304 | Read count: 490 [Report This]
Published: 03/08/07 | Updated: 03/08/07


Reviewer: i_heart_notebooks123 Signed Liked
Date: 15/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was deffinitly...unusual. I mean, don't get me wrong, you did a good job of writing it, escpecially considering the odd pairing. But still...a dog and Iruka...eh whatever floats her boat.



Title: The Best Day Of My Life by A Vampires Butterfly
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 9]
Summary: And he stares up at the rain, remembering so much of the past, some good days that seemed like dreams, some just nightmares created by himself. His life has seems to just go wrong after that fateful day. And he wonders...

Will he ever just go home?
Category: General Fiction, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Orochimaru, Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Angst, General, Parody, Romance
Warnings: Dark, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 2671 | Read count: 2370 [Report This]
Published: 13/08/07 | Updated: 13/08/07


Reviewer: i_heart_notebooks123 Signed Liked
Date: 12/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Thank You

I was in the need of a SasuNaru story so I went back and read this; how can you say this isn't one of your best works?! I loved it!

I actually cried again.

This story is just so...beautiful? Heart felt? Emotional? I don't know, but it has something that just touches me, and it's one of my favorites. Great job Violet.



Reviewer: i_heart_notebooks123 Signed Liked
Date: 15/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Thank You

This was really beautiful. Violet, your one of the best writers I've ever seen and I love you! This story made me cry and weep, tears of sadness for poor Sasuke-kun, and then I was crying through a smile.

Wonderful job.



Title: Peppermint Flavored Glass by brumal
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Everyone has a hobby. For Naruto, it's eating peppermint flavored candy. But what is it about that candy that makes it so special to him? And how does glass incorporate itself with this anyway?
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Dark, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1321 | Read count: 2445 [Report This]
Published: 22/09/07 | Updated: 22/09/07


Reviewer: i_heart_notebooks123 Signed Liked
Date: 19/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Peppermint Flavored Glass

It's annoyingly hard to review your stories because they can be so surprising and brilliant, it's hard to know what to say.
But I can try.
This isn't as good as some of your other stories, but I like it non-the less. You do come up with the most original ideas and this is no exception. Same for your writing style - moving, descriptive, really drawing the reader in... there's nothing else I can say. You did a great job, again.

Author's Response: I just find it incredibly amusing that you think that some of my worse stories are \"good\" and the ones I like are \"worse.\" XD It\'s just funny how things work. I re-read this recently and I found that, though I cannot say I am completely pleased with the writing style and flow, I liked this story. Always have. So did my beta-reader! And if she likes it, that usually means it will \"last.\" So far, so true. LOL\r\n\r\nBut again, thank you for your high praise! I don\'t deserve it, seriously. This stuff is SUCH old work. I\'m kind of embarrassed by this stuff now, don\'t you know?



Title: A Row in the Konoha Library by brumal
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 7]
Summary: It was always that one row where they would sit down, reading their books, ignoring each other, but acknowledging each other. Will it be that one row where the two of them will realize the meaning of their friendship?
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 2000 | Read count: 2562 [Report This]
Published: 22/09/07 | Updated: 22/09/07


Reviewer: i_heart_notebooks123 Signed Liked
Date: 19/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: A Row in the Konoha Library

Awww!!! Now that's a happy ending... no, really, this was amazing. God, I'm just repeating myself. I just don't know what else to say about your works! They're amazing! That's it! That's all there is to it.

Author's Response: Because I forgot what this was about, I re-read it. And I realized that the ending was tooth-rottingly sweet. Like, disgustingly sweet. LOL I don\'t know what I was tripping on when I wrote THIS actually. I wish I had made the ending less... mushy. It kind of bothers me. XD\r\n\r\nAnnyway, I\'ll be here if you ever feel the need to drop a review! And I\'ll try to get back to you ASAP, right, right?\r\n\r\nThanks again for all your time and support! I cannot find an adequate way to show my gratitude for it.



Title: Define 'Romantic' by brumal
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Yes, it is an adjective. It has a definition. It can mean a lot. Can you define it for me? Just this word: romantic. Actually, you'll find that it is rather hard. Especially if you asked two particular boys to define it!
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1187 | Read count: 2236 [Report This]
Published: 22/09/07 | Updated: 22/09/07


Reviewer: i_heart_notebooks123 Signed Liked
Date: 02/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Define 'Romantic'

This is one of those stories where you think, "Dang...Wish I thought of that." I loved it, it was brilliant and beautifully written.

Author's Response: Hehehe, thank you. I\'m glad that you liked this!



Title: Evening Stroll by brumal
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 4]
Summary: It's just another evening. Like every evening, Uchiha Sasuke will stalk the streets of Konoha. His usual evening walk for dwelling on deep, and sometimes shallow, thoughts. Who will he crash into tonight?
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Parody, Romance
Warnings: OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1144 | Read count: 2337 [Report This]
Published: 22/09/07 | Updated: 22/09/07


Reviewer: i_heart_notebooks123 Signed Liked
Date: 19/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Evening Walk

Hahaha... and aww. This seemed like one of your more light-hearted stories. It was wonderful and made me smile and I just loved it. You have a great writing style, descriptive and neat but not overwhelming. Another great job, not that I expected anything less.

Author's Response: Nuuu, this was total crack. I don\'t know what I was tripping on when I wrote this. Don\'t go praising this piece of garbaaaage. *runs away, mortified*\r\n\r\nThe reason why this seemed \"light-hearted\" was BECAUSE it was crack. LOL I don\'t even know why this is still worthy enough to be up. Hahah. But anyway, you have to get used to angst if you\'re gonna be reading my stories. I\'m notorious for it--at least, I think I am?\r\n\r\nAnd pfffft, \"not that I expected anything less\"? Come back in another two years and say that to me with a straight face. XD



Title: Mirror Revelations by brumal
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Being so stubborn and secretive toward each other there are a lot of things that they have no idea about. Now it's time to confess but what's the point? Isn't it too late? Maybe it is but they don't care.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 2062 | Read count: 4044 [Report This]
Published: 22/09/07 | Updated: 01/10/07


Reviewer: i_heart_notebooks123 Signed Liked
Date: 19/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Naruto

Oh my... that was so sweet and lovely and beautifully written.... incredible work, I loved it, I think it's one of your best.

Author's Response: Hehe, funny you should say, because if I remember correctly (then again, my memory is horrible), my beta was slightly displeased with this one. And me too, now that I come to think of it. This really isn\'t one of my best. I never thought so, even when I first wrote it. It\'s just one of those stories where you know if it will be \"good\" or not.... At least to me.\r\n\r\nBut again, and how can I stop myself from being repetitive (especially when you have so many more reviews left for me?) and keep saying \"thank you\"? Well, I guess I don\'t have a choice in that! Thank you for everything!



Reviewer: i_heart_notebooks123 Signed Liked
Date: 19/08/09 Title: Chapter 2: Sasuke

I forgot there was a second part. And it was just as marvelous as the first. Bittersweet. That's sort of your forte, isn't it? But whatever, you make it incredibly enjoyable to read, so, another great job. ^^

Author's Response: Angst is (was?) my forte. Fluff is (was???) my weakness. Then again, we\'re talking about stuff that has been published from a year or more ago. (Some of the stories you reviewed on--like this one--was from TWO years ago!) But like I said for the previous chapter: this isn\'t one of my best! I am slightly disappointed in my writing from back then. I want to KILL IT ALL. Wait--I mean.... *shifty eyes*\r\n\r\nAaanyway, thank you, thank you again!



Title: Anonymous Strangers by brumal
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 6]
Summary: This world is full of strangers. A name with a face, a face with a name. Sometimes with no name or even a face. But when you gain a face and name together, what does that mean? Are you still strangers? Can you fall in love? Ask them. Maybe they will know.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 3605 | Read count: 2432 [Report This]
Published: 04/10/07 | Updated: 04/10/07


Reviewer: i_heart_notebooks123 Signed Liked
Date: 21/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Anonymous Strangers

It was... well, the writing style this time.... God, I don't know what to say. You annoy me for writing such brilliant stories that I can't think of anything to respond to them with. But I can't just not review, they're too good for that. This time I'll just let you know that I loved it, this unique take on writing was great, and... good job. Yeah. ^^

Author's Response: I remember this story--I was trying out something new. I don\'t think I ever did it again (because it was kind of confusing and incoherent) but it was fun. I\'m not sure if you can \"praise\" me for the writing style of this story, since it\'s radically different from what I usually do, but thanks? XD\r\n\r\nDon\'t feel obligated to leave me reviews. I write for fun, and likewise, you should read and review for fun too! I don\'t want you to be like, \"I MUST READ ALL OF BRUMAL\'S STORIESSSS!\" and suffer through trying to pull up stuff to say about my stories if you don\'t want to! Whilst I truly appreciate your support, I don\'t want you to suffer. Haha. So chillax and don\'t worry about what you \"have\" to say! No matter what you write, I\'ll always appreciate it. It\'s people like you who make me smile when I re-read my reviews!\r\n\r\nThanks so much.



Title: Irrelevancy by brumal
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Meet KSN02317, Generation Nine. Human name: Uzumaki Naruto. Now that you've met him, please take the time to examine his creation and his purpose of creation. Perhaps you will find something interesting about him.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: AU, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 5744 | Read count: 2339 [Report This]
Published: 10/10/07 | Updated: 10/10/07


Reviewer: i_heart_notebooks123 Signed Liked
Date: 21/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Irrelevancy

Oh my God... I'm shedding tears as I write this... if my little brother walks in he's gonna freak out and wonder what's wrong, haha... crap, how can I laugh after reading that?
You're too cruel for writing that. It was horrible and beautiful and amazing and so incredibly sad.
Such an original peace with brilliant style, plot, full to the brim with emotion... one of your best works yet, albeit one of your saddest/angsty-est.
Actually, I was reading the reviews first, and I got kinda nervous, cause I cry easily when it comes to stories, and since it's you, I thought I was gonna be bawling the whole way through; then I started and I'm thinking "Okay, this is good, same old brumal..." and then near the end I'm sniffling and wiping my eyes thinking "No! How could you! Whhy!?!"
But it couldn't have worked out any other way. (I've finally stopped crying ^^) Anyway, um... right, it couldn't have worked out any other way, not only then would it not be brumal, it just wouldn't be nearly as moving and memorable.
Bottom line is, this was... heart-wrenching and sad and I loved it. Really, great job doesn't even cover it.
But I have to wonder, did you cry when you wrote this?

Author's Response: Well, to be perfectly honest with you, whenever I write my fics, I\'m completely dead-panned. If you happened to pass by me when I\'m writing a story, you wouldn\'t even know it half the times. That\'s why I\'m always surprised when people tell me, \"I cried during this!\" or \"I laughed so hard!\" because, as the writer, I am completely immune to anything I write. XD Trufax. Kind of sad at the same time, but yeah.\r\n\r\nSo to answer your question, nope! I did NOT cry when I wrote this! (Not to sound completely DEAD and uncaring or anything, but....)\r\n\r\nActually, you wouldn\'t believe the amount of unoriginality this piece has! My beta-reader told me that it reminded her of a play called \"Pygmalion\" (which I had never heard of or seen before writing this) so I was kind of surprised. I can\'t remember how I got the idea for Irrelevancy anymore, but I\'m glad that it\'s still good.\r\n\r\nSmart of you to read the reviews first, but spoilers ahoy! I never read reviews first for stories. XD I hate getting spoiled. \r\n\r\nHm, now that you mention it, I wonder if I have any ANGSTIER fics in the works at the moment. I have too many MCs that I\'m not done with and I\'m not willing to post up unfinished MCs anymore. That\'s probably why I haven\'t been active for almost a year... Beh.\r\n\r\nAnyway, anyway, sorry for making you cry. I hope you don\'t get caught with puffy eyes. I really do hate making people cry, but I can\'t write happy stories well. SasuNaruSasu =/= happy endings for me most the times. XD They\'re just too angsty to begin with. LOL\r\n\r\nOkay, I\'d better stop typing. This response is going to end up longer than my fic if I keep going. XD\r\n\r\nBUT THANK YOU AGAIN! I hope you\'re enjoying yourself!



Title: A Formal Rival. A Secret Crush. by Serenity772
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 22]
Summary: Past Featured Story Things seem to be just getting worse for Naruto. Kyuubi studies him carefully as he goes through his life. Maybe behind his cheerful outer shell is just a broken boy needing to be loved.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: None
Genres: General
Warnings: Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: No | Word count: 3612 | Read count: 8573 [Report This]
Published: 17/11/07 | Updated: 01/09/08


Reviewer: i_heart_notebooks123 Signed Liked
Date: 02/09/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I hope you update again soon. I came across you story a while back and waited for an update, but it never came, so I figured you had dropped the story. I'm glad your muses have spoken, up this really is interesting, I love it.



Title: The People We've Become by Zephyras
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 57]
Summary: At first, no one could've guessed the consequences that are to come when Uzumaki Naruto disappears. However, his departure begins a chain of events that changes the fate of Konoha and the two teammates he left behind. Seven years later, Uchiha Sasuke and Haruno Sakura are on the S-Class list, Team Seven assembles once more, and they all have secrets. AU, NaruSasu, SakuLee.
Category: Het Romance > Angst, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Shikamaru and Temari
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki, Pair LeeSaku, Pair SasuNaru, Pair ShikaTema, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Dark
Warnings: AU, Dark, Death, Incest, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 | Completed: No | Word count: 88364 | Read count: 51584 [Report This]
Published: 17/11/07 | Updated: 04/11/12


Reviewer: i_heart_notebooks123 Signed Liked
Date: 08/09/08 Title: Chapter 11: Sakuya-hime's Revenge

Very intense. Very well written. Very sad.

A good climax, I feel lucky to just be reading this; great job.



Reviewer: i_heart_notebooks123 Signed Liked
Date: 07/08/08 Title: Chapter 10: Complication No. Infinity

I absolutely love this story!

It's beatuifully written; update soon.



Title: Phone Calls From Nobody by brumal
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 24]
Summary: Past Featured Story They started when he was fifteen. Phone calls from nobody. He just wanted to hear the voice of this nobody and to know who it is. But what is the price to this simple want? [NaruSaku, Hinted SasuNaru, Oneshot]
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Sakura, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 4538 | Read count: 9716 [Report This]
Published: 21/11/07 | Updated: 21/11/07


Reviewer: i_heart_notebooks123 Signed Liked
Date: 19/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Why, why, why did you leave it at that? Not that it wasn't brilliant and moving and... oh, I don't know.
I loved this story and I hated it. I wanted a happy ending but what you wrote is probably better than any other ending but still... anyway, moving on; the description was amazing, the emotions you evoked, the entire idea was brilliant. A great job, as always.
I hope this review does justice to this story; keep up the brilliant work.

Author's Response: First things first: Wow. You really sat down again and went through a bunch of my stories. But not only that, but you left me a helluva lot of reviews too. THANK YOU.\r\n\r\nWhy did I leave it like that? Well, come on, you know how I am, don\'t you? I don\'t do well with fluff. Maybe I\'m better with it now, but still! I need my angst! And this story--I don\'t know. I just never imagined that it could end happily.\r\n\r\nAnd as usual, thank you so much! I\'ll have to take my time replying to all of your other incredible reviews (thanks so much for them!). But for now, I\'ll have to get to something else. And yes, of course your review does this story justice. I love reviews, no matter how short or long or silly they are! I can\'t say \"thank you\" enough!



Title: Snow in Fire Country by brumal
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 7]
Summary: He completely stopped halfway to his radiator when he received a response for his usual greeting and the unexpected warmth of his already-on radiator. “Welcome back,” said the deep, familiar voice. [Xmas fic, Oneshot]
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 3517 | Read count: 2689 [Report This]
Published: 23/12/07 | Updated: 23/12/07


Reviewer: i_heart_notebooks123 Signed Liked
Date: 21/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Snow in Fire Country

Wow. That was actually... fluff. What a beautiful change of pace. Really. I mean, you totally brushed off the fluff at the end, as if you realized what the heck you were doing and had to stop, but still, it was such a sweet story that was perfect for the holiday seasons, those I'm reading it in August, I'll have to come back and read it on the 24th (of December) or something. Thank you for writing something so enjoyable. I hope you had fun writing it too. ^^

Author's Response: I \"brushed off the fluff\"? LOL That\'s a very cute way to put it. I like it! But yeah, the story was started with a sad ending in mind....\r\n\r\nAnyway, I don\'t know if you\'ll remember this story into December, but I hope you\'ll still like it by then. XD\r\n\r\nBy the way, if you\'re looking for light fluff, I did actually write something called \"First Time Snowing.\" It\'s... very fluffy, so to speak. One of my fluffiest. Wow, it sounds like I\'m trying to sell you towels or something. LOL\r\n\r\nBut yeah, thanks so much for your kind words! You make me smile and laugh lots. Thank you, thank you.



Title: Just Soggy from the Chemo by Archaic Aphorism
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Cancer ran in the family; Sasuke remembered when his older brother had gotten it, remembered cutting off most of his hair and offering it to Itachi when all of Itachi's hair had fallen out.

Sasuke's tired of the chemo and the experimental drugs, but he misses Naruto.

For a fic exchange with the wonderful and talented A Vampire's Butterfly, whom I adore.
I love you, Violet!


Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Angst, Dark, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: AU, Dark, Death, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 4244 | Read count: 1760 [Report This]
Published: 02/01/08 | Updated: 02/01/08


Reviewer: i_heart_notebooks123 Signed Liked
Date: 19/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Is it Real, or Is it Just the Chemo?

There's not much to say; the story was beautiful and so sad.

I wept and wept, feeling so sad for Sasu-kun.

You did a good job writing it.



Title: Communication Confusion by brumal
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 14]
Summary: How is it possible to annoy your readers? Bad plot, OOC characters, and random Japanese words. Of course, if you take all that and mix it all together, you get THIS. A lovely cracked up parody. And what’s a parody without a pairing?
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sakura Haruno, Kakashi Hatake, Hinata Hyuuga, Neji Hyuuga, Shikamaru Nara, Rock Lee, Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Humor, Parody, Romance
Warnings: OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 2187 | Read count: 2482 [Report This]
Published: 08/01/08 | Updated: 08/01/08


Reviewer: i_heart_notebooks123 Signed Liked
Date: 19/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my God, that was so sweet with Sasuke all embarrassed, but that was so sad cause Naruto didn't get it and he made Sasu-kun leave!

But still, great job!

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks! I\'m glad you liked this!



Title: Don't Jump! by AphoriditeRose
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 17]
Summary: "Dear Kakashi, Sakura, and Sasuke.
I'm sorry, but i've had enough of trying to fit in, to be better than who I am. I'm giving up... I am so sorry -"

"Do something Kakashi!"
"Sasuke..."

(NaruSasu Songfic) xx
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1245 | Read count: 3883 [Report This]
Published: 14/02/08 | Updated: 14/02/08


Reviewer: i_heart_notebooks123 Signed Liked
Date: 20/08/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That was sweet. Very Very sweet ending. I'm so glad you didn't kill Naruto and Sasu-kun stopped him.

^-^

Good job, I loved it!