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Penname: loulou20 [Contact]
Real name: lou (yeah i know its strange)
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Title: Eight Again by EvilTwinNeji
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 2]
Summary: While on his way to a meeting in place of the Kazekage, Gaara is attacked by a mysterious shinobi and is forced to use a forbidden jutsu. The only problem? It turns him into a child. With Sakura taking care of him, what is a poor sand nin to do? [GaaSaku, EXTREMELY slight AU]
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 4396 | Read count: 2730 [Report This]
Published: 20/05/06 | Updated: 05/08/06


Reviewer: loulou20 Signed Liked
Date: 23/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow this is a really good story, so i'm just going to ask you...WHERE ARE YOU????? i really want to read more, and i can't if you don't right more!! and i just gotta say, Gaara is dang adorible, so please write more!! PLEASE!! i'll seroisly cry if you dont....really, i will!!



Title: My Name Is Haruno Sakura by Zephyras
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 131]
Summary:  

My name is Haruno Sakura; I am seventeen years old and am in my last year of high school. I am a straight-A student and am eligible for a scholarship to the top university in the country. My name is Haruno Sakura and I live in a cardboard box. AU, Modern. Sakura-centric, Ino/Sakura. Rated for language.


Category: Shojo-ai/Yuri Romance > Top Pairs > Sakura and Ino
Characters: Ino Yamanaka, Sakura Haruno
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: AU, Death, Sexual Themes, Yuri
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 | Completed: No | Word count: 144282 | Read count: 83891 [Report This]
Published: 28/12/06 | Updated: 04/05/13


Reviewer: loulou20 Signed Liked
Date: 21/06/08 Title: Chapter 19: Pitfall

oh shit! sasuke baby please please live!!!!! haha i sound like an over obsessive fan girl. haha i'm not by the way...but n/e ways please write another chapter!!!



Title: Salvation by jenl821
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 80]
Summary: [SasuSaku] He was gone, never to return. What could the two of them do? It seemed hopeless. How could they ever make him come back? But that wasn’t going to stop them from trying. Two growing teens are going to embark on a journey full of betrayal, heartache, and hatred to find their missing link and make Team 7 whole again. Main Pairing: Sasuke/Sakura.
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Sasuke and Sakura
Characters: Hinata Hyuuga, Naruto Uzumaki, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Dark, General, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: Dark, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 | Completed: No | Word count: 65991 | Read count: 36381 [Report This]
Published: 03/10/07 | Updated: 25/01/12


Reviewer: loulou20 Signed
Date: 14/05/08 Title: Chapter 18: Visionary

omg!!! what is going on?!?! this is crazy!! ahhhh!! on another note...Rent-a-ninja...Bahahahahahaha thats soooo funny!!

Author's Response: thanks so much! A new chapter is out now!



Title: The Unexpected Gift by imadecookies
Rated: R18 Liked [Reviews - 24]
Summary: Naruto and Hinata find out their pregnant at a very young age. Can their relationship survive her brutal clan as well as the hatred the village still holds on Naruto? After all their only seventeen!
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata
Characters: Hinata Hyuuga
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 98956 | Read count: 15878 [Report This]
Published: 11/12/07 | Updated: 31/08/08


Reviewer: loulou20 Signed
Date: 26/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh no! you've got to be kidding!! this is so sad!!! not after they fought!! nooooo! they're not supposed to fight!! ahhhh *crying*. awesome story i LOVE it!!! please keep writing chapters!! please! love ya



Title: The Contentious Heart by elle6778
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 46]
Summary: This is just another infiltration mission, right? Granted, her target is Akatsuki, but there is still no reason for this conflict in her heart. Little does she know that Itachi is just as disconcerted. ItaSaku. Spoilers up to Manga Chapter 353.
Category: Het Romance > Angst
Characters: Itachi Uchiha, Sakura Haruno
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 | Completed: No | Word count: 141392 | Read count: 30176 [Report This]
Published: 18/12/07 | Updated: 19/08/08


Reviewer: loulou20 Signed Liked
Date: 27/04/08 Title: Chapter 13: The Contentious Heart by elle6778 - Chapter 13

omg!! that is soooo cute!! i hate to say this but their little affair is even hotter since (1) its her long-time crush's brother whom he's trying to kill and(2) he's the bad guy! more like the sexy bad ass guy! haha i love it please write more!!!



Reviewer: loulou20 Signed
Date: 31/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Contentious Heart by elle6778 - Chapter 1

aww where are you? i miss this story alot! please write a new chapter!!! please?



Reviewer: loulou20 Signed
Date: 31/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Contentious Heart by elle6778 - Chapter 1

aww where are you? i miss this story alot! please write a new chapter!!! please?



Reviewer: loulou20 Signed Liked
Date: 15/06/08 Title: Chapter 15: The Contentious Heart by elle6778 - Chapter 15

oh crud muffin!!! and just when they had been getting so close too!!!! grrr stupid sakura! she always has to ruin the perfect moments!!!! ahhh * rips out hain in frusteration * hehe sorry! lol awesome new chapter!!!!



Title: People Who Are Important: Book Two by XoxgaaraxoX
Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 66]
Summary: {2 New Chapters March 5, 2009} Sasuke's back and Sakura doesn't know how to react to him. Can the emotionally stunted Uchiha fix his mess? Naruto finally starts to see Hinata, Gaara's son turns one, and Shikamaru pops the question! Sasu/Saku, Naru/Hina, Shika/Tema..REVIEW!!!!
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Neji and Tenten, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Sasuke and Sakura, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Shikamaru and Temari
Characters: Gaara, Hinata Hyuuga, Pair SasuSaku, Pair ShikaTema
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 | Completed: No | Word count: 147431 | Read count: 21151 [Report This]
Published: 03/03/08 | Updated: 19/06/09


Reviewer: loulou20 Signed
Date: 26/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Author's Note

wow...this is just amazing! and i really really want you to finish, because this is just...wow. i completly understand that you want replies, because who doesn't want them? but i'm totally excited and umping up and down waiting for the new chapter!! wooo but yeah THANK YOU!!! love ya



Reviewer: loulou20 Signed Liked
Date: 20/07/08 Title: Chapter 18: The Removal

holy shit!!! omg!! that was amazing!! your writing is soo fantastic!!! this was the best chapter ever!! please hurry!!! i need to find out what happens next!!!! aww sakura and sasuke are tooo cute!! hehe and gaara and shia too!! aww i can already see sakura and sasuke's cute little family!! hehe they'll be tighter than spandex on a fat boy!!!!! hehe please hurry!!!! love ya darling!!



Reviewer: loulou20 Signed Liked
Date: 01/08/08 Title: Chapter 19: The Aftermath

Aww that is soo cute!! i can't wait for the next chapter, seriously, i've been checking, like three times every day to see if you had a new chapter up! i love you and your writing it's amazing, better than some writers you would find at a book store!! please hurry and write a new one soon.



Reviewer: loulou20 Signed Liked
Date: 19/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Author's Note

oh my Goodness!!! that is so sweet, Sasuke really can love, can't he!! aw any ways, i have yet to tell you just how much i love you and your story, so...*Ahem* i love this story so much it's crazy! seriously, when i got home, and turned on my computer, and saw that you had a new Chapter, i almost Peed my pants with excitment!! i Loved Book numba one, and this one is gonna be just as great, nay, even better!!! hehe you just have to make a 3rd one!! please!! with shikamaru and temari's wedding!?!? aww that would just make me soooo happy! yep it would, i'd have to buy a buch more panties though...hehe. anyways, wow!! WOW!! wow!!! she's having twins?? that is too cute!!! it made me so happy (my sister just found out she's having twins too!!!) cool!!! ugh i skip from thought to thought too much!! lol not to skip again, but...Sasuke isn't gonna die is he?!?!? 'cause if he did i would cry, 'cause there ain't another Chiyo-Baa-sama!!! ugh so many questions!! Sorry!! YOU ROCK (and roll)



Reviewer: loulou20 Signed Liked
Date: 21/06/08 Title: Chapter 17: It All Goes to Hell!

OH...MY...GOD!!! i don't really even really care for sasuke that much and i'm absolutly terrifyed for him!!!! even though i know you wouldn't kill him...would you? oh my! oh my! hehe i love it!! sorry i have'nt reviewed in soooo long!!! i'm kinda, um, grounded. haha ( nervous laughter, btw) welll keep up the awesome work!! badabababa i'm lovin' it!!!



Reviewer: loulou20 Signed Liked
Date: 16/05/08 Title: Chapter 12: Turbulence: Part One

omg!!! not again!!! ohh poor shia-chan!!! thats soo sad, but i gotta ask, why'd the Akatsuki want him anyways?!?!? they already got the demon-thingy!! this is getting crazy!!! Yehaw and Hot-DAMN!!!



Reviewer: loulou20 Signed
Date: 16/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Author's Note

hello??!!??? where are you?!?! i H.A.V.E to find out whats going to happen!!!!!!???!?!!?!?!?! please write a new chapter!!! P.L.E.A.S.E!!!!!!!!!!!! i'm seriosly going to cry if you dont!!....*sob* PLease!!!



Title: Let's Go the Distance by fujyoshi22
Rated: R18 Liked [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Sasuke finally kills Itachi but what will he do know that he knows the truth about his brother and what happened to his clan? Sasuke joins up with Naruto and his group to defeat Madara but how long will they're partnership last? Contains spoilers for Naruto manga through chapter 386 (I think. oh well close enough). Main pairing is NaruSasu (obviously). If you want to find out about the other pairings you'll just have to read to find out.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Death, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 | Completed: No | Word count: 31521 | Read count: 5266 [Report This]
Published: 15/04/08 | Updated: 24/09/08


Reviewer: loulou20 Signed Liked
Date: 26/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

aww how cute!! haha that b**** Karin deserve it!! hehe but i got's a question...is there gonna be GaaSaku? 'case that would be super sweet!!! aww i love Gaara!! oh no!!! poor shika!! he's gonna get caught in the middle soon!! Ino vs. Temari! haha this is gonna get crazy. Oh by the way...Awesome story its really well writen and super cute!!!

Author's Response: not going to say anything involving pairings other than the obvious. So yeah you\'ll just have to keep reading. Thanks! ^_\\)



Title: Upon This Fate.... by KiloniChatty
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 3]
Summary: The earth revolves around the everlasting Sun of infurturnal heat. Days seep through to the blackening cover of nights. Everything seems to be normal, but one girl screams in peril within her thoughts, begging for release.

Gaara X OC
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Character-Centric, Het Romance > Fluff
Characters: Gaara
Genres: Drama
Warnings: Dark
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 832 | Read count: 1574 [Report This]
Published: 11/05/08 | Updated: 11/05/08


Reviewer: loulou20 Signed Liked
Date: 23/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Fate's Meet.

aww this is too cute!!! are you going to write more??? 'cause you know, everytime you write a chapter, i'll give you a sweet review!! i really love Gaara and this is a really cute story, so please keep writing?! okay? thank you so much for posting this and i'm really looking forewords to more!!?? thanks again! luv ya!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind regards. ^ . ^



Title: Neko Akuma by Chained Chi Yajuu
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 25]
Summary: 13 year old Keyore Nacare is the air to one of the most power demon clans in the shinobi world, but that doesn’t matter to most in the hidden leaf village.

Shunned and hated by the villagers for her half human half demon heritage she harbors a secret hate for most humans that even she doesn’t realize. All that is except for a few select exceptions, one of which being her best friend Naruto Uzumaki. Things get even harder when she’s placed on a four man cell with her best friend Naruto, her best friend’s crush and her worst enemy, Sakura Haruno, and her worst enemy’s crush and rival to her and her best friend, Sasuke Uchiha.

And if things aren’t complicated enough she’s constantly battling her cruel demonic half for control of her own mind and body, another result of her half demonism. And things only get harder from here on out for her, but with the help of her friends, one Lazy older brother, and a cretin raven haired Uchiha thing get a little easier.


Category: OC-centric
Characters: Clan Uchiha, Hidden Leaf Ninja, Kakashi Hatake, Naruto Uzumaki, Pair OCSasu, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha, Team Kakashi
Genres: Action/Adventure, Dark, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Dark, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 | Completed: No | Word count: 57241 | Read count: 20710 [Report This]
Published: 30/05/08 | Updated: 15/04/10


Reviewer: loulou20 Signed Liked
Date: 31/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Cover Page

aww she's soooo cute!! meow! lol but this is gonna be one hell of story, i can just tell! :) i can't wait i already love it and again she's really cute!! please write chapter one!!! later tater

Author's Response: I just posted chapter one when you reviewed and thank you. ^_________^



Reviewer: loulou20 Signed Liked
Date: 31/05/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One: An Eventful Day

well it's official!! i'm now clairvoyant!! lol i knew this would be an awesome story and i was totally right! lol aww thats to bad about keyore's family, but at least she has neko-who i assume is her half-brother?- and he sounds really saucey!!!( haha that means sexy meow!)lol well keep up the awesome work!! luv ya!!

Author's Response: Thank you and your Wright he is her half brother their fathers are different, Keyore’s was human and Neku’s was a full demon. More about their family is explained soon. Also I have a pic of Neku and Keyore that I drew both are bio pics but I’m not sure if I have to make a bingo book to post them since the rules said that but its only two and I don’t want to have to that. Do you know if I have to for only two bios?



Title: Stupid Girl by vernajast
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Broken NaruSasuNaru from Sakura's POV. Angst and implied death. Naruto's slowly going crazy, still obsessed with bringing Sasuke back to the village, and growing delusional. Excerpt:

So you smile when Naruto tells you how he's going to bring Sasuke to Ichiraku with him next time, that he's sure he'll have him back in the village by then. And you ignore the tiny wrinkles gathering at the corners of his eyes and the strained tone of his abnormally sunny voice and eat your ramen in silence. You miss him, too.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Angst (Shonen-ai/Yaoi), Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 711 | Read count: 1528 [Report This]
Published: 24/07/08 | Updated: 24/07/08



Reviewer: loulou20 Signed Liked
Date: 26/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Stupid Girl

i'm speechless, this is a beautiful story. i cried, because, its so, so real, and she is all alone, she is. thank you.

Author's Response: Thank YOU! :) I appreciate your taking the time to comment. I think, in the case of Naruto/Sasuke, Sakura gets forgotten sometimes. I\'m sorry (sooo glad!) about it making you cry. It does the same to me. ^^;



Title: A little story [Shino One shot] I didn't want you to hear. by Pulmonaria
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 4]
Summary: 'You have friends, you aren't ugly. You aren't fat.. WHY, please tell me WHY you like that Bugboy?" Ino asked her.
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Timeless
Characters: Ino Yamanaka, OC, Shino Aburame
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 681 | Read count: 5584 [Report This]
Published: 30/08/08 | Updated: 30/08/08


Reviewer: loulou20 Signed Liked
Date: 30/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

aww i love this one too! it's soo cute! between this one and 'How do you tell' you just have to write more, okay?? i love your one-shots, and thats saying alot, cause ussually i won't read one-shots!!



Title: How do you tell ? by Pulmonaria
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 4]
Summary: How do you tell an S-ranked criminal with Cannaballistic features and a split personality that you like him?

ZetsuxOC
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto
Characters: Akatsuki, OC, Zetsu
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 374 | Read count: 1859 [Report This]
Published: 30/08/08 | Updated: 30/08/08


Reviewer: loulou20 Signed Liked
Date: 30/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: How do you tell ?

aww how cute!! i love it! you're an amazing writer, and i hope you write more. and she's right, zetsu is damn sexy!! :}



Title: .O.U.T.B.R.E.A.K. by Rogue
Rated: R18 Liked [Reviews - 3]
Summary:


I never realized it but the end had begun and we were right in the middle of it. I just hope I can put this bat and nail gun to good use before I get devoured by...

Them


Category: Non-Naruto Fiction > Original stories
Characters: OC
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 2707 | Read count: 555 [Report This]
Published: 07/09/08 | Updated: 07/09/08


Reviewer: loulou20 Signed Liked
Date: 07/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: .O.U.T.B.R.E.A.K.

oh wow. that is amazing. i am pretty much speechless right now. all i can really think to say is, Holy Shit! please write more!