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Penname: Miki Everless [Contact]
Real name: Christina Thompson
Membership status: Member
Member since: 21/03/08
Website: http://myspace.com/viitalizechristina
Beta-reader: Yes
Hi, my name is Christina.
I'm fourteen.
I live in Daegu, South Korea.
I'm a freshman at my unit school. (K-12.)
I lettered in tennis and wrestling.
I play flute and acoustic guitar.
Naruto is life.
Impressed? Yeah, I wasn't either.
All of the stories I have posted onto this profile were written when I was about 12. Nearly all of them have nasty Mary-Sues in them that I find epicly hilarious even to this day. Please do not take any of my work seriously.






Favourites (all time):
Metamorphasis: A Hyuuga Tale by Nefatri
Shi no Me by Zephyras
Choke and Die by Voodoo
No More Running by Dag
You Found Me by inuyashas_only_1

(unfinished) Favourites:
1. The Lost Soul by Katana Haibane
2. Truthspeaker by fUnKyToEs
3. A Twisted Type of Love by Shinosuke
4. Who Would've Known by Tige321

Favourite Pairings:
(TIED FOR 1st)
Neji/Hinata
Sasuke/Naruto
Gaara/Naruto

Hated Pairings:
1. Sasuke/Sakura (Ew!)
2. Naruto/Hinata (-__- Thats the same as Sasu/Saku)
3. Neji/Tenten (RANDOM!)
4. Kiba/Hinata (That's just a crack-pairing.)

Currently beta-ing Down the Sodden Hill by winterstrife!

"Sabaku no Gaara is my favourite character from ANY anime I have ever seen. Bash him, and I'll bash you."

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Stories by Miki Everless [9]
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Title: Trains by kathlaidaprincess
Rated: R18 Liked [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Summer is upon the Ninja World after peace has come, and the Kazekage is invited to spend it with his hyperactive best friend as well as his companions. But the presence of so many other people there (a certain dark-haired boy included) makes Gaara think that maybe he will be the one left out... GaaNaru Fluff, Shounen-Ai and Yaoi too (and Sasuke will play a good role)
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Fluff (Shonen-ai/Yaoi), Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Warned (Shonen-ai/Yaoi), General Fiction > Post-Naruto, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Naruto and Gaara
Characters: Gaara, Hidden Leaf Ninja, Naruto Uzumaki, Pair NaruGaa, Team Asuma, Team Gai, Team Kakashi, Team Kuranai, Team Rookie Nine, Team Sand Siblings
Genres: Graphic lemon, Humor, Romance, WAFF
Warnings: Sexual Themes, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 33939 | Read count: 3998 [Report This]
Published: 23/07/09 | Updated: 08/08/09


Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 07/08/09 Title: Chapter 2: Hope is...

No, Gaara... Naruto was the person that changed him. He cares for him so much.
Sasuke left Naruto. He's totally incapable of a romantic relationship due to his selfishness.
But I still have a glimmer of hope that what Naruto and Sasuke were talking about was his love for Gaara.
You know, I've always thought of Gaara as the poetic type. It's really nice to read from a writer that knows this. (Most people describe him as a blood-gulping bastard, even in Shippuuden.)
Update soon! I really want to know what happens. I'm so anxious.

Author's Response: Here comes the third chapter, your doubts shall vanish xD\r\n\r\nI do think so too, Gaara should have a beautiful way with words, so thank you! :D



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 08/08/09 Title: Chapter 3: Pleasing Gaara: You're Doing It Right

...You just introduced me to a great song. Thank you. I'll return the favor...
All My Best Friends are Metalheads - Less Than Jake.
I love everything about the confession from Naruto. It was cute, awkward, and you couldn't describe the scenery any better.
I feel like I was there, experiencing everything Gaara was.
I've got to say, I was waiting impatiently for the word 'Khanzaila' to pop up so I could read the lemon. xP
And OMG. I am so pissed that nobody else has bothered to review this story. It's like TONFA's readers have lost sighting of a great story for so long that they can't recognize one anymore.
'Trains' is amazing. And I think I've read your other stories, as well... you're the author of 'Swimming Lessons', am I right? Well, this one blew it away. Way away.
Definitely favourited.

Author's Response: Woo, I remember that song from Digimon: The Movie, but never really looked into it :D But it\'s quite interesting, thanks for sharing!\r\n\r\nBut if it weren\'t for Porcupine Tree\'s song, I don\'t think I\'d ever be inspired to write this, so I\'m glad a friend shared it with me in the first place xD\r\n\r\nThank you! I feared it would be too cliché (in fact, the basic storyline, a jealousy fic involving Gaara, Naruto and Sasuke, was a request from a watcher of mine from dA, and I was afraid I\'d make it too cliché), so it lessens my worries to know this story is so well-received :D\r\n\r\nLol, the lemon was crappy xD But at least now I can write them more reasonably, even if still a bit crappy too.\r\n\r\nYes, I did write Swimming Lessons ^^ And it\'s reassuring to hear that, because it means I\'ve grown as a writer :D Well, I guess I\'ll post my other works here too (my most active account regarding fanfiction is really ff.net).\r\n\r\nThank you so much for everything! <3



Title: Epic Indulgence. by Xx_sakura_blossom_xX
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Finding himself stuck in the middle of Iwa dressed in Yondaime cosplay was not how Kain wanted to start his day.

But then, things rarely go Kains way, especialy since his friend/rival Jae has been sent along for the ride.

How will things go for the two teens as they wade their way through angry Uchihas, jealous fangirls and startling look alikes.

What eejit ever said they wanted to go to the world of Naruto?
Category: General Fiction > Naruto, Het Romance > Fluff, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Fluff (Shonen-ai/Yaoi), Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Real World, OC-centric, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Horror, Humor, Romance
Warnings: AU, Death, OOC, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 7889 | Read count: 4300 [Report This]
Published: 19/08/09 | Updated: 04/10/09


Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 20/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Cosplay?

LMFAO.
I can't say that I wasn't waiting for a fic like this ever since I first signed up on TONFA. Thank you for indulging me!
And it's so deliciously written. Please update soon... please. XD

Author's Response: Yay!! Thanks for the cool review!!\r\nAnd your welcome!!! I have the next chapter half done now so it will be up soon!\r\n\r\nxx



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 28/08/09 Title: Chapter 2: Not Again.

Well, at least the chasm didn't forget and just leave them there. That's a plus.
AND YAY! AN UPDATE! ^__^
HAHA, he's still in his Yondaime cosplay outfit?!
Eagerly awaiting for chapter three!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!!! ^^\r\nYeah, the chasm is evil though!\r\nI think the only reason I started writing this fic was becuase I wanted someone to end up in Iwa wearing Yondaime cosplay.\r\nI\'ll have fun writing the next chapter.



Title: A Hanyous Tale. by Xx_sakura_blossom_xX
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 2]
Summary: On the night of the Kyuubi attack something goes wrong and young Naruto merges with the demon, making him a hanyou.

For his own safety the Sandaime Hokage sends him away from the village where he is found by Inuyasha.

The silver haired hanyou is less than suited for fatherhood but he agrees to take Naruto in and raise him as his own.

However with deadly shinobi, malicious hanyou and traitorous Miko, poor Naruto will have to be on his guard.
Category: Non-Naruto Fiction > Inuyasha, General Fiction > Naruto, Het Romance > Fluff, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Fluff (Shonen-ai/Yaoi), Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Crossovers, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, General, Humor, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: AU, Death, OOC, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 3571 | Read count: 3837 [Report This]
Published: 26/08/09 | Updated: 27/08/09


Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 27/08/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

God, Naruto's so amazingly cute.
Inuyasha's just... himself. I mean, who tells a baby to shut the fuck up?
LMAO. He threw the peice of wood at Hikaru?
Aaaand... wish? I barely caught that... good thing I did, or else I would've been like, "Whaa?" in later chapters.
Update soon! And don't worry, that was a good chapter. ^__^

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the amazing review. I\'m glad you think I\'m keeping things in-character.\r\nYeah, little Naru doesn\'t like Hikaru all that much. \r\nThanks, I\'ll try to update as fast as I can.\r\n\r\nx



Title: Painted Faces by SpiritOak
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 1]
Summary: While on a date, Kankuro and Moegi comment on each other's weaknesses.Set a few years in the future.  Experimental one-shot fic. Crack pairing; Kankuro/Moegi. Fluff.
Category: Het Romance > Fluff
Characters: Kankurou, Konohamaru Sarutobi, Moegi
Genres: Romance, WAFF
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 814 | Read count: 1848 [Report This]
Published: 05/09/09 | Updated: 05/09/09


Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 06/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: Painted Faces

What I love about this story is that it lets the reader imagine the other side of the conversation; makes it a little more mysterious.
Kankurou and Moegi?! Wooooaaaaahhhh. That's even more crack than Kakuzu and Lee. (Okay, maybe not.)
Well, I liked it, and as far as experimental fics go, it was awesome!

Author's Response:

Whew! I managed to pull it off?  Yes! Glad you liked it ^_^

 Hmmm... Kakuzu and Lee... -scratches chin thoughtfully.... KakuLee... Don't give me any ideas now :-p



Title: Brave New World by SugaSugashi
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 22]
Summary: A lonely and cynical perfumer who is fed up with the pressure of the modern life and wishes to live in a simpler world finds her wish come true after watching a Naruto anime marathon. However, she quickly discovers that life in Konoha isn't as easy and perfect as she had thought, and that maybe the problem isn't with the world, but with her. (Kakashi main character)
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Character-Centric, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 | Completed: No | Word count: 23645 | Read count: 16804 [Report This]
Published: 12/09/09 | Updated: 17/11/09


Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 27/09/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'd always thought that nobody could write Kakashi realistically anymore, but damn, you proved me wrong.
And I love Athena. She's a believeable character; something I haven't seen in a while.
I'd love to see how Athena and Kakashi's relationship plays out.
Eagerly awaiting chapter 8. ^__^

Author's Response: Thank you for a very detailed response. Hope to hear more from you.



Title: Little by Little by inuyashas_only_1
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 17]
Summary: Tenten saw herself as an ordinary girl, who lived an ordinary life, with ordinary friends and an ordinary home.

Then she met someone who wasn't ordinary at all.

His name was Shou, and when he entered her life he turned it upside-down. Tenten is suddenly sucked into a world she would never have dreamed of, and now she discovers the latent powers hidden inside of her that allow her to manipulate the world around her by using focus words. On top of that, she discovers a secret about Shou that will change every view she has of him-- he is the prince of an alternate universe, a prince of a troubled world that could be taken into the wrong hands by his cousin. But...when everything Tenten holds dear is thrown into peril, is she willing to sacrifice her "ordinary" life and embrace her destiny?
Category: Het Romance > Fluff, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: All, OC, Tenten
Genres: None
Warnings: AU, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 | Completed: No | Word count: 8993 | Read count: 9437 [Report This]
Published: 02/11/09 | Updated: 13/11/09


Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 13/11/09 Title: Chapter 4: Hiding Something

I'm sorry, Sarah, but I really don't like this. Especially from someone with your talent.
Tenten is a HUGE bitch. It's like she's going out of her way to say the most rude thing possible.
Shou just swallows her crap. He's a shallow character that I don't find likeable.
The dialogue seems very, very scripted. Borderline unbelieveable.
Firefly Tears and You Found Me were amazing; they blew me away. This story is amateur compared to them.
Every author has their bad shots; you're lucky that this is your only one so far. You're an amazing writer, Sarah. Continue writing.

Author's Response: ...Well, this ruined my already bad day.  Thanks for that.  I get home from school after receiving the brush off-- midsentence-- by the guy I like as I was telling him just that, I was already pretty depressed.  But to get my hopes up when I see it's a review form you and then come crashing back down...?  I holed up in my room for a while and cried for an hour.  Next time, I'll try to write a story that's better, and thanks for your honesty.  I wouldn't want you reading crap that wasn't any good.  Please look out for my next story.  That may be coming soon because a comment like that from my favorite reviewer pretty much made me never want to continue this story again.



Title: Full Circle by Flyteh
Rated: R18 Liked [Reviews - 3]
Summary: "I don’t know where it started. I don’t know where it ends. All I know is that I’m here with you now: in your house, on your sofa, your body hovering over mine..." Kakashi/Sakura
Category: Het Romance > Angst
Characters: Kakashi Hatake, Sakura Haruno
Genres: Angst, Graphic lemon, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1769 | Read count: 1072 [Report This]
Published: 04/11/09 | Updated: 04/11/09


Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 05/11/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It only had one chapter, but this was one of the best Sakura/Kakashi fics on this site. It had so much depth and emotion.

Author's Response: One-shots are more my style for fanfiction. If I\'m gonna write a full-length work I\'d do an original story. Fanction is great for characterisation practice, though, and this piece was a lot of fun. I\'d never written a lemon before so glad it turned out okay =)



Title: Memoirs of A Missing-nin by belovedly_loveless
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 37]
Summary:

Reality is such a wonderful wake up call.

The places you never expected to exist. The people you’d only dreamt of meeting. The events of their tomorrow having already passed in your present. Was my reality their illusion? Was their illusion my reality? I haven’t been sure for the past 20 years.

As an outsider, I was hated as a missing nin. As a traitor. As the enemy. Like the one I followed, I was wanted in almost every country. I had no regrets however. Well, no regrets when it came to him. Never when it came to him. He was the one I turned to. My leader. My light. My solace.

We were despised. Looked down upon. Hated for our crimes and I have to admit, everyone had every right to hate us. However, despite all this loathing, I feel the need to write what it felt like to live the life that we did, for not many know what really goes on in the obscure world of a rogue ninja.

I can only hope that by reading this, people can better understand us and the paths we have chosen. And I hope they know that our actions were and are not based on evil or ill-intent, but loneliness, fear and most of all: pain.

 

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Category: General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: All, Pair OCSasu
Genres: Action/Adventure, Dark, Romance
Warnings: Dark, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 | Completed: No | Word count: 47369 | Read count: 31656 [Report This]
Published: 09/12/09 | Updated: 27/12/11


Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 12/12/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Okay, I'm incredibly interested.
I love how you write. You don't over-detail her appearance - just enough so we can see what she looks like - and you describe her feelings, surroundings, and her speech beautifully.
Update soon!

Author's Response: Oh thanks! Haha I'm glad! Thanks for the review and I'll try to update soon. :)



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 31/12/09 Title: Chapter 8: Profound Realization

You've really thought through this chapter, it shows. I love how you describe Sasuke's situation; I myself never really understood him, but now I think I'm beginning to sympathize. (I was originally on Naruto's side.)
And Dante's longing to be near Sasuke is just so immensely cute. Update soon!

Author's Response:

First of all thanks for the review! :) I've always loved Sasuke even though he's a fictional character because I know what its like to watch people dear to you die, although my own situation isn't quite on his level, but I wanted to show people that he does have feelings and to put what happened in perspective.



Title: Bonds of Blood by animeroxsmyworld
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 35]
Summary: “Grouping her together with that…demon, will automatically put her in danger. I say we separate them.” Koharu continued, standing up from her seat. "Let Naruto go by Uzumaki, Kyoko will be the only Namikaze.”
Category: Het Romance > Fluff, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU, General Fiction > Timeless
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki, Pair NaruHina, Pair OCSasu, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 | Completed: No | Word count: 136772 | Read count: 66172 [Report This]
Published: 10/12/09 | Updated: 19/09/10


Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 22/03/10 Title: Chapter 25: Meetings

HAHAHA... the ending was GREAT!



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 23/01/10 Title: Chapter 19: Learning to Die

The new summary is way better than the previous one. It's what made me open up the fic.
It's very well-written. I like it a lot, and I hope you continue.
My only complaint is that Naruto was OOC in one of the chapters; he would never say that he detested the village.



Title: Light the Darkness by Rowanrose
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 51]
Summary:

PLEASE DO NOT READ> UNDER CONSTRUCTION< THANK YOU!!!

Being a jinchuriki is something i wish I wasn't. 

I have a power

People hate you.

A wierd power.

They want to kill you.

The power to make myself go through things.

They wish you were never born, and all the while

The power to make myself harder, harder than steel.

They want to use you for their own purposes.

I'm the only one who understands my brother. 

They want to make you kill others.

Maybe it's because i live inside of him.

They don't understand you.

I want to light up his darkness.

They hate you, they want to kill you, and they wish to use you as well.

The darkness of his heart.

You are all alone.

Hello.

Hello.

My name is Aiko.

Twin sister to Gaara, and

Daughter of the Kazekage.

I'd say it's nice to meet you,

But how can I be sure?


Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Timeless
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 | Completed: No | Word count: 28232 | Read count: 18798 [Report This]
Published: 11/12/09 | Updated: 29/07/11


Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 11/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Thorns Through my Heart

Please continue with this; it's a great idea and you're executing it beautifully.
Update soon! I'll be looking forward to seeing this on the page.

Author's Response: Oh, wow, thanks! I\'m glad you like it!



Title: By Your Side by inuyashas_only_1
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 21]
Summary: Even though Haruno Sakura is the heroine of this fic, there's a tiny problem:
She just died.
...Yeah, maybe it's bigger than a tiny problem. Sakura can't move on to the world of the dead if she has unfinished business, and that unfinished business is to confess her love to Uchiha Sasuke and successfully win him over.
...But when she'd a ghost, he can't sense her. At all. So, with the help of her personal shinigami Soichiro, she manages to find a human partner who will work together with her to help her achieve her goal, by possessing their body and working her magic through them.
The only problem with that is that her partner is a certain blond boy from her class.
Yes, there will be yaoi-- nothing too hardcore though, just some fluff, and there will be some het stuff. I'm bad at summaries, sorry. ^-^
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > High School Fics, Het Romance > Fluff, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Real World, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki, OC, Pair OCSaku, Pair SasuNaru, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, General, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Warnings: OOC, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 | Completed: No | Word count: 17247 | Read count: 9383 [Report This]
Published: 14/12/09 | Updated: 31/07/10


Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 15/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Lesson 1: It's Not Normal to Keep a Cool Head When You've Found Out You've Died

This is really quirky.
I like it! It's kind of... dark humour; like The Heathers.
How did you come up with this idea? It's great, honestly.
LOL, I cannot wait until the next chapter. Update soon, please!

Author's Response: Hooray, the first review! I\'m totally glad you like it. ^-^ I came up with this idea when I fell asleep in Spanish class. I had a dream about it, and I woke up thinking about it and burst out laughing when I imagined Sakura possessing Naruto\'s body and hitting on Sasuke. Because I was laughing so hard I got sent out into the hallway and it gave me a little more time to think of a scenario. That\'s how I got started with this. It\'s kinda going to be a romantic comedy, and I decided to make Sakura a little softer around the edges, and then the rest is just going to take off. I\'m doing OCSaku, but I\'m not sure who the OC will be. I\'m think Soichiro, but he\'s a tough guy to just be friends with, let alone fall in love with...but that would make it much more interesting. I mean, because Naruto\'s always going to be hitting on Sasuke (well, Sakura will, but in Naruto\'s body) so Sasuke will be falling for him, and Sakura will fall out of love with him when she realizes that those two are falling in love.



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 19/12/09 Title: Chapter 2: Lesson 2: Some People Are a Surprise From Every Angle

It was torture watching me friends in class. They all looked do gaunt.
Should be: It was torture watching my friends in class. They all looked so gaunt.

Author's Response: Oh, crap. Thanks, I\'ll go fix that. Sorry. ^-^ Did you listen to the fic\'s song, \"Where\"? I listen to it over and over as I write the fic-- it\'s such beautiful inspiration.



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 19/12/09 Title: Chapter 2: Lesson 2: Some People Are a Surprise From Every Angle

...Why has there only been one review? This is better than Firefly Tears. It should have twenty by now.
That really makes me angry. What the hell are TONFA reviewers doing? They're off reviewing crappy newbie fics, but they're ignoring the ones that actually deserve the reviews.
Anyway, I'm sorry for that.
I love how your chapters end. They're sweet and cute, and they don't feel as if they're being forced. They just kind of flow with your writing; they're really beautiful.
Update soon... and don't worry about the number of reviewers. They'll come flocking by the fourth chapter, I'd bet my fingernails on it. (Ow...)

Author's Response: I was soooo psyched to see your review. I was totally like, \"Watashi no kokoro wa Miki-sama no desu!\" (\"My heart belongs to Miki-sama!\") IT\'S BETTER THAN FIREFLY TEARS?!?!?! Wow, that was a shocking statement. I thought Firefly Tears was my magnum Opus, that I couldn\'t write anything better than that. And there\'s only been one review because...um... I don\'t know, actually. The fic has only just started-- wasn\'t Firefly Tears like that in the beginning too? It picked up speed. But I appreciate your enthusiasm. Once I start updating faster people will notice it more. I think. But again, I really like that you enjoy it and think it isn\'t a \"crappy newbie fic\", as you put it. I put a lot of thought into chapter endings-- they\'re what ties things up. Bad Chapter Endings = Bad Sum-Up Sentence, sort of. Like, it\'s supposed to sum up the emotions the readers should be feeling, or a thought that is supposed to cross their mind or make a statement. But thank you, I love how kind you are. And I\'ll take your advice-- I won\'t worry about the reviewers and work on having a good story. ^-^ Thank you, arigatou, gracias, grazi, a million times over.



Title: Summoner by ligerhiro
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Jiraiya has lost Naruto so Tsunade arranges a team to find him. The team finds him with a new friend and there's something weird about Naruto. Lots of humour and a smart, strong and calm Naruto with plenty of girls wanting him, set after the three years.
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Crossovers, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Fusion, General Fiction > Timeskip, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: Hinata Hyuuga, Jiraiya, Naruto Uzumaki, Temari
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Humor, Mystery
Warnings: AU, OOC, Sexual Themes, Yuri
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 3939 | Read count: 6334 [Report This]
Published: 08/05/10 | Updated: 17/05/10


Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 14/05/10 Title: Chapter 1: Lost!

So far, I like it. Please update soon.