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Title: Love Me, My Brother by lunaryu
Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 141]
Summary: Sasuke and Naruto are mortal enemies and rivals in their high school. However, 'things' happen when their single parent decided to marry each other. Now they're forced to live under the same roof! Will their feeling change into brotherly love or…more than that? High-School!AU; SasuNaruSasu, KakaIru
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > High School Fics, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Kakashi and Iruka, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Fluff (Shonen-ai/Yaoi)
Characters: Akamaru, Akatsuki, Anko Mitarashi, Hinata Hyuuga, Ino Yamanaka, Iruka Umino, Itachi Uchiha, Jiraiya, Kabuto Yakushi, Kakashi Hatake, Kiba Inuzuka, Naruto Uzumaki, Neji Hyuuga, Pair KakaIruk, Pair SasuNaru, Rock Lee, Sai, Sasori, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: AU, Sexual Themes, Yaoi
Challenges: High and Mighty
Challenge: High and Mighty
Series: None
Chapters: 30 | Completed: No | Word count: 190070 | Read count: 38682 [Report This]
Published: 15/11/06 | Updated: 20/08/08


Reviewer: Zafirya Signed
Date: 19/05/08 Title: Chapter 29: Confession

Aww. That was soooooooo beautiful. I'm near to crying. It was, so, so.. i can't find the best word for it :(. More than beautiful. And now they truly love each other.And , in the end, when Naruto is thinking about, how can he see that woman, and he realise why, it's so sad, and beautiful in the same time. And when Sasuke wants to protect Naruto , and Naruto wants to protect him. That was just too good. I 'd say that it's the main mining of SasuNaru . I.. I... I'd like to write as you. I'm still shocked in a good way. Thank you for the chapter.I am really glad for it.I needed it.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review. Hope I can update more often, but I am just too busy to do it. Well, I will still do my best to update, so I wont disappoint all of you guys!



Reviewer: Zafirya Signed
Date: 23/03/08 Title: Chapter 28: Winter Vacation 1

How could you just stop there?! I have spent 3 days to read your fic , and now it ends with this. You are really cruel...

Author's Response: Ahaha, sorry about that. And thanks for the review. I\'ll try my best to update faster...but I will not promise you, ok?



Title: Save Me by vivpiv
Rated: 12/12A Liked [Reviews - 12]
Summary: When Naruto is sad and lonely he writes poems. No one knows about his talent and he doesn't want them to know. His poetry shows his true feelings. His anger and pain, sadness and loneliness and his happiness. No one knows about his talent but that's about to change.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Kakashi Hatake, Naruto Uzumaki, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Angst, WAFF
Warnings: OOC, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 2874 | Read count: 4231 [Report This]
Published: 07/08/07 | Updated: 24/01/08


Reviewer: Zafirya Signed
Date: 11/04/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Ideas anyone?

It's so beautiful. I was crying in the end. So sad. Aww. I love it.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I\'m glad that you liked it. I\'m writing a sequel at the moment, which will be up soon :) So keep an eye to it.



Title: Last Chance by sakuyalove
Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 132]
Summary: Naruto is twenty and sees this as his last chance to get Sakura to marry him. He asks his best friend, Sasuke, to help. Will the brooding Uchiha help Naruto get the girl or grab his own last chance?

SasuNaruSaku; our poor blonde stuck in the middle! I appologize to Sakura haters now; there will be NaruSaku. This story has a plot, lemon in later chapters.
Will update when I feel loved, hehehe

Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Sakura, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sakura Haruno, Kiba Inuzuka, Jiraiya, Konohamaru Sarutobi, Shikamaru Nara, Temari, Tsunade, Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki, Ino Yamanaka
Genres: Graphic lemon, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: Tereshi's Chance Series
Chapters: 24 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 48290 | Read count: 32104 [Report This]
Published: 08/11/07 | Updated: 07/03/08


Reviewer: Zafirya Signed
Date: 18/02/08 Title: Chapter 21: The Plan

I hate Sakura.......And the language would be Hungarian. X).

Author's Response: Go for it. As long as it is translated and not changed. And give me some credit please.
Tereshi



Reviewer: Zafirya Signed
Date: 05/03/08 Title: Chapter 22: One Week

I'm still reading it and i still love it and hate Sakura.... Seriously, why dose Sakura those terrible things. I'd like to kick her ass. ( I hope my English was good..)

Author's Response: You\'ll like the next two chapters! The next should be posted this evening. (Your english is just fine *Thumbs up*)



Reviewer: Zafirya Signed
Date: 08/03/08 Title: Chapter 24: Negotiations

I loved it and i'm waiting for the second chance ^.^. You are the best. And you were right. I really liked these chapters as you said. And i hope i will love the new ones. I'd like to knew the "future" ideas.
So! Gambatte!



Title: A Formal Rival. A Secret Crush. by Serenity772
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 22]
Summary: Past Featured Story Things seem to be just getting worse for Naruto. Kyuubi studies him carefully as he goes through his life. Maybe behind his cheerful outer shell is just a broken boy needing to be loved.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: None
Genres: General
Warnings: Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: No | Word count: 3612 | Read count: 8654 [Report This]
Published: 17/11/07 | Updated: 01/09/08


Reviewer: Zafirya Signed
Date: 18/02/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

It'll be a really good story. Hurry. Give us the next chapter. ^^. It's so cute.



Reviewer: Zafirya Signed
Date: 18/05/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hmm. It was grate, but you should have make paragraphs in Kyuubi's speak. It 's hard to read. But go on. I'd like to get Kyuubi into the "real" life.



Title: Kyuuketsuki by Zurui Chibi
Rated: R18 Liked [Reviews - 91]
Summary:
SasuNaru__Alleyway_by_Sekra2


AU
SasuNaru

Uchiha Sasuke transfered to Konoha High in hopes of getting away from his brother. But when his new love-interest, a boy named Naruto, turns out to have a connection with his brother's rivals, Sasuke gets caught up in the world of gangs once more. What exactly does Naruto have in common with the Kyuuketsuki? And what is Itachi planning?

FuzzyBaka = My Alter Ego.
Small Hiatus: I have other stories, that are my priority, I apologize. This fic will NOT be discontinued. I will finish.
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > High School Fics, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Naruto and Gaara, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Kakashi and Iruka
Characters: Gaara, Itachi Uchiha, Kabuto Yakushi, Kakashi Hatake, Kiba Inuzuka, Rock Lee, Naruto Uzumaki, Neji Hyuuga, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha, Shikamaru Nara
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, General, Humor, Romance
Warnings: AU, Death, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 | Completed: No | Word count: 25126 | Read count: 13679 [Report This]
Published: 30/11/07 | Updated: 05/07/08


Reviewer: Zafirya Signed
Date: 18/06/08 Title: Chapter 9: Ragged And Broken

OMG. Now i can't think anyting else, just a fight between Naruto and Sasuke. Seeing their eyes in shock as they realise who is the opponent. OMG. More, more, more. And Kakashi didn't telling anything to Sasuke. I a an Itachi fan, but a bigger SasuNaru fan. And wow, Gaara and Tamari in shock that Naruto is coming back. Wow. That was a really good chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks, I was really worried this was going to be a disappointment. I\'m glad it wasn\'t ^^



Reviewer: Zafirya Signed
Date: 07/06/08 Title: Chapter 8: Caress Me Down

OMG. That was just too perfect. I love it. I love Kyuubi and naruto with Sasuke. And poor Kiba. I hope he will be all right.

Author's Response: Uwaa, I love YOU for giving me such a nice review! Ah. Kiba. *cough* ...*runsaway*...*popsbacktogiveonelasthugandthen... -poof-*



Title: Leaving by silent_moon
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 21]
Summary: Naruto has enough of his hiding behind a hyperactive mask. He chooses to leave his
hometown for once and for all. He just couldn’t take any more of the beatings and the hate towards him. He just leaves one letter. But what will happen when he comes back?CHAPTER 4 is up!R&R [SASUNARU NARUSASU, TIMESKIP, AU]
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers, General Fiction > Character-Centric, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Fluff (Shonen-ai/Yaoi), General Fiction > Naruto, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Angst (Shonen-ai/Yaoi), Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Other, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Akatsuki, Clan Uzumaki, Kushina Uzumaki, Kyuubi (Kurama), Naruto Uzumaki, Pair SasuNaru, Sasuke Uchiha, Team Sannin
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: AU, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 | Completed: No | Word count: 8215 | Read count: 12459 [Report This]
Published: 01/12/07 | Updated: 25/05/08


Reviewer: Zafirya Signed
Date: 25/04/08 Title: Chapter 2: Gone

Hnn. This is great, and you won't believe I am writing a story which has the same way. I mean, that I thought about what if Naru leaves Konoha and let Kyuubi help him. Unfortunately, i don't like writing.... But i have already written 18 chapters. ^^



Reviewer: Zafirya Signed
Date: 26/05/08 Title: Chapter 4: Mental images

Awww. I love it. But why did you passed through 4 years? Anyway. It's soooo cool, that naruto has all the powers, but i would made a bigger drama when sasu-chan learns everything about naruto. And their meeting in suna was, mmm to hnn how to say, to easy, i mean to ordinary. Except this i loved it.
* Burn and die sakura muhaha.*

Author's Response: Whaha lol It isn\'t done yet, in Suna I mean. Naruto is going to meet with Gaara and Sasuke followes him....not gonna say more but I didn\'t make Sasuke as dramatic because that\'s too ooc.. and I agree with the burn part with Sakura though I would add: Pinch with kunai, shave her head bold, write whore on her bald head then burn her on a fire stake with a sign above it that says: \"Witch of Konoha, may you go to hell\" ^^



Title: Unbreakable Bonds by doodlelover
Rated: R18 Liked [Reviews - 133]
Summary: After regaining his temporarily lost memory Naruto realizes he's pregnant with the bastard's kid. Now he has to cope with the pregnancy and unwanted visits from him.

SasuNaruSasu, Mpreg, and other miscellaneous warnings that I don't feel like typing.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Kakashi and Iruka, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto, Shojo-ai/Yuri Romance > Top Pairs > Sakura and Ino
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki, Pair GaaLee, Pair KakaIruk, Pair SakuIno, Pair SasuNaru, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Angst, Dark, Graphic lemon, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Themes, Yaoi, Yuri
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 | Completed: No | Word count: 75540 | Read count: 55773 [Report This]
Published: 05/12/07 | Updated: 14/10/08


Reviewer: Zafirya Signed
Date: 09/04/08 Title: Chapter 12: Unsuspected

This story is so cool. I have read a same fiction ,, but i think you haven't read it. (i am sure). But you and Dinya has the same way of thinking. Back to the story. I love it. I have only 1 problem. it's too short :S.
So go on!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for the support! Kami knows I need it! I have the next chapter finished...I just need to check for stuff and add more! XP But it\'ll be up soon! Promise! ^^ Hmm...Maybe I should look this \'Dinya\' person up! I\'m in need of a good story to read! *loves* Thanks for reading (loving), rating, and reviewing! ~lemon



Reviewer: Zafirya Signed
Date: 17/06/08 Title: Chapter 17: A Part of You

Congratulation for 100 reviews. It's such a cool story. I love it. You are a kind person and i think that's why everybody loves it. It's so true. In the real word it would be true. But poor Sasuke. Everybody hurts him. :( and Naruto too.You should give a happy ending for the story. Mostly because of your personality. I hope the bests for you.
*Zafirya

Author's Response: Thanks for caring so much! I think that you\'re a lovely person with a heart of gold, I\'m always happy to get a review from you! Talking to you has been a joy and I hope you find the happiness you\'ve always deserved. Your support has been with me from the beginning and has kept me going, and for that I\'m truly grateful. I think Naruto and Sasuke deserve a happy ending too, so let\'s hope that I get the courage to write it! Thank you so much! (Yay! 100!) *love* ~lemon



Reviewer: Zafirya Signed
Date: 14/05/08 Title: Chapter 14: Break Me

Aww. The story is so cute. And i feel sorry for you. I don't think that you will feel better from my idea, but ,try to wait, and try to let him know that, when you are with him, he feels better, like everything is perfect if he is with you, and try show him that you are better than that girl, however you must not say it in loud. He should love you for your personality not just for your body. Think about it. I hope i could help.

Author's Response: You helped a lot! Maybe...He\'ll see me more than a friend and him and the other girl will break apart...So If I do wait maybe he\'ll see me for who I am. That works. It really does! It may be a long time though. He really likes her. But I\'ll take your advice and wait to see what happens. They can\'t be together forever, right? Maybe waiting would be the best thing to do now. Thank you for the advice and thinking my story is cute! ^^ It helps! ~lemon



Reviewer: Zafirya Signed
Date: 28/08/08 Title: Chapter 21: Friction

Oy. Perverted as always. But u know that we like it so, never mind XD. If u want some SauNaru you should have asked me. You know i just terrified my friend when i showed him my Yaoi Doujinshi maps.( more than 3 gigabytes) . Oh. And i hate school too. Gambatte with it. I want to "see" the little brats XD.

Author's Response: Mwuahahaha. Yesh, I love being perverted >:3 It\'s one of my strong suits. You\'re lucky, I have almost no access to any doujinshi D: I try and try my little heart out to find sites with downloads, but I can never find any! Makes me mad, but I survive. -shrugs- It\'s not any worse than school at least. I think the only reason I bother to go anymore is \'cuz of my friends...what other reason is there? Well anyway, thanks for reviewing once more! X3



Reviewer: Zafirya Signed
Date: 22/05/08 Title: Chapter 15: Shatter

1st. I'm glad that you feel better. I told my friends about your problem, and they felt sorry too, and they are hoping the bests for you.
About the story. Sasuke's Idiot was the best part of it. Sakura's kiss was sudden, but that's your story. About the InoSkau well it fitted. Poor Naruto. About the hotties. Well... i think i will never get that hottie i want. :(

Author's Response: Oh...I hope you do get your hottie though! never stop hoping, ne? And it sounds like you got really caring friends! Tell them I said thank you :) Yeah, the kiss was sudden, but I needed to get those little extra feelings outta the way for the plot....Dang little bunnies always chewing away... And then it worked out when I fit the InoSaku in there. So, nothin bad there. I\'m glad that you liked the chapter! Hope that you like it in the future too! *love* ~lemon



Reviewer: Zafirya Signed
Date: 01/08/08 Title: Chapter 19: Tempt Me

Kawai. Sorry for not reviewing faster, but i wasn't at home . Do u want to discus FastForward? Please leave a message on my msn. Thy. ( i have to hurry so on msn everything)

Author's Response: It\'s okay, as long as you do review I don\'t care when! And I would love to talk about FastForward! As soon as I reset my password for msn...it won\'t let me log in :O *loves* ~lemon



Reviewer: Zafirya Signed
Date: 03/07/08 Title: Chapter 18: Hypnotic

Okay. I am not angry. I thought that something like that happened. But for the next 12 day i will be in England, so we won't speak i think. :(. But hey. After that we will. This chapter was good again, however i couldn't understand everything, but this is my problem X3. Gambatte.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for not being angry, I really need to make sure my computer doesn\'t have a virus or something :S But anyway, thanks for reviewing and I hope you have a wonderful time in England! You\'re so lucky! I\'ll look forward to talking with you again! *love* ~lemon



Reviewer: Zafirya Signed
Date: 25/05/08 Title: Chapter 16: Hate

Jeh. Again i couldn't understand everything. I mean the connections, but i write it to my english, cause i am not as good as i want to be. However you like torturing naruto better than me. And how can Sasu visit Naruto if he is not allowed to do? And why didn't he got more punish. And you said that 1 year since, sasuke can't leave his home, but naruto is still pregnant. I am a little bit confused.

Author's Response: Ah! Such good questions! I\'ll bet you\'re confused because of my bad writing skills ^^\' Sasuke is sneaking out to see Naruto. He IS a very good shinobi and can get past the guards that are watching over him, so that would make sense, in my book anyways. He\'s not allowed to go anywhere, so he sneaks out when he can. I hope that clears it up for you. Sorry for making you confused! I\'ll try to put in those little details in the future! And yes, I do love to torture Naruto ;] *love* ~lemon



Reviewer: Zafirya Signed
Date: 02/06/08 Title: Chapter 17: A Part of You

This was great again. Why did Sakura find Naruto. She is not good enough for him, or to be near him. It's just for Sasu. Make a happy ending. ^^

Author's Response: *smile* Yes! Happy ending! ^^ And don\'t worry, Sasuke will find him soon enough...*snicker* You just wait. Thanks for all the reviews! ~lemon



Title: Pretend for me by sakuyalove
Rated: R18 Liked [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Sasuke has still not returned to Konoha even after five year. Missing home has him taking a walk down the red light district looking for a prostitute. But this prostitute will have to meet certain requirement.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Graphic lemon
Warnings: Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 2677 | Read count: 1330 [Report This]
Published: 11/02/08 | Updated: 11/02/08


Reviewer: Zafirya Signed
Date: 17/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Pretend For Me

First, it's perfect. Second, i was laughing. I'd like to know hole idea of yours. Maybe you should continue it. It'd be a nice and interesting story. It spirited me and my friend, and maybe we will write a similar fic. But it's just an idea, cause we have a lot of fiction plan. And to do all of them... i think it'd take more than a year. X3.

Author's Response: Thanks, I\'m considering a sequal or a story because some fans on another site I post have been asking for one but I\'m not sure yet. I really liked it the way it was. I depends how many people want one, I write for the readers.
-Tereshi



Title: Meant To Be by A Vampires Butterfly
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 5]
Summary: It's Valentine's Day and the Sasuke fangirls are all excited! But...will their gift be enough this year?
Category: General Fiction, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Dark, General, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Yaoi
Challenges: , Official Valentine day challenge 2009
Challenge: , Official Valentine day challenge 2009
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 7081 | Read count: 3903 [Report This]
Published: 17/02/08 | Updated: 17/02/08


Reviewer: Zafirya Signed
Date: 18/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Meant To Be

I love this. ^^. I love,love,love it. X3. SasuNaru 4ever X3



Title: Twister by Paigeion
Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Naruto and Sasuke play a game of ‘Twister’ and things get a little heated. NaruSasu, oneshot, Yaoi!
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: None
Warnings: Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 2166 | Read count: 1516 [Report This]
Published: 21/02/08 | Updated: 21/02/08


Reviewer: Zafirya Signed
Date: 23/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

it was good too, but i think the other one is better. And I think Sasuke is better as seme ( i know Uke in his name but.... )

Author's Response: ah it's okay, i was going to make him seme...i perfer it really, but you never really SEE lotza Naru-seme stories, there is a sequal with a Gaara threesme and them, well not really a sequal...more of a 'game related' thing, and Saskes is one of the semes, hehehehehe



Title: Sasuke's 'Problem' by Paigeion
Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Naruto finds Sasuke getting a dirty magazine from a book store and decides to help him with his 'problem' NarSas ONE SHOT
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: None
Warnings: Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 2398 | Read count: 1657 [Report This]
Published: 22/02/08 | Updated: 22/02/08


Reviewer: Zafirya Signed
Date: 22/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nose bleeding. Very very big bleeding.If i die because I lost a lot of blood ,than know thats your fault.

Author's Response: well dont die, that would soooooo suck, lol, glad you liekd it, cehck out my other story as well, <3