Real name: jessica
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Member since: 06/02/08
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Jessica Kamiya by =thei11 on deviantART
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 235]
Hello my name is Kaminari Hiyori, but my friends call me Nari. I am from the Hiyori clan, whose members specialize in elemental control and jutsu. My clan believes that depending on the weather conditions on the day that a baby is born, is how we are destined to our element. We are also named to match our element. My name means thunder and I control and use electric based jutsu. I was born during an electrical storm. My Aunt, Kasumi, was born when a heavy mist covered the land. Thus her name means mist, and her element is liquid and poison based. Aunt Kasumi had taken care of me ever since my parents died. I’m graduating from the Ninja Academy soon. Hopefully, I’ll be put with my best friend, Naruto Uzamaki.
Category: OC-centric
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 47 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 65745 | Read count: 81483 [Report This]
Published: 01/06/08 | Updated: 03/05/09
Date: 15/12/08 Title: Chapter 38: Wake Up and Smell the Roses
This is getting good. Can't wait unil the next chapter. I wonder what's going on.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: 19/11/08 Title: Chapter 35: Incredibly Lucky People
Awesome chapter. I can't wait to see the next one. It was funny watching Jessica tease Kaminair in the end like that.
Author's Response: lol thanks, glad you think so!
Date: 15/10/08 Title: Chapter 33: Kasumi and Samui
You posted this chapter four times. You need to get on and fix it. Great chapter and keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Yeah, sorry about that. Computer was being dumb. But I have fixed it! Thanks for the review and I\'ll tty tommorrow!
Date: 22/09/08 Title: Chapter 32: Iced Hearts: It Has Everything to do With You!
Yet another awesome chapter. Keep up the good work. I wonder who won. I bet it was a tie. Hope you update soon and I hope you feel better soon.
Author's Response: lol mehbeh, but then again, mehbeh not. ;) You shall see!
Date: 15/07/08 Title: Chapter 20: The Problem With The Hiyori Clan
Awesome chapter. You only have one more chapter to go that I already have read. Know I know why Shimo hates Kaminari like that. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: That\'s right! I\'m almost all caught up! ^_^ Thanx 4 review!
Date: 07/09/08 Title: Chapter 30: Best. Birthday. EVER!
Awesome chapter. I hope that you have her beat Shimo to the ground in the fight. When are you going to explain Jessica's angel to everyone? I hope soon. Update soon.
Author's Response: Sometime after Nari fights... >__>; heh, heh. I will explain it though!!
Date: 09/08/08 Title: Chapter 26: Electricity vs. Psychic
This is getting intense. Who is going to win? Can't wait to read the next update.
Author's Response: lol I hope you\'ll like the next chapter!
Date: 04/08/08 Title: Chapter 25: Start of the Third Exam
Aw come on. Did you have to pit our characters against each other? I can't wait until you update again.
Author's Response: Sorry, but it had to be done! I\'ve been planing this since.....half way through the Zabuza sega. >__>;
Date: 23/07/08 Title: Chapter 23: Sorry Mr. Mohawk, You Lose Again
Awesome chapter. That's what they get for trying to ambush Kaminari and Jessica. I hope that Naruto and the others are alright. Can't wait for the next udpate.
Author's Response: lol Toshimaru just can\'t win at anything, can he? xD lol Thanks for the reivew.
Date: 19/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Enter: Kaminari Hiyori
Why did you sign out of yahoo? I'm still on if you want to finish writing the chapter.
Author's Response: I\'M SO SORRY! My internet was down! D:
Date: 03/07/08 Title: Chapter 11: Mysterious Boy
Yay! Haku's come into the picture. I can't wait until the next chatper. Hope you'll update soon.
Author's Response: lol yesh! Haku has brought sexy back! ^o~ lol Thanks for the reveiw!
Date: 17/07/08 Title: Chapter 21: The First Exam: Poker
You added the last chapter twice. It looks like Jessica has a small crush on someone. Awesome chapter and I hope that you'll update again soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for telling me! I\'ve fixed it now! Thanks again!
Date: 01/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Enter: Kaminari Hiyori
I'm glad that you were able to get on. Hope you'll update this story soon. For some rason, my internet connection was acting up and it's still acting up.
Author's Response: I will update it soon. That stinks. Thanks for the review!
Date: 24/06/08 Title: Chapter 5: A Dangerous Mission: Hiyori's Horror
Awesome chapter. I hope that Kaminari feels better soon.
Author's Response: Me thinks she will. :] Thanks for the review!
Date: 24/06/08 Title: Chapter 6: Swordsman vs. Sharingan
Zabuzza has made his appearance. That means Haku will appear in the story soon. Update soon.
Author's Response: Ya know it! ^_~ Thanks again for the reviews!
Date: 11/07/08 Title: Chapter 17: Catching up on the Times
Awesome chapter. I'm glad that you're using my character. Can't wait until you update soon.
Author's Response: You knew before anyone else that Jessica would be there, silly! :P Thanks for the reveiw!
Date: 03/05/09 Title: Chapter 47: Gathered Here Today
I can't wait for the sequel either. I see you took some of my stuff from my other story for the sequel but it's alright. Keep up the good work for the sequel.
Author's Response: Back in the day when you gave me Jessica\'s information you included this. :3 Surprised I remembered? I will try my best with the sequel and I\'ve been concidering your idea more and more. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 07/07/08 Title: Chapter 14: The Fallen Hiyori
Awesome chapter. I'm glad that they are alright. It's the apocalypse! Run to the bomb shelter quick! Update soon.
Author's Response: NO! The bomb shelter is no good! Quickly! To the INTERNET!! xD Thanks for the review!
Date: 19/01/09 Title: Chapter 43: Shino vs. Shikamaru vs. Kaminari
I'm glad that you updated. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to see the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: 28/07/08 Title: Chapter 24: Cherry Blossom Petals in a Thunderstorm
Awesome chapter. I can't believe that you ended it there. I hope that they're alright. I can't wait for the next update. Hope to hear from you soon tomorrow.
Author's Response: \"Cliff Hanger! Hanging from a cliff! And that\'s why he\'s called Cliff Hanger!\" xD I\'m such a nerd. Thanks for the review!
Date: 18/04/09 Title: Chapter 46: Sakura’s Tears, and Kaminari’s Downward Spiral
You had better not have killed yourself. I actually have an idea on how you can come back. You could be brought back to the village and Jessica has a jutsu she can use but it takes a lot of chakra to use it. It's called Heaven's Ressurection Jutsu and using that jutsu causes the angel's wings to come out of her body but she can bring anyone back to life.
Author's Response: lol, please don\'t kill me. ^_^\' (no pun intended) I\'ve actually have a way for Kaminari to come back to life and the last chapter has already been written! But this requires the sequal to be made. Heaven\'s Rssurection Jutsu sounds awesome, but I don\'t think I\'m going to use it. I am however going to (kinda) use a move of yours from your Yu Yu Hakusho fic. Which move? You\'ll just have to wait and find out! ^_~
Date: 08/07/08 Title: Chapter 15: We're Back!
I know who she likes. I'm not saying because the people who leave the reviews will see it. Awesome chapter by the way. I'm glad that you're putting Naruto and Hinata together. They make such a cute couple. Update soon.
Author's Response: I know you, you know! xP Thanks for keeping the mystery a mystery! xD Yesh! NaruHina forever! Cx
Date: 17/08/08 Title: Chapter 27: Jessica’s Angel and Kaminari’s Unmastered Jutsu
Awesome chapter. I can't believe it. The battle was so close. Can't wait for the next chapter. Hope you'll update soon.
Author's Response: Yesh it was, it was like...a nanosecond victory! xP lol thanks for reveiwing!!
Date: 02/08/08 Title: Chapter 24: Cherry Blossom Petals in a Thunderstorm
Where are you? Are you going to get on yahoo so we can finish the chapter?
Author's Response: lol Our chapter is awesome! xD
Date: 07/12/08 Title: Chapter 37: Dance of the Thunder in the Mist
Good chapter. I can't wait for the next one. Good luck on writing it.
Author's Response: Thanks, I will need a good helping of luck to pull off the next couple of chapters the way I\'ve planned them! ^_^\'