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Chapters: 25418
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Penname: Patsuki21 [Contact]
Real name: Patrick
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Member since: 19/12/07
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Reviews by Patsuki21


Title: Nothing We Can Do by Priest
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 7]
Summary: When a mission goes horribly wrong, Kakashi forces Sakura, Sasuke and

Naruto to pick up the pieces of their lives and move on.
Category: General Fiction > Naruto
Characters: Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 393 | Read count: 2493 [Report This]
Published: 06/06/04 | Updated: 06/06/04


Reviewer: Patsuki21 Signed Liked
Date: 16/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

its just a sugestion because sakura would probally the one to complain more because she really hasn't exspierienced anything bad



Reviewer: Patsuki21 Signed Liked
Date: 13/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

i really want u to continue maube sakura could bitch slapped if she whines too much

Author's Response: It\'s been a long damn time since I wrote anything for this story. Honestly, I\'d forgotten I\'d written it. If I ever do go back to it, you may not enjoy it if you don\'t like Sakura (as I\'m assuming from your comment) because I do.



Title: A Motion Too Far by TokehGecko
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Dark Naruto AU fanfic. Begins years ago from now, where settings were just being played. Zabuza and Haku?.. Naruto? Kimimaro? Itachi? - Main Chars. Enjoy!
Category: General Fiction > Post-Naruto
Characters: All
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 | Completed: No | Word count: 50408 | Read count: 14515 [Report This]
Published: 19/04/05 | Updated: 11/02/07


Reviewer: Patsuki21 Signed Liked
Date: 31/01/08 Title: Chapter 11: Recruiting, Part II

wow i have read a lot of stories where naruto goes to diffrent village ,but i really love your continue



Title: Shinobi Extraordinaire by Sankekur The Terrible
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Naruto the Kyuubi's vessel ran away six years ago, unable to withstand the hatred of the villagers. Now, Naruto is called back by the Third Hokage. What will happen to our young hero?
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 6715 | Read count: 1531 [Report This]
Published: 28/11/05 | Updated: 28/11/05


Reviewer: Patsuki21 Signed Liked
Date: 22/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Return Of The Exile

pretty cool plz write more



Title: Legend by Uozumi
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 5]
Summary: It was really like a fairytale, wasn’t it? Just like the Brothers’ Grimm in which someone was undeniably going to get mangled by an animal…Temari/Naruto. NOT a lemon.
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 5403 | Read count: 2548 [Report This]
Published: 11/01/06 | Updated: 26/01/06


Reviewer: Patsuki21 Signed Liked
Date: 02/02/08 Title: Chapter 2: You

plzz continue ive been looking for a naru/temari fic so plz wrtie more



Title: The Fox and The Phoenix by kiki15
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Naruto's six years old, his caretaker, Iruka, was killed by bandits, and he was left orphaned. Well, until a mysterious wanderer appeared...Rated higher now for blood and abuse in some chappies. ;)
(Currently being revised)
Category: General Fiction > Naruto
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Dark, Drama, Tragedy
Warnings: Dark, Death, Rape
Challenge: None
Series: Mother And Child
Chapters: 22 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 71659 | Read count: 36753 [Report This]
Published: 25/03/06 | Updated: 30/03/07


Reviewer: Patsuki21 Signed Liked
Date: 12/02/08 Title: Chapter 19: Training

gotta agree with 16 on this one that was sick 0_o
but good story



Title: Konoha's Yellow Flash really hates paperwork by Sir Chris
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 2]
Summary: This is the tale of Konoha's greatest ninja after his death. Nothing but humor awaits beyond the walls of his life, and worst of all... a mountain of paperwork lies ahead. Poor Yondaime Hokage.
Category: General Fiction > Pre-Series, General Fiction > Character-Centric
Characters: Minato Namikaze (Yondaime Hokage)
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 6462 | Read count: 2387 [Report This]
Published: 07/06/06 | Updated: 24/06/06


Reviewer: Patsuki21 Signed Liked
Date: 03/01/08 Title: Chapter 2: Some people never learn.

HILARRIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
plz write more



Title: One Last Chance by xtsubasax
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 2]
Summary: A strong, mysterious force has taken a very different Naruto and has merged him with his past self. Before it all happened, before he lost everything. But does he want to change the past and save the future. Maybe not...
Category: General Fiction > Naruto
Characters: Team Rookie Nine
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 906 | Read count: 1804 [Report This]
Published: 16/06/06 | Updated: 16/06/06


Reviewer: Patsuki21 Signed Liked
Date: 25/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Light

cool keep going try to have naruto explain his answer



Title: Restoration of Faith by karrafear
Rated: U Round robin Liked [Reviews - 19]
Summary: SEQUAL to Faith in Humanity Naruto OOC. After Sandaime's death, Naruto made a promise to himself to defy his own destiny and pursue a future that will lead to freedom and happiness.
Category: General Fiction
Characters: Shino Aburame, Chouji Akimichi, Gaara, Sakura Haruno, Hinata Hyuuga, Neji Hyuuga, Kiba Inuzuka, Shikamaru Nara, Orochimaru, Rock Lee, Temari, Tenten, Tsunade, Itachi Uchiha, Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki, Ino Yamanaka
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, General, Supernatural
Warnings: AU, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: Faith Chronicles
Chapters: 35 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 387901 | Read count: 69400 [Report This]
Published: 18/07/06 | Updated: 24/12/07


Reviewer: Patsuki21 Signed Liked
Date: 30/12/07 Title: Chapter 11: War I

you know whats funny every time you talk about those fox summons i think you are talking about pokemon

ps great stories



Title: Even When Tried By the Neverending Dream by baldragnarok16
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 2]
Summary: The clouds are unchanging, emotionless, and do not favor one over another. They are our dreams for the future, our ambitons of the present, and the memoris of our past. We only wish to accomplish that neverending dream kept deep inside our hearts and disprove those who thought we were wrong, weak, or helpless. That is my purpose in life, and I hope to fulfill it. NaruxTen
Category:
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 | Completed: No | Word count: 49052 | Read count: 15242 [Report This]
Published: 26/07/06 | Updated: 01/03/07


Reviewer: Patsuki21 Signed Liked
Date: 23/01/08 Title: Chapter 16: The Hidden Talents of Masquerading Children

i have got to say this byfar is the best story i have ever read



Title: (I was bored...)Ironic what strange thinks can happen. by naruto_newbie
Rated: 12/12A Liked [Reviews - 13]
Summary: I was writting this because i was bored during the summer, but nows it's the school year, so...



summary: Naruto was taken by the Akatsuki, but was saved by a powerful someone, that Kyuubi knows. Naruto's friends become worried, and will travel uncharted water/land to find their favorite blonde. Naruto is given training, and is called Kyuubi's son, on more than a few incidents. What is going to happen?


warnings, there is some language.
Category: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: No | Word count: 8733 | Read count: 6173 [Report This]
Published: 04/08/06 | Updated: 14/06/07


Reviewer: Patsuki21 Signed Liked
Date: 05/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i think it's very funny



Title: All for One by Vesvius
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Naruto might be hated by the villagers, but he has been accepted by a much more important group in Konoha: The thirteen primary clans of the ninja. Not only that, he's been adopted by them. Meet Naruto, heir of the fourteen clans! Parings: NarutoHarem.
Category:
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: No | Word count: 18273 | Read count: 8732 [Report This]
Published: 12/08/06 | Updated: 28/01/07


Reviewer: Patsuki21 Signed Liked
Date: 12/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Adoption

or have a part when hes in the academy and some bullies attack him but the kids from the other clans stop them



Reviewer: Patsuki21 Signed Liked
Date: 12/01/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

i think u flash forward to the part where they start choosing teams that should make for a good argue ment



Title: Why You? by Vesvius
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 3]
Summary: A challenge I decided to take up. The results of the Valley of the End drive Naruto to insanity, and one Yamanka Ino has to pick up the peices.
Category: Orphan
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 4919 | Read count: 1369 [Report This]
Published: 26/08/06 | Updated: 26/08/06


Reviewer: Patsuki21 Signed Liked
Date: 12/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great story i hope u write more



Title: Back by broken0dream
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Orochimaru tried bringing Yondaime back to life, just to see if he
could just in case he himself died. He needed someone powerful
enough, so he tried resurrecting Yondaime. It didn't work completely,
as it twisted his thoughts and memories, bringing him to be leader of
Akatsuki. And he wants Naruto, as the Kyuubi Jinchuriki, alive,
because he remembers that he's his son. Obito didn't die, but
suffered mental damage- amnesia- and the first person he saw was an
Akatsuki member. Deidara, as he was leaving his village.

Slught spoilers for Kakashi Gaiden
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 291 | Read count: 1413 [Report This]
Published: 31/10/06 | Updated: 31/10/06


Reviewer: Patsuki21 Signed Liked
Date: 21/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Back?

plzz write more i know this one was just to introduce us to the story but write more



Title: Shuffled by Karg
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Iruka, on a caffeine deprived night, messes up the Genin teams. Welcome to an AR where Naruto is still and idiot, Sasuke is still an emo with no friends, and everyone else is still messed up in their own special way. WARNING: Reading may cause massive brain damage, brain hemorrhaging, and in some severe situations, complete failure of the brain. Read at your own risk.

On another note, do ARs count as AUs?
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 | Completed: No | Word count: 17651 | Read count: 8373 [Report This]
Published: 31/10/06 | Updated: 10/02/07


Reviewer: Patsuki21 Signed Liked
Date: 21/01/08 Title: Chapter 7: An ally found

great story i like the new teams



Title: Feral Instinct by Oni_Chan
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 11]
Summary: What if Iruka died during the Kyuubi's attack on Konoha? How would this change Naruto's upbringing and future? Lets just say Gaara has more reasons to relate to this blonde than ever before.
Category:
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: No | Word count: 5016 | Read count: 10471 [Report This]
Published: 14/11/06 | Updated: 24/03/07


Reviewer: Patsuki21 Signed Liked
Date: 29/02/08 Title: Chapter 5: Greetings

really cool story



Title: Naruto - A Different Story by RaveaAnn
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 4]
Summary: At 3 he ran away from Konoha and ran into her. Now he’s 12 and they’re being forced to return to the village they hate.
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: No | Word count: 9040 | Read count: 5303 [Report This]
Published: 25/11/06 | Updated: 29/11/06


Reviewer: Patsuki21 Signed Liked
Date: 10/02/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five: The Boy Who Could Control Ice

i like this story its kinda happy with dark thrown in



Title: Naruto of the Mirage by Nightblade888
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 20]
Summary: When Naruto finds the body of Uchiha Shisui and is attacked by Itachi, how will his life change? Finding his family and discovering his bloodline, what other changes await?
Category: General Fiction
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 | Completed: No | Word count: 144901 | Read count: 35532 [Report This]
Published: 05/12/06 | Updated: 13/01/08


Reviewer: Patsuki21 Signed Liked
Date: 13/01/08 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

wow that first part gave me a headache



Reviewer: Patsuki21 Signed
Date: 01/01/08 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

hehehe neji got logged if you dont get this joke check out naruto abriged on youtube


ps plz write more



Reviewer: Patsuki21 Signed Liked
Date: 20/12/07 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

[lease right more you really put a lot of thought in your stories



Reviewer: Patsuki21 Signed Liked
Date: 27/12/07 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

another well thought up chapter



Title: True Hyuuga Genius by Nightblade888
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 10]
Summary: To stop the Kyuubi, the Yondaime is forced to split apart a pair of twins...Hyuuga twins, and not just any Hyuuga, Hinata and her twin brother. Semisuper powered Naruto.
Category: General Fiction
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 | Completed: No | Word count: 41336 | Read count: 21838 [Report This]
Published: 05/12/06 | Updated: 24/05/08


Reviewer: Patsuki21 Signed Liked
Date: 03/01/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Incrediblle story plllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaasse write more



Title: Blood-Stained Kubikiri by KageNaruto
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Naruto Uzumaki, with the will and strength of Haku and Zabuza, lives his life to fullfill his destiny, and take on the challenges that he will have to face. Darker Naruto, and expect major plot twists! Vote for pairing.

Category: General Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 | Completed: No | Word count: 34815 | Read count: 4242 [Report This]
Published: 17/12/06 | Updated: 05/02/07


Reviewer: Patsuki21 Signed Liked
Date: 21/02/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

plzz continue i like naruto's new style of jutsus



Title: naruto the human seal by bloodlust
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 5]
Summary: naruto has 9 deamons instead of 1!
Category: General Fiction, OC-centric
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 546 | Read count: 1354 [Report This]
Published: 09/01/07 | Updated: 09/01/07


Reviewer: Patsuki21 Signed Liked
Date: 12/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this seem to be intresting im waiting to see what powers he will have