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Penname: Frosty [Contact]
Real name: Ember Montana
Membership status: Member
Member since: 30/11/07
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I'M BACK. I'm back I'm back I'm back. We'll see if I still have any followers~

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Title: X-mas Songs, Naruto-style! by ladygizarme
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 18]
Summary: A series of X-mas song parodies featuring the Naruto boys. Some songs may involve shounen-ai/yaoi and/or violence. #6-11: new for X-mas 2007
Category: General Fiction, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance
Characters: None
Genres: Parody
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 | Completed: No | Word count: 3961 | Read count: 25929 [Report This]
Published: 14/07/06 | Updated: 18/07/09


Reviewer: Frosty Signed
Date: 25/12/08 Title: Chapter 11: Have Yourself a SasuNaru Christmas

If you don't mind (and if I can get the recording equipment) I might just sing these for you to pure instramentals of the songs... Make a Naruto christmas CD for all my yaoi-lovin' Narutardy friends to enjoy. Haven't read all of 'em, but if you didn't write it, I'll make 'Shinobi Night' too...

Author's Response: That would be AWESOME. Did you go ahead and make it? If so, I\'d love to hear it if you are able to upload it somewhere. *_*



Title: Zoo trip by MAR
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Zoo time fun with SasuNaru
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 3296 | Read count: 1700 [Report This]
Published: 25/08/06 | Updated: 25/08/06


Reviewer: Frosty Signed
Date: 24/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Zoo trip

Oh. My. God. I was laughing my f***in' head off at times here! The ending was shakey, but other than that... I really liked it! Funny... heh... Sakura stopped Sasuke's nosebleed... heh... Sorry, randomish comment there... but true!



Title: Back by broken0dream
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Orochimaru tried bringing Yondaime back to life, just to see if he
could just in case he himself died. He needed someone powerful
enough, so he tried resurrecting Yondaime. It didn't work completely,
as it twisted his thoughts and memories, bringing him to be leader of
Akatsuki. And he wants Naruto, as the Kyuubi Jinchuriki, alive,
because he remembers that he's his son. Obito didn't die, but
suffered mental damage- amnesia- and the first person he saw was an
Akatsuki member. Deidara, as he was leaving his village.

Slught spoilers for Kakashi Gaiden
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 291 | Read count: 1405 [Report This]
Published: 31/10/06 | Updated: 31/10/06


Reviewer: Frosty Signed
Date: 31/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Back?

TBC... what do you mean? If you really meant this we'd have a new chapter by now. UPDATE!

Other than that complaint... not half bad. A bit confusing, but...



Title: Atkasuki...TRUTH OR DARE!! episode 9? 10? i don't know... by Xrayer
Rated: [Reviews - 1]
Summary: neko youkai's turn....
Category: General Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 251 | Read count: 1403 [Report This]
Published: 21/01/07 | Updated: 21/01/07


Reviewer: Frosty Signed
Date: 05/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: doggy no jutsu!

LOL! Dude, I loved this! It's absolutely freaking halaerious! Oh... and I dare Kakashi to take of his masks - all of them, because you know there's more than one on him - and leave them off for an inter three episodes. Also... I dare poor, innocent little Naruto to read five Icha Icha books... or act out a scene from one. His choice.



Title: Imperfect Portraits by SilverFoxGirl
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 10]
Summary: DeidaraxHinata serious. An outcast Hyuuga tries

desperately to become stronger. A bored missing-nin is undercover as a

painter. Sometimes only an artist can see the true beauty hidden in the

portrait.


Category: General Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 | Completed: No | Word count: 8774 | Read count: 7274 [Report This]
Published: 10/02/07 | Updated: 26/01/09


Reviewer: Frosty Signed
Date: 27/01/09 Title: Chapter 4: Loyalty and Ambition

Just read this through... I find it wonderful, and cannot wait for more!



Title: The Naruto Abridged Shakespeare company by Twilight of the mist
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 2]
Summary: a parody of the reduced shakespeare company
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 1168 | Read count: 3706 [Report This]
Published: 28/03/07 | Updated: 02/04/07


Reviewer: Frosty Signed
Date: 05/02/08 Title: Chapter 3: Act one Scene one part 2

HA! Oh, my gods. I love you for doing this, expecially for mentioning The Reduced Shaksepear Company
(It's about two I-talian kids who kill themselves). I don't know how you'd fit it in, but if you could put the 'thing' from that in here I would love you forever. (I think you know what I'm talking about, the 'I don't really know how to describe that' 'It's indiscribably, really' thing...)
Anywho, this is great. I esp like the things like 'I will now monologue for no reason about a girl I will never get' And Kakashi's 'No. Now shut up, your boring the audience' and, of course the (Sasgay)'s that are in there. Fun, please continue with it!



Title: Akatsuki go to Holiday World by ShadesofDeath
Rated: 12/12A Liked [Reviews - 12]
Summary: The Akatsuki and my OC Kymera go to holiday world and find out Sasori is a bad driver. What Tobi's face really looks like.
Category: MadFic > Script Fic
Characters: Deidara, Hidan, Itachi Uchiha, Kisame Hoshigaki, Naruto Uzumaki, Orochimaru, Sasori, Tobi
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: Akatsuki Randomness^^
Chapters: 13 | Completed: No | Word count: 3436 | Read count: 20255 [Report This]
Published: 19/04/07 | Updated: 24/05/08


Reviewer: Frosty Signed
Date: 02/03/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

It's spelled Kakuzu, just so you know...
Other than that... this makes me laugh!

Author's Response: I know thanks I wrote this a long time ago and I never went back and changed the names, but thank you^^



Title: Fun with the Naruto Gang!!!!! by BlondeHairBrat
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 12]
Summary: okay so my friend Sweet_Sacrifice made this thing and you can send letters to the akatsuki so I'ma give this a shot ^^;
Category: General Fiction
Characters: Shino Aburame, Chouji Akimichi, Deidara, Gaara, Haku, Sakura Haruno, Kakashi Hatake, Hidan, Kisame Hoshigaki, Hinata Hyuuga, Neji Hyuuga, Kiba Inuzuka, Jiraiya, Konohamaru Sarutobi, Maito Gai, Anko Mitarashi, Zabuza, Shikamaru Nara, Orochimaru, Rin, Rock Lee, Sai
Genres: General
Warnings: AU
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 357 | Read count: 2676 [Report This]
Published: 22/06/07 | Updated: 22/06/07


Reviewer: Frosty Signed
Date: 31/01/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Answers!!

Hmm... Lets see here...

Deidara,
What gave you the idea to get mouths on your hands. Or were you just born that way? You must've had a helluca time teething if that was the case...

Sasuke,
... No offense, but I think your over-rated. Maybe if you actually showed some honest emotion sometime (and stopped being a power-hungry freak) I'd be more inclined to see you as a person. And whats with the hair-style? It looks like a ducks-butt! Good luck with revivng your clan and all that...

Tobi,
You ARE a good boy!

Gaara*,
... You need a hug... and a cookie... Here. *gives Gaara fresh made chocolate chip cookie and hugs*

Haku,
Boy or girl? Or both? Which is it?

*Note, this is Shippuden Gaara I'm talking to. I'm not stupid enough to hug 'proving my existance by killing' Gaara. I'd hug kid Gaara, but then I'd screw up the show...



Title: We Apologize to the Fans by Archaic Aphorism
Rated: 12/12A Liked [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

"We apologize to the fans, but there are some things we must clear up..."


The characters have some fan-made rumors to disband.

My first (posted) crack!fic, though it's not nearly as crackish as some fics are...


Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Neji and Tenten
Characters: Neji Hyuuga, Kiba Inuzuka
Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 3319 | Read count: 4210 [Report This]
Published: 24/07/07 | Updated: 03/08/07


Reviewer: Frosty Signed
Date: 23/03/08 Title: Chapter 2: Inuzuka Kiba's "To the Fans"

(Really liked this. Super funny. When are you going to do Gaara? I can't wait to write a response to HIM, though he'll probably kill me. That's the best thing to do with fangirls, after all... Anywho, same as with my reveiw for Neji, I return with a letter for Kiba. Warning: Sela - roleplay character of mine, who should be with Naru-chan, no matter what SHE says about it - will be writing this response, and she's a bit of a Kiba fangirl. She's also a bit of a slut, so, yeah. Heads up.)

Hiyaz, Kiba!
The name's Sela, and I just have to say, I'm offended! By looking at the ideas of my fellow fangirls you decide you don't want to be with ME? Not all of us are like THAT you know! Some of us our sane! Like, even though Shino is totaly gay for you, you shouldn't go for him. Pick a nice girl. Like me. Please, please pick me. Also - watch out, I think he gives you fleas so he can secretly watch you bathe... Not that I blame him... I admit that I thought you hated cats. Sorry for the steriotyping... *giggle* You SHOULD get a tan. It'd be SO hawt! Hotter than you alread are, if thats possible... *sigh*
*stares at Kiba*
... anyway... back on topic! You shouldn't write us ALL off. Really. Give us a chance! Start with me. Please, oh please, start with me! I'd make a great girlfreind! I swear! I even bake dog biscuts (edible for humans too!) that Akamaru might like!
I'll wait for you forever!
Sela.

(Damn. She creeps me out sometimes, and I created her...

This was great!)



Reviewer: Frosty Signed
Date: 22/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Hyuuga Neji's "To the fans"

Wow. You really did capture Neji's essence here! Or am I talking to Neji in this reveiw? If I am...

Gashi, Hyuuga Neji!
My name is... not for you to know. You probably don't care anyway! Anywho, if you need something to call me by, call me Frosty. Three minutes to do your hair? Really? Mine's half your length, and it takes five for me. But then again, I can get nearly anything tangled. How the hell do you keep it from getting aweful on missions? This would be useful for capture the flag, as, for me, 'sneak across the border' means 'get into the air and throw yourself from branch to branch till you reach the flage because the rest of your class is afraid of hights.' Your hair gets VERY tangled when you do this. And falling hurts. Bad. And usually cuases people to break things. But that's besides the point...
On to the next issue! Shipping! Yes, poor Tenten was given no personality. Poor dear. I should write her one someday... You and Lee makes me feel queasy, but there's another pairing with you in it that ACCTUALLY manages to make me sick. It's Neji-Kisame. I've seen it before - by accident - and let me tell you, I didn't think I'd EVER get the taste of vomit from my mouth... Is there anyone you DO like/wouldn't mind being paired with?
Lastly... Yes. It WOULD be hard to stuff a metal pole up your arse. It'd be funy to see someone try to walk after having it done to them, though... People wouldn't be so 'Neji is destiny/fate man' if you didn't say it quite so much.
I don't want to wear your shoes. I'm sure they'd be to big, for I have freakishly small feet. Plus, I bet they don't smell the best... and my freind would steal them (she's one of your fangirls), and you probably need your shoes...
Ja ne!
Frosty

(Good job! Loved it!)



Title: Crazy Stuff, Everyone yur welcome to add! by Red Ninja Vixen
Rated: 15 Round robin Liked [Reviews - 19]
Summary: a bunch of crazy stuff, add a new chapter and make it crazier!
Category: Orphan
Characters: Shino Aburame, Chouji Akimichi, Deidara, Haku, Sakura Haruno, Kakashi Hatake, Hidan, Kisame Hoshigaki, Hinata Hyuuga, Neji Hyuuga, Kiba Inuzuka, Jiraiya, Maito Gai, Zabuza, Orochimaru, Rock Lee, Sarutobi Hiruzen (Sandaime Hokage), Temari, Tobi, Itachi Uchiha
Genres: Angst, Drama, Fantasy, General, Graphic lemon, Horror, Humor, Mystery, Parody, Poetry, Romance, Sci-Fi, Spiritual, Tragedy
Warnings: AU, Dark, Death, OOC, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 | Completed: No | Word count: 5843 | Read count: 34810 [Report This]
Published: 05/08/07 | Updated: 29/02/08


Reviewer: Frosty Signed
Date: 01/03/08 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Now I have to write up YOUR wedding too! YAYZ! Congratz! *hugs and starts crying happily* Are you gonna have kids? If so you should go to Puerto Rico! Oh, and you're not allowed to put mask on them if they look like Kakashi, allright?

*realizes something* Oh noes! What's Itachi going to do now? Is Kakashi still going to pay child support?



Title: SasuNaru vs. SasuSaku by emogirlS2
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 30]
Summary: Let's see which couple is better!
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 286 | Read count: 9251 [Report This]
Published: 04/10/07 | Updated: 25/02/08


Reviewer: Frosty Signed
Date: 25/02/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Damn straight SasuNaru won! SasuNaru kicks arse and then some! No offense to SasuSaku, but... No! Sasuke belongs with Hinata or good and dead! And besides, Sakura is SO much better off with Kakashi. I don't care if he's older! They rock togeather!

Thanks for lettin' me rant,
Frosty

Author's Response: Lol. No problem. I like to read long rant reviews.



Title: Taming of the Shrew with the Naruto Crew! by TemariSandyFan
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Sensio (Kiba) whishes to marry Bianca Baptista (Hinata), but cannot until Bianca's older sister, Katarina (Sakura) marries. Katarina is a very difficult person, so Sensio convinces Petruchio (Sasuke) to marry Katarina. What will happen? Find out! AU, OOC, SasuSaku, KibaHina, written in script form. ON PERMANENT HAITUS DUE TO FEAR OF COPYRIGHTS
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Kiba and Hinata, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Sasuke and Sakura
Characters: Shino Aburame, Chouji Akimichi, Sakura Haruno, Hinata Hyuuga, Neji Hyuuga, Kiba Inuzuka, Shikamaru Nara, Rock Lee, Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki, Ino Yamanaka
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: AU, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 2118 | Read count: 5945 [Report This]
Published: 06/10/07 | Updated: 03/03/08


Reviewer: Frosty Signed
Date: 03/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Act 1

Awws. Why perm. hiatus? WHY?!?! Noes! If you say you don't own the play or Naruto you should be good! Aww, wells, I can continue it in my mind...



Title: Full Metal Death by Rock Lee Sun Dancer
Rated: 18 Round robin [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Short story will be continued.... Ed and Al are visiting a small town by the name of Durredox. They meet a man who wishes to kill them, Ed ends up being the one who 'dies'....(I ain't gonna ruin the rest of the story!)
Category: Non-Naruto Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Death, OOC, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 2213 | Read count: 1166 [Report This]
Published: 13/11/07 | Updated: 04/02/08


Reviewer: Frosty Signed
Date: 23/03/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ah. So THATS how he was able to fall unconsious. Normally that wouldn't fly and I'd call you out on it, but this makes it fit! Not a bad start. Not sure on my dedication-level to this fic, I could still take it or leave it. I'll wait a few more chapters before I decide.

It's interesting, thats for sure.

Al was a bit out of character with that insult... Thats more along the lines of what Ed would do. Al's to damned nice!



Title: Incoming by Uchiha_Kima
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 17]
Summary: Ava Woods, your typical 15-year-old girl, drops into a place she'd never expected to be: the Naruto-verse!

Okay, I suck at summaries, but it's definitely worth a shot.

Large chance of OOC and le bad lingo ahead.

Ohmigosh! More than 500 reads?! I LOVE YOU PEOPLE!! X3
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers, OC-centric
Characters: Anko Mitarashi, Maito Gai, Hinata Hyuuga, Ino Yamanaka, Iruka Umino, Jiraiya, Kakashi Hatake, Kiba Inuzuka, Kurenai Yuuhi, Rock Lee, Naruto Uzumaki, Neji Hyuuga, Sai, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha, Shikamaru Nara, Shino Aburame, Tenten
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Warnings: OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 | Completed: No | Word count: 22258 | Read count: 15900 [Report This]
Published: 15/12/07 | Updated: 09/05/08


Reviewer: Frosty Signed
Date: 04/02/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

YAYZ! Though I wan't to kill you for not putting up the next chapter. I NEED IT! Badly. Please, Kima, please! This is (as I've told you a bazillion times) great. Just great. I love it!
Frosty

Author's Response: Well, post up that wedding and I WILL post! It\'s almost ready and everything, but you\'re still behind! GET WRITING WOMAN!!



Reviewer: Frosty Signed
Date: 27/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, Keems. I'm really loving this! Hurry up and write more of it! I did find a grammer problem, but it looked like more of a typo than anything else...



Title: Why Do You Like It? by doodlelover
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Naruto and Sauke discuss stuff about their favorite foods and why they like them so much.

My attempt at some humor. One shot.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 810 | Read count: 1489 [Report This]
Published: 17/12/07 | Updated: 17/12/07


Reviewer: Frosty Signed
Date: 10/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Food?

Wow. Sasuke and I acctually agree on something... TOMATOS ARE FRUIT, DAMNIT! Sorry, that's been an argument in my home for about a year and a half. Along with the proper pronunciation of 'Thermopaylae'... Yet Naruto and I agree as well... tomatos are nasty. I hate 'em!

Good fic. Made me laugh. Naruto's 'doom' ... wow. He's gonna have a sore ass in the morning... Though I'm not sure it will stop him from throwing tomatos at Sasuke. In fact, he'll probably do it more often...

I liked. Short. Good. No criticizms here!



Title: Ice Cream by A Vampires Butterfly
Rated: 12/12A Liked [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Naruto takes Gaara to discover a new frozen treat.
Category: General Fiction, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Naruto and Gaara
Characters: Gaara, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: General
Warnings: Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1103 | Read count: 3053 [Report This]
Published: 28/12/07 | Updated: 28/12/07


Reviewer: Frosty Signed
Date: 17/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: No Blueberries Added

Ramen flavored icecream...

... isn't half bad. I've had it before. Kinda disorienting, though, tasting ramen with the coldness of ice-cream...

I liked. Not your best. Not your worst either. Enjoyable.



Title: Mishearing Host Club: An Azu/Ouran cross-over by Hope4love
Rated: U [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Two group of students who were from two completely different schools, planned on taking a trip to a local aquarium; not knowing that there lives will soon cross paths,but one things for sure. After today both groups will realize that IDIOTS are everywhere.
Category: Non-Naruto Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: Horror, WAFF
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 1179 | Read count: 1631 [Report This]
Published: 08/01/08 | Updated: 08/01/08


Reviewer: Frosty Signed
Date: 03/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: A start of a chaotic day!

"After all the times we've captured you in the past. You should at least expect us to show up unannounced three days a week."

She really should! Poor Haruhi. I like this. When will you update next? Hopefully soon!



Title: The Lachrymose Adventures of Itachi and You by PrincessCallisto
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 26]
Summary: Itachi x Reader Romance
Category: Orphan
Characters: Kisame Hoshigaki, Itachi Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 | Completed: No | Word count: 48117 | Read count: 20817 [Report This]
Published: 08/01/08 | Updated: 18/05/08


Reviewer: Frosty Signed
Date: 13/04/08 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Brevity is the Soul of Wit and the Length of Your Stay

Heh. You SO stole that from Hamlet! Only it's supposed to be Camel, Crab, Whale, I beleive... Of course, Wesal works with Itachi... And I might be getting the Crab mixed up with whole "You could be as young as I, if, like a crab, you could go backwards" line...



Reviewer: Frosty Signed
Date: 20/04/08 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Damn it Feels Good to be a Gansta! Part 2

You... or... um, I? oh well... chick in the story (name of 'You' for my purposes, as I couldn't like Itachi that way - He's my father for cryin' out loud!) Well, chick in the story said 'Fan-freaking-tastic' YAYZ! I love that word... Now she just needs to say 'Super Special Awesome' and it will be complete!

Good new chapter. Somehow had a feeling that subordinate would come up.



Reviewer: Frosty Signed
Date: 19/04/08 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Damn it Feels Good to be a Gangsta! Part 1

Not acctually an Itachi fan, but readin' this anyway... It's not half bad. You sholud make either A) A Gaara one (I'd love you forever!) or B) A Sasori one (Um... I've already promised to love you forever if you made the Gaara one so... I'll follow all of your stories here and review on every chapter? Good reviews to, not just 'I liked it' or 'it stunk')



Title: Maybe by doodlelover
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 5]
Summary: But 'maybes' would get him nowhere. So instead of the things he should have done, he was left with maybes and memories. Nothing he did would change what had happened. But he could do something now. He could make sure he wouldn't make the same mistake.


Angsty. I needed something to wake me up a bit from my stress and depression, and it seems angst is the best way to do that.


Hope you enjoy.



Sasunaru
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1465 | Read count: 1215 [Report This]
Published: 13/01/08 | Updated: 13/01/08


Reviewer: Frosty Signed
Date: 10/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Regrets Get You Nowhere

... wow... depressing. REALLY depressing. I... well... I didn't like it. I did but I didn't, you know? Like with CRANK. It was so very aweful that I loved it, y'know? That's what it's like with this story: I hated it therefore I loved it, it was aweful so it was great. I'm glad to catch a break from all the fluff I've been reading, and this was just perfect. Really makes me depressed though...

Great work. Really glad I discovered your work, will probably read and follow all your stuff now...

Frosty



Title: Mistakes by Sakuras_Assian
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 2]
Summary: this is what happens when you live in the mid-west. My brother Ryan and I (Tara) find ourselfs in the naruto world. (I don't own naruto)
Category: OC-centric
Characters: Chouji Akimichi, Sakura Haruno, Kakashi Hatake, Neji Hyuuga, Jiraiya, Maito Gai, Shikamaru Nara, Asuma Sarutobi, Sasuke Uchiha, Iruka Umino, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 2191 | Read count: 2745 [Report This]
Published: 27/01/08 | Updated: 05/02/08


Reviewer: Frosty Signed
Date: 26/02/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Attacked

Heh. Tara, you are the female Miroku, only with a bit more restraint!

This is... okay. Not great, but it's deffinately good. You need to signify when people are thinking though. I receomend 'half quotes' or italics for this. It'll make it less confusing.
Good start.
Frosty.

Author's Response: thanks i\'ll remember that



Title: The Show of Complete Randomness! XD by shadowdragon
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 81]
Summary: Have you ever wanted to ask a Naruto character a question, or spill your heat out to them, or even give them a dare? If the answer to any of these questions is yes, then you have come to the right place! All of the characters are right here! (as explained in the first chapter, i talked Kakashi into bringing them all here. Even the dead ones which I have brought to life!) Remember to leave a request in the review box!
Category: MadFic > Interviews and Talk Shows
Characters: All
Genres: Humor
Warnings: OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 5994 | Read count: 12735 [Report This]
Published: 30/01/08 | Updated: 25/06/08


Reviewer: Frosty Signed
Date: 15/02/08 Title: Chapter 6: TTT.TTT sob, cry, and kittens

Ha! Awesomeness! I luvs you so much right now, Shadow! BUT I LOVE GAARA MORE! *hugs Gaara nearly to death* You, Me, Gaara, and Hidan should totally go on a dobble date! We could go on a killing/sacraficing/proving our existance rampage! WHEEE!

I want Steve to tap dance. Just cuz.

I also wanna see Dei-kun and Sasori sing 'Anything You Can Do' a la Annie Get Your Guns, and Dei-kun has to sing the girls part. If you need the lyrics I have them, I did a slightly modified version for an audition recently...

Luvs ya lots!
Frosty

Author's Response: time to givee steve tap dancing lessons!