Real name: PFC Joseph Mansur
Membership status: Member
Member since: 29/08/07
I am a fiction writer, as well as an uber anime geek, if you know of it, I've probably watched it. However, Naruto is by far my favorite, and my fav anime character of all time is Haruno Sakura. ^_^ I am looking forward to perhaps submitting some of my work to the site, if I can think of something that I deem worthy of your attention and time. I'm 19 years old, and I am a member of the US ARMY. I'm also an infantryman, for those of you that know what that means, and if you don't feel free to msg me and ask me what it means as I will not post it here. Anyway, I am currently stationed in Hawaii, on Schofield Barracks, and writing is what takes up most of the little free time that I have. I am currently working on a novel, which is not Naruto related, but if you are interested let me know. I love writing fanfics, mostly about Sakura(^_^ go figure), and I would be happy to do requests for certain characters and things like that. I'm always open to new ideas, and I love to write about most things, so if you have any feed back, or an idea that you wold like to see brought to life for whatever reason let me know also. Well, enough chatter from me...Enjoy the stories, and gie me lots of feedback XD Also, if you need anyone to do Beta, I'm your guy!!
Aight, heres an update. I know I havent published anything in a while, but that's because I'm currently deployed to iraq. I can't tell you where, as I am not authorized to do so at this time, but I will keep posting as often as I can, though I have even less free time now than i did before so don't expect too much ^^. Anyway, just thought I'd let you all know. I am also looking for new ideas for my novel currently, it's not Naruto related, but if you feel the desire to add in your two cents, then plz feel free to msg me, or email me anytime. Plus, I love email so email me when you can!
Rated: [Reviews - 10]
Chapters: 20 | Completed: No | Word count: 40719 | Read count: 10668 [Report This]
Published: 11/08/06 | Updated: 19/08/07
Date: 02/09/07 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Should Have Been a Simple Weekend
Finally finished. I have to say, very very very very very very cool! I love it, and I cant wait for the next chapter! So hurry, neh?(*wink**smile*) Just kidding! But seriously I want to read more! Anyway, as for "constructive criticism" I can only say this. Sometimes, I notice that your grammar is a bit messed, or you say things like "now that he was standing in the gound", or "Kakashi stopped and eyes his team" it should be something like, "now that he was standing on the ground", or "Kakshi stopped, eyeing his team" But I don't know if its jut a mistake or what, so don't hate me! I am not trying to flame. Just giving friendly advice from one writer to another. Well, I really enjoyed the story, and I look forward to more! Also, if you need any help with anything, have any stories you want me to read, or anything like that, I am always around so dont be a stranger!