Real name: Sparky
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Member since: 07/06/07
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My name is the Time Travelling Mechanic, and I'm an author in training. The Diary of Kiba is a story I am writing so that I may improve my literary skills before I commence my novel. Please post any criticism or problems you have with either my story or writing skills, as your feedback helps me. Cheers everyone.
About The Diary of Kiba - This is a FnaFic I created after reading some truly beautiful works on another site. The genre is KibaxHinata, which I always considered a likely pairing (as in likely to work), and I am just sick of NarutoxHinata. Too many people do it.
My Fan Fiction has a dark undertone as well as some death. That is just how I write. If you do not wish to read of the angst and depression one deals with after having friends die, you should probably find another FanFic. That said, I have been told by nigh all my reviewers that my writing is very well done, and they can feel the dep set emotions of the characters, both the highs of love and the lows of loss.
DISCLAIMER - I do not own Naruto, nor any of the main characters. I do however own my Original Characters. Apart from them, I make no claim of ownership of the series, it's characters or places.
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 58]
Next story in my Families Of Konoha (Of Love And Life) Series!
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: The Families of Konoha (formally of love and life...)
Chapters: 24 | Completed: No | Word count: 40734 | Read count: 35420 [Report This]
Published: 20/05/07 | Updated: 02/04/09
Date: 21/08/07 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty Part One: I Won't Let You Down.
Whoa. This is going to be epic, I can feel it!
Firstly, good job with the fic. I never cease to be enthralled with your work :)
Secondly, I am truly sorry it has taken me so long to read your work again, but I have had a lot of things going on in my life these days, and most leisure time is taken with my own fic (thanks for following, while we're on the topic).
The only reason I have been able to catch up is because I can't do anything else today. I got into a fistfight with three of my friends last night and I'm just living the pain off :)
But don't worry, I will endeavour to make time to read your work, as you are probably my favourite author on this site, and maybe on any site I have visited. Again, good work :)
Author's Response: thanks a lot TTM, it does mean so much that you like my work! i haven\'t been able to update for a while, i\'ve been horribly busy. fistfight? =S hope you\'re alright?
Date: 27/08/07 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty Part One: I Won't Let You Down.
Yeah, I'm fine :)
Good to see you back on, I thought for a second that you'd disappeared into obscurity without a by-your-leave. Glad to see that isn't the case. I hope you'll keep on writing, as you have a truly wonderful mind and you express it well in your work.
Author's Response: thanks. i never know how to react to compliments, i\'m famously bad at accepting them. I will try to get the next part of the chapter up soon, i just have a lot going on in my life (boys, work, money). it all seems to be coming at once!!! but hopefully, i\'ll get more than a few minutes on the computer next time, and be able to update. =D
Date: 30/07/07 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen: Discoveries.
Sorry to double up on reviews, but I forgot something *blushes and scratches back of head apologetically*
I really like your character Izanami-chan! Very fresh if I do say so...
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-- milliexchan : Thanks! I was thinking about what would come up in the next chapter, and she just sort of strolled into my mind and became Izanami-chan! Don\'t worry about doubling reveiews, it always makes me happy to get them *grin*
Date: 30/07/07 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen: Discoveries.
I've been meaning to catch up for a while, but I'm currently at my brother's house down the coast.
Very good work... not trying to sound like a sadistic person but I like your portrayal of how everything has turned for the worse. Again I find myself enveloped in your writings, and I hope you don't stop soon :D
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-- milliexchan : Thanks so much. I\'m really looking forward to your next story! And I\'m not planning on stopping too soon, i feel bad for my own characters, just killing them off like this! Mostly my stories hav happy endings, so i think i\'ll try to keep it that way =D
Date: 10/07/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen: The Good Die Young
I just sat for two hours and read your entire series. Firstly, congratulations on a fine FanFic. I hope that when my own is finished it can be as good.
Secondly, you are a very talented writer. I hope you are considering writing a novel or the like.
Thirdly, I like how you have taken the characters and changed them while keeping them the same (so to speak) and added believable OCs. Also I like the way you are taking the story.
I consider it a privilege that you thought so highly of my own FanFic. Please continue on, writing your own, and I will follow it eagerly.
Very nice work. Please keep it up *Nice Guy pose*
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-- milliexchan : To get a review like that from someone so talented, really is an honour! I mean it, thankyou so much! I feel proud of my stuff now, with all these great reviews. I\'m definately going to be reading you fic, I think it\'s totally amazing. =D Again, thankyou for the review, it\'s so nice to read such positive things >.<
Date: 16/07/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen: The Capture, The Kiss and The Death…
Another well done chapter :)
Keep it up, I thoroughly enjoy your work. 10/10
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-- milliexchan : thankyou! I\'ve just this minute updated, so please read the new chapter too!!!
Rated: PG [Reviews - 9]
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Neji and Tenten
Characters: Neji Hyuuga, Tenten
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: Fate's Intricate Course
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 668 | Read count: 1633 [Report This]
Published: 01/07/07 | Updated: 01/07/07
Date: 11/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Well written letter. This actually sounds like Neji, and he's pouring out his soul.
I like what you've done here :)
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : Thanks. Things like this just pops into my head. I\'m really prone to writer\'s block, and posting one-shots like this is a good side effect. By the way, your Kiba\'s Diary thing is really good. Keep up the good work. Can\'t wait for the next chapter.
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 13]
Warning: Contains mild alcohol and smoking reference.
Category: General Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: Poetry, Tragedy
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 315 | Read count: 2758 [Report This]
Published: 15/07/07 | Updated: 02/12/07
Date: 15/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Toast Worthy of a Hero
My work inspired this? Wow. I'll take this as a compliment. Thank you.
The poem is quite deep, Myself, I could see Ino thinking this sadly after she returned home. Nice one! :)
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : Thanks, and your works did inspire this poem- because it\'s inspirational. My full compliments to you.
Date: 16/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Toast Worthy of a Hero
Okay, I linked my readers to this page and credited you. Again, nice work and thanks for letting me link it :D
Date: 16/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Toast Worthy of a Hero
Okay, I linked my readers to this page and credited you. Again, nice work and thanks for letting me link it :D
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : Your welcome. Keep up the good work on Kiba\'s Diary. I hope you get a lot of inspiration from everywhere for it.
Date: 15/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Toast Worthy of a Hero
Hey, I would like to link your poem to my deviantART account, which is where my master of The Diary of Kiba is kept. If you have an account please get me the name and upload the poem, if you would like. If you don't, and you want me to link it, I can directly link here. I await your reply.
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : Thanks. I don\'t have a deviantART account, but link it if you like (just remember to say I wrote it). My reply was delayed since I was reading The Leaf that Found Its Way (I forget the author\'s name).
Rated: U [Reviews - 62]
Category: General Fiction, Non-Naruto Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: General, Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Challenges: You Know You're A Narutard When...,
Challenge: You Know You're A Narutard When...,
Series: None
Chapters: 10 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 2968 | Read count: 15562 [Report This]
Published: 19/07/07 | Updated: 03/08/07
Date: 16/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Narutards
The Naruto Run made me laugh. I was waiting at Brisbane Airport, having two hours before boarding. To pass the time I started Ninja running around the empty terminals and across the horizontal escelators, attracting stares from transients and glares from security. Eventually I was asked to stop -__-'
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-- Lamerstu : LOL! I can\'t believe you actually did that in public! ^_^ Thanks for reading and reviewing! ~Tasi Lamerstu
Rated: U [Reviews - 10]
Category: Fan Ninja Bingo Book
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 | Completed: No | Word count: 1809 | Read count: 28935 [Report This]
Published: 26/07/07 | Updated: 21/08/07
Date: 19/09/07 Title: Chapter 12: demon sisters
Ohayo.
Good to see someone who can make good OCs :)
Anyway, saw your page on the recent updates. Saw your name and thought you may be interested in my own Fic. Kiba-centric, over 70 000 words.
Anyway, I'm adding you to my favourites and I'll check on your work when I get a day off (have to go to my job today, unfortunately)
Cheers!
Author's Response: Thanks, and I\'ll check out your fic since well my screen name says it all!
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 8]
I know sasuXhina isn't a popular pairing, but just give it a go? i think it actually works quite well =D
Originally intended as a one-shot, it got quite long, so I decided to make it into a story instead.
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Neji and Tenten, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Shikamaru and Temari
Characters: Hinata Hyuuga
Genres: Romance
Warnings: OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: No | Word count: 10730 | Read count: 9253 [Report This]
Published: 30/07/07 | Updated: 11/04/09
Date: 10/08/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two
Heh, this is a more fun little story.
...is it dispensed with, or is there more to come?
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-- milliexchan : there will be more...probably once i\'m finished with searching for home. i took on too many projects at once =S
Rated: 12/12A [Reviews - 5]
Can Ino make her mind up? Does she know how she feels about Shikamaru?
Read In The Shadows by SaB, Amongst Clouds by me and then Rain and Smoke by SaB to understand whats going on!
Category:
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: In Your Shadow/In Your Mind
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 397 | Read count: 1785 [Report This]
Published: 01/08/07 | Updated: 01/08/07
Date: 05/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: ...
This series is pretty good. Especially since I only read the materials of SaB and yourself on this site :)
Both of you have done a good job conveying the emotions here. I await the next installment.
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-- milliexchan : =D thankyou. it really means a lot that you enjoy my work. both SaB and I have worked really hard on this series, and i have to say it\'s nice to be appreciated! as soon as i get my brain into gear, i\'ll be writing the next part =D
Rated: 12/12A [Reviews - 8]
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Shikamaru and Temari
Characters: Shikamaru Nara, Temari
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: Song Fics!,
Challenge: Song Fics!,
Series: In Your Shadow/In Your Mind
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1930 | Read count: 1848 [Report This]
Published: 01/08/07 | Updated: 01/08/07
Date: 05/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Never the Right Time
Wow. Nicely written mate. I don't know the song but the words seem appropriate.
Good work.
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : Thanks. I\'m glad it all worked out in this. Check out the song, if you like.
Date: 05/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Never the Right Time
Wow. Nicely written mate. I don't know the song but the words seem appropriate.
Good work.
Rated: 12/12A [Reviews - 4]
Category:
Characters: Shikamaru Nara
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: In Your Shadow/In Your Mind
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 463 | Read count: 1434 [Report This]
Published: 03/08/07 | Updated: 03/08/07
Date: 05/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Lost and Confused
Cool series of letters mate, you and milliexchan are pretty much the only people I look at on this site, so this is pretty rokkin :)
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : Thanks. I\'m glad you enjoyed all this. I was worried that lots of my stuff were sub-par. Millie\'s still working on the next one, I guess, so check back later if you have time.
Rated: 12/12A [Reviews - 3]
Ino has had enough of waiting around. She's decided to make a decision, and take that final chance...
Category:
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: In Your Shadow/In Your Mind
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 308 | Read count: 1548 [Report This]
Published: 06/08/07 | Updated: 06/08/07
Date: 07/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Decisions
Ooohooo :)
This is getting interesting... I want to read more now :(
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-- milliexchan : well, i\'m starting off the next part a little later on, i hope. so stay tuned =D
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 11]
But what if she is already taken?
(Rated for slight language.)
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs
Characters: Gaara
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 13038 | Read count: 20223
[Report This]
Published: 08/08/07 | Updated: 19/09/07
Date: 10/09/07 Title: Chapter 11: Conscious Speaking!
Cool chapter, keep em coming ;)
Author's Response: Yes, I\'ll be putting one out today, I was just kinda stuck on one.
Date: 04/09/07 Title: Chapter 9: Hey Dei!
I see the story is progressing nicely.
I just wonder will Gaara decide to kill Dei anyway, seeing he got the okay from Sukai.
Keep it up! :D
Date: 19/09/07 Title: Chapter 15: The End
Wow. I didn't see that ending coming.
Bravo on the finish of a series. I'm sad that it's over but thanks for writing. I enjoyed following, and maybe if you get a few hours you could read mine sometime.
In any case, well done. Your writing style is simple but well written and I like that you had the guts to not just pack in and make it a happy ending that everyone wanted. Cheers!
Date: 03/09/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Hey, nice story.
I like this story, a nice light hearted romance with comedy. And the talking cat is pretty original. Well done :)