I pretty much love how the Kakashi and Iruka scene went. That honestly did make my day.
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...i've been away tooooooooooooooo long, i still havent read this chapter and i feel bad cause i actually totally forgot that i was a writer and a reader, ive been watching fruits basket non stop for almost forever it feels like. i will read this chapter and give you a good review for it by tomorrow!! cause i miss reviewing you haha

Author's Response: Ok then, I\'ll wait for your review!

OH! god im so stupid...never write a review before having finished the chapter you are writing the review on...cause then you get a million little reviews because you feel like you havent said enough cause something new keeps coming up. well, you need to work on your sentence structures in general. some of them i couldnt even understand. and part two of this FINAL! review for this chapter cause ive already written a million and three
I loved the interaction with Naruto and Itachi. I like how you created Itachi as not an evil person but just someone who was troubled. It makes me happy cause he's my favorite character haha

Author's Response: It\'s ok, it\'s ok!! I don\'t mind at all (XDD!!) I love the way you review me anyway...it\'s really helpful!! I\'m so sorry if my lack of skill troubled you when you\'re reading, really I regretted that. That\'s why I need to study harder and harder, so I can make good stories! Oh, and yes, I love Itachi too...that\'s why I\'m so upset because Kisimoto-sensei makes him evil person (T_T). Anyway, I am really appreciate your review in my story! Thank you very much!!

this one has some problems also. ill just state the new problems i found. when you're describing something there are easier ways to describe embarassment faces like instead of saying "still in his embarrassment face" you could say "blushing like crazy...or mad or strongly..." something like that. and also there are the usual problems of switching tense. now something good...i really really really really really really love itachi and deidara, i think if they ever got paired up...id probably die of like love/lust. haha OH! that gives me an idea! YAY ME! (why am i so insane?)

Author's Response: Hum...I\'ll take notes at that! Thanks. Oh, Itachi/Deidara...? kind of interesting!! I would like to make some of them later, maybe...(^_^)

YAY!!! I love helping people! and im sorry i keep reviewing on this one. i havent read the other one yet cause i just got on spring break and my cousins are visiting from another state. but ill read it tomorrow! cause they're leaving

Author's Response: It\'s ok. I like your reviews because they\'re building up my skills in writing!! Thank you very much! It\'s really helpful!! Oh, you\'ll read tomorrow? Then tell me if something wrongs and I have to fix, k? Thanks!!

i think past tense is better for writing 3rd person stories. 1st person stories it can go either way but its much easier to use past tense. I'm a sucker for past tense because it sounds more like a story and its easier to put in description (to me) it's whatever is easier for you

Author's Response: Ok, then...maybe past tense will be better. However, I\'m still confused because the rule of description is it has to be in simple present tense. So...I use both of past tense to show what the character is doing and present tense to describe place and features. How does it sound like? Is it better that way?

what does "sweat dropped" mean? usually it means the literal actoin of sweat dripping of someone. but you used it in the context that it may should have been "relieved" not sure though but I still like this story anyways !

Author's Response: Aah, you see. It\'s in Anime if there\'s a sweat (big sweat) drops from the head o the character when he or see saw something stupid in front of his/her eyes. So...it\'s to express the silent language of \'stupid\' for the other *grins* Isn\'t that interesting?

...this is going to sound mean...but this had the most incorrect English grammar of all your chapters so far. AH! I'm sorry!!! I like your story!!! But I'll try to explain what I'm talking about. Coz' is used as "internet slang" for "because" or "cause." "Cause (in writing stories poems...whatever you feel like writing) is the correct form because it is semi-formal. I think you said "cares" but I think you meant "caress" like to softly rub someones face or any part of the body gently in a term of affection or sexual attraction. Like caressing a face. Something along those lines. I'm in love with Itachi...and you kept switching tense. But I still like your story!!! And now I feel bad about what I just said...so I'll say something GOOD! I love Itachi! Eh...already said that. I think Sasuke in a dress would be pretty freaking funny. : D

Author's Response: Thank you very much for this. Ah, about \'coz\' thing, I used it on purpose, of course I know it\'s semi formal. I will never write that way in my formal assignment. Yeah, about the \'caresses\' thing. You\'re right about it!! It was switched when I write it!! Ah, about switching tense...I still haven\'t gotten the basic to write story or novel. I sometimes confused if I have to use past tense or present tense. Which one do you think better?

... : (
poor Itachi. I really, really like this story. At first it was slightly confusing but I've gotten the hang of it. : )
But still...poor Itachi.

damn.
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HAHAHA! to the one with what he and Kakashi really did.
God I'm a sadistic perv.
Itachi is so my favorite

Author's Response: *highfivees* Sadistic pervs are the best kind xD

....that reminded me of Saw III, there was a part at the end where some similar limb ripping thing happened and i walked out of the room i was so scared.
im going to pee myself after im finished with this
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that's funny as pie.
...pie? hmmmm ok. it was pretty freaking amazing

Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you liked it! Pie? Where? I want pie! Thanks for reading and reviewing! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^