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Penname: Yumi [Contact]
Real name: Just call me Yumi
Membership status: Member
Member since: 31/08/06
Website: cagedrealm.wildapricot.com
Beta-reader: Yes
HIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!


I've been writing miscellaneous fanfics for the better part of 10 years. I like to think of myself as a decent writer. . . though my spelling needs desperate work. Though I have spellcheck (and use it religiously) I still manage to have errors X__X Forgive me!! I try to be careful. . . I'm obsessive over it. . .


NOTICE:

I probably will not be in TONFA for much longer. I have moved and created my own site for fiction and fanfiction (hotwaterfics.net). I have become quite disenchanted with the quality of work presiding here, and my creativity has not been fed from this site in quite some time. Forgive me for saying so, but I truly believe that the fanfiction here has become less of a craft, and more of a hobby. Yes, we write fiction because we like to, but there is a point in which we must look at ourselves and have respect for what we are writing. Originality is severely lacking, and so are the skills necessary to create more than just a bunch of Mary-Sue fics. I will finish out my stories here and reach my goal of becoming one of the Top Ten Most Prolific Authors. Then I will resign from this site. I will miss some of you terribly, especially Tari-imooto, but I can no longer stay here. I will keep this site up for you, but do not expect me to update. Thank you.






Profile. . .


Name: Yumi, or Yu-chan. . . which ever you prefer

Age: okay, I'll say it. I'm 21. Legallity is a double edged sword at best ^^

Height: 5 feet exactly. . . stupid short genes

Hair: brunette

Eyes: Brown

Weight: I take the fifth!!! lol, I probably weight a little more than I should for my height, but I'm not fat. I just have fat -__-;;

DOB: I'm Christmas in April

Sign: Taurus ^__^

Sex: Female

Race: Well, if you want the overall, general things I'm half Japanese, half European. . . I don't know the full extent of my mixture yet. . . gotta get those genetic testings done. . .

Religion: Atheist/ Agnostic. . . I think >

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Stories by Yumi [28]
Series by Yumi [1]
Challenges by Yumi [0]
Favorite Series [0]
Yumi's Favorites [15]
Reviews by Yumi


Title: The Top Floor by mirandler43
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 17]
Summary: Sasuke is sent to a mental hospital for treatment for his special condition. If the doctors and tests don't kill him, his fellow patients might. Except for a certain blonde haired boy...
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 | Completed: No | Word count: 107699 | Read count: 8221 [Report This]
Published: 06/09/06 | Updated: 08/02/08


Reviewer: Yumi Signed Liked
Date: 17/03/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Amazing. I can't find words to express my feelings right now.

- Yumi



Title: 50 Ways to Annoy Kisame by XenaAdamana
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 12]
Summary: Yep, another list. But it was fun ^^
Category: General Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: How to Annoy Our Favorite Ninjas
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 453 | Read count: 1717 [Report This]
Published: 25/03/07 | Updated: 25/03/07


Reviewer: Yumi Signed Liked
Date: 25/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Have fun annoying Shark Man

i absolutely love these lists ^^ *two thumbs up*

-Yumi

Author's Response: Thanks! ^^ YAY TWO THUMBS!



Title: New? by A Vampires Butterfly
Rated: U Round robin Liked [Reviews - 35]
Summary: Did you just join TONFA? Are you an inspiring author that needs advice? Or maybe someone has accused you of being a "n00b"? Or maybe you are an author fed up with bad newbie fics and want to do something to stop them. If you answered yes to any on this please read this.
Category: Essays & Tutorials > Writing Tutorials
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 | Completed: No | Word count: 6597 | Read count: 17043 [Report This]
Published: 11/05/07 | Updated: 29/07/08


Reviewer: Yumi Signed
Date: 04/09/08 Title: New?

Wow, I suck don't I? ^^;; I haven't been on in a while, and I didn't see this until now. Sorry.

If you don't have anyone, I'd be more than happy to beta for you. I'd also like to know if you'd beta for me, though it's an original short rather than a Naruto fic. Email me? (YumiLuvsYYH@aol.com)

- Yumi



Title: Is This Summer Love by Swords_and_Bandages
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Kiba writes to Hinata, reminiscing of his younger years. Though he will never get those memories back, he's willing to settle for the next best thing: to win Hinata's heart and make new memories he's sure to treasure. KibaHina one-shot, somewhat one-sided.
Warning: May seem a little OOC.
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Kiba and Hinata
Characters: Kiba Inuzuka
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1198 | Read count: 855 [Report This]
Published: 10/07/07 | Updated: 10/07/07


Reviewer: Yumi Signed Liked
Date: 15/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Kiba's Letter

Good, but some adjustments might want to be taken into consideration.

First, the paragraph beginnings of "I remember" may want to be re-worded. Talk perhaps in the past-tense, such as "it was" or "One summer I–" and the like.

Second, the beginning of the letter is a little too round-about. Kiba wants to let Hinata know about his feelings, and the details about the hornets is a tad detailed for what he's trying to say. You could mention it, but maybe not in so many words. Perhaps hint at all the times he got stung?

Third (and it may just be me), I don't understand what is the reason for what Kiba said about Akamaru on rainy days. It's a cute visual, but is almost like an afterthought there. If you wish to put this in, perhaps it needs to be in a different location? Or Maybe you should go into more detail of what Kiba was thinking?

Overall, a very good piece. I really like the ending!

- Yumi ^^

Author's Response: Very interesting points. I have to say, I wrote this with quite a bit of my own nostalgia mixed in.

Yeah... the beginnings can be a bit repetitive. What I meant to do was to emphasize reminiscence with the \"I remember\" beginnings, particularly to contrast with the aspect that these memories aren\'t coming back. Otherwise, I usually catch myself before I repeat something, or my beta-reader will. (The only thing is that I don\'t get one-shots like these beta-read.)

Your point about the roundabout aspect of the letter is understandable. As I\'ve said, I mixed my own nostalgia into this, and that might not have been the wisest thing to do. On the other hand, Kiba telling Hinata how he feels about her isn\'t the only point of the letter, either- I made the fondness with which he treats his memories of bygone summers quite an important subject in the story, in conjunction with that.

Lastly, well... the rain has this almost unconveyable aura about it that I can\'t really describe. I guess it\'s just how I look at it and feel about it.

Thanks for the feedback. I\'ll take these things into consideration in my future \"letter\" pieces.



Title: A Toast by Swords_and_Bandages
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 13]
Summary: Poems written as a tribute to those who passed away. I know, this sounds gloomy, but I got inspired to write after reading a sad story.
Warning: Contains mild alcohol and smoking reference.
Category: General Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: Poetry, Tragedy
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 315 | Read count: 1699 [Report This]
Published: 15/07/07 | Updated: 02/12/07


Reviewer: Yumi Signed Liked
Date: 15/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Toast Worthy of a Hero

It's very good. I'm sure if I had read the story it would have meant much more to me. However, even without knowing the inspiration, this piece can stand on its own and bring a bitter-sweet sadness to the reader.

This is the third piece I've read of yours, and I must say that YOU are incredibly talented with emotion. ^__^

- Yumi

Author's Response: Thank you. The story that inspired this is TTM\'s The Diary of Kiba story. Check it out if you like.



Reviewer: Yumi Signed Liked
Date: 15/12/07 Title: Chapter 2: What Fools Men Be

Good, but I was slightly disturbed by the ending. 11-12 lines do not have the same rhythm as the rest of the poem, and it is painfully obvious once you get to the 13-14 lines. The image is done well, but perhaps the wording could use a slight tweaking. Also, the last line's question I feel is the wrong one to ask. A hero knows what he fights for, but perhaps why does he risk his own skin? "Why do they fight, when all ends in defeat?" ? Again, a wonderful piece with minor errors, in my opinion.

- Yumi

Author's Response: *sigh* Writing isn\'t easy for me without inspiration, it seems.

I wrote this one a while after I wrote the 1st one, and I will admit, it came out rather forced. What I aimed to do was to describe the viewpoint of a person whose loved one died in a heroic act that the person does not yet fully comprehend, yet it seems I didn\'t do it quite right. It does not reflect my views on the matter, however.

The other thing I\'d say is that, for poems, it seems that I should finish writing them in one sitting. I wrote the 1st part to this one, ran out of lines, and picked it up after about a month or so.

Well, I guess I just have to have inspiration, eh?



Title: Happy Halloween by suzieuchiha
Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 128]
Summary: He's gay, his teachers hate him, he leads a gang of misfits and Kiba's traditional Halloween party fast approaches. When the most gorgeous boy he has ever seen joins Konoha West High School, the boy seems destined to be popular and there's nothing Naruto can do about that, right? Main pairing is narusasunaru. Please also read the 2nd part of this story: Happy New Year!
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Gaara, Kiba Inuzuka, Sai, Temari, Tenten, Itachi Uchiha, Sasuke Uchiha, Iruka Umino, Naruto Uzumaki, Ino Yamanaka
Genres: Angst, Humor, Romance
Warnings: AU, Dark, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: Happy Occasions
Chapters: 15 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 28299 | Read count: 34252 [Report This]
Published: 09/09/07 | Updated: 12/03/08


Reviewer: Yumi Signed
Date: 04/11/07 Title: Chapter 14: The Halloween Party

lol. . . I guess Naruto and Sasuke got more than one type of candy X3. I have to say that everything was great, but I think it resolved itself just a tad fast ^^;; Any I TOTALLY thought something bad was gonna happen between Sai and Sasuke @.@. . . oh well, expect the unexpected, ne? ^__^ Awesomeness! Keep writing!!

- Yumi

Author's Response: ya think? sorry then, =[ but the story isn\'t over... ^^ tehe candy, good way of putting it!



Title: Never Hand Over The Rum by A Vampires Butterfly
Rated: R18 Liked [Reviews - 20]
Summary: Rum plus Naruto equals a whole lot of nosebleeds. Poor Sasuke...
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1795 | Read count: 1680 [Report This]
Published: 17/09/07 | Updated: 17/09/07


Reviewer: Yumi Signed Liked
Date: 29/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Never Hand Over The Rum

lol that was friggin' awesome! XD Rum. . . X3

- Yu-chan ^^



Title: Unspoken Pain by A Vampires Butterfly
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 21]
Summary: "Bruises are purple. Blood is red. Tonight, my pretty slut, I'll play with you again. Tell anyone, you dirty whore, and you'll see me forever more."
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Angst
Warnings: AU
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 4024 | Read count: 3926 [Report This]
Published: 26/09/07 | Updated: 20/12/07


Reviewer: Yumi Signed Liked
Date: 02/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Attack

O__O. . . creepy. . . *shudders*

10/10

- Yumi @___@;;;



Title: Tired of Tears by Swords_and_Bandages
Rated: 12/12A Liked [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Shikamaru's falling apart after he and Ino breaks up. He's shut himself inside his room, yet still everything around him reminds him of her. To make things worse, a sad ballad plays itself out as his radio-alarm hits 7:00 A.M., and leaves him asking why he can't let it all go. ShikaIno one-shot songfic.
Category:
Characters: Shikamaru Nara, Ino Yamanaka
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: AU
Challenges: Song Fics!,
Challenge: Song Fics!,
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1306 | Read count: 987 [Report This]
Published: 17/10/07 | Updated: 17/10/07


Reviewer: Yumi Signed Liked
Date: 15/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Shikamaru's Sorrow

It's a beautiful songfic. It's all too sad that I can identify with this: breaking up even after you promised to wed. I tried not to listen to love songs; rather hate songs to keep me from feeling hurt. I'm sure I would have felt that there was only the decision that Shika made if I had done that.

Marvelous, deep feeling. 10/10

- Yumi

Author's Response: Thank you. To be honest, when I wrote this, I felt that I didn\'t quite do a good job, maybe having exaggerated the emotions involved. I won\'t consider this the best of my writing, but it seems that this has a quality above my own expectations for it.

I\'ve been trying to work on other songfics- particularly, a sequel to this. I hope I can do a good job on them. Thanks, once again.



Title: The Great Question by A Vampires Butterfly
Rated: 12/12A Liked [Reviews - 15]
Summary: ---crossover of some sorts--- Which one is better? Really? You decide!
Category: Non-Naruto Fiction, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: General, Humor, Romance, WAFF
Warnings: Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 4466 | Read count: 2439 [Report This]
Published: 07/11/07 | Updated: 14/11/07


Reviewer: Yumi Signed
Date: 12/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Great Question

omfg. . . plan 5b was. . . @___@;;; yeah. . .

If I must choose one, I'd say that SasuNaru is cuter. . . though L and Light are pretty damn close ^^;;

- Yumi

Author's Response: ^0^ Hehehe....I tried my best on pan 5b. Poor Naru-chan....>.< Really? Naru-chan and Sasuke again?!? Did I not write Light and L cute enough, because they are really, really cute together, if not misunderstood. Well, at least L and Light got pretty close. Light is not going to be happy...*sweat drop* Thanks for reading and reviewing! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^



Title: “Doushite Kimi wo Suki ni Natte Shimattan Darou?” by fuyuko
Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 5]
Summary:
The elder Uchiha wonders vaguely each day about the life of his younger brother. The thoughts growing stronger and more annoying each rising sun. It was becoming an absurd obsession.

"You still have me. You can trust me now.” He claimed tenderly, his voice tempting.
Shaking his head angrily, he replied hotly, “No. I can’t trust you. I don’t want to. I don’t want you in my life anymore.”
This utterance, this powerful statement, it broke his heart, it tore and twisted him painfully.
Category: TONFA Award Category, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Itachi and Sasuke, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Sasuke and Sakura
Characters: Itachi Uchiha, Pair ItaSasu, Pair SasuSaku, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Graphic lemon, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Death, Incest, Rape, Sexual Themes, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 10235 | Read count: 8823 [Report This]
Published: 25/07/08 | Updated: 01/08/08


Reviewer: Yumi Signed Liked
Date: 28/07/08 Title: Chapter 3: Suki

Incredible. I love it! Keep up your wonderful writing!

- Yumi

Author's Response: Thanks. d^.^b Look foward to the next chapter.



Title: A Day in the Car by Baka_Onegai_Aishiteru
Rated: R18 Liked [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Sequel to A Day at the Dojo. Complete PWP and graphic at that. If you are easily offended by sexual relations between two men, please PLEASE don't read this story.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki, Pair SasuNaru, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Graphic lemon
Warnings: AU, Sexual Themes, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1850 | Read count: 1729 [Report This]
Published: 07/08/08 | Updated: 07/08/08


Reviewer: Yumi Signed Liked
Date: 07/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*fans self* Hot. X3 lol

- Yumi

Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it ^_^



Title: Feels like Rain by Fruits_Punch_Samurai
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 51]
Summary: I’ll tell you a secret.
Since I was three I wanted to be a pirate.

Noa Morie is just one of those blocks that don't fit in any of the holes. Maybe that's why she can't get a date or her senseis think she's crazy. But Noa doesn't mind, she didn't want to be a ninja in the first place. It might not be so bad, if it means she gets to be with her friends and that one boy who makes her heart beat a little too fast.
Category: OC-centric
Characters: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 | Completed: No | Word count: 35362 | Read count: 7719 [Report This]
Published: 14/09/08 | Updated: 14/01/09



Reviewer: Yumi Signed Liked
Date: 24/09/08 Title: Chapter 2: Best Friends are like tacos; fantastic!

omg, this is so awesome! XD I don't normally read OC's, but this looked WAAAAY too good to pass up, and I'm glad I didn't!! ^^ Noa is pure awesomeness, and I truly enjoy the bashing of Sasuke-fangirls. X3

By all means! Continue writing this!

- Yumi ^___^

Author's Response: Bashing Sasuke-fangirls is what I was born to do