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Rated: [Reviews - 12]
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Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Naruto as a Seme!!
Challenge: Naruto as a Seme!!
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 10416 | Read count: 11617 [Report This]
Published: 05/07/06 | Updated: 23/07/06
Rated: U [Reviews - 16]
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Crossovers
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: A Piratey Challenge
Challenge: A Piratey Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 4 | Completed: No | Word count: 3428 | Read count: 6221 [Report This]
Published: 14/07/06 | Updated: 19/07/06
Date: 02/12/14 Title: Chapter 1: A Rank?!
best story i ever rad. u need to write more! or i will fine u and pay u
Rated: [Reviews - 14]
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Naruto as a Seme!!
Challenge: Naruto as a Seme!!
Series: None
Chapters: 6 | Completed: No | Word count: 21731 | Read count: 14791 [Report This]
Published: 22/07/06 | Updated: 25/08/06
Date: 27/09/14 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Hi again. I don't know if you can comment back but if you can please contact me at ggluvsbks3@yahoo.com
Rated: [Reviews - 23]
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 5568 | Read count: 2452 [Report This]
Published: 22/11/06 | Updated: 22/11/06
Date: 17/10/14 Title: Chapter 1: Gift
Oh... wow... That was... Well, how to say it...? It was absolutely amazing! I never thought of threesome Neji Naru Shika, but I thought of them alone. I mean like NejiNaru or ShikaNaru. But this was... just OHHHMMMYYYGHOOT.
Thank you~ x3
Rated: [Reviews - 3]
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1736 | Read count: 2301 [Report This]
Published: 13/01/07 | Updated: 13/01/07
Date: 23/10/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Holy shit...... LOVED IT!!!!!!
Rated: 12/12A [Reviews - 9]
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Itachi and Sasuke
Characters: Itachi Uchiha, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: None
Warnings: Incest
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 2941 | Read count: 17980 [Report This]
Published: 17/01/07 | Updated: 03/02/07
Date: 28/11/14 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1: You Must Listen to Your Older Brother
Painfully Sexy
Rated: [Reviews - 31]
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance, Shojo-ai/Yuri Romance, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Sakura
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 | Completed: No | Word count: 6339 | Read count: 48375 [Report This]
Published: 01/04/07 | Updated: 08/04/07
Date: 23/11/14 Title: Chapter 8: Should We Tell
Why not? Let them get married :)
Rated: PG [Reviews - 12]
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Kiba and Hinata, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Sakura, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Neji and Tenten
Characters: Shino Aburame, Chouji Akimichi, Sakura Haruno, Hinata Hyuuga, Neji Hyuuga, Kiba Inuzuka, Shikamaru Nara, Tenten, Naruto Uzumaki, Ino Yamanaka
Genres: General, Humor, Romance
Warnings: AU
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 | Completed: No | Word count: 7978 | Read count: 15179 [Report This]
Published: 01/07/07 | Updated: 28/03/08
Date: 09/12/14 Title: Chapter 1: Its an Order
The story is good but I notice that chapter 7-8 are the same. I thought chapter 8 was the beach party. I can help you writer more into this story and add some romance and some lemon. I am a writer and I write story. I am a devianart and wrote four chapter on a fan faction story on narusaku is valentine story on the last one it has a some juicy hard core lemon.
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 5]
Category: General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: Sai, Team Ebisu (Konohamaru Corps), Team Gai, Team Rookie Nine, Team Sand Siblings, Team Sannin, Tobi, Tsunade
Genres: Action/Adventure, Dark, Horror, Mystery, Tragedy
Warnings: Dark, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 | Completed: No | Word count: 22734 | Read count: 7327 [Report This]
Published: 15/02/08 | Updated: 11/07/08
Date: 04/10/14 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Return of the Snake Pt. II
This is really good! Please don't abandon it so soon! I look forward to see what happens next!
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 4]
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: OC, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Graphic lemon, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 2635 | Read count: 26740 [Report This]
Published: 01/08/08 | Updated: 01/08/08
Rated: R18 [Reviews - 5]
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Angst (Shonen-ai/Yaoi), Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Warned (Shonen-ai/Yaoi)
Characters: Asuma Sarutobi, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Themes, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 2909 | Read count: 30247 [Report This]
Published: 01/07/09 | Updated: 01/07/09
Date: 04/10/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Asuma Sarutobi
This is very good! I loved it!
I hope you write another chapter.
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 37]
Reality is such a wonderful wake up call.
The places you never expected to exist. The people you’d only dreamt of meeting. The events of their tomorrow having already passed in your present. Was my reality their illusion? Was their illusion my reality? I haven’t been sure for the past 20 years.
As an outsider, I was hated as a missing nin. As a traitor. As the enemy. Like the one I followed, I was wanted in almost every country. I had no regrets however. Well, no regrets when it came to him. Never when it came to him. He was the one I turned to. My leader. My light. My solace.
We were despised. Looked down upon. Hated for our crimes and I have to admit, everyone had every right to hate us. However, despite all this loathing, I feel the need to write what it felt like to live the life that we did, for not many know what really goes on in the obscure world of a rogue ninja.
I can only hope that by reading this, people can better understand us and the paths we have chosen. And I hope they know that our actions were and are not based on evil or ill-intent, but loneliness, fear and most of all: pain.
Category: General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: All, Pair OCSasu
Genres: Action/Adventure, Dark, Romance
Warnings: Dark, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 | Completed: No | Word count: 47369 | Read count: 31655 [Report This]
Published: 09/12/09 | Updated: 27/12/11
Date: 30/09/14 Title: Chapter 19: True North
You have a fan. Fantastic work, seriously. Not a mary sue for the first fucking time in life! I'm not usually one for the sasukeoc types as they typically follow the same patterns, but I enjoy how you show connection, devotion, and still maintain realitic obstacles to later overcome and gain triumphs. Her abilities may be a little overwhelming but even then you've found a way to tame that out and keep her grounded...giving her progress to increased power, keeping her agility and speed where it should be in comparison to sasuke, and calming her emotional mental state to handle logical situations. Nicely done :) I'll be following for sure and I'll be keeping watch for the next chapter!
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 220]
Let's break it down. Naruto's a reckless young shinobi with passion and heart. Striving to get attention and respect, he has an attitude that makes those around want to shut his loud mouth. Then there's his rival teammate, Sasuke, a boy who keeps himself at distance and makes no personal ties. His one-track vengeful mind and lust for his brother's demise has carried him through a life of hatred and solitude. Along comes the damsel in distress, Sakura, ditzy and unrequitedly in love with our dark, brooding avenger. Her low self-esteem and lack of ninja tact makes her a casualty for her team, and nothing more. Enter their mission - Rayne Sayomi, a carefree individual with the strength that would make a mountain shake. Her personality makes those around instantly like her, though her short temperament can bring out the demon inside. Literally. Together, these four are going to shape the paths they each take in life, but there are about ninety-nine ways to die between them and their future.
CHAPTERS CURRENTLY UNDER REVISION AS OF 7/21/15
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto
Characters: Akatsuki, Dosu Kinuta, Hidden Leaf Ninja, Hidden Sound Ninja, Itachi Uchiha, Izumo Kamizuki, Kakashi Hatake, Kin Tsuchi, Kyuubi (Kurama), Naruto Uzumaki, OC, Orochimaru, Pair OCSasu, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha, Zaku Abumi
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 45 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 200080 | Read count: 138679 [Report This]
Published: 19/07/10 | Updated: 12/11/12
Date: 13/12/14 Title: Chapter 36: Konoha Sports Festival Revived!
These chapters had me laughing so much. Your writing is amazing and I hope you never stop writing.
Rated: 18 [Reviews - 51]
Warning, there may be graphic lemons.
Category: OC-centric, Het Romance > Angst
Characters: Gaara
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 52 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 42271 | Read count: 15789 [Report This]
Published: 06/04/11 | Updated: 07/06/11
Date: 24/10/14 Title: Chapter 52: Epilogue: 13 Years Later
I love this story! Great job. =)
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 122]
Audriana never claimed to be perfect. That would be too ludicrous. Despite her outer appearances, she was one severely messed up teenager. And, yes, I did mean appearances with an s. Depending on who she was with, there was always a different personality. Audriana was an actress, and she used her skill to keep herself in check. It kept her from exploding on the world around her, and—more importantly—it kept her from getting close to people. She learned to read people and to react in just the right way for each person, no matter what the situation was. But what if one day something radical happened? What if this event brought her into contact with people who could catch her off guard, who could get to her? What if her world was suddenly turned upside down, causing her to face a whole new sort of reality?
Hey. My name is Audriana. I can be cheerful and innocent, or I can be the devil. Which would you like? Just don’t try to be my best friend. I don’t have “best friends” or "friends" period. They'll only betray you in the end.
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto, Het Romance > Fluff, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Real World
Characters: All, Haku, Kabuto Yakushi, Konohamaru Sarutobi, OC, Zabuza
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: OOC
Challenge: None
Series: Twisted Reality
Chapters: 27 | Completed: No | Word count: 60480 | Read count: 47413 [Report This]
Published: 10/02/12 | Updated: 06/08/14
Date: 04/11/14 Title: Chapter 27: A NOTE TO MY READERS
OH MY GOD I LOVE YOU FOR CONTINUING THIS! I HAVE READ AND RE-READ THIS FOR THE SAKE OF ITS AWESOMENESS AND IN HOPES THAT IT WOULD CONTINUE! Sorry about the caps, but I just couldn't hold it in. Have you ever thought of posting it on fanfiction?I feel that you would get a huge fanbase off of it.
Author's Response: How have I never responded to this review before? I feel just terrible and evil about that. Anyway, the story is to be online soon if you're still around. I'm just struggling to come up with a title for the rewrite. Reality Check doesn't really quite work anymore. Also, I'm creating a new account for me stories under a new identity as Masumi is just not really quite me anymore. But I think you'll find me pretty easily when I update under the new identity. Anyway, thanks for this awesome review full of excitement. I actually have considered posting on fanfiction.net, but I'm kind of loyal to TONFA with my Naruto fanfiction. I do post non-Naruto stuff on there occasionally, though. Out, The Wreyck
Rated: R18 [Reviews - 4]
Category: General Fiction, Het Romance
Characters: Kushina Uzumaki, Minato Namikaze (Yondaime Hokage)
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: No | Word count: 16673 | Read count: 2480 [Report This]
Published: 24/04/12 | Updated: 08/05/12
Date: 22/10/14 Title: Chapter 1: The Girl From Whirlpool
Awesome!!! it really is awesome!!! update, hayaku!
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 130]
A withered past, and a blurry future.
My heart's on an auction, it goes out to the highest bid.
I live too fast, and I know I will lose her.
But there is an option.
To die is to live in her head.
An unforseen force interferes with the capture of Killer Bee’s jinchuuriki as a particular Akatsuki team enters the confines of the Hidden Cloud village. A dead man walking is revealed as mysteries and secrets of the past come to light. Having been bestowed the knowledge of what has lurked within the shadows for nearly the past two decades, will the one whose walked the path of death and learned the truth be heard in time to stop the Fourth Great Ninja War?
Sometimes a demon from the past is the only one that can save you.
Category: OC-centric
Characters: A (Yondaime Raikage), Akatsuki, All, Hidden Leaf Ninja, Itachi Uchiha, Kakashi Hatake, Killer B, Madara Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki, Obito Uchiha, OC, Pair OCSasu, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 | Completed: No | Word count: 61721 | Read count: 49079 [Report This]
Published: 02/12/12 | Updated: 03/03/16
Date: 16/11/14 Title: Chapter 11: Blame It On Bad Luck
Hey, I've really enjoyed reading your story. I like the character of Rayne. She can be so hilarious :D
Keep up the good work, and please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! (: I finally updated, I hope you're still around to read. Xoxo~
Date: 28/09/14 Title: Chapter 1: Dead Man Walking
Just read through this story and the prequel. I absolutely love it! This is one of my favorite Sasuske stories I've ever read. Great job!I love the connection between Rayne and Naruto and the complicated relationship between Rayne and Sasuske. I also thought it was really cool how Itatchi trained Rayne. Hope you continue it, I can't wait to read more.
Date: 15/10/14 Title: Chapter 1: Dead Man Walking
I feel like you're just trying to copy Karnia. Stealing ocs from other people is really unattractive.
Author's Response: I am. 8 years ago when I was 12 Kishimoto-san descended from mangaka heaven and told me that I was going to become a carbon copy of someone in a different country, whose existance I had no knowledge of. He would continue to communicate with me throughout the years until he finally united Karnia and I to form the dynamic, procrastinating, unmotivated fan fiction duo we are today. Rayne and Hikari are actually one being, one being so powerful that Kishi couldn't contain her in the manga , having to leave her out because she was too fantabulous. He then split this character in two, granting Karnia and I each with a persona. We continue to communicate with Kishi to this day, writing different story lines that were alternatives for the main plot if he had used his original character. We know everything there is to know about Naruto.
P.S. The ramen guy is the real villain.
Date: 12/01/15 Title: Chapter 12: Bulletproof Love
Imagining Sasuke doing repeat cartwheels around a room while Rayne just questioningly raises her eyebrow is the best thing that I have imagined in days. Thanks for that Shann, now I am going to imaging him screaming ‘weeeeeeeeeeeeee’ for weeks. He is crazy enough; I don’t need to imagine all kinds more of crazy. 0.o
I think I know why he says Hn so much. I don’t think Sasuke knows how to socialise like a normal human being. Kinda like Sai. So whenever someone says or does something that he just kinda stares blankly at without understanding, he just says Hn to make it look like he gets it. That way he seems aloof and mysterious while secretly being a door knob.
Kay, if I was Rayne and had accidentally divulged his name and such a bipolar and senile old lady was like “I won’t tell anyone honey~” I’d be like….yeah I need to get out of here now. >.> Funny enough, I think Hikari and Rayne might have very easily made the same mistake here so it makes me giggle. They are so much alike. I bet ranch dressing is their favourite.
Ran…ra…r….
RANCH DRESSING.
Sorry, had it get it out of my system. I saw that tumblr post again you tagged me in with the hidden valley ranch and now I can’t stop laughing. I am also almost out of the ranch you sent me for Christmas. :/
ANYWHO. BACK TO TEH STORY.
That argument with Rokobi was fantastic. I loved the whole restraining aspect and the heat and intensity. I love that they argued like that. It was great to see some drama. I’m a drama whore after all. :P
“…can I ask your favourite colour?” Slams bowl. Spills soup. Rawrs like dragon. “WHY COULDN’T YOU STAY DEAD, RAYNE!??!” Yeah Sasuke, I get it. Everyone hates that question. Everyone reacts like that to the colour question.
But in all serious, I am digging this scene. I love how the subtle things he is recalling are making him so uncomfortable. Just everything here is so well executed. I think you’re back into your groove. This is making me want to write. But this would only induce drama for me in super and I already have some very dramatic chapters planned next, so I better not increase it. If it is overwhelming I will tell my readers to blame you though. :D
I am going to go ahead to take this out of context. But I am pretty sure you stole from me. Bah, I am kidding. But yeah, take a look at this baby…“You had to pin me under a table and throw me against the wall to tell me that?!” I am like dying here. You harped into me so much for that when I did it. Like sure, he actually kind of forcefully shoved Hikari into the wall behind her and then chidori’d the spot next to her head, but for all intents and purposes he did it to Rayne too. >.> *Pulls sunglasses off dramatically.* Finally justified.
I WANT MOAR. I WANT TO WRITE MY STORY NOW. HOW. DARE. YOU.
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 26]
Category: OC-centric, Het Romance > Angst
Characters: All, Kabuto Yakushi, Kakashi Hatake, Naruto Uzumaki, OC, Orochimaru, Pair OCNaru, Sai, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha, Tsunade
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Dark, Drama, Mystery, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Death, Rape, Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 | Completed: No | Word count: 40546 | Read count: 12244 [Report This]
Published: 02/03/13 | Updated: 22/02/15
Date: 16/11/14 Title: Chapter 9: Breakthrough
hey, I've really enjoyed your story! Finally a good Naruto OC Story ;)
Keep up the good work and please update soon!
Rated: R18 [Reviews - 6]
Category: General Fiction > Timeskip, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: Hinata Hyuuga
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 1450 | Read count: 769 [Report This]
Published: 16/03/13 | Updated: 16/03/13
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 6]
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Mystery
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 6816 | Read count: 3481 [Report This]
Published: 14/07/14 | Updated: 22/07/14
Date: 07/10/14 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Finally! I haven't been able to review for the longest he use apparently this site thinks I'm a robot. It kills me because I wasn't to leave review so badly, and I know that a review would probably motivate you but I couldn't. Anyways, I really loved your story. I like the detective feel of it. Now, don't leave us hanging! Update when you can(:
Date: 07/10/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I read this story a while back and checked to see if you had updated. Since you haven't, I guess I'll give you some bottled motivation. Firstly, this has me guessing and wondering what's gong to happen next. There's so many questions! For example, why is Naruto considered a criminal etc. I have my own hunch, but it's probably wrong. Another thing, I don't know if you're planning to do an original character and Naruto pairing, or a pairing at all, but if you did, you'd be making me so happy. There's so very few fics like that. It's your story though. Make it how ever you want. I'll be looking out for the next chapter!