Real name: Alex
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Member since: 24/02/12
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name: just call me haz, hazard, alex (or what ev)
age:17
Hey there person, I'm new to writing stories and
what not. I'm pretty laid back, I enjoy eating sushi, and I'm a subtle fan of Naruto.
hobbies: Reading, gaming, playing guitar, sleeping, and I do sports like soccer and wrestling(weird combo I know).
Need more? Sorry, I'm already sick of typing this.
Rated: 18 [Reviews - 5]
Legends... What is it that truly makes someone a legend? Is it their actions? How many powers they possess? Or the destruction they leave in their wake? A true legend, doesn't require any of these. True legends, are the heroes, and villains, that do not have a song, a tale of horror, or even evidence of their existence. True legends, will simply watch, as the world passes by.
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Timeskip
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Action/Adventure, Dark, Horror, Humor, Tragedy
Warnings: Dark, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 | Completed: No | Word count: 20975 | Read count: 2276 [Report This]
Published: 21/01/09 | Updated: 13/07/12
Date: 18/06/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The teams are decided!
I like the idea, it's just you've introduced so many OC's at once my head is spinning a bit. It's quite hard to take all in at once, or maybe it's just my small mind :P I don't know.
I'm going to try and read more, but it does seem a bit "cluttered" in my opinion, but maybe that's why I don't usually like stories with a lot of OC's in them that I have no background on since I tend to lose track of people.
My advice, make a bingo book please. I like this stories concept, but I just want a little background on everything. That's all. Keep up the hard work, you're doing just fine.
Author's Response: Thank's for the review; I understand where you're coming from, when it comes to the OC's. I wanted to try and let the readers come up with some looks as far as the b/g characters go. As you've seen, the more important people have gotten subtle takes on their appearances, such as hair color, or a style of shirt. It's the Naruto Universe after all, so I figured there wasn't much need for 'extreme' detail on what they were wearing. On another note, I actually do have a bingo book for this village, listing/detailing every shinobi, minor citizens, and even the academy residence; but i found that posting those, leads to a few people stealing characters, techniques, and other things; I've had it happen before. If I 'do' get more comments about it, I'll most likely end up posting it on a 'series' page.
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 114]
It was such a simple act of kindness that changed his entire life around. Once it was evident he had the Will of Fire, though, a life he could never imagine began.
Ryu Sarutobi was the "adopted grandson" of Hiruzen Sarutobi. All people knew of him was he appeared out of nowhere with the Hokage's words backing him. As well as who they saw him become.
He was a boy with a strange worry over a yin-yang ring he wore. He was a boy who gave his everything to protect the village. He was a boy who had a fire raging within him. He was a boy with a great light that could pierce the darkness. All people had to do was look.
But he was also a boy who was cursed.
And that curse would do anything to devour his light.
Category: General Fiction > Naruto, General Fiction > Pre-Series, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: All, OC, Pair OCSaku
Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance
Warnings: AU, Death, OOC
Challenges: , The Ultimate OC Challenge
Challenge: , The Ultimate OC Challenge
Series: Cursed
Chapters: 18 | Completed: No | Word count: 106653 | Read count: 22870 [Report This]
Published: 20/09/10 | Updated: 07/08/15
Date: 01/03/12 Title: Chapter 3: Taken
O_O Jesus you can write a lot. I can't get chapters anywhere near this size, but great job! I'm really intrigued so far.
Author's Response: This? This isn\'t me writing a lot. Just look at the chapter called: Right Before Your Eyes. That\'s almost 15,000 words. Now that\'s a lot. Anyway, I\'m glad that you liked this. I hope that this can keep you interested, Hazard.
Rated: 12/12A [Reviews - 95]
Well let's just roll with it.
This time we join sixteen year old Krystal O'connor. A girl with an uncanny fascination of video games and online media. For her, she had to be forced into the Narutoverse by her step-dad, and a crazy scientist with a machine that bears a striking resemblance to that gate thingy from SG-1.
Category: OC-centric, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Real World, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Humor, Sci-Fi
Warnings: Death, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: Project: Olympus
Chapters: 55 | Completed: No | Word count: 108613 | Read count: 75417 [Report This]
Published: 05/05/11 | Updated: 15/07/12
Date: 24/02/12 Title: Chapter 1: How it all starts.
Very interesting! your great at illustrating battle scenes, and I just want to see more, just don't take monthly breaks to often.
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 86]
Thanks to BattyBigSister for the wonderful banner!
Now, in the present, Madara Uchiha still lives and spreads a false peace among the world through his genjutsu. This ultimate tsukuyomi was meant to leave everyone in the world under the control of the immortal man.
However, a selected group of people, descendants of respectable shinobi, have been released from the genjutsu due to a twist of fate. Now it is up to this band of chosen people to somehow defeat Madara and break the genjutsu that has lasted for 100 years.
This group of people must somehow work together and rely on the two things they have in common: an unknown destiny and forgotten ancestries.
Category: OC-centric, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU, General Fiction > Post-Naruto
Characters: Madara Uchiha, OC
Genres: Action/Adventure, Dark, Drama, General, Humor, Mystery
Warnings: AU, Dark
Challenges: , Joint Stories!
Challenge: , Joint Stories!
Series: None
Chapters: 8 | Completed: No | Word count: 30715 | Read count: 20843 [Report This]
Published: 18/05/11 | Updated: 20/03/12
Date: 16/06/12 Title: Chapter 3: Adventure Starts in the Mist Village
Just started to read this, and I say it is very interesting. I like how you're reviving clans of the old into a future generation.
Good from what I've seen so far.
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, I'm flattered you decided to read this! :D Well, I just take the characters I'm given and write them as how I think they'd fit into society. I'm glad you like this story so far! I hope you continue to enjoy. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Hazard-san, I appreciate it!
Date: 18/06/12 Title: Chapter 5: Blossom Into What You Were Meant to Be
I like where this is heading, and I like the twist of Madara having his children as devoted servants to him. I like seeing more characters, and I can't wait till everyone meets up. Awesome!
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, I'm really excited you like this! It's always awesome to get new readers, so thank you so much for finding such interest in this story. I hope you continue to like this! Thanks for reading and leaving a review!
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 3]
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU, OC-centric
Characters: All
Genres: Humor
Warnings: OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: No | Word count: 3892 | Read count: 4719 [Report This]
Published: 10/02/12 | Updated: 08/06/12
Date: 24/02/12 Title: Chapter 1: The Creek
This story has potential, just depends on how hard you desire to push it. Like the start.
Date: 04/04/12 Title: Chapter 1: The Creek
This is quite comical and interesting, but work on your grammar a little. Keep it up.
Author's Response: thanks i tend to write this while paying half attention to stuff but ill see what i can do
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 121]
DropDeadThenDance: "As you can see, this story is now on a hiatus while I work on Bite Back The Curse and possibly upload my "coming soon" title, which nothing has been revealed about so far... I am not dropping this story, like I did with Stereotype, but I am putting it on hold so I can put more focus into Makita fiction for now... Alright, onward to writing!"
Category: OC-centric, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Real World, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Warnings: Death, OOC, Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: From Fire to Ashes
Chapters: 36 | Completed: No | Word count: 43044 | Read count: 40959 [Report This]
Published: 10/02/12 | Updated: 13/02/13
Date: 24/02/12 Title: Chapter 4: Episode 4: The Life I Lead
Great story so far, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'ve never had you has a reviewer so thanks for reading the story so far! Anyway, I was just wondering if you knew that this was a second instalment of a story. Though the first version is not really needed, it would help this make more sense :D
Anyway, thanks again!!
Date: 02/03/12 Title: Chapter 7: Episode 7: Blood Streaked Justice
Good chapter, I liked the turn of events here. And as an answer to you r previous question, I have read the other story in the series. It's just recently that I've made an account to start review and writing (:
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 122]
Audriana never claimed to be perfect. That would be too ludicrous. Despite her outer appearances, she was one severely messed up teenager. And, yes, I did mean appearances with an s. Depending on who she was with, there was always a different personality. Audriana was an actress, and she used her skill to keep herself in check. It kept her from exploding on the world around her, and—more importantly—it kept her from getting close to people. She learned to read people and to react in just the right way for each person, no matter what the situation was. But what if one day something radical happened? What if this event brought her into contact with people who could catch her off guard, who could get to her? What if her world was suddenly turned upside down, causing her to face a whole new sort of reality?
Hey. My name is Audriana. I can be cheerful and innocent, or I can be the devil. Which would you like? Just don’t try to be my best friend. I don’t have “best friends” or "friends" period. They'll only betray you in the end.
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto, Het Romance > Fluff, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Real World
Characters: All, Haku, Kabuto Yakushi, Konohamaru Sarutobi, OC, Zabuza
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: OOC
Challenge: None
Series: Twisted Reality
Chapters: 27 | Completed: No | Word count: 60480 | Read count: 47385 [Report This]
Published: 10/02/12 | Updated: 06/08/14
Date: 17/03/12 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - I'll Go on a Date With You...
Great update, I'm really wanting to see what job she'll get, especially if she does become a ninja for the hidden leaf!
Author's Response: Well, Masumi hates shinobi for allowing themselves to be ruled and become weapons, so that might be a little difficult. But I assure you that you will probably never see what happens next coming! Thank you for the review, Hazzy. It's fun to hear what the readers think. Out, Masumi TAT
Date: 21/03/12 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - BANZAI! Why?
great chapter. I'm really want to see how the family interacts with Masumi later on. keep the updates coming!
Author's Response: Well, there will be a better introduction to some of the family members in the next chapter. It is certainly a very interesting family. Thanks for the review and for always reading my story. Out, Masumi TAT
Date: 24/02/12 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Why Is Everything I Own Called Obnoxious?
terrific! I'm really into this story, just keep it up!
Author's Response: A new reviewer! That\'s always exciting for me. I\'m so happy you like my story, and I will work hard to keep pleasing you and my other readers in the future. Thanks for the review. It made me very happy to see it.
Date: 29/02/12 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Don't Look Back
decent chapter. I'm wondering where Audriana will end up... Great work!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I love hearing about what the readers think. X3 Audriana will end up... Wait! I can\'t tell you! That would ruin the surprise! Hahahahahahahhahhah!
Date: 25/03/12 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - We're All Siblings Here, and That Includes You
Good chapter, I liked the introductions. Can't wait to see more.
Author's Response: As always, thanks for the review and support, Hazzy. XP The next chapter should be Riley's, so look forward to it. ;) Out, Masumi TAT
Date: 14/03/12 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The Little Engine That Thinks He Can Often Becomes the Little Engine That Can't
Nice chapter! I really like your story so far. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! It's always nice to hear (read? ;D) that we're continuing to entertain the readers. Out, Masumi TAT
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 47]
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto, MadFic > Script Fic, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Romance
Warnings: AU, Dark, Death
Challenge: None
Series: The Path Each Takes
Chapters: 18 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 15791 | Read count: 19490 [Report This]
Published: 22/02/12 | Updated: 26/02/12
Date: 25/02/12 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 11-15
Really fun story to read! just keep writing away, can't wait to see more of this!
Author's Response: Thanks! There\'s a lot in store more for you to read :)
Date: 24/02/12 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1-3
A good idea, don't get me wrong but I have an issue with this story and it lies with the format. Not a dock on you as a writer or your creativity, its just its so widely spaced. fix that(or not I suppose)and you'll only hear good things from me.
Author's Response: Thanks for the advice man, I really do want this to be good for the reader. I do appreciate it. I\'ll get right to it actually. Thanks though
Rated: 12/12A [Reviews - 11]
- Eventual NaruOC
Category: General Fiction > Naruto, Het Romance > Fluff, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: All, Clan Uzumaki, Hidden Leaf Ninja, Kakashi Hatake, Pair OCNaru
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, General, Romance
Warnings: AU, Death, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 4231 | Read count: 3306 [Report This]
Published: 25/02/12 | Updated: 10/03/12
Date: 26/02/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Very good opening scene, liked it a lot. I'm very interested to see where you take this.
Author's Response: I\'m glad you enjoyed it. (: Thank you for reviewing!
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 2]
Remember kids, never gamble with the devil.
Category: OC-centric, Het Romance > Fluff, Het Romance > Angst
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Supernatural
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 1102 | Read count: 1331 [Report This]
Published: 05/03/12 | Updated: 05/03/12
Date: 07/03/12 Title: Chapter 1: A Gamble of Speed
Interesting nonetheless.I really would like to see where this story ends up, and I like the OC's personality :P
Rated: PG [Reviews - 7]
In the Valley of the End, blood flows, and giant heads bears witness. A Mangekyo is born,and a jinchuriki is dead.
Category: General Fiction > Naruto
Characters: All
Genres: Angst, General, Tragedy
Warnings: AU, Death
Challenges: , 1 - 7 What Ifs
Challenge: , 1 - 7 What Ifs
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 1768 | Read count: 2022 [Report This]
Published: 11/03/12 | Updated: 11/03/12
Date: 12/03/12 Title: Chapter 2: Secondhand
That was very good and heart-felt. I love how you displayed the emotion everyone was feeling. Very good one-shot!
Author's Response: Thank you! I thought that I was over doing it on the emotions bit, but apparently I didn\'t. I\'m glad ^^ Thanks! And nice to meet you!
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 36]
And yet, someone must have asked Kami to curse my grandfather with a slow and drawn out death. Because when I watched him in the hospital for those three days, there was nothing merciful about it.
It wasn't fair to him. He was a good man.
It was the worst three days of my life.
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Timeless
Characters: OC
Genres: Dark, Drama, General, Tragedy
Warnings: AU, Dark, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 14779 | Read count: 5022 [Report This]
Published: 20/03/12 | Updated: 13/04/12
Date: 20/03/12 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Beautifully written. Not much to say(as usual) but I'm sorry for your loss, and hope you continue to write great stories such as this tribute.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you for the compliment on the writing. I appreciate your condolences, thank you, Hazard-san. This story will have four or five more chapters. After that, I think I might write other tributes to honor those who deserve one. Thanks for reading and reviewing, I appreciate your feedback!
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 3]
Category: General Fiction > Character-Centric, General Fiction > Naruto, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Dark, Drama, General, Tragedy
Warnings: Dark, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 3348 | Read count: 1276 [Report This]
Published: 24/03/12 | Updated: 24/03/12
Date: 25/03/12 Title: Chapter 1: Naruto v.s. Sasuke
I really like it. Your writing is extremely good with the flow and word choice you use. I'm a fan of twists, and Naruto's death was quite the clincher. Now, I'm even more excited to see how you play of this event, and how it trickles down. Great start and wanting to see more.
Rated: 12/12A [Reviews - 16]
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: All
Genres: Humor
Warnings: OOC
Challenge: None
Series: The Begining, Middle, and End
Chapters: 34 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 29844 | Read count: 31725 [Report This]
Published: 03/04/12 | Updated: 15/12/12
Date: 18/06/12 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 The scroll of the sealing
Not going to try and be a downer, but I have a bone to pick with you...
Ok, first off spell check. Re-reading your work is essential or make it very carefully the first time through. Next, this isn't a race. You don't have to finish the story in record time, and nobody is here is rushing you. I'd rather see you take your time to produce a well planned out methodical chapter rather than loading up a whole bunch of scenes into one chapter, and I know it can be a bit word in script form, but you'll get the hang of it. Along with script format is don't try to have it all be conversations and thought, since it's only dialogue you tend to be expecting the readers to know where you are at all times, and depicting the background and area can give the reader a sense of immersion.As for your OC I'm on edge a bit as it seems a bit Mary-Sue. A good character has flaws, those are the kinds of things that attract us to people's OC's, weather they be physical or psychological. It what makes a character truly original, lets the readers connect with them better, and fun to read about.
I see this is your first fic, and I can tell you right now my first wasn't very good, so don't take this as me being an ass, just constructive criticism.
Somethings that may help is creating a pre-write for you're story for plot-line and character traits, re-reading your work or getting a beta-reader, and just getting writing experience. Just keep going at it, since the only way you can learn is by trying.I speak from experience as a writer, reader and someone who has taken college level Lite. and Comp. so I'm just trying to help you out. You have potential to be a really good writer, you just need a bit of "practice" that's all. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. If you read further into the story i took care of most of this. Also i hope to make it better.
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 101]
A new generation has passed since the death of Shizake Uchiha. A new hero is born and a new story descends upon him. What trials will he face on his path to becoming a ninja? What will he learn about himself? A legacy is left for him to complete...But he is unaware of it.
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Character-Centric, MadFic > Script Fic, General Fiction > Post-Naruto
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Dark, Drama, General, Mystery
Warnings: AU, Dark, Death
Challenges: , Joint Stories!
Challenge: , Joint Stories!
Series: The Path Each Takes
Chapters: 34 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 46251 | Read count: 30925 [Report This]
Published: 06/04/12 | Updated: 16/02/13
Date: 23/07/12 Title: Chapter 24: Perseverance
Freakin awesome man. I can forgive you for the romance, it was well placed and heart felt I'll give you that. Looks like the Aku is losing members to the heroes...wonder whats next.
Author's Response: Phew. Glad you could forgive me. I wanted to give Isago that epic moment coz I feel like I've kinda skipped out on him as a character. Yup they are. Which means the end is drawing near! Thanks for the reivew
Date: 18/08/12 Title: Chapter 1: Character submissions!
Sasuke and Zazuke are on the move, and all the tension is building, especially with the Aku on the move. Keep it coming man!
Author's Response: Shit is building up for sure. Thanks for the review.