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Penname: Shizake Uchiha [Contact]
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Member since: 22/02/12
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Here ya go

Age: 20
bday: 12/16/94
height: i dunno like 5 foot 6
Favorite anime: Naruto
Favorite manga: Naruto
video games: call of duty, halo, skyrim, battlefield, naruto shippuden: ultimate nina storm (1,2,generations, and 3)
movies: all the naruto movies, saving private ryan, I am legend, red tails, lets go to prison, half baked, how high, friday, Super Troopers, Juice

Story progress: well about 4 years ago when i was 13 i began writing my story about Shizake Uchiha. After a year or so of writing my computer crashed and I lost the story entirely which crushed me because i worked so hard on that. Alas, about 4 months ago i found the story in an email i sent to a friend and started re-writing the story. As the story progresses my grammar and maturity of the lines get's better (you can probably tell). For now Shizake is my main story i am working on.

Likes: Music, food, video games,
Dislikes: stupid people, liars, cheaters, shit talkers,

About me: Not much. I'm pretty laid back. I don't get angered easily. I can be sensitive or tough whenever the time is right. I like making friends who are chill and don't bombard me with continuous bullshit. I tell it how it is and if you don't like it then fuckkkk you.


Music: Metallica,Megadeth,Judas Priest,Eminem,Dr.Dre,N.W.A, Biggie Smalls, Tupac, The Juliet Massacre, Job for a Cowboy, Skirllex, Doctor P, Flux Pavillion, pretty much everything except country (I dont hate it i just dont listen to it).

Jeesus H. Christ, Tupac is the best rapper to have ever walked the face of the earth. May his soul rest in peace..

Jeez the first time I watched Naruto I was so fascinated by it. I dont know why. It caught my attention maybe because of the well developed characters, and drama that was played throughout the series. I would spend hours watching all the episodes If I could. I really didnt like anime or manga up until that point.

Nicknames given to me
Shizake-san - Sasaui Uchiha, Silverwolf1213, and pretty much everyone else
Zhake-san - RowanRose
Shizake-senpai - JubileeofPuppies
ReaperES (reaper of evil souls) - RowanRose also :P
Shi-chi - UzumakiMasumi
Shi-nii - UzumakiMasumi
Itoko-san - Sasaui Uchiha
Nii-san - Silverwolf1213

Nicknames i've given
Sasaui-chan - Sasaui Uchiha
Rose-chan - RowanRose
Wolf-chan - Silverwolf1213
Haiena-chan - JubileeofPuppies
Rose-chan - RowanRose
Nee-chan - Silverwolf1213
Itoko- Sasaui Uchiha

If I left you out tell me and i'll add :)

Stories:

Shizake Chronicles: The Awakening

Random writings that involve my first OC Shizake Uchiha. A bunch of adventures that don't have anything to do with the main story.

Shadow of Vengeance

A child's destiny is carved for revenge. He travels through all the lands, and all the villages searching for answers as well as how to control his abilities.


Relapse into Illusion

The sequel to Abysmal. Again a collaboration with Hazard. Hayai and Gatsuuga are allowed back into the normal world. Can they fit back in? Or will the madness tear them up once more?


From the Ashes of War and Tragedy

A fusion story between Naruto and the Four Horsemen. Follow each Horsemen as they journey to put a halt to the Apocalypse. Four guardians guard the keys to the gates of hell and heaven. Will they be able to complete their task?

Retribution

A collaboration I am doing with Itoko (Sasaui Uchiha). Two ninja venture to shadow country to unravel a story of their own. Will they survive the madness going on within the village?

Completed Stories:

A Legacy in the Dust

The third and final story in the series, "The Path Each Takes. It is about Zuzake Uchiha, the grandson of Shizake Uchiha and the son of Kuzake Uchiha. Follow him on his quest to discover the legacy that his ancestors left behind.


Black Fire through Lightning

The first installment in the series, "The Path Each Takes. Shizake Uchiha (My first OC). His journey begins in the Nine-Tailed Fox village as he acquires new powers and learns new things about himself. Watch as he struggles to come to peace with his cousin Sasuke.

A Shadow in the Light

The second installment in the series. It picks up with Shizake recovering from a year long coma from his fight with his cousin who is now imprisoned. Continuing to find his place in the world, he continues to learn new things about his self.

Abysmal

A collab with my good friend Hazard. Two ninja journey to southern fire country to complete a mission. What they find out shocks them as they unravel a whole mystery of it's own. Internal and external problems plague the two on their mystery.

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Title: Cursed Saint by Sasaui Uchiha
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 114]
Summary: The smallest acts of kindness can spark the greatest flames. In a village such as Konoha where the Will of Fire means so much, all flames are important.

It was such a simple act of kindness that changed his entire life around. Once it was evident he had the Will of Fire, though, a life he could never imagine began.

Ryu Sarutobi was the "adopted grandson" of Hiruzen Sarutobi. All people knew of him was he appeared out of nowhere with the Hokage's words backing him. As well as who they saw him become.

He was a boy with a strange worry over a yin-yang ring he wore. He was a boy who gave his everything to protect the village. He was a boy who had a fire raging within him. He was a boy with a great light that could pierce the darkness. All people had to do was look.

But he was also a boy who was cursed.

And that curse would do anything to devour his light.
Category: General Fiction > Naruto, General Fiction > Pre-Series, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: All, OC, Pair OCSaku
Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance
Warnings: AU, Death, OOC
Challenges: , The Ultimate OC Challenge
Challenge: , The Ultimate OC Challenge
Series: Cursed
Chapters: 18 | Completed: No | Word count: 106653 | Read count: 23323 [Report This]
Published: 20/09/10 | Updated: 07/08/15


Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 04/03/12 Title: Chapter 9: Zero to Hero

Noooooo Daichi is still alive?! Im in suspense right now...great chapter though!

Author's Response: Yep. He's alive and well. I had to do something with him, right? After all, he did get away. Now you guys know what happened to him. The fun stars when we get into what he is going to do next =D.



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 04/03/12 Title: Chapter 8: Right Before Your Eyes

that was a great excercise! I'm glad they all passed it. Great teamwork also! Nice work Sasaui-chan

Author's Response: I'm really glad you enjoy it. But the idea came from Silverwolf having me do a manhunt. After that it all just kinda came together.



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 03/03/13 Title: Chapter 13: 10.5 - Capture

Very good. I loved all the development and the brief moments of action. Nice half update. Can't wait for the next.

Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so, Itoko-san. Yep - a lot of development here. The next update is out, so you no longer have to wait for them.



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 03/03/12 Title: Chapter 7: Promise of a Lifetime

Oh wow great chapter! I'm glad Ryu is getting stronger and stronger. It sucks that he's not on a team with Naruto of Sakura but hey what can you do? I like the progression so far I can't wait to see what's next.

Author's Response: Yep. Like all characters, he has to grow. And he most definitely will. If he had already grown strong, then it wouldn\'t be right. That would be completely wrong =P. As for not being on their team, I wanted to put a twist on things. Plus I decided this near the Hidan and Kakuzu arc, so yeah.....



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 03/03/12 Title: Chapter 6: Pieces

I liked the shogi game between Asuma and Ryu, Ryu almost had him! I'm glad he's starting to vent his emotions though. I also realized something, he doesnt hang around Naruto too much anymore does he? Maybe later he will...anyways great chapter!

Author's Response: Yeah, I enjoyed that part. From the very beginning I had the idea of having this give a bit of a look into they mystery of his brain. That being the strange moment when he did that strategy. He did need a way to vent his emotions, and this just worked perfectly. That, and I wanted to later bond him and Shikamaru. As for Naruto, he\'ll hang out with him a little, but mostly this is on team 10. Though their bond of friendship will always be there.



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 01/03/12 Title: Chapter 3: Taken

aw poor Sakura...I hate bullies. Jeez I wonder what these guys want with them...and why is Ino's relative an escapee...Good chapter

Author's Response: Yeah, bullies suck. Aki is extremely mean because she knows just what to go for since everyone else did as well before and while she did. As for her relative, well. You\'ll just have to wait and read on (which you obviously have.....)



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 01/03/12 Title: Chapter 4: Kryptonite

I like the bond between Ryu and Sakura. You've done a good job at making me hate Daichi and Shiro though :P I cant wait to read more

Author's Response: Their bond is a really fun thing to do. It\'s one of my favorite things about this part of the story is the bond. As for Daichi and Shiro, they\'re two bad guys that really shape who Ryu is. I never even expected them to be much, but they suddenly helped develop his character more than I thought.



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 01/03/12 Title: Chapter 5: Superman

Oh wow this chapter was really intense...you created such a dark moood also...That jutsu sounded terrifying, i havent felt anything this dark in a long time. Good chapter, i really enjoyed reading it. I like dark things

Author's Response: I think this is one of my more intense chapters for this story. It\'s also one of my favorites as well. I really looked forward to this story before I even got too far into the story. That and a chapter that won\'t happen for a while. The jutsu..... Yeah, it was terrifying, for both the user and the attacked. Actually, it destroyed them both, only in different ways. Is it bad that the destroyed look on his face was the part I was looking forward to the most?



Title: The Reincarnation of a Legend by silverwolf1213
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 141]
Summary:


Thanks to BattyBigSister for the wonderful banner!

She was running away.

Finally.

Finally, Suki Kurohoshi was running away from her village. The six-year-old was finally able to escape from her terrible life.

She was going to run as far as her legs could carry her. She was going to abandon a home that was never a home to begin with. She was going to leave behind villagers who hated her for a reason that she did not know of.

Yes, run away. That would solve all of her problems. In a perfect world, running away would be the answer to everything.

Unfortunately, this isn't a perfect world. And running away won't solve every problem.

You can run away from home, and you can run away from people you grew up with. But now Suki is going to realize that the one thing that no one can run away from... is destiny.


Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Character-Centric, General Fiction > Naruto, Het Romance > Fluff, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: All, OC, Pair OCNaru
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, General, Humor, Romance, Spiritual
Warnings: AU, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: Destiny is Calling
Chapters: 14 | Completed: No | Word count: 79859 | Read count: 26500 [Report This]
Published: 27/11/10 | Updated: 17/01/12


Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 26/02/12 Title: Chapter 9: The Meeting

I think the flow of characters so far is good. One minor thing though is Hinata's studdering. It doesnt bother me because I know she does that but I think you should tone it down a bit. Otherwise great story! I really enjoy this

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m always worried that I\'m totally going to ruin the characters when I write them. Hmm, I didn\'t realize I made Hinata stutter so much; I\'ll remember that, thank you so much for pointing that out. Anyway, thanks a lot for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate the feedback!



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 26/02/12 Title: Chapter 8: Twenty Questions

Hell yeah! This was awesome, the suspense killed me during the bird part...the whole time i was thinking, "where is Kakashi, where is Kakashi" haha this was an excellent chapter, I can tell you put in a lot of work for it. Keep it up!

Author's Response: :D This review made me really happy, just because you seemed so excited with what I wrote. I appreciate that kind of enthusiasm, thank you. The suspense in this chapter was something that I thought would really bring back the whole theme of the story: the hatred towards Suki. I\'m glad you liked this chapter so much, that makes me feel so ecstatic now! Thank you so much for the kind words in this review, I\'m so happy that you\'re enjoying this story so far! I hope you continue to like it!



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 26/02/12 Title: Chapter 7: First Day at the Academy

this chapter was so heart-warming, especially to see Naruto become that close to someone so quick. I really liked it!

Author's Response: Yeah, I liked this chapter just because it was a lot sweeter than the earlier installments. Naruto and Suki both needed people to be close to them, so they found each other. It seemed appropriate :) I\'m glad you liked it, thanks for reading this!



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 26/02/12 Title: Chapter 6: Gotta Be Somebody

This chapter wasnt unrealistic at all! I thought it was seriously a great chapter. And such a great happy ending too :) you did good!

Author's Response: Really? I thought it was completely unrealistic, but I\'m glad you don\'t think so! I figured Suki deserved the happy ending in the finale of this arc. I\'m really happy that you liked this chapter! It makes me feel so excited :D Thanks a bunch!



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 26/02/12 Title: Chapter 5: Flashback

This made me feel bad for Suki, especially when the father said she is not our daughter anymore. It was good you added it though, it provided a lot of background to help develop the story.

Author's Response: Cool, that\'s what I was going for: having the reader feel sad for the protagonist. I personally feel bad for putting Suki through so much bad stuff, even straight from childbirth, but it had to be done to make an interesting story. This background info does help the reader to understand Suki\'s situation a lot better, and it\'ll eventually play a larger role in the story. Thanks for review, I appreciate it!



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 26/02/12 Title: Chapter 4: The Conference

This chapter was amazing, so far i really enjoy this story. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: I\'m glad you continue to like this story! It makes me feel all giggly inside, haha! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you continue to enjoy this!



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 26/02/12 Title: Chapter 3: Second Chance

Oh wow this kept me on the edge of my seat. I really like where this is going so far, I can tell it will be an interesting read. Haha kakashi is funny as usual I like the way you portrayed him i think you did a great job of doing that. Anyways i can't wait to see what's in store of suki. Definitely going to read more!

Author's Response: Heck yeah! I kept you in suspense, mission accomplished! I\'m glad this story has caught your interest so far. I\'m happy to hear you liked the way Kakashi came out, I was worried people wouldn\'t like him. I\'m so excited that you like this story so far! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, you\'re awesome!



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 25/02/12 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Wow this is incredible i really liked this opening. It really is an excellent idea especially if it was off the top of your head. I cant wait to read this!

Author's Response: :D Aww, I\'m so honored you decided to read this! I\'m all flattered and whatnot now. I\'m glad you like the idea, it was kinda was off the top of my head, but I put a lot of thought into it when I actually started developing the concept. I hope you enjoy reading this! Thanks so much for deciding to read this, and thanks even more for leaving a review! You\'re so incredible!



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 26/02/12 Title: Chapter 10: Stop And Stare

This chapter was filled with the right amount of emotion. It's good you include all the other character's problems along with Suki's own problems. It provides backbone to the story and you do a good job of it. Keep up the good work i'm definitely hooked on this story.

Author's Response: This was one my more favorite chapters so far, just because of the emotion I tried to illustrate here. I\'m glad that emotion came out nicely :D I wanted to show the other characters\' problems as well because it all really does tie into Suki\'s own story. I\'m glad you think I do a good job with it. I\'m so happy to read your reviews, they\'re so nice and encouraging! I\'m really excited that you like this story, I really hope you continue to enjoy it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, you\'re awesome!



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 26/02/12 Title: Chapter 11: For the First Time

I was not expecting that kind of ending, but it was different and i liked it. Haha i had to take a break reading this my eyes are throbbing. Good chapter though it was both heartwarming and heartcrushing (which isnt a bad thing) it provided a contrast and provided a different atmosphere. Good job you really are a good writer

Author's Response: I don\'t think anyone was expecting that ending because it was so different. I liked it, though I was worried others wouldn\'t. But people gave positive feedback on the originality, so I\'m quite happy with that :D Aww, I\'m sorry your eyes were throbbing, I knew this chapter was too long! *sigh* I\'m glad you liked this chapter through the heart-warming and heart-crushing moments. I was so worried the depressing atmosphere would get a lot of negative comments, but I\'m happy that you liked the contrast. Thanks so much for the lovely compliment! Your reviews are really making my day, thanks a bunch!



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 26/02/12 Title: Chapter 12: Apologize

Ahh I want Suki and Naruto to make up! I didnt think Naruto would hold a grudge that long. But I guess I understand due to the circumstances. Good chapter I'm very excited to see how the survival training pans out and to see how the other two in Suki's squad develop. Good job!

Author's Response: I know, so do I! I don\'t know why I\'m dragging out the grudge for this long! Oh wait... Yeah, I actually do have something planned for the whole argument thing, don\'t worry ;) Naruto just needs some time to get over it; he\'s emotionally unstable on the topic right now. I\'m glad you liked this chapter, thanks a bunch for reading and reviewing! You\'re awesome!



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 26/02/12 Title: Chapter 13: I'll Make a Man Out of You

Haha that song was so fit for this chapter. It was a fun chapter to read, I enjoyed how each of them used their abilities. But agh!!! my eyes are like bleeding now haha I went and got coffee and sat down for a while before reading the second half of it haha. Good chapter though!

Author's Response: I know, right? I love that song, it\'s so amazing :D I\'m glad you thought this chapter was fun; I personally liked it because we get to see the personalities and abilities of Suki\'s new teammates. Oh no, I\'m so sorry your eyes are in so much pain! I knew my long chapters would hurt someone eventually! I hope the coffee helped, coffee is the miracle drink after all ;D I\'m so happy you liked this chapter though! Thank you so much for the incredible review, I appreciate it!



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 27/02/12 Title: Chapter 14: Her Diamonds

Yay progression, haha. Im excited to see what will happen in the land of silver and how the squad will fight back. I can tell some true powers are going to be shown. Good chapter! Cant wait for more

Author's Response: I know! The plot developments make me so excited! I\'m so happy to finally get to throw in some original stuff. The adventure in the Land of Silver will be an epic arc, let me tell you. Some awesome powers will definitely be shown, and some cool fights are planned out as well. I\'m so happy you enjoyed this chapter! I hope you like the upcoming updates!



Title: Pirates of the Mist by silverwolf1213
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 102]
Summary:
ABANDONED: DUE TO LACK OF MOTIVATION, THIS WILL NO LONGER BE UPDATED - LOOK AT THE REWRITE A TALE BEST TOLD DEAD.




Thanks to BattyBigSister for the wonderful banner, and thanks to Sasaui Uchiha for help with the summary!


"When you try to escape the past, it always finds a way to come back to haunt you."

The Blue Tiger of the Mist has always tried to escape that awful history. Now suddenly, things that were meant to be left behind keep on reappearing.

Instead of being surrounded by the pirates of The Midnight Thief, shinobi of Konohagakure have taken their place. Memories and secrets from the past are returning, pushing for the heart. The snake man is once again on the hunt, searching for his prey. Leaving the crew to go to Konoha is suddenly bringing everything forward.

Will it be enough to crack the legendary captain of the renowned Blue Pirates?


Category: OC-centric, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Crossovers, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata
Characters: OC, Orochimaru, Sasuke Uchiha, Team Asuma, Team Gai, Team Kakashi, Team Kuranai, Tsunade
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: AU, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: Hoist the Colors
Chapters: 13 | Completed: No | Word count: 77958 | Read count: 32605 [Report This]
Published: 18/12/10 | Updated: 14/04/12


Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 16/03/12 Title: Chapter 9: Circus

Whoa those were epic epic battles! The pirates and the ninja battling it out was awesome. Kasumi is really great at Taijutsu also. I really like where this story is headed so far and I cant wait to see how Kasumi executes her plan. Great work!

Author's Response: Yay! You liked the battles! I had so much trouble writing this chapter because I already don't think my fights are any good. So writing this chapter was like beating my head against a wall. I have grown used to writing Kasumi's kekkei genkai, so placing her in a taijutsu-only match was difficult. But you liked it, and that makes me feel so relieved. This story does have a few extra turns left, I hope you enjoy them ;) Thanks so much for reading this, Shizake-san! You're awesome!



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 03/03/12 Title: Chapter 4: Rematch! Pirates versus Ninjas!

Whoa...that was an intense fight, i really dont know the correct words to describe it. Awesome! that was awesome! I cant wait to read this!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I was a bit worried about that fight, action scenes aren\'t my best. But I\'m so happy to hear that you liked it! Thank you so much for the awesome review, I really appreciate it!



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 16/04/12 Title: Chapter 13: How Far We've Come

OK! So I finally got around to this! This was awesome. I can't wait for the invasion. I know it's going to be soooo epic. I wanna say Sasuke but I feel like that's what you want everyone to think. So maybe Kabuto...Idk. Keep up the amazing work wolf-chan!

Author's Response: I can't wait for the invasion, either! I've been waiting for this since, like, Chapter 8! I really hope I live up the epicness that I have thought of in my head. Cross your fingers for me :D So, you think either Sasuke or Kabuto, huh? I cannot tell you if you are correct or incorrect, you must wait and see ;) Thanks for the awesome review, Shizake-san! I appreciate it!



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 03/03/12 Title: Chapter 5: Waking Up In Vegas

Hmm i'm very interested to see this type of punishment go through...gotta keep reading! great chapter

Author's Response: This is where the bit of twist begins. I\'m glad you kind of like it, that\'s so encouraging! I hope you like reading the reformation punishment! Thanks for reading and leaving a review! You\'re awesome!