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Here ya go
Age: 20
bday: 12/16/94
height: i dunno like 5 foot 6
Favorite anime: Naruto
Favorite manga: Naruto
video games: call of duty, halo, skyrim, battlefield, naruto shippuden: ultimate nina storm (1,2,generations, and 3)
movies: all the naruto movies, saving private ryan, I am legend, red tails, lets go to prison, half baked, how high, friday, Super Troopers, Juice
Story progress: well about 4 years ago when i was 13 i began writing my story about Shizake Uchiha. After a year or so of writing my computer crashed and I lost the story entirely which crushed me because i worked so hard on that. Alas, about 4 months ago i found the story in an email i sent to a friend and started re-writing the story. As the story progresses my grammar and maturity of the lines get's better (you can probably tell). For now Shizake is my main story i am working on.
Likes: Music, food, video games,
Dislikes: stupid people, liars, cheaters, shit talkers,
About me: Not much. I'm pretty laid back. I don't get angered easily. I can be sensitive or tough whenever the time is right. I like making friends who are chill and don't bombard me with continuous bullshit. I tell it how it is and if you don't like it then fuckkkk you.
Music: Metallica,Megadeth,Judas Priest,Eminem,Dr.Dre,N.W.A, Biggie Smalls, Tupac, The Juliet Massacre, Job for a Cowboy, Skirllex, Doctor P, Flux Pavillion, pretty much everything except country (I dont hate it i just dont listen to it).
Jeesus H. Christ, Tupac is the best rapper to have ever walked the face of the earth. May his soul rest in peace..
Jeez the first time I watched Naruto I was so fascinated by it. I dont know why. It caught my attention maybe because of the well developed characters, and drama that was played throughout the series. I would spend hours watching all the episodes If I could. I really didnt like anime or manga up until that point.
Nicknames given to me
Shizake-san - Sasaui Uchiha, Silverwolf1213, and pretty much everyone else
Zhake-san - RowanRose
Shizake-senpai - JubileeofPuppies
ReaperES (reaper of evil souls) - RowanRose also :P
Shi-chi - UzumakiMasumi
Shi-nii - UzumakiMasumi
Itoko-san - Sasaui Uchiha
Nii-san - Silverwolf1213
Nicknames i've given
Sasaui-chan - Sasaui Uchiha
Rose-chan - RowanRose
Wolf-chan - Silverwolf1213
Haiena-chan - JubileeofPuppies
Rose-chan - RowanRose
Nee-chan - Silverwolf1213
Itoko- Sasaui Uchiha
If I left you out tell me and i'll add :)
Stories:
Shizake Chronicles: The Awakening
Random writings that involve my first OC Shizake Uchiha. A bunch of adventures that don't have anything to do with the main story.
Shadow of Vengeance
A child's destiny is carved for revenge. He travels through all the lands, and all the villages searching for answers as well as how to control his abilities.
Relapse into Illusion
The sequel to Abysmal. Again a collaboration with Hazard. Hayai and Gatsuuga are allowed back into the normal world. Can they fit back in? Or will the madness tear them up once more?
From the Ashes of War and Tragedy
A fusion story between Naruto and the Four Horsemen. Follow each Horsemen as they journey to put a halt to the Apocalypse. Four guardians guard the keys to the gates of hell and heaven. Will they be able to complete their task?
Retribution
A collaboration I am doing with Itoko (Sasaui Uchiha). Two ninja venture to shadow country to unravel a story of their own. Will they survive the madness going on within the village?
Completed Stories:
A Legacy in the Dust
The third and final story in the series, "The Path Each Takes. It is about Zuzake Uchiha, the grandson of Shizake Uchiha and the son of Kuzake Uchiha. Follow him on his quest to discover the legacy that his ancestors left behind.
Black Fire through Lightning
The first installment in the series, "The Path Each Takes. Shizake Uchiha (My first OC). His journey begins in the Nine-Tailed Fox village as he acquires new powers and learns new things about himself. Watch as he struggles to come to peace with his cousin Sasuke.
A Shadow in the Light
The second installment in the series. It picks up with Shizake recovering from a year long coma from his fight with his cousin who is now imprisoned. Continuing to find his place in the world, he continues to learn new things about his self.
Abysmal
A collab with my good friend Hazard. Two ninja journey to southern fire country to complete a mission. What they find out shocks them as they unravel a whole mystery of it's own. Internal and external problems plague the two on their mystery.
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 22]Category: General Fiction > Naruto, General Fiction > Timeskip, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: Akatsuki, Clan Uchiha, Hidden Leaf Ninja, Madara Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, General
Warnings: AU
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 | Completed: No | Word count: 19983 | Read count: 9811 [Report This]
Published: 12/06/12 | Updated: 12/11/12
Date: 04/07/12 Title: Chapter 6: Acension
Huh, never expected Izuna to hang with Ino and Sakura. It was pretty funny though. I liked the sparring match too, Izuna definitely is a master at genjutsu. Nice update, can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Well he still doesn't know anybody really, so that's what he was stuck with. Next chapter is coming up soon!
Date: 19/06/12 Title: Chapter 2: A New World
Nice. I totally forgot they never called the Senju a Hokage until way later.
It'll be interesting to see how a new Uchiha will interact with the world especially since all of the Uchiha are dead. Nice!
Author's Response: Yep, lots of stuff went on in the many years he missed, and it will be something to be reckoned with for sure.
Date: 19/06/12 Title: Chapter 3: Interface
Yep. This is going to be an awesome story. I want to see another chapter now!
I like how he's already meeting Sasuke. So this should definitely get interesting. Nice job!
Author's Response: You will get a new chapter soon enough! lol, I'm going to probably be doing bulk updates with multi chapters just to see how that goes over, but it will be less frequent.
Date: 26/06/12 Title: Chapter 4: Revalations
WTFUCK that was creepy as fuck. Dude, I'm lovin this story, off to read more. Keep it the fuck up dude!
Author's Response: Muhahaha, glad you're loving it.
Date: 26/06/12 Title: Chapter 5: New Role
It's interesting to see him trying to catch up on all of these things. Though I never expected him to vouch for Hokage. I would like to see him as Hokage though. And I wonder how an encounter with Itachi would go since Izuna could probably murk his ass into the ground. Nice updates man, keep em coming.
Author's Response: Well he was just trying to press Danzo's buttons at first, but then he realized he actually should do it for his clan's pride, and himself. You'll see plenty more soon!
Date: 11/07/12 Title: Chapter 7: Solstice
Shit. I did not expect that turn. I don't even know what to expect at this point. Great job keep it up.
Author's Response: I didn't think you would anticipate this, and more updates are to come soon!
Date: 16/07/12 Title: Chapter 8: Our Purposes and Beliefs
Damn you can do so much with this story. You've set it up real nicely for future events too. Wonder how Izuna will affect all of it...Nice chapter!
Date: 02/08/12 Title: Chapter 9: Something in Common
Nice development. Can't wait to see the next chapter
Date: 19/08/12 Title: Chapter 10: Different Seasons
Sweet update. Just as expected from Izuna, very powerful. Update soon!
Author's Response: I'll try to update soon!
Date: 12/11/12 Title: Chapter 11: Civil Disobedience
Interesting Interesting...Izuna definitely proves a worthy challenge to anyone and I like his fighting style. Good chapter bro.
Author's Response: Glad you like it man! I'll have more out the gate soon enough.
Rated: PG
[Reviews - 18]And to create hatred and love, we must have memory and experience. It is our connections, our experiences that make us who we are.
So when you lose your memory and experience, who you are, have you got nothing?
And when you’ve got nothing, when you lose everything….
Does it really matter?
Who is she?
What is she?
Where has she gone?
When did she go?
Why did it happen, and
How did she die?
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Dark, Drama, Humor, Mystery, Tragedy
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: Kokoro Uchiha
Chapters: 4 | Completed: No | Word count: 5696 | Read count: 3752 [Report This]
Published: 25/06/12 | Updated: 27/08/12
Date: 25/06/12 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Part 2: Until Death Do Us Part
No time wasted into the Uchiha massacre (I feel like I said that last time). Like usual you described it well. The anguish, the despair, it was definitely all there. There seems to be complaints about it all being in bold but I don't care lol. It was a great chapter and I can't wait for more :D
Author's Response: You did, and it's nice still the second time around. XD It's awesome hearing what you thought and i'm doubly glad that the feelings were all there. It's kind of hard to tell at times. T_T LOL, thank you but it wasn't supposed to be in bold! XP Thank you Zhake-san! I hope to show everyone more soon! You really forget how nice it is putting stuff up on TONFA.
Date: 25/06/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Part 1: Until Death Do Us Part
This was a great start. It was...cute? haha I'm not good with words.
I'm not a big fan of putting japanese words into a story but hey that's your style and it adds some zest. Can't wait to see the next update.
Author's Response: Yessss! First review, thank you Zhake-san! I'm glad you liked it. Cute! haha, i like that! XD Ah, the japanese words; i use stuff that can't be directly translated into English, like Nii-san, as Miya-chi advised. :P Whoa, zest, that's an awesome word! I shall update soon! XD
Date: 09/07/12 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Splintered Dreams
Jeesus this was intense. I really liked the emotion you evoked into me. It was a creepy picture but in a good way. I'm really enjoying this and like most of the good authors on here I really envy your writing style. Great chapter. Can't wait to see the next update.
Author's Response: Whoa! I was so surprised when I found I had a new review already! YATTAI! "Intense." *closes eyes and grins real broad like* Mwahhh, i'm so happy that my writing was able to immerse you so much that you felt that way. That's perfect, that means that I accomplished what i wanted to do. Thanks Zhake-san, It's awesome that you see my writing that way~ I bet you know how awesome your writing skillz are! XD Ah, update. T_T It has now become my personal vow not to promise quick updates because I am the BIGGEST procrastinator this world has ever seen, so all I shall say is; I hope you like it! =D
Date: 28/08/12 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Thank You
Very sad...The emotion was very raw and you did good with the detailed description of it.
Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you. I really meant for it to be raw, I wanted the reader to get caught up in his pace. It seems I've accomplished that, judging from your review? Thank you for reading and reviewing, Zhake-san, it's always appreciated. They're concise and sum things up. Arigato!
Rated: R18
[Reviews - 7]Category: General Fiction > Character-Centric, Het Romance > Fluff, Het Romance > Angst, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden, General Fiction > Post-Naruto
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki, Pair SasuSaku, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, General, Graphic lemon
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 8118 | Read count: 656 [Report This]
Published: 03/07/12 | Updated: 21/09/12
Date: 04/07/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - It's our Job, damn it!
Well hey, I gotta say I liked it. The writing style flows very well and you managed to keep Sakura in character. Though...I can't imagine Sasuke saying kitty...Or teasing like he was doing. Otherwise it was a nice chapter and I can't wait to read more. Oh and don't over-think the battle scenes. Just let them come to you naturally. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind review, Shizake Uchiha! And for popping my review cherry. ;P I really appreciate your kind words and constructive views about how I am characterizing the characters. I will definitely keep in mind about the dialogue and how Uchiha would speak (which I hope I fixed in chapter two). Have to say Uchiha is a bit difficult and Sakura is simply loads of fun. Thanks, again. C:
Date: 05/07/12 Title: Seeling the Hawk *Chapters have been reworked*
Bravo! Bravo! Complete improvement on this chapter. Sasuke's dialogue was definitely in character. I really like how your showing how Sakura has matured since she was just a kid. She really has matured hmm? This was an awesome chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you for your second review. I will say that writing Uchiha is difficult because he does not really emote much. I had remembered a story discussing how Sakura had deciphered his "hn." and I do think that I am having to keep in mind what would be the difference in different situations. Sakura is a lot of fun to write. I wanted her to be someone who voiced her mind (basically let her Inner Sakura out), not afraid to feel pride (maybe too much?), laugh at a situation, curse, get angry etc but then she matured in a protective bubble and I want to explore what would happen if someone like Sasuke was to return.
Date: 25/09/12 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Distract! Distract! Distract!
Yeah like Silver said, I liked the original better. Don't be too hard on your writing. You don't wanna be re-working all the chapters that aren't perfect you know? Just let it flow and come to you naturally. In the end I'll love it, I'm the least picky person when it comes to fan-fiction honestly. But yeah pretty solid again! Can't wait to see the newest update.
Rated: U
[Reviews - 8]
Iriyashi Hokori had learned to hate his little brother from an early age, the adorable Iriyashi Takeru-kun, the perfect angel and everyone's favorite. Hokori never stood a chance. When he failed his father's Test of Character for the final time, he gives up hope of anyone ever acknowledging him.
When he graduates and joins a team, it's not long before his team realizes its greatest burden is Hokori's lack of determination and will.
Can they bring back Hokori's hope before he gets them all killed?
Category: General Fiction > Naruto, General Fiction > Timeless
Characters: Iruka Umino, OC
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General
Warnings: None
Challenges: , The Ultimate OC Challenge
Challenge: , The Ultimate OC Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 3891 | Read count: 3398
[Report This]
Published: 25/07/12 | Updated: 21/08/12
Date: 25/07/12 Title: Chapter 1: The Final Test
Hey that was actually pretty good. I can't wait to see what comes next.
Author's Response: :D Thanks a lot!! I'm so happy to see a review! I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 21/08/12 Title: Chapter 2: The Jinkaku no Shiren
Ah this was awesome! I was happy when you updated.
I was a bit confused the whole chapter with all the names backwards and the japanese words. But that's coz I'm not really used to reading that way.
Other than that I knew what was going on. More progression and characterization of the team. Nice :)
Can't wait to see the next update!
Author's Response: Sorry for the confusion. I guess I should add notes when I do things like that. :/ Thanks for letting me know. I'll fix that. ^_^ And thanks for the review & compliment!!
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 37]You’re a traitor! You killed your family and your teammates! What do you have to say to that?
Disgrace…
You have fallen so low. You were once a well-respected prodigy. What has happened to you?
Dishonesty…
You’re an S-class pirate captain, a missing-nin who leads a pack of seadog criminals. Why on earth should I trust you?
I am a tiger, a predator with nothing left to my name but for the skills I have acquired. No one knows my story except those that I have killed. You should have listened to the rumors, for I am not one who takes kindly to new players. But if you truly wish to challenge me, then let the game begin.
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Dark, Drama, General, Tragedy
Warnings: AU, Dark, Death
Challenge: None
Series: Hoist the Colors
Chapters: 4 | Completed: No | Word count: 15713 | Read count: 4339 [Report This]
Published: 04/08/12 | Updated: 24/02/13
Date: 09/12/12 Title: Chapter 3: Convergence
Woot what an awesome chapter! I thought for sure there was going to be an epic fight but guess not. Though I know there will be soon! Awesome update :D
Author's Response: Gah, I'm a failure~ I didn't give you the epic fight T_T I'm sorry, Shizake-san, for disappointing you *sobs* But you are right, there will be an epic fight!... I'm not sure when, to be honest, but there will be one! ^_^'''' Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing this! I'm glad you enjoyed!
Date: 25/02/13 Title: Chapter 4: When Old and New Friends Meet
Haha this was a long ass chapter indeed :P
I liked it a lot. Really interested to see how the Daiymo and Kasumi knew each other and what they went through. I know you gave some hints but I mean in deeper detail.
Masaru...isn't he part of the Suihesen? (I think I spelled it right) Interesting run in with Naruto.
Ah yes still keeping Orochimaru, Kabuto, and Sasuke in the mix. Sweet. Excited to see where that leads.
So awesome chapter, I'll be looking for the next update.
Author's Response: Sorry about that >_> In my defense, I guess I've written longer installments in the past but this was definitely pretty lengthy compared to previous chapters. I'm glad you liked this chapter :D I'm drawing out the relationship between Juro and Kasumi so slowly XD It'll take nearly the whole story to explain to the readers how they know each other and what went down in the past. Stay tuned ;D Masaru is part of the Suiheisen, yes. He's Kasumi's right hand man. And I was a little iffy on bringing Orochimaru and Kabuto and Sasuke in this story again, but I decided I liked the mesh of madness they brought in. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 04/08/12 Title: Chapter 1: Suiheisen
Wow. Don't be nervous. This was amazing! You know I'm not one to be picky with a story but wow, definite improvement from the original. Such raw emotion too! Wow this was amazing! Great chapter
Author's Response: My first review for this story! Thank you so much, Nii-san! I'm really happy to hear that I improved from the first story. I wanted this to be better and maybe darker and more intense than the original. So to know that I did well with the emotional aspect of it is also really nice to hear :D Thanks so much for reading and leaving a kind review, Shizake! Much appreciated!
Date: 19/08/12 Title: Chapter 2: Two Letters, Two Swords
Nah I don't think you OOCed Naruto.
It was good development you know. You gotta have those in order to get to the action and stuff.
Not much else to say, good chapter though. As usual, doing well with all the emotion and detailed description. Good jorb.
Author's Response: Phew, I'm glad I didn't OOC Naruto. I think I just have trouble writing him in Shippuden time. I'm happy that you liked the development in this installment; I know it wasn't as exciting as the first chapter, but this is just the buildup for more action to come. I'm glad you're still enjoying this story, and I hope you continue to like it. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Shizake-san! I appreciate it!
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 3]Because it sets your heart aflame and burns it to a crisp
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Timeless
Characters: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Dark, Horror, Tragedy
Warnings: Dark, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 783 | Read count: 1547 [Report This]
Published: 27/08/12 | Updated: 27/08/12
Date: 28/08/12 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Ah what a great start. Not much going on but it was good! I'm very intrigued on what's going on. Not much else to say but good job, can't wait to see the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you for that, Zhake san! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing, that we really appreciate it!
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 28]
CURRENTLY BEING REVISED
A young wandering kunoichi travels alone in search for her memories. It isn't long before she arrives in Konoha in hopes of finding something there. When secrets start to be unveiled, it become clear that she's no ordinary genin. Having been wandering about alone for a number of years, comrades and family is a foreign concept to her, and the change is something she tries to get used to. However, faces new and old begin to appear as she learns that facing the world alone is not the only path to take.
"When I woke up, there were only three things that I could remember: My name is Riku, I was seven years old, and I'm a shinobi."
Category: OC-centric
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: Hidden Past
Chapters: 24 | Completed: No | Word count: 62227 | Read count: 22844 [Report This]
Published: 26/09/12 | Updated: 01/04/13
Date: 07/10/12 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five: The Impossible Truth
Awesome development. Learning more about Riku and her past. Good all around, nice work :)