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Hold Me by doodlelover

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Well, this is new. A poem? From me? This cannot be a good sign...But, for those of you who read my other stories, it would be nice to get a review to get over the writers block X] Yes, writers block. My worst enemy. I have good ideas, fun ones too...It's just the stuff in between that I hate writing. This poem was to (hopefully) get over it. And to make my writing better. To top it off...It was fun and made me feel better.



Warnings: Angst. Unrequited love..And...Why do I need to warn you again?



So, without further ado, I present to you....










* * ~HOLD ME~ * *










Hold me close, hold me tender

Hold me until my breathing stops and my blood turns cold

Hold me until my arms turn weak and my legs grow weary

Embrace me until I can’t love another

Hold me until I start to shudder

Kiss me until my heart starts to quake

Hold me so I can’t stay awake

Make me laugh

Make me cry

Make me feel so I stay alive

You make my senses go wild

You make feel as if I’m a child

The way I smile when you’re around

The way you tug me to the ground

Hold me so I can fly

Kiss me so I will never die

The way you love is like no other

I wish that you didn’t love another

My tears sting

There are rips in my wings

Why do you long to hear her sing

My arms are stretching

My heart is wrenching

Why must I feel this yearning

The fire in my heart is burning

My love

Your affection

The way you say my name

The way you say her name

Not too different

But not quite the same

The way you say it is so...plain

It’s like you don’t want me sane

When you look you make me tremble

My heart is not yet assembled

So make me wait

Make her happy

All those feelings are just too sappy

Lust

Passion

Sorrow

Love

Hate

I won’t open my gate

The lock is in place

And so is the look on your face

I could say my “I love you’s”

But you’ve already said your “I do's”

So you lied about the catch

Played with me like a dog in ‘fetch’

These feelings of yours

Were never true

I could never be with you

So say your “Sorry’s”

Give me my best wishes

I always have my pretty little fishes

I love you

You hate me

I wish it could be the same

But my stitches are here to stay

Will the scar heal? It may

But the darkness will never go away


Hold me close

Hold me tender


...I wish I could stay with you forever...












Yes, well, there it is! Depressing? I hope kinda not...My life is depressing? How sad. I love my beta(fish)...He's so pretty. Why would a guy give you a fish? Why not a bear? Psh.

Oh well. My rhyming was bad, I know. But I usually don't try to do that sorta thing. Not good at it. Anyone got any suggestions to make it better? If you do, I would love to hear it.

This was inspired by my day. Got another hug from Zach. Hung out with him. Talked, laughed, and then sat with his girlfriend on the bus...What a little masochist I am...But, I can't tell him I love him, and I can't say I want him. Can't ask him to the movies. Can't spend too much time with him or act like I like him. Because that would ruin everything. So, I have to wait and then two weeks after they break up (maybe) make my move. Can't be a whore, right? I'm not that mean. And I will not be like those other girls that choose to mean to her because they're going out. She's a great person with a good heart...

But anyways, that's off topic. I hope you enjoyed it and/or related to it...Just a bit. I know we have all experienced heartbreak. So...Just keep hoping! No one dies alone! We all have our happy ending...someday.

Even if it's in the place we expect least



*love*




~lemon
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