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He said "no" by Smurd

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Story notes: Yea, I know that it starts at chapter four, but that's cause I accidently deleted the previous story that this one is replacing. I'll type the one first chapters later, I just wanted to put this one up now, so my readers could read it, and not think that I had deleted my story for good.
Naruto sat on the couch, next to Sasuke. They were watching a movie, Die Hard, to be exact. Well, Sasuke was watching it, Naruto, however was deep in thought.

'Should this be the night?' He asked himself 'Should I tell him?'
r0;...don't you, Naruto?r1;
r0;huh?r1;
r0;I said, I love this movie, don't you, Naruto?r1;
r0;oh...yea...yea, it's great?r1;
r0;Something wrong?r1;
r0;Nah, just thirsty, but I'll get it, if you don't mind.r1;
r0;Nah, I got it.r1; Sasuke hit pause on the remote, and walked to get Naruto a drink.

While Sasuke was in the kitchen, Naruto began to talk to himself.

r0;Maybe I should tell him....he acts like he does...but what if I'm wrong-?r1; Naruto was interrupted before he could think more.

r0;Wrong about what?r1; Sasuke asked when he walked in holding his and Naruto's drinks.
r0;A..About the end of the movie...I have a thought about how it's gonna end..r1;Naruto lied.
r0;I thought you'd seen it before, ya said ya had.r1;
r0;Nope.r1; Naruto lied again.
r0;Oh well, all I had was Dr. Pepper, is that okay?r1;
r0;Yeh, it's fine.r1;

Sasuke handed Naruto his drink and sat down.
r0;Hey Sasuke,r1; Naruto asked before Sasuke resumed the movie.
r0;Yea?r1; Sasuke turned to his friend.

Naruto decided tonight was the night. He leaned forward and pressed his lips against Sasuke's and hoped for the best.

Sasuke pushed Naruto away from him.

r0;Naruto, what the-r1;
r0;I love you.r1;
r0;What?r1;
r0;I love you! I have loved you!r1;
r0;Get out!r1;
r0;Wha-r1;
r0;GET OUT!r1; Sasuke screamed.
r0;But...I thought...r1;
r0;Get OUT, Naruto, I don't want to hurt you. Get out!r1;

Naruto opened his mouth to protest again, but words caught in his throat and tears swelled in his eyes. He stood and walked out of the house.
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