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Universe Disorder! by theez

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Fabia jumped at Donald and said, "Get ready!" She swung at him, and he dodged, and used fire magic, which Fabia dodged. Donald said, "Let's hope this works!" He swung his magic staff at her, and hit her arm. She flinched, and said, "Ngh................N-Nice play. But........." She swung at him, and he intercepted it with his staff. The swords were in a lower-case T form, and Fabia made Donald skid backwards. She made his staff fly out of his hands, and punched him. He flew backwards, and Fabia jumped out of the way as Gohan and Goofy continued their fight. Gohan thrusted at Goofy, who blocked with his shield. Gohan sliced horizontally, which was blocked again. They continued to fight like this, until Gohan noticed that Goofy's feet were wide open to be attacked. So, he got on the ground, and did a spin kick, making Goofy lose his balance. Gohan then kicked him back, and Goofy landed next to Donald. Gohan watched Sora and Roxas's fight, which was intense. Sora blocked diagonally as Roxas sliced vertically, and swung. Roxas dodged, and they clashed. He brought Sora's Keyblade down to the ground, and just as he was getting ready to hit him with his other, Sora broke free, and jumped backwards. Roxas panted, "Good job. You've improved since our fight in The World that Never Was." Sora nodded, "Yes." Roxas smiled, and his Keyblades lit up, 'But I'm not giving up! I'll knock some light into you!" Sora gritted his teeth as his Keyblade lit up, and this was more intense then Roxas's lights combined, "No way! I'll win, and show you that Lord Ganon rules over all!" They ran at each other, and with a big clash of metal, Roxas and Sora stood behind each other, back-to-back. Sora smiled, and Roxas fell to the ground. Sora said, "Lord Ganondorf must not have any interruptions with his Ultimate Goal. Roxas, don't get in the way." Gohan stepped foward as he yelled, "Roxas! Don't give in!" Roxas's finger's dug into the ground, and he stammered up, "I-I know..........B-But I don't know if I can win against Sora.............I know the Darkness is strong, but I never thought that Ganondorf would actually make Sora that much stronger................." Sora smiled, "Well, he did. Because he is the most powerful being in the universe!" Donald nodded, "Thats right! So don't get in or way!" Roxas then realized something, and said, "Sora, is Namine alive? I need to know!" Sora smiled, "You could say that." Roxas was confused, "What do you mean?" Sora smiled, "Because she's locked away in a cell in the castle." Roxas gritted his teeth, "Why you little......................" Gohan said, "Where's my mom?!" Sora looked at him, and smiled, "Ah, Chi-Chi? She's been chosen to be one of the few who have passed Lord Ganon's test. You might be getting a new step-dad." Gohan gasped, and said, "How could you!?" Sora, Donald, and Goofy all looked at each other. Sora said, "Final Attack?" Donald and Goofy nodded, "Yes." They touched their weapon's and shield together, and a ball of dark energy appeared. It grew larger, and larger, until you couldn't see Sora, Donald, and Goofy. Sora said, "Darkness.........." They all yelled, "VOID!!!!!!" The Void started to fly at Roxas, Gohan, and Fabia, who all jumped out of the way. Roxas said, "It's headed towards Ezra, we should-" Gohan stopped him, "He'll be fine, and anyways, this battle is over, they used all their power." Roxas nodded, and Fabia said, "Okay, now what?" Roxas shrugged, "I don't know. Let's just walk around."

Ezra-no, wait sorry, Dark, flew at Haru, who held his balance. Dark punched, and when Haru dodged, Dark kneed him in the belly, making Haru hold his belly. Then Dark pummeled him to the ground, and when Haru bounced off, he kicked him up. Haru shot a Dark Energy ball at Dark, and Dark swerved, and then was stopped by a hand reaching out to his head. "Oh boy." Were his last words before he was engulfed in Dark energy. He fell to the ground, battered and bruised. He stood up and said, "Okay. I don't think I could get my Keyblade out if I wanted. Because Ezra wields them. So..........." He dodged a punch from Haru, and said, "I think I'll stick to my hands." He punched Haru, and said, "I'll get you back for destroying my body!" He punched Haru rapidly, and over in Akako and Takayuki's battle, Akako just barely dodged a punch, and was kicked in the shin's. She stumbled backwards, and then disappeared. She reappeared, and said, "Okay, I need to..........." She wove hand signs very quickly, and said, "Change in Chakra nature and form, to create..........." She blew, and fire came out of her mouth. Takayuki dodged, and said, "Pathetic." He punched her in the back, and she fell to the ground. She stood up, and said, "Ngh.........Okay, final move.................." She disappeared, and punched him in the back, "I can't die, my mom and brother need me............" She sent Chakra through her arm, buffing it up, "So, I must beat you!" She punched him in the back, and he fell to the ground, almost out of energy. Over in Kokoro and Kyuui's battle, Kokoro swung at Kyuui with her sword, and said, "Why have you sided with them?!" Kyuui jumped backwards, and said, "Because they need me!" He made-, wait, you have to guess first. A ball of Dark Energy? No. A Body Appear? No. Here, I'll give you a hint. It starts with a "K." A Key? Closer. Keysword? What's the real name?! Keyblade? YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kokoro gasped, "K-Kyuui........You have a Keyblade..........." Kyuui smiled, "Yes I do. Now die!" It was Keyblade that was black, and with a curved end. He swung at her, and in her surprise, she didn't move. Dark pushed her out of the way, and summoned the Oblivion Keyblade, "If you aren't going to fight, then let me take over! You were just staring into space!" He pushed Kyuui's Keyblade away, and Kokoro nodded, "Okay, I'll fight!" Dark smiled, "Okay! Now, show him how it's done." Kokoro nodded, and Ezra came out of Dark's body, "How did you summon the Keyblade?" Dark shrugged, "I think that you just are so connected to me that I can." Ezra nodded, and Kokoro clashed Keyblade to sword. The Darkness in her heart was growing, and making her weak. She had one eye closed, and Kyuui smiled, "Your weak. Now die!" He swung the Keyblade out of her hand. She stumbled backwards, and Kyuui said, "I bet you think that I'm a monster? That's okay, because I have new friends." Kokoro gasped, "No, Kyuui.......................I-I'm proud of you. You've come so far, and you have a Keyblade...............For that, I couldn't be more proud." Kyuui smiled, "I don't care, because I........." He said this slowly, "Hate you." Kokoro gasped, and said, "N-No.............Kyuui..........." Kyuui noticed a beam coming towards him, and jumped away. Dark smiled, "Well, Kokoro can think how she wants. But you really are a monster. You don't just go off and tell people that you hate them." He glanced over at Kokoro, and saw that she was beginning to cry, "You must be the worst brother ever." Haru, Kyuui, and Takayuki all huddled, and then Dark noticed a ball of Dark energy grow. It grew until they couldn't see any of the trio, and then Haru, Takayuki, and Kyuui all said, "Darkness VOID!!!!!!!!" Dark smiled, "So you mastered it? Darn." They all jumped away, and the Void headed strait at the other void.

The voids clashed, and Dark felt a massive wind, "Woah! Was there another one?" Haru nodded, and said, "Yes! And we should get out of here!" Dark smiled, "I bet I can absorb it!" He stuck out his hand, and Dark smoke started to come into his hand. He held out his other to the sky, and when the voids were gone, he pushed them out of his other hand, and they went into the sky. He looked at Haru, Takayuki, and Kyuui's spot, and saw that they weren't there! Dark smiled, "I'll get my revenge." He saw that Kokoro, Akako, and the rest were still there, and said, "Well, it was good to work with you. We'll be seeing you." Kokoro stood up, and said, "Yeah! Go! You idiot!" Dark stumbled as he said, "What did I do?" Kokoro yelled at him, "You didn't beat them fast enough! If you had, then they wouldn't have gotten away! And we could've saved Kyuui............." Dark smiled kindly, "You'll get that chance soon enough." He breathed in, and his hair turned Sky Blue. Ezra smiled, "Akako." Akako jumped, and said, "Y-Yeah?" Ezra smiled, "What was about saying that your mom and brother needed you? It was sort of weird........" Akako frowned sadly, "Oh, that............Well, my brother is sick, and we're really poor. So........I had to take a few jobs to get food. My brother can't even fight the sickness.........And we have no money for medicine..................So, I can't die, not yet at least. Taiyou has to be well before I die." Ezra smiled sadly, "I see. And your a ninja? Is that another job?" Akako nodded, and said, "Yeah. I-I have to ask.........You are Ezra Uchiha, right? Your pretty infamous." Ezra chuckled, "I'm known? Cool. Yes, I am. By the way, what's your rank?" Akako looked at him in surprise, "I-I'm a Genin.........." Ezra smiled, "I see. Well, good luck! Tell your brother I said hi!" He jumped away, and Akako nodded, "Okay!" Kokoro looked at her, "Why are you being so nice to him?" Akako looked at her, and said, "You of all people should know what he's been through, you literally share a past." Kokoro was confused, "What do you mean?" Akako said, "His whole family has abused him, even though he was alway's a good kid. His mother was the only one besides his siblings who wasn't mean to him. Just like you." Kokoro smiled sadly, "True enough. Is he strong?" Akako nodded, "Rumored to be the best Ninja the universe has ever seen." Shadow nodded, "And that's why we couldn't hold out own just one-on-one. I see. Akako, you know a bunch." Aura nodded, "Yeah. Well, we should start moving again." Kokoro nodded, and stood up, "I have to train, to beat Ezra. He is our rival, and enemy."

Ezra landed next to the inn that they were staying at, and saw that it was almost dinner time. He hadn't even found food! He sighed, "Oh well, I guess there's still dinner with-" He brightened up as he saw Fabia, Roxas, and Gohan all walk towards him, "Fabia!" He ran up, and stopped right in front of her. She had held out her arms to hug him, and put them down, "Why are you-?" Ezra looked at her with a serious face on, "They didn't make a move on you, did they?" Fabia was confused, "What do you mean?" Ezra pointed at Roxas and Gohan, "They didn't try to.....You know.............Kiss you?" Fabia smiled, "Of course not. Ezra, even if they did, I would find my way back to you, okay?" Ezra smiled, and they kissed. He pulled away, and said, "So, what did you do?" Fabia said, "Had a fight with people. What about you?" Ezra chuckled, "Actually, same here. We'll talk about it over dinner, okay?" Fabia nodded, "Okay." Gohan said, "Have you ever seen a couple that happy before?" Roxas shrugged, "Honestly, I've never seen a couple." Gohan laughed, "Well, then here's your time to learn how to act in a relationship, I guess." Then they realized that Ezra and Fabia were in hearing range, and Ezra called, "We heard that! You should go find food for yourself!" He put his arm around Fabia's shoulder's, and they walked away. Ezra was happy for two reason's: One was that he had a girlfriend, and another because he could finally fill his belly with food.

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