Reviews For Strawberries and Seawater
Name: ForyourLove (Signed) · Date: 18/06/09 - 10:20 pm · For: Chapter One
Well it started out good, even made me chuckle. Then Kisa started to get a little too OOC which I didn't mind too much, but then Itachi started to get OOC as well and it made it really hard to get into.
Still adorable though, the thought of it is good. Just maybe a little too rushed maybe? Especially when you got to the kiss! XD Its like you couldn't wait to get through with it. Slow down, let us enjoy it...make us shiver with the same emotions the characters should have been feeling!
Not too bad all in all just take more time when writing and use more details and emotions.
Thanks for sharing! I love KisaIta :3
Author's Response: Thank you for your constructive criticism :) I definitely agree (and appreciate) with what you've said, and I will keep your advice in mind the next time I write.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 - 11:08 pm · For: Chapter One
*giggle this is an amusing story...first tim i actually read this pairing...not as distrubing as i thought it would be...i like it!
Author's Response: Thank you ^-^ I'm glad you enjoyed it.rnrnI would recommend looking for more KisaIta one-shots, since there are plenty of cute ones out there.