Reviews For Beneath the Surface
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 15/05/09 - 05:37 pm · For: Who are you?
write more i love her way of thinking
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing! ^^
Name: Kikyaru360 (Signed) · Date: 14/05/09 - 07:30 am · For: Of questions and answers
I've read both chapters, and I have to say this is pretty interesting.
"more and more weirder" = more and more weird
Still good, though! I would love to read more about it.
Author's Response: First, thank you for reviewing! ^^rnAnd thank you for pointing that out. Still, I think it should be weirder and weirder? :o But yeah, more and more weirder was a mistake. ^^rn
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 13/05/09 - 07:02 pm · For: Of questions and answers
"Oh yes, he was a vengeful bastard."
Ha ha!! This was awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Dude this is awesome, the memory loss actually fits well in this story and makes SENSE!!
Akako is a cool name by the way but I'm a little lost on how old she is... She's cool most certainly but I'm not again not sure how old she is :P
See ya next chapter, kay? I'm really looking forward to it!
You get 10/10 from me!!
Author's Response: Oh thank you, thank you, thank YOU SO MUCH for reviewing! ^^ I just woke up and now I can't really stop smiling. ^^ Hey, I must write more, I just can't deny after reading a praising review like that. :D rnBut about her age: she's about the age of ~20. I probably didn't mention clearly enough (when Kakashi teases her that she looks like more of his age than Naruto's). And quite frankly the reason I haven't mention the exact age is due to her memory loss. I'll try to mention something about her age in the next chapter. ^^ I've actually started to write it already (*coughs* about three times), but haven't been satisfied it with yet. :D But I think I'll get it ready probably tomorrow (if not today). Again, thank you for reviewing! ^^
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 13/05/09 - 03:42 pm · For: Prologue
YES!! FISHY!! VERY VERY FISHY!!
This is great! I must read the next chapter now!
I'll tell ya what I think of the story all in all when I finsih, kay?
ONE MOMENT PLEASE!!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 12/05/09 - 05:01 pm · For: Of questions and answers
i like this, naruto getn his nose broken 2 tims, lol keep writn
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing (again)! ^^ I decided to add some humour, so that the story wouldn't be too angst. :) I'll try to get the next chapter written in two or three days. Thank you for reading. :)
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 09/05/09 - 12:37 pm · For: Prologue
ooo i lik this story whos the girl and all, i want to keep reading
Author's Response: Oh, thank you for reading! ^^ I was beginning to worry that no one would read this. :< rnI'll try to make the next chapter asap, hopefully in the beginning of next week. :)