Reviews For My Master's Wish
Name: Rahvin (Signed) · Date: 07/08/09 - 09:28 am · For: Chapter 5: Past and Present Pains
hehehe, unusual storyline...
me likes xD
Author's Response: I'm glad... Hopefully you'll check out the next chapter when it comes out... It should be fun.
Name: GypsyJenski (Signed) · Date: 11/06/09 - 09:50 am · For: Chapter 4: Wishes and Dreams (Pt. 2)
Nice story, it has a lot of potential. There are some minor errors in it, but all in all you got a good story going on.
While I'm not the best beta out there, I would be willing to offer my services if you liked.
Author's Response: Thank you soo much... I'm willing to take you up on the offer, after all, having a second pair of eyes could catch things I might not... The whole point of Beta-reading... lol... hopefully I'll be able to post the next chapter, I'm currently writting it out... So when I get it typed, I'll send you a copy to be reviewed, feel free to email me prior to that at moonlight_deathangel_star@yahoo.com ... if that doesn't show up, google my username and go to the fanfiction account (I post there as well...) and my email should be attached... Thanks again, and I look forward to working with you!
Name: KKEYA2008 (Signed) · Date: 25/04/09 - 11:13 am · For: Chapter 4: Wishes and Dreams (Pt. 2)
Good job! :D I'm curois about Naru-chan's phobia with needles
Author's Response: ^_^... Sorry it took so long to respond... But a lot of people are just as curious as you, and all is to be revealed in the next chapter... (I'm such an evil author...)
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 22/04/09 - 04:37 am · For: Chapter 4: Wishes and Dreams (Pt. 2)
This fic is cute. I'd love to see another update! I do think you need a beta-reader, though.
Author's Response: Thanks for the advice. I try to have my roommate read over the chapters when she has a chance, but I wouldn't mind if someone offered to beta read for me. I do beta work myself, but it's harder to do your own work than catching a mistake in another person's. Thanks for the advice, and if you know anyone interested, don't hesitate to contact me!
Name: KKEYA2008 (Signed) · Date: 02/04/09 - 03:53 am · For: Chapter 2: Ends and Beginnings
I like... Pretty good. ^^
Author's Response: Thanks
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 26/03/09 - 02:59 am · For: Chapter 1: First Time Buyer
Hehe...
I like this story.
A bit short, but I like the storyline.
Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you... Next chapter is up...