Reviews For Kage Bunshins
Name: khotz (Signed) · Date: 01/09/08 - 01:51 am · For: Kage Bunshins
How is it even possible to make a story about masturbation angsty? That's just... amazing.
I'm not really the type of person that likes angst, but this was a good story. I do wish that there had been some more dialogue, though.
Name: i_heart_notebooks123 (Signed) · Date: 25/08/08 - 03:01 pm · For: Kage Bunshins
This was cute, and I really liked it. Infact I like most of your work. Personally I think this would have worked better as a NaruSasu, but I guess a SasuNaru works better with your ending.
Whatever.
I loved it anyway.
BTW, in the paragraph where Sasuke and Naruto go down memory lane about their old salve applying routine, the last sentence says "This is was..." when it should just be "This was...". That was the only mistake I found.
Yup, great job, I really loved it, and if you don't get more reveiws on the awesome story I'll be very dissapointed in those lazy asses out there!
Author's Response: AIII! You are like the most amazing reviewer EVER! *huggles* lol. I have to agree with you on the whole "it should be NaruSasu thing," but I didn't really know how to end it. So I did the best I could. ^_^ Thanks for pointing out the typo, I'll go change that now. THANK YOU SOO MUCH! <3
Name: meyflowers (Signed) · Date: 25/08/08 - 01:56 pm · For: Kage Bunshins
Wow. This was one of the greatest short stories I've read. It proves that SasuNaru doesn't need to be overloaded with blocks of paragraphs of overly descriptive smut. I'm favoriting this!
Author's Response: YES! Thank you! As much as I want to write smut scenes, I just can't. So I try to compensate with feelings and emotions. :P Am really glad you liked it!
Name: Anki_Tenshi (Signed) · Date: 25/08/08 - 12:49 pm · For: Kage Bunshins
O....M...J...
THAT WAS DAMN HORNY!!
Ack I wish yaoi didn't have this effect on me!!!
*whines and runs for more*
Author's Response: OMJ? Like oh my jeez? Haha, thank you ^_^
Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 25/08/08 - 08:34 am · For: Kage Bunshins
I LOVED the last line! That was just priceless, let me tell you. and I loved the whole idea of Sasuke in fuzzy handcuffs....or a maids outfit xD That was the cherry on top for me. And then Naruto doesn't top in the end? Well, not realistic(since it's usually better for the uke if the one with more experience tops), but it was funny as hell. Glad you didn't just stick to NaruSasu or SasuNaru; I like it when they're both sorta even, it just makes them seem more like themselves...dunno why.
Well, anyway; you just made my day! I absolutely ADORE bushin fics. I don't read on TONFA that often anymore...but I'm happy that I did. It was very good ;] Thanks for making such an enjoyable oneshot! -hugs-
Author's Response: Omg! There's more? Like bunshin fics? I've been dying to read some of those, but I never could find any like that! Can you tell me some good ones that you know? Thanks for the review!! *shoves a Sasuke in a maid's costume towards you* Enjoy! lol
Name: alwayssummerdays (Anonymous) · Date: 24/08/08 - 04:33 pm · For: Kage Bunshins
The writing was quite good but there wasnt enough dialogue, so even when the lemon happened at the end it still kind of felt like it was in Naruto's mind...apart from that the Naruto didn't seem like a Naruto, being all moody and the sasuke didn't really seem like a sasuke with all the blushing...but overall I thought it was really good!Keep it up!