THANK GOD.
Frankly, I was getting really tired of having the confessions interrupted. Again. And again. And again. It was to the point where I was like, "OMG KONOHAMARU. I WILL TAKE THOSE GOGGLES AND GAG YOU WITH THEM. THEN WHEN YOU FINALLY GET YOUR HITAI-ATE I'LL SHOVE THAT DOWN YOUR THROAT TOO. LITTLE SHIT." No lie, I was screaming at the computer screen.
FINALLY. Aaagggghhh. I've been waiting 65 chapters for this, haha.
Well, I'm very, very eager to read the next chapter.
I promise I won't shout obscenities at the screen next time.
Unless you interrupt them... AGAIN... I'm just gonna have to throw the computer at the wall.
ohhhhhhhhhh,,,,,so thats wat hapned.......i totally missed a chapter XD well now im officail up to date. interesting developements.....cant wait for more cha!!!!!!!
the baby thing is so cute and lolz! nvr got the feeling but i have felt the urge of holding a kitten....meh
love the ending but.........its the real Sasuke right? its not like the show where Naruto is disguised as Sasuke with Sakura.....that would be bad...but any who good job i really like how things are progressing and how Sasuke is getting so pissed.....can't wait for the bomb shell with the prince go off...XD
They're not "plot holes", they're "plot ditches"! hahahaha!
Just kidding!
Oh well, It was bound to happen anyway..... stupid Sasuke! I hate his ass!
Yo- where's 65, man? It's been like a month! You're killing me here! I wish you good luck in overcoming whatever it is that is holding you back from updating, be it writer's block, schoolwork, or other personal issues. Come back soon, we need more laughter that comes from Grace being an idiot!!! Know that I forgive you and wish you luck :]
~Divi
P.S. Just realize how insanely weird that review sounded :] Oh well, I think it gets the point across.
This is a great series, and everytime i stop reading one chapter I just have to go to the next one and read it, its kinda funny how Grace is lol
hehe! That's so cute!
Awww that was so sweet! Lols i totally cracked up at the part where naruto was talking to sasuke via grace's phone lmao I was delghted when I saw that u updated and I hope u update again soon ^^
well....i find Naruto being annoying as ever; if he was my little (adopt) brother i wouldve pound him into next week but meh. I find this chapter okay; its amusing. i can't wait to see wat develops. keep it up!
This is an amazing serires so far, there has not been a point yet where i have been confused and the original way you tell your story makes reading it even better, can't wait to read the next one
I loved it. It was hilarious! :)
XD the part where grace visited the prince's chamber in the night was funny.. I bet she wouldn't have guessed that she'd see him naked lol and damn! You stopped right at a cliffhanger! I dunno if I want neji to interfere or them to just kiss XD
Looks like Grace got herself in a tight situation there . xD
I wonder how this will end up , and how Sasuke will react if he finds out about this ! I'm sure it'll be worth the reading though .
Great job ! I love this series , and I'll be waiting for another update yet again . [:
-Donna .
hahahaha. Geez... Grace is a dunce!
Sasuke won't be too happy with Prince Satoshi moving in on his woman! lol
That is, if Satoshi is included when they go back to the village?
I think that would be funny. Then, Sasuke would have to admit that he loves her, so Satoshi doesn't steal her!!
>:] I love making Sasuke uncomfortable. It's a dream of mine, since he killed Itachi!!!
XD oh snap...the shit has hit the ceiling... this will not end very well...
Grace got a prince wanting her and Sasuke wanting her....Oo;; this will get ugly when Sasuke gets word of this...oh Grace the poor girl just gets so tangled up in her own webs of mistakes....
on you wanting a beta reader or a person to read the chapter to edit it....I can do that; i practically can make the time to help out fellow authors no probl.
But what's up with Sasuke...?
It's really odd how he doesn't want to hear Naruto's name.
Is there any reason?
Woah. This prince guy sounds HOT.
Aw..what? I can't believe you ended it like that. That's so unfair. But this is a really good bonus chapter! :)
Thx a lot for the Xmas prezzie! This just made christmas a whole lot better ^_^ btw wht was the last part with sasuke? By 'not this time' did he mean that Grace is nt running off to Naruto this time or what? Anyways, thx again and merry christmas!! xxx
This was interesting !
Even though the talk with Neji confused me , but then I reread it . ;D
Neji's just cool like that , huh ? XD
And I liked the ending .
"Not this time." He whispered .
Aww . Gee , I wondered what happened after that . [;
Anyways , nice job ! I'll be waiting for an update !
&I hope you have a MerryMerry Christmas . (:
-Donna .
wow ...the chat btwn neji and grace was confusing but very amusing...sasuke being terrioral...is so cute! good job
The part where she convinces Gai to stay is hysterical!
I was laughing sooooo hard!!
Grace is so funny!
wow....nicely done mate! u always make ur chapters superb! keep it up! on the chrismas idea....cant really help u there....i have so many updates needed to be done T^T laters!
I just love how you write! The way you potray Naruto is just...PERFECT! I'm so surprised that you get his character especially, and everyone elses characters so well! I'm positively trembling with excitement for the next update. I was hoping, that perhaps you might take the time to read my own crossover, Memoirs of A Missing-Nin, it's sort of like yours, but a little darker. Anyways, love this story! Keep going!
Regards,
Belovedly_loveless
I take that back. You're retarded. Grace is awesome. What do you expect, really? She isn't a ninja. She hasn't been trained since she was like, what, eight? TO be honest, I'm surprised she dealt with half of the crap she did. Very nice, aside from a few minor spelling errors. Those don't really bother me much though. I need to use spell check constantly. Loved this! ^^