Reviews For Naruto! Next generation!
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 05/10/08 - 11:31 am · For: 2 on 2 training!
sweet,oh and could you read my story,ENTER KINO UZUMAKI:THE NEXT GENERATION
Name: Hailo95100 (Signed) · Date: 21/08/08 - 02:52 pm · For: The new chuunin!
YAY!!!! SHINTAAAAAAA!!!!
Ha, good idea CLancey XD change into a dog!
Name: Hailo95100 (Signed) · Date: 07/08/08 - 06:14 am · For: Battles pt.2
Go Shinta! Will Clancey be okay though?
Author's Response: Heheheh! I have a plan. Don't worry^^
Name: Hailo95100 (Signed) · Date: 25/07/08 - 01:00 pm · For: Beginning of the first test!
Go Nocto and Shinta! XP
Name: Matsu Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/07/08 - 02:30 pm · For: The academy
I love it! x3
Author's Response: Thank you ^^
Name: 23shinofang23 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 - 07:53 am · For: The academy
i doubt kiba and shino had kids with them selves. who's who's parents i no Nocto=NaruXHina
Clancey=KibaX?
Tino=ShinoX?
Dega=NejiXTen?
Author's Response: ................................desceased XD Sorry but I don't seriously know.
Name: BushtuckaPenguin (Signed) · Date: 29/06/08 - 06:21 pm · For: The academy
Heya mate! Did you know that each knew speaker should start a new line for correct paragraphing? Eg
The next day, the three met outside of Dega's house. "I hope that we can all stay together but we can't," sighed Dega.
"There can only be a three man sqaud." said Tino "Rarely do they ever put four people on one squad."
Clancey and Nocto nodded. "Well, lets hope that at least three of us can stay together!" exclaimed Clancey.
This makes things much neater and organised. I bet if you fix this in your earlier chapters you'll attract some more readers, or if you don't feel like it, I volunteer as a betareader!
Author's Response: Thanks for the advice^^rn(I suck at that kinda stuff in school)
Name: wolfteam000 (Signed) · Date: 25/06/08 - 01:05 pm · For: The academy
weird... i published a fanfic called The Next Generation too before you
Author's Response: Really? Awsome! I'll check it out^^
Name: Hailo95100 (Signed) · Date: 24/06/08 - 04:09 pm · For: Fighting the sensei!
This is good! Hehe...they got stuck with Gai XD
Author's Response: I know......If I was them I would probably have diedXD