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An area to submit intelligent essays debating topics about the Naruto Universe and writing tutorial submissions.
 
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Reviews For Requiem of a Demon

Name: akshatsinghal (Signed) · Date: 04/07/10 - 10:22 am · For: Summoned!
nice chapter.
seems like a good story :)


Name: dalaw (Signed) · Date: 15/01/09 - 04:29 pm · For: Like father, like son, or not
pairings.... er.. for naruto non of the girls listed would be right it just seems like he shouldnt be paired up in this story unless u make an oc or something same with sasuke everyones a fangirl i dont think he would go for them and hinata's a little to soft for him. i really like this story though and i hope you continue it


Name: Xx_sakura_blossom_xX (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 - 03:27 pm · For: Like father, like son, or not
This is brilliant, I really enjoyed reading it! Poor Hokage though, everyone hates him!
I love the new Naruto. I much prefer him this way, calm, strong and good looking rather than the number one hyper active knuckle head ninja.
xxxxx

Author's Response: Who doesn't wish Naruto would be portrayed a lil better in the series...


Name: Suki_Hime (Signed) · Date: 03/09/08 - 11:34 pm · For: Reqiem of a Demon
Pleaaaaaaaaaassssssssssseeeeeeee!!!!!!! Update! Please, update soon the wait is torture!!!

Author's Response: Sorry for the wait... you're in luck though.

Author's Response: Sorry for the wait... you're in luck though.


Name: wannabe_writer (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 - 11:34 am · For: Like father, like son, or not
for naruto: Temari Saskue:Hinata

Author's Response: Sasuke/Hinata... I could almost see their pink eyed babies with no pupils...


Name: Suki_Hime (Signed) · Date: 16/08/08 - 01:03 am · For: Like father, like son, or not
Absolutely amazing!!!! I love it!!!! Please continue, btw, I cried at the beginning where Naruto was attacked...

As for pairings, I'm more for yaoi- but if not
Sasuke- Karin or Ino. Naruto- Sakura (a bit of contrevesry is nice)

Anyways, your story is really good, continue!

Author's Response: Thanks for the touching review. I'm not into yaoi so don't expect it but the real focus of the story isn't the pairings but Naruto's journey so I'll try to squeeze it.


Name: shadow_haseo (Signed) · Date: 01/08/08 - 07:08 am · For: Like father, like son, or not
I would say Naruto and Ino, Sakura, or Konan (most likely Ino). For Sasuke, Karin. (Gotta let the girl have a chance)^^

Author's Response: We'll see... Thanks for the review.


Name: Hirohito (Signed) · Date: 30/07/08 - 10:57 pm · For: Like father, like son, or not
i really like who this story is turning out, i really like it when naruto embraces the 'dark side' if you will. as for the pairings, i think narutoxino is a great one and is really rare

Author's Response: I'm trying to walk a fine line between the grey zone, I love the darker side of Naruto and want to explore it without making him all Dark Vaderish.


Name: MindlessWanderer (Signed) · Date: 30/07/08 - 09:59 pm · For: Like father, like son, or not
Naruto gets Temari and Sasuke can get who ever

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.


Name: shadow_haseo (Signed) · Date: 30/07/08 - 08:27 am · For: Reqiem of a Demon
What a change of events!!! Gasp!! Nice content....no grammatical errors......steady storyline.....drama!!! What?! You thought I was talking about the AU. haha fooled ya, but the AU is awesome too. You'll be the TONFA Hokage for sure! Believe It!^^

Author's Response: Thanks...I don't know about making Hokage...lol


Name: shadow_haseo (Signed) · Date: 30/07/08 - 08:24 am · For: Summoned!
Nice change of pace^^ I like it. Good not to see a yaoi once in a while (yaoi could have ruined this one too easily). Anywayz, I think the storyline thus far is pretty good. I didn't see any grammatical errors which either means you have really good Beta-readers or you are one heck of an English student^^ (Very Jealous I am T^T). So keep the good work.

Author's Response: Yeah, definitely not into yaoi. Thanks for the review.


Name: Noleta (Signed) · Date: 22/06/08 - 08:54 am · For: Reqiem of a Demon
The way you describe Naruto, makes him seem so broody but for some reason I like it alot....Good Job, keep it up.

Author's Response: Thanks... I actually kind of pictured Naruto as Angel from Buffy, all soulful and about redemption with a bit of an evil streak....


Name: ren uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 - 09:47 am · For: Reqiem of a Demon
wow this is great team 7 also known as double ninken triple sharingan with kakashis dogs with kiba to work with and plus since naruto sasuke and kakashi have copied so many jutsu they could have SOOOOO many jutsu they r gnna be awesome please make it sooner i need to read it

Author's Response: We'll see I guess...


Name: alwayssummerdays (Anonymous) · Date: 18/06/08 - 03:18 pm · For: Summoned!
The second part of the chapter wasn't well done. You poured out details with very little reflection on Sasuke's part. The first part of the conversation was good, where you went though Sasuke's emotions, but after that it wasn't paragraphs for Naruto and single sentence responses from Sasuke. What I'm trying to say is that Sasuke soaked up everything Naruto said. You did part 3 of the chapter very well because there was a lot of reflection and emotion. i'm saying part 2 would be more hard-hitting if it was like that. I know, it's not the most exciting thing to write but it's neccessary.

Apart from that, don't write "time skip: 3 years Hokage's office", write "Three years had past. In the Hokage tower..."
This really helps to keep the immersion in the story, otherwise the reader feels they're reading fiction, not in the story.

But it was a great and well written chapter, this story is developing nicely.

Author's Response: I see what your saying, but that's kind of how I imagined it, Sasuke in this fic was still young when he found out and was looking for an excuse for what Itachi did. But I do get what you saying.


Name: narutolovesasuke (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 - 08:03 pm · For: Summoned!
i love the story!! looking forward for more,

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, just don't expect some SasuNaru loving, cuz that's not my forte...


Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 11/06/08 - 09:53 am · For: Reqiem of a Demon
hay great keep it up or ill cry pleae. a few question.
does naruto know he has uchiha eye's?
ans if anf when he finds out is he gunno tell sasuke?
ohh and is he gunno tell sasuke he saw itachi beofr he left and he gave him these eye's?
Love AikoMatsuo XxXxX
100000000/10

Author's Response: Okay to answer your questions, yea Naruto knows he has an Uchiha's eyes. Question #2, next chapter he'll have a talk with the broody one, and as for the last one, we'll see. Later.


Name: ren uchiha (Signed) · Date: 11/06/08 - 08:10 am · For: Reqiem of a Demon
wow great story cant wait for the next one please make it soon

Author's Response: Should be done with the next installment by next week. Thanks for the review.


Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 11/06/08 - 04:48 am · For: Reqiem of a Demon
WHOOOOOAAAA~!!!! You know what? I had an idea of a fic with Naruto being blind for the whole story but your idea is much better. A new dark Naruto only means trouble or...not trouble since he's calmer now, which ever works. But either way this is awesome. ^^ I wonder how this will affect the future...hehe. Death, blood, evil-ness I wonder...?

Author's Response: This fic pretty much originated out of boredom, I had been bored with nothing to do and i wanted to write, but I didn't want to write for a Road Less Taken. Then this fic happened. Thanks for the review.


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