Reviews For Onari
Name: eldertensa (Signed) · Date: 29/08/09 - 07:59 pm · For: Gai and Anko's mission to the Sound Village
I love this story, can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Name: eldertensa (Signed) · Date: 28/07/09 - 10:48 pm · For: Something’s fishy! Sasuke’s anger takes on a new meaning!
This story is incredible, keep up the good work!!!
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 18/07/09 - 01:48 pm · For: The New Year’s Festival!
How sweet. :)
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 17/07/09 - 09:52 pm · For: Sasuke's Decision
NICE!!! :) ;)
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 15/07/09 - 08:13 am · For: Ship of No Return
T_T
This chapter was just....so sad and amazing and sooooo heartfelt that i just want to cry!!!
dammit how do you write so well!! ahhhhh!!
update soon please!
:D
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 30/06/09 - 01:15 pm · For: Yanagi's Gift Part II
Awww.... poor Idai!!
I love that kid!!
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 - 03:09 pm · For: Yanagi's Gift Part I
OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!!!
This story is sooooooo good!!!!!!!
please update soon!!!
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 18/06/09 - 03:05 pm · For: Confessions of the Heart
AHHHHHH AMAZINGAMAZING!!!!
please update soon!
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!
takeru and onari are the cutest thing ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:D
Author's Response: If it wasn't for the reviews and excitement you guys give me, I would have probably ended ONARI a month ago. I was running into sheer writer's block. But... the reviews I get are what fuels me to come up with new ground to cover and adventures. So..THANKS SO MUCH CRIMSON AND EVERYBODY ELSE!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 28/05/09 - 04:09 pm · For: Shogai, not your every day celestial!
Good job Takeru.... finally taking matters into his own hands.... silly boy.
Nice....
Good chapter!!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 07/05/09 - 02:30 pm · For: Run, Onari, Run!
Nooo!!!!
Don't gooo!!!
D':
She can't just leave like that!!!
That makes me sadd!!
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 06/05/09 - 07:02 pm · For: Run, Onari, Run!
O_O
:O
OMFG....
omfg
omfg!!!!!!!!!!
why is onari leaving! GOD DAMMIT TAKERU, GET YOUR ROMANTIC BUTT INTO GEAR!!!!
haha just ignore my randomness! i luv this story so much, and cant wait for the next chapter!!!
:D
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 20/04/09 - 03:33 pm · For: Break Away
Takeru... he's an ejit!!!
haha
I want to slap him and tell him to get over himself!!!
I hope Idai doesn't go all crazed demon on them.
That would suck!!
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 19/04/09 - 04:42 pm · For: Break Away
AH AMAZING!
update soon please!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 08/04/09 - 07:56 pm · For: Saori's Heartache
That is so awesome!!
Onari is the best person ever!!
I'm sad that Idai hasn't returned.
He was one of my favorites.
:( This is making me saddd.....
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 08/04/09 - 05:07 pm · For: Saori's Heartache
so good!
please update soon!!
:P
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 02/04/09 - 06:47 pm · For: Fate Entwined
NO!!! Not Ryu!!!
I think I'm gonna cry!!
lol
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 26/03/09 - 04:24 pm · For: You cannot go!
Ohhh dear!!!
This is getting CRAZY!!!
It be sooooooo good!!!
I seriously cannot wait for more!!
Ima be bouncing off the rafters until you install more!!!!
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 26/03/09 - 06:54 am · For: Swept Away
AHHHH AMAZING! i really like how you write the story from basically every team's view, it gives us insight on how ALL the teams are fariing in missions instead of just Onari and her team.
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 16/03/09 - 08:51 pm · For: The Noble Breed
Takeru has finally activated his Sharingan. That's great!!!
lol
Eiyu and Onari bickering about the holy man was extremely amusing.
"What is it with holes?"
Tht was so funny!!
Awesome chapter!! Keep going!
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 15/03/09 - 08:14 pm · For: The Noble Breed
:D
amazing!
liked whole celestial being her father thing. Very cool!
TAKERU AND ONARI SHOULD BE TOGETHER!!!!! THEY ARE PERFECT!
grrr...
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 19/02/09 - 11:38 am · For: Traded!
Woot!!
That's so sweet that Eiyu and Onari are together!! hehe
Poor Takeru though....
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 18/02/09 - 08:26 pm · For: Traded!
arrrrgg!! onari cant go with eiyu!!!! takeru and she are like, PERFECT!!!
haha but it was really good and hope u update soon!
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 14/02/09 - 07:58 pm · For: Show me what you know Onari!
i luved it!!! amazing!
keep it up!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 14/02/09 - 06:18 pm · For: Show me what you know Onari!
Yay!! Go Onari!!
I can't wait for more!!!
Once again, It's not Hyuga, it's Hyuuga... with two u's!!!!
Keep up the awesomeness!!!
Name: snakebite3 (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 - 02:45 pm · For: The hot springs vacation pt 4
this is mah fav fukin story
ps: 4= IV