The Original Naruto Fanfic Archive

Main Categories

Het Romance [1096]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around different sex couples.
Alternate Universe & Crossovers [648]
Where cast of the Naruto Universe are inserted into an alternate universe.
Essays & Tutorials [16]
An area to submit intelligent essays debating topics about the Naruto Universe and writing tutorial submissions.
General Fiction [1743]
Any Naruto fanfiction focused without romantic orientation, on a canon character in the current Naruto Universe.
OC-centric [869]
Any Naruto fanfic that has the major inclusion of a fan-made character.
Non-Naruto Fiction [292]
Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance [1574]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around male same sex couples.
MadFic [201]
Any fic with no real plot and humor based. Doesn't require correct spelling, paragraphing or punctuation but it's a very good idea.
Shojo-ai/Yuri Romance [106]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around female same sex couples.
Fan Ninja Bingo Book [124]
An area to store fanfic information, such as bios, maps, political histories. No stories.
Juvi-Fics [2]
Because no fic is deleted, if a fic doesn't abide by the rules of the category or author doesn't respond to mods, it belongs here.

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Reviews For Glimpses of Fire

Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 - 08:00 pm · For: Many Years Ago
Well... things make a lot more sense now.

I really like the way you write. You let everything unfold at just the right speed, and the reader can visualize it quite well.

This prologue has a love story worth telling. Maybe you can write about it after you're done with this story?

Your Japanese grammar seems a bit faulty in certain places, but that's quite easily overlooked. The overall content's what matters, right?

Well then, I'll be anticipating your update!

Author's Response: I'm still new with this sight that I had no idea one could respond. -chuckles- Thank you for the review, it helped me a bit, but then I already explained it in the Author's note of the second chapter. I hope you read it and let me know what you think. Sorry it took so long to reply, but I was having a bit of a problem logging onto the sight. Thanks again. Ja.

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