Reviews For Found at last
Name: kirsten (Anonymous) · Date: 25/03/08 - 09:09 pm · For: Chapter 3 - Ambush
i love it make anoter one pleas
Author's Response: you mean another chapter, yeah im workin on it, no idea how long its gonna take though.. sorry. ive only written the start of the next chapter and im not 100% sure where im going with it, but ive got a good idea.. so i suppose we'll see..
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 17/03/08 - 03:13 am · For: Chapter 2 - At Last
It's still decent, with some grammar errors here and there.
~hibiki96
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 17/03/08 - 03:10 am · For: Chapter 1 - Realisation
That's a really interesting way to start! I actually would have never thought of doing something like that! But you do need to capatalize the letters in you title, if you don't people are less likely to read, thinking it's a 'B' story. Also, double spacing helps alot during dialogue. Makes it easier to read, and more pleasant to the eyes.
~hibiki96
Ja ne!
Author's Response: wo sory for taking so long with the update. that was a long time. ill TRY to have 4 up soon, no promises.
Name: Keiko Hyuuga (Signed) · Date: 25/02/08 - 07:09 pm · For: Chapter 2 - At Last
Lpve the new chapter! Slow it down a bit, but other thsn thst, wonderful!!!!!
Author's Response: thanks for the advice, will try, hope to have the next chapter up by Friday.. sound good? keep reviewing guys lol..rn
Name: sheechiibii (Signed) · Date: 25/02/08 - 11:20 am · For: Chapter 2 - At Last
omg that was so funny!
Eeeeee that was the best way to tell everyone ever =] sooo funny =D Im luvin this story hehe
If its gonna get more interesting then my gosh i cnt wait ^.^ soo cute as well. xx
Author's Response: haha glad to see someone liked it, thanks ill update in the next few days, busy with school and studies at the moment -.-.. but ill try and have it up in the next say 4 days
Author's Response: haha glad to see someone liked it, thanks ill update in the next few days, busy with school and studies at the moment -.-.. but ill try and have it up in the next say 4 days. actually maybe tonight if i get the time
Name: Keiko Hyuuga (Signed) · Date: 24/02/08 - 02:09 pm · For: Chapter 1 - Realisation
I love it, but just a few pointers.
It's Naruto-kun, not Naruto Kun.
When he's laughing, don't type hahaha....type "blah blah blah." He said as he laughed; or somthing like that.
Other than that, great!
Author's Response: hey thanks for the advice, means alot.. ill make sure to fix it from now on.. as i said earlier i want more reviews before i continue though so.. get your friends to read it, i need to know where to go, if people like it..rnOh and by the way i LOVE your story so far, flying high sinking low.. looking GREAT keep it up
Name: fletcher (Anonymous) · Date: 22/02/08 - 12:57 am · For: Chapter 1 - Realisation
hi b.t nice story. lol better then what i thought u could do. MUCH better(mine is even awsomer as you would know). lil rushed though could slow everything down. make the sexual tension thats always funny. and why am i writing this? i just said this 2 u 5 mins ago.(kidding about rating i reckon an 2 lol)
Author's Response: fletcher you moron.. haha good to see you read it buddy.. thanks for the opinion, see you tomorrowrn
Name: ewerton (Anonymous) · Date: 21/02/08 - 10:49 am · For: Chapter 1 - Realisation
very cool ! plz dont stop
Author's Response: dont intend to, might be a few days before next chapter though and i want a few more reviews before i upload chapter 3, so tell your friends to read haha.. thanksrn
Name: sheechiibii (Signed) · Date: 19/02/08 - 05:41 am · For: Chapter 1 - Realisation
Oooo! It looks really good.
I cant wait for the next chapter.
I like your writting style.
And of course i love NaruHina so ...yeh this story totaly rocks =]
xx
Author's Response: thanks for the review.. ill try to update soonrn
Name: Patsuki21 (Signed) · Date: 19/02/08 - 05:20 am · For: Chapter 1 - Realisation
i think this is a sweet story
Author's Response: thats what i intended.. well at first anyway thanks :)