Reviews For Hybrid
Name: KuroiBiroudou (Signed) · Date: 21/05/09 - 06:53 pm · For: Chapter Nine: Possessive
I vote for SasuNaru!
Nice kiwis' by the way... I like the story. It's interesting.
Name: Desiremeforever (Signed) · Date: 16/05/09 - 01:31 am · For: Chapter Nine: Possessive
I cant wait for this story to be continued!!! I am loving it so much it is wick'd awesome!!!
Author's Response: Congratulations on getting the 80th review! X3 Thanks much, and I'm re-doing the whole thing so it makes sense! Thank you muchly~
Name: asm613 (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 - 04:27 pm · For: Chapter Six: Personal Space
you wrote: (((Though Sasuke’s was taller, Naruto was almost just as tall now.)))___but just 1 or 2 days ago they were in school and you wrote that naruto was complaining about how short he was. he was at least 6 inches shorter than sakura and that he was 4 feet tall. since sasuke is a male we assume he is taller than sakura if they're about the same age. so if naruto is 6 inches shorter than sakura how can he 1 day later be almost sasuke's height?
Author's Response: Ah. Yes, yes. I've realized this too. It's probably why I haven't updated in so long--I still need to fix those errors for the revised version. I was writing it very fast and very immaturely, which is why there's so much wrong with it. Aha, I'll be sure to keep these in check and make sure there is a wide break of time before Naruto get's taller/matures/ect. I'd like to get all of this done, and hopefully my Beta-reader will be able to help. Thank you, some of those I didn't remember. I'll elaborate much more on this in the revised version, and then hopefully it will be a much easier read. I appreciate the urge to help ^^
Name: asm613 (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 - 03:42 pm · For: Chapter Four: Time for School!
The story is fairly entertaining and one must expect unusual behavior in a world such as the one in this story. But there are some happenings that are universal; or that can be explained by what you've written in previous chapters. Iruka asking sasuke and naruto what they were doing--wasn't it obvious, he and kakashi do it regularly. and why do they need to take naruto to the vet when he's just in sex induced ephoria-they already knew he was in heat; you had tsunade call and tell kakashi after his physical and vacinations.--why would they send him to a school full of animals when he's in heat? im surprised he didn't get raped hundreds of times. plus kakashi wanted them to breed-yet you have iruka hysterical about it and kakashi taking him to the vet like something's wrong. and why did they eat in separate rooms-they haven't eaten in separate rooms the last time you wrote about them eating. also, sasuke would not have run away from naruto while mating with him. sasuke had already claimed him by biting him (and i believe you wrote about sasuke having sex with him in a previous chapter). animals don't run away from their mates-they get possessive and protective and sasuke would have growled at iruka for daring to interupt their mating.
Name: Dan8 (Signed) · Date: 04/09/08 - 11:45 am · For: Chapter Nine: Possessive
This story is good and I would enjoy it if you continued it.
Author's Response: I'll try to continued it soon, but for now I'll consider it on HIATUS. Or at least until the revised version catches up... I'm glad you're enjoying it ^^
Name: Anki_Tenshi (Signed) · Date: 02/09/08 - 01:12 am · For: Chapter Nine: Possessive
LOVED IT!!!!
HaHa NaruSasu rocks.
I wonder what's gonig on O.o
Author's Response: Aha, I'm sure it will be cleared up... maybe. Yes, NaruSasu DOES rock hard :D Thank you for reviewing!
Name: hissyfit (Signed) · Date: 24/08/08 - 04:20 am · For: Chapter Nine: Possessive
Just please...tell me Karin isnt going to have Sasuke's kittens is she? =( Poor little Naruto -sobs-
But of course she will...thats why you needed a female for the lemon right? :| I cant stand knowing that she will have a part of Sasuke. Ah well i think it's best..for both of us...that i stop reading this now...i dont want to see or know about her having Sasuke's kittens when i only want Naruto to have them. But i do thank you for your nice reply to my ranting, you could have told me off but you didnt. I'm still a big fan of your all yaoi stories. You have a nice writing style. Ok, i'm gone now.
Author's Response: Oh geeze, I'm very sorry ^^ But you shouldn't have to worry so much! As a full-out Sasuke/Naruto fan, I couldn't do that to my readers! I'll have a very strict warning about these things now and in the future so that people can read on with ease :) I appreciate the compliments, so thank you!
Name: emz_rose (Anonymous) · Date: 23/08/08 - 03:12 pm · For: Chapter Nine: Possessive
Wow. Loved this chapter (as always) but no, it was very good and I'm hanging from the edge of my seat waiting for the next installment. Great fic, awesome plot!
Author's Response: Oooh! I have that effect on you? That makes me...happy. I don't know why either :S And, HAZZAH! Someone...someone likes the plot -sniff- Thank you. I'm very glad that you liked it and continue to review, even though the Het has surfaced. It means a lot to me. -love- ~lemon
Name: CCrimson (Signed) · Date: 21/08/08 - 01:21 am · For: Chapter Eight: Icha Icha
Sasuke really shouldve resisted Karin. Is he really that weak? He has Naruto, why would he choose that slut over pure, sweet Naruto? Pfft, he shouldve attacked Karin as soon as she tried to touch him...leave her body a broken, bloody mess on the floor, then escape from the room, kick Kakashi bastard in the balls and then go home to Naruto and jump him. Then they would fall in love and have lots of kittens together :) The way Sasuke willingly had sex with Karin ALL NIGHT and then was possessive over her the next day was sickening. He should only be that way with Naruto :| Sasuke is a weak, pathetic man-whore in this grrrr! Hell, Naruto may as well leave Sasuke to Karin and go mate with a REAL man :)
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, I agree with you COMPLETELY! And I'm the writer! -laughs- That plot...seems like such a good idea at the moment -restrains self- But I needed a female character...and Karin was the only one that made sense...I should've had a guy, huh? But then it wouldn't have worked T.T (stupid plot!) And yes, Sasuke really is weak--to his hormones anyway. He's an animal (literally) and can't control the feral urges when it comes to mating. But all of that will come in handy when...when...when I'm done with the dumb plot! Until then, we all(including the writer) have to deal and suffer with the horrible Het. -bows- Sorry! But, thanks for reading anyway! ^^ ~lemon
Name: scarlett_fire (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 - 02:25 pm · For: Chapter Six: Personal Space
damn you lemon lover, i have no effing clue what your talking about with the online manga....but you make it sound so good, no i hafta go see!!! so much for cleaning my room......... great chapter ^^ i prefer uke-naru (dont ask me why....) and so i
Author's Response: The online manga is awesome! Heck, I'm surprised I got you interested in it at all with all of that ^^;;; But I hope you get your room cleaned! Uke!naru-ness is on it's way! ~lemon
Name: MisterShannen (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 - 07:34 am · For: Chapter Eight: Icha Icha
;-;!
This was amazing, but stupid man-whore Sasuke should have resisted!
Author's Response: I know! Or even better, I should ignore the inner writing in me that demands a dramatic plot T.T Thanks for reviewing! ^^ ~lemon
Name: hissyfit (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 - 06:46 am · For: Chapter Nine: Possessive
Ok..i'm calmer now, still feeling sick but i'm calmer. This was my fault, i missed the HET warning at the beginning of the chapter. So i apologize for ranting earlier. I dont know if i can keep reading though, i realize it was for the sake of the plot and everything but just thinking of him inside Karin several times...and then feeling possessive over her too later on? All that done willingly? Yucky. Anyways, i hate Kakashi in this story...if it wasnt for him forcing Sasuke to breed....well nevermind that now...whats done is done i guess. I see you have lots of fans of this particular story so one less wont bother you i'm sure. I'll just stick to your all yaoi stories. And i'll be sure to keep a better eye out on the warnings.
Author's Response: Oh no! Of course it will bother me! One less reviewer is like a thousand in a writers prospect...! But that was one of the first and I'm sure the last time I will ever write SasuKarin Het. I plan on sticking to the Yaoi from now on in this story. Yes, yes. It was for the plot, the evil, horrible plot D: Don't blame Kakashi, blame me! T.T I don't mind the ranting at all, it just means that you feel strongly enough for my story that you feel the need to fuss over it ^^ So, thank you for that much, and I really do hope that you continue reading even though you didn't like the Het. -love- ~lemon
Name: hissyfit (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 - 06:26 am · For: Prologue+Chapter 1: Foxy Friend
WTF?! Sasuke mated with Karin..SEVERAL times?? And didnt even want to leave her afterwords? UGH, and now they will have kittens together?! Double UGH. Well i hope Naruto gets to screw other people too then..seems only fair. Karin?? I'm totally disgusted *throws rotten fruit*
Author's Response: I know, I know! But it WAS on instinct only. Believe me. I have a very...strong view on Karin, and want to decapitate her at the moment. Don't worry, no more Het, I promise.
Name: sakuyalove (Signed) · Date: 18/08/08 - 10:03 pm · For: Chapter Nine: Possessive
I love the NaruSasu, if you change it all consider decapitation. Heehee. Great story lemon, keep it up!
Author's Response: -hides head- Don't worry, I plan on writing plenty more of the NaruSasu-ness, as well as SasuNaru >:D -hugs to death- I will keep it up, Tereshi! Thank you! ^^ ~lemon
Name: Hypnotic_Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/08/08 - 09:06 pm · For: Chapter Nine: Possessive
Alright Lemon! Now that how dirty boys get clean! hehe I wanna know whats gonna happen next. oh gosh sasuke called him, my idiot! makes my heart skip a beat!
yay you!
Author's Response: -laughs- Yes, yes indeed. Sasuke had to redeem himself after that -sighs- Naru had to clean 'im up! ^^ I'm glad you liked the chapter and thanks for reviewing! lemon
Name: tikarina (Signed) · Date: 18/08/08 - 05:11 pm · For: Chapter Nine: Possessive
*bites her nails and then jumps up to pounce on you* OMG!! You updated!! One of my favorite stories on this site!! Nay MY FAVORITE story here, and then and then you do this?!?! *weeps uncontrollably* I wanna see what happens next...*squeals*
I will beta for you! it would be an honor! I now have tons of free time on my hands *sighs* and oh so bored
Cheers :)
Tikarina
Author's Response: Oh, I would love for you to be my beta too! While I have a beta for the new version of this story, I need one for this one as well just to root out the little mistakes, nothing as serious as co-writing, just someone to help smooth out the edges a 'lil ^^ And it makes me...very extremely happy to know you like my story so much! I always get cracked up on my stupid female emotions when people say something like that. I try my very best :] -chu- Thanks for reviewing! And offering -is clueless on what to do now- ~lemon
Name: AphoriditeRose (Signed) · Date: 18/08/08 - 09:04 am · For: Chapter Nine: Possessive
Awesome ;D
Aw, I really thought you wheren't going to update on this story *Le gasp!* But you did! ^^
-huggles- thank youu!
And yeah, you took the words from my mouth, "What the hell just happened?" Lol, got me all interested. ^^
Heh, good luck with updating two storys at once, though. :P You might need it! XD
Love it lots! ^^
Bye :]
PS: Your welcome! Lol ^^
Author's Response: -hugs back- I just couldn't resist on updating this one! Not with all of the people waiting on it! I just...couldn't do that. I appreciate the luck, because you're right, I am going to need it. But with my beta, I shall PREVAIL! -Gai pose- Heh, thanks so much for being supportive! -love- ~lemon
Name: Pockyplox (Signed) · Date: 29/07/08 - 04:56 pm · For: Chapter Eight: Icha Icha
*throws ten stars* Hah! Can't dodge that xD awesome chapter and Woot! for quick updates =]
Author's Response: Ah! -gets hit by pointy stars- XB Yay for sharp projectiles! -hugs- Thanks for reviewing! -love- ~lemon
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 29/07/08 - 08:08 am · For: Chapter Eight: Icha Icha
Hay great you havre to lkeep it up, love aikoMatsiuo xoxoxo
10000000000000/10
Author's Response: Thank you! And I will! ^^ ~lemon
Name: shadow_haseo (Signed) · Date: 29/07/08 - 07:32 am · For: Chapter Eight: Icha Icha
Nice lemon..lime..kiwi.....pomegranate?!
Anywayz, I liked it *pauses screen and uses Okami's celestial brush to deflect projectiles.^^) Yeah, i think its best that you stay with SasuNaru/NaruSasu so as to avoid future projectiles (that I won't be there with Okami to deflect^^). You've got my vote!!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! -hugs- I need a magic shield or sumthin' @.@;;;; And -laughs- pomegranate -snort- Good one. Well, thank you so much for reviewing! ^^ ~lemon
Name: girlhero576 (Signed) · Date: 28/07/08 - 10:28 pm · For: Chapter Eight: Icha Icha
interesting
Author's Response: Thank you! ^^ ~lemon
Name: IceNight009 (Signed) · Date: 28/07/08 - 10:52 am · For: Chapter Eight: Icha Icha
The Het! It BURNS!!! Jk...
I had a feeling it would be Karin. I wish I were wrong. Seeing Sasuke possesive of Karin made me queasy, ugh. Good chapter, though.
But What I'm really anxious for is Naruto's reaction to Sasuke's scent. Will he turn possesive too? I wanna see that! I think switching between NaruSasu and SasuNaru is great. I favor the former so its good. Make us all forget the het! (hey that rhymes...) Bring back the love (smex) between our favorite couple! Update soon. =)
IceNight009
Author's Response: I know...! I am a horrible authoress that tortures her readers T.T The Het killed me too, don't worry. I shall make up for it! Heh, I already have! (I hope -sweatdrop-) I'm glad you like the interchangeableness! I love switching between the two, because it's just so much fun! Anyway, I'll be sure to update soon and keep the Het far, far away :] Thanks for reviewing! ~lemon
Name: Hypnotic_Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 28/07/08 - 05:03 am · For: Chapter Seven: Here, Kitty Kitty
Oh I thought this story was put on hold, it seemed like such a long time! Happy to read more into the store tho!
Also in answer to your question...!
SASUxNARU ALL THE WAY!!!!
Author's Response: Sorry, sorry. I'll try to update more often! I'm glad that you're still enjoying it! SasuNaru!!! Yes, there will be plenty of that, but also some more NaruSasu...ahaha. I just can't resist! Thank you for reviewing! *loves* ~lemon
Name: Kurai_Kisu (Signed) · Date: 25/07/08 - 02:51 am · For: Chapter Seven: Here, Kitty Kitty
Been reading a lot of your stories particularly like this one. But I JUST joined TONFA now lets see. No offense to anyone but I am strictly SasuNaru when it comes to these two. Just can't see him as seme but everyone has their tastes. And I believe that was Temari but someone probably beat me to the punch. I am a beta but currently I live in Asia so the time difference depending on where you live would vary. Well thats about it. I hope you update soon. JA!
Author's Response: NaruSasu irked me for awhile too, but there are some gems out there. And most of the time I prefer to WRITE it than actually read it. Though I don't know why it's so fun to write...I guess I'm just weird :P Temari! You're correct, but you're right, someone beat ya (but lets ignore that and say you both won X] ) I live in the US but I'm sure if you're just the right beta for me we could make a plan. Thanks for reviewing, and I'll make sure I update soon! *love* ~lemon
Name: Pockyplox (Signed) · Date: 24/07/08 - 02:14 am · For: Chapter Seven: Here, Kitty Kitty
Kiba's touchy-feely-ness made me laugh XP
Temari was working at Ichiraku... lol I'll slap myself if that's wrong xD
I
probablywon't kill you for non-yaoi =)SasuNaru, NaruSasu, I really don't care which xD
Author's Response: And you are...CORRECT! I see a chapter dedication right here ;] Yeah, it was Temari (no need to slap yourself!), though it seemed kinda obvious (right? RIGHT??) Anywho...probably, huh? I guess I can deal with that ^^;;; Ahaha. *hides behind chair* I'll just...make sure I don't make it Sakura and Sasuke...or something. Though it never was :O I'm sure I would have been mauled if it was.~~ Kiba...I wanted to make him someone completely good...but I couldn't help myself X] It was just too tempting....and...SasuNaru or NaruSasu...you really don't mind? Because I would hate to lose anyone! *cries* Thanks for the review! ~lemon