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The Original Naruto Fanfic Archive

Main Categories

Het Romance [1096]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around different sex couples.
Alternate Universe & Crossovers [648]
Where cast of the Naruto Universe are inserted into an alternate universe.
Essays & Tutorials [16]
An area to submit intelligent essays debating topics about the Naruto Universe and writing tutorial submissions.
 
General Fiction [1743]
Any Naruto fanfiction focused without romantic orientation, on a canon character in the current Naruto Universe.
OC-centric [869]
Any Naruto fanfic that has the major inclusion of a fan-made character.
Non-Naruto Fiction [292]
Self-evident
 
Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance [1574]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around male same sex couples.
MadFic [201]
Any fic with no real plot and humor based. Doesn't require correct spelling, paragraphing or punctuation but it's a very good idea.
 
Shojo-ai/Yuri Romance [106]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around female same sex couples.
Fan Ninja Bingo Book [124]
An area to store fanfic information, such as bios, maps, political histories. No stories.
Juvi-Fics [2]
Because no fic is deleted, if a fic doesn't abide by the rules of the category or author doesn't respond to mods, it belongs here.
 
 

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Members: 11731
Series: 261
Stories: 5905
Chapters: 25596
Word count: 47857716
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Name: miocherryblossoms (Signed) · Date: 08/11/08 - 02:50 pm · For: Chapter 1
ITs a decent story, i admit, and the story line is good. But i also agree with the other reviews.


Name: A Lovely Lie (Signed) · Date: 17/10/08 - 08:50 pm · For: Chapter 6
I'd have to say writing in 2nd POV wasn't a very smart idea.

Also, godmodding and mary-sue's iare a big no-no. Don't know what they are? Godmodding is when you character is all powerful and beats people really easily (The Sakura and Temari fight). A mary-sue is a perfect character, and in this case, all the guys want 'you.'

In the previous chapter, telling us who went in the close each time was hell annoying. 'Blah and bloop went into the closet. Bloop spins the bottle and it lands on Blec. Blec and Bloop go into the closet. Blec spins the bottle and it lands on Bleh.' That was just really annoying.

Overall, I highly dislike the story.


Name: ItachiUchihaLover (Signed) · Date: 15/10/08 - 02:37 pm · For: Chapter 2
it is a great story, but you need to replace the "you"s with "I"s If you had I would have given it a 9 not a 5.


Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 17/07/08 - 11:39 am · For: Chapter 2
wowi amzing please keep it up.
Love AikoMatsuo
xoxoxoox
100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10


Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 28/03/08 - 10:10 pm · For: Chapter 1
thank god somebody had to beat Sakura;; and Sasuke gets Jess, rite?


Name: Poketto Kunoichi (Signed) · Date: 08/02/08 - 06:22 pm · For: Chapter 1
Hi! I think you a pretty decent writer, but I'd like to point out some things.

Most people don't like second person POV, but I don't have a problem with it. It's just that, how do you know how the reader would react?

Second I don't think Sasuke would be surprised for defeating Sakura in one blow.

And the name, Jessica. :) You could go to a translator for a Japanese name. Let your name be Narufied. n.n


Name: akichan (Signed) · Date: 07/02/08 - 04:39 pm · For: Chapter 1

COOL! More, more more, this is really good. yah, you beat sakura!



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