Reviews For Reviving the Clan
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 02/08/09 - 03:32 pm · For: Chapter 3 - Discovery
.........ok the story idea is good the ooc moments i can live w/ not sure on other people but....plz slow,,,,,down....its not a race! the one thing tht can ruin a story is tht its too fast to understand and the ideas are either all mushed up or scattered. im taking time off from releasing my story chapters to review and smooth them out. this is just a suggestion thou. u can giv me the bird all u want this wat i just thik. -.-lll
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 02/08/09 - 03:22 pm · For: Chapter 1
....i can actually see this working oddly even enough write on!
Name: rokubinosukanku (Signed) · Date: 22/12/08 - 05:00 am · For: Pregnancy Test
I think this is still counts as Yaoi. Its as the same as a man that dating a transvetive/transgender woman NOT count as a normal relationship isnt it?
Author's Response: ... I guess that's so...
Name: Kuusou~ (Anonymous) · Date: 31/03/08 - 08:35 pm · For: Chapter 3 - Discovery
I don't... Want... to keep reading... but, I... can't look away!
Must know... what happens... >.
Author's Response: So must I! I don't know what to do! I've written myself into a rut! NOES!
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 30/03/08 - 12:17 am · For: Chapter 1
two ^-^
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 30/03/08 - 12:17 am · For: Chapter 3 - Discovery
one
Name: darkxratha (Signed) · Date: 02/03/08 - 07:47 pm · For: Chapter 3 - Discovery
nice i luff your storyline i feel bad for hinata tho and neji is actually sweet
Author's Response: I know! It was so strange to write him that way. Hopefully I'll get my insperation back for this story soon. Till then I write my randomness fics and the SasukeOC my freind is forcing me to write. I HATE IT! But it's kinda fun to make Neko smashin things in his face, stab him in the leg, etc. Torture is fun! WHEEE!
Name: stylin_crimson (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 - 11:35 am · For: Chapter 3 - Discovery
Oh dear. Naruto can be a bit dense.
Author's Response: Yes. Yes he can.
Name: naru_chan_fan (Anonymous) · Date: 09/02/08 - 06:42 pm · For: Chapter 3 - Discovery
all though i like naru/hina
NOOOOOO TT_TT
will it be still sasnaru
Author's Response: Yes, I like both... SasuNaru a bit more... now I feel really bad! Poor Hinata *huggles Hinata* I'm SORRY!
Name: OmgVikiRawr (Signed) · Date: 09/02/08 - 07:47 am · For: Chapter 3 - Discovery
oh dear...
Author's Response: Yeah, I kinda feel bad for leaving it like that... and now I'm having troubble with Naruto's reaction... Maybe I shouldn't have sprung that one so soon...
Name: Desperado Sweetie (Anonymous) · Date: 01/02/08 - 10:54 am · For: Chapter 1
Just curious. I have yet to read this story, but did I miss Chapter 1 because it starts off with Chapter 2.
Author's Response: What do you mean? It starts with chapter one... *scratches head in confusion* or at least it should. It did last time I checked... Yeah, it starts with chapter one... that's odd. I put in 'Chapter 1' as the title for that. What the hell? Well, it's all fixed now. Sorry 'bout that...
Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 01/02/08 - 07:38 am · For: Pregnancy Test
haha yeah Sasuke was pretty OOC, and I personally would have made Hinata faint, but it's still pretty good. Well I'd list it under yaoi just because it is a sasunaru and i think there are a lot of other fem naru stories in yaoi categories.
I want lemons!
And I suggest you add more "white space" to your fic. Makes it look longer and is easy to read.
Author's Response: Heh, yeah. I know... I almost made her faint too, but decided I'd save it for later. Thanks for being a stead-fast reveiwer, I really appriciate the support! I should give you a cookie or something... Well, the least I can do is write you a good lemon. I will, I promise, just give me a few chapters (I'm still a bit nervous about writing it) and then you'll have it!rnWhite space? Got it!
Name: OmgVikiRawr (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 - 09:28 am · For: Chapter 1
Hahahaha, love it, please do more ^^
Author's Response: I shall, I shall. I'm really glad you like it! Wow... I've only posted one chapter for this story, and already it has more reveiws than History Repeats Itself! And none of these reveiws are from my editor! I feel loved!
Name: Arukasandora (Anonymous) · Date: 25/01/08 - 03:35 pm · For: Chapter 1
aahahahahhaha you so have to write more of this coz that was great
Author's Response: Really? You like? I'm glad! I'm writing chapter three right now, actually... Chapter two should be up in about a week!
Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 25/01/08 - 04:04 am · For: Chapter 1
Very nice. Yeah they are a little OOC, but you can work on that for the next chapter. But you know you HAVE to have Naruto discovered before the nine months right? :P
Author's Response: Yes. I'm working on that, though their still pretty OOC in chapter two... With Naruto I have an excuse... HORMONES!rnrnAs to discovery... HECK YES! It wouldn't be funny otherwise! Though I still haven't decided the 'who' 'how' and 'when' of it all yet... But you can bet on having at least 25% of Konoha knowing before he's due.