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Name: rokubinosukanku (Signed) · Date: 29/11/08 - 03:52 am · For: Chapter 1
Oh.. I'm back!
Wow!So u actualy COULD do a funny fic!xD
Nice!Some fresh air from u^^
But..U had to admit.Angst is ur speciality.I meant ur comedy's great but ur angst's best.Get it?;)
But u have potential in here,keep digging it out!

Its just,I wish i could understand what actualy happen 2Naruto here.
"All of Naruto series dub version joined in 1fic"
Only in ur head Brumal.Could only in yours!XD

Author's Response: Uh... I'm not sure whether or not to be flattered since I apparently lack a sense of humor.rnrnBut thanks.


Name: rokubinosukanku (Signed) · Date: 29/11/08 - 03:49 am · For: Chapter 1
Now.. I need to review,dont I? So here it is:
O.O
O.o
O.o;
U.u;
-.-;;

"Auugh!" I screamed and ran away to hide from crackfic which seemed to plague TONFA that fateful, perfect Brumal.

>.


Name: tsuki (Signed) · Date: 16/10/08 - 07:41 pm · For: Chapter 1
Well, this is one good piece. As expected from you. I've been reading almost all your fics and I love it. ^.~

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks! I'm glad that you like my writing! ^__^


Name: i_heart_notebooks123 (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 - 01:02 pm · For: Chapter 1
Oh my God, that was so sweet with Sasuke all embarrassed, but that was so sad cause Naruto didn't get it and he made Sasu-kun leave!

But still, great job!

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks! I'm glad you liked this!


Name: Fri (Anonymous) · Date: 03/03/08 - 05:16 pm · For: Chapter 1
Haha, that was nice :D I do really dislike it when people go overboard with the Japanese in a fic. I mean, if you have to look the word up, I'm sure the reader would have to too and it would ruin the flow of the story! You did a good job showing how confusing it is to use different languages in one fic, good job!
I'm not saying that things like teme, dobe, baka and stuff aren't fine and dandy, but when a reader has to stop reading a potentially good story because of frustration due to incomprehension, uck! :D Thanks for this, I liked it!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad that you liked this. I find it rather distracting and sometimes even ridiculous when a bunch of random Japanese is put into an English story. Unless you really have something to do with the story and need the words, I don't see much point in putting it in... That's my opinion anyways! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing this! I appreciate it very much.


Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 - 12:36 pm · For: Chapter 1
OH. MY. GOD. that has got to be the funniest thing i have ever read! and i improved my vocab a little XD but seriously, that was hilarious! poor poor naruto...if only he knew french! you have no idea how red my face is from reading that and trying to hold in my laughter! i dont want to look crazy now do i? but im afraid i already do! and for a crack fic this is still written with detail! i could so picture this happening! and the ending had me laughing full out almost! it was so....emo. and yet so undoubtedly funny! its almost to insane to believe! wait. it IS too insane to believe! you truly are massively talented! i loved the language thing! i cant imagine how i would feel if that happened to me! i barely know japanese! do you know all of these languages or did you do a heck of a lot of researching? either way its amazing that you did all of that! and now i know some french! and more japanese! you made me smarter! yay! love it so much! cant possibly tell you how much i laughed! thanks so much for brightening my day once again! *loves* ♥

~lemon

Author's Response: Oh wow, I'm really glad that you liked this so much! That makes me very happy! Your reviews always put a smile on my face--thank you so much!rnrnI know Spanish, Japanese, and English (and Cantonese as well, but I don't know how to use the 'English' version, so I didn't put it in) and Nadra, my beta-reader, helped me translate certain parts into French and German. I'm afraid that my Spanish is a bit atrocious and even after three years, I'm very bad at it; and at the time, I was still beginning to learn Japanese, so I think there are grammatical mistakes in the phrases even though they are quite short! But I can't be bothered to go back and fix them. XDrnrnThis was really just a poke at some fanfics out there, though there was no hard feelings meant--it was just for fun. So cracktastic, ne? Well, still! I'm glad that I was able to make some people laugh!rnrnThanks so much for reading this and reviewing, as usual! Don't feel obligated to review every single one of my stories though, I'd much rather know that you truly feel that way about my stories instead of just thinking that you HAVE to review each story positively! By all means, give me so criticism to work off of sometimes! XD


Name: Koryu (Anonymous) · Date: 24/01/08 - 05:30 pm · For: Chapter 1
I think I just died laughing. I'm surprised you didn't throw Latin in there just for the hell of it.

Author's Response: Aah, I would have added as many languages that I thought would be possible, but I only know Spanish, Japanese, Cantonese (but I don't know how to use the "English" version of it, so I didn't add it in) and English (of course) and Nadra (my beta-reader) knows French and German. I don't know if she knew Latin, so I didn't add that in.rnrnI'm glad that you liked this so much! Thank you very much for reading and reviewing this!


Name: Sacryde (Signed) · Date: 11/01/08 - 04:10 am · For: Chapter 1
Oh my.....O_O

I don't think I've laughed that hard in such a long time. Poor Naruto. And poor Sasuke, too!
Jeez, I'm glad that's never happened to me haha.

Anyways, fantastic job on this. You somehow made everything that's wrong with fanfiction....almost right. o_O

Author's Response: Hahah, you flatter me so! I can't make everything possibly right. But yeah, it's just something that keeps bugging me in fanfics. I admit to using suffixes for names since there really isn't a way around it, but otherwise, I try not to do drastic things like this. XDrnrnThank you very much for reading this story and reviewing! I appreciate it.



Name: sakuyalove (Signed) · Date: 10/01/08 - 04:25 pm · For: Chapter 1
Very strange, but amusing! :)

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad that you liked it! Thanks for reviewing this!


Name: MurderScene__ (Signed) · Date: 09/01/08 - 08:37 pm · For: Chapter 1
Well, that was random, amusing.. But random. XD!
I want to learn German.. >_>
Baha. XD

Author's Response: Really? German sounds very guttural to me, so I don't particularly like it. I only took Spanish because the years were required... XD I think French and Japanese sound very smooth and nice though!rnrnThanks for reading and reviewing this! It's very much appreciated!


Name: Ljiljana (Signed) · Date: 09/01/08 - 11:21 am · For: Chapter 1
That explains is!

Author's Response: Does it now? I'm not sure if it does... Hmm... XDrnrnThanks for reading and reviewing this! I appreciate it.


Name: Noleta (Signed) · Date: 09/01/08 - 05:19 am · For: Chapter 1
Noleta: Ah! Poor Naruto!

Kierra: What is wrong with everyone!

Lore: Nani? (what?)

Noleta: Don't you start to!

signed
~Noleta, Kierra & Lore of Nin Truth or Dare 2 THE EXTREME

Author's Response: Aa, yamatte kudasai! Watakushi wa nihongo o shirimasen! (What lies! XD)rnrnI'm glad that you guys liked this! Thanks for reading this and reviewing!


Name: CrowShinigami (Anonymous) · Date: 09/01/08 - 01:47 am · For: Chapter 1
ROFL, I couldn't help it, that was so highly amusing it doesn't even rate on the humor scale. Seriously. Loved every bit of it.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I feel so flattered. I'm pleased that you liked this! Thank you for reading this story and leaving a review for me! Your patience is very much appreciated!


Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 09/01/08 - 12:22 am · For: Chapter 1
LOL!!!
literally I'm not just typing three letters, I actually laughed out loud at my computer! That's totally random but still very funny! poor sasuke! xD .:chuckles:. ty's for the laugh!
*chyuu~*

Author's Response: Ah, no kidding. I just wanted to write up something completely random at the time, so this was what I got. I'm glad that you enjoyed this so much! Thank you for reading and reviewing this! I appreciate it very much.


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